Chapter 15
Chapter 15 of 29
phoenixLucius can hardly believe what he hears when Hermione bares her soul to him.
ReviewedHermione tentatively took Lucius' hand, and without warning he Apparated them to a sumptuous lobby. When they arrived, he steadied her with his other arm as she recovered from the surprise of an unplanned Apparition. He should have warned her, but it would have ruined the surprise.
"Where are we?" she asked once she recovered her bearings.
"My private club. I sometimes bring clients here because of its confidentiality. The members are very mindful of each other's privacy, and no one will gossip about the two of us being here. I assumed you didn't want anyone to see the two of us talking," he replied simply. He hoped this would put her at ease. It was public, yet private at the same time.
"Are you sure about this?" she asked uncomfortably.
He patted her hand reassuringly before releasing it. It was quite charming how she was suddenly so concerned about appearances though in this case he was not sure if it was because she was his employee or that he was a very eligible bachelor. "Quite sure. Come." He placed his hand on the small of her back and guided her to a table where he ordered a bottle of one of the wines they'd shared on vacation, one she had particularly enjoyed. "Now, what's on your mind?"
"Well, right now it's why are you being so kind to me? After all, I'm just a low-level employee," she asked cautiously.
He casually took a sip of his wine. It appeared to be the former that was bothering her. "You are more than 'just a low-level employee'. I have come to consider you a friend, and you are in need. Since you are uncomfortable discussing your dilemma with your other friends, I had hoped you might feel comfortable confiding in me." He knew that little good could come from keeping negative emotions bottled inside. Besides, if she voiced her misgivings out loud, it might assist her in coming to the logical conclusion.
After she took a long drink of her wine, she leaned forward against the table. "Well, you correctly assumed that it has something to do with Ron." She paused, collecting her thoughts. "And I suppose it has something to do with me. I don't know that I realized how truly different the Muggle and wizarding worlds are socially. It's not something that Hogwarts prepared me for," she replied, sounding almost guilty.
He said nothing, nodding slowly to let her know that he was willing to listen. Now that she was speaking, he wanted her to finish so that he could offer the best advice possible.
"The short story is that I think I have a lot to offer the wizarding world, and I don't want to put everything I learned and everything I have to offer to waste. The whole time I was at Hogwarts, I was praised for my intellect, but since the War... Well no one seems to really care about that. I get strange looks because I want to work instead of stay home and start a family."
"Ah, yes, the wizarding dilemma. You do know that I value your intellect?" he said reassuringly. He could understand one of her intellect and talent feeling trapped by the male-centric behaviors of the wizarding world.
"I do," she said quickly before adding, "I mean I presume that's why you hired me in the first place. But you are one of the few. I want to be more than a baby receptacle, and the stress of that is just getting to me. At first it was just Molly since her other children are giving her grandchildren. But lately the pressure has gotten worse, and Ron has become utterly relentless and the more time I spend with his family, the more I start to feel like I'm abnormal." She sighed, as though a great weight had been lifted.
He reached across and put his hand on hers, giving it a firm squeeze of reassurance. "I assure you that you are not abnormal. You are a young, ambitious witch, and no one should fault you for having goals that do not involve immediately having children."
Hermione smiled wanly. "I try not to, but when everyone around you treats you like that, it's hard not to start to believe it. Ron hates that I'm working." She paused as if there was more to that statement than she wanted to admit aloud.
Lucius thought he could guess, considering they were speaking of the Weasleys. "And your husband is not particularly keen on your working for me?"
She lowered her eyes. "Yes, well, there is that." He finally released her hand, and she took a long sip of her wine. When she set it down, he refilled her glass.
"And I presume that is why you are avoiding your husband?" he prompted. He could hardly believe what he was hearing. He knew there was trouble, but he had not thought it this serious.
"It is. I thought we were reaching an understanding that I wanted to wait a few more years before having kids, but well... We had a big row while on holiday, and I just couldn't take it anymore." After several long seconds of silence she leaned forward and, despite his assurances that their conversation was private, asked quietly, "Is there such a thing as divorce in the wizarding world?"
His wine glass froze on the way to his mouth, and he was thankful that he had not been drinking or he might have choked. Once he regained control, he set it down. Realizing the sensitive nature of her question, he replied quietly, "It is rare, but not unheard of. Is this something you are seriously considering?" He hoped he did not sound too eager.
She looked down at her hands as she twisted her napkin. "I don't know. I just know that neither of us is happy, and the one thing that would make him happy, I'm not ready to give him right now because I don't know that it would make me happy."
"I see," he replied, contemplating her words. This is what he had secretly longed to hear, but he knew that if he seemed to be pushing her too hard, that she would grow suspicious and he might lose her.
"Is there any sort of stigma associate with it? I mean I know how the wizarding world feels about unwed mothers and such. And the fact that I can't say I've heard of anyone doing it..." her voice trailed off as she watched him expectantly.
"There can be. It depends on the circumstances. As I said, it is quite uncommon and not generally brought up in polite conversation. Though there was a high-profile divorce before you went to Hogwarts. It was all anybody was talking about, and I daresay that yours would be equally as high profile since you are both heroes of the war," he cautioned.
She slumped back in her chair and took a big gulp of her wine. "That's what I was afraid of. And because of why I would want the divorce... Well, it's not going to look good, is it?"
"It can be made to look bad," he admitted. "Though handled properly, it can be done without ruining your reputation." He knew just the man to handle this situation properly. If only he could convince her it was the right thing to do.
"What about his? Just because I don't think we should be married doesn't mean that I wish any ill will on him." She looked miserable.
"Or his. But that would depend on his behavior. I can suggest a solicitor if you wish to learn more," he offered. He was surprised that she would be so concerned about Weasley's feelings after he had shown such callous disregard for hers, but he also knew the two of them had been friends for many years, and it was hard to throw away a friendship.
"So you think I should give up on my marriage?" she asked, a little startled.
He had not thought his words would cause her to jump to that conclusion, though it was what he truly thought. He shook his head. "It's not my place to make that decision. I know that you like to make informed decisions, and speaking with an expert in wizarding law would be more beneficial to you than trying to wade through it yourself. Besides, it might draw the wrong sort of attention if someone saw you spending days researching wizarding law," he pointed out.
She had to admit that he had a point. "I guess it wouldn't hurt to learn more." She swirled her wine as she considered everything she had just said and heard. "But what do you honestly think? And don't sugar-coat it."
He once again reached out to touch her hand. "I see an unhappy young woman seated across from me. I think that you need to try to solve that unhappiness before it destroys you. Whether that is finding a way to work things out with your husband or starting your life over is up to you. That sort of decision can only be made by the person who will be affected the most," he said wisely.
After hearing his non-answer, she sighed. "I know that, and I think that's what makes it so hard."
"Ending a serious relationship should never be easy." Yes, he seemed to be steering her in the right direction without her realizing it. Be supportive, non-judgmental, he mentally urged himself.
She sighed morosely. "Thank you for listening, and now I think you know why I couldn't bring this up with Harry or Ginny."
"Indeed. I doubt that is the sort of secret either of them would have been able to keep, though I imagine Potter would know as little about the subject as you." He swallowed the last of his wine. "I'll have the information delivered to you at work tomorrow." He wanted her to act quickly before doubt began to set in and she reconsidered her actions and chose a path that would not make her happy.
She smiled warmly. "Thank you. I feel much better already, so thank you again. You can't know how much this has meant to me." She set her glass down, ready to leave and start thinking about what was to come next.
"You are quite welcome. If you need a sympathetic ear, please do not hesitate to let me know." He needed to nurture the trust she had in him, spend time around her and continue to show her that what she had with Weasley was not what she deserved.
She returned his genial grin. "I will. Now, I think I should go." She rose to her feet and was surprised when he did the same. His manners were always so refined and even in this simple conversation, he had made her feel like the most important person in the world.
"Of course. Allow me to see you out. Once you are in the lobby, you will be able to Disapparate." Once again he placed his hand on the small of her back. When they reached the lobby, he said, "Good night, Hermione," and gave the back of her hand a kiss before returning to the club interior.
He chuckled victoriously as he returned to his table. Everything was working out perfectly. He had correctly deduced the source of her unhappiness, and he was most definitely in a position to help her overcome that obstacle.
He called one of the house-elves over, ordered dinner, and penned a message. He was reasonably sure that by the time he had finished his dinner, he could begin setting his plans in motion.
Lucius was enjoying an after dinner brandy when a short, stocky, conservatively dressed wizard in glasses joined him at the table.
"A little late in the evening to be seeking legal counsel, isn't it, Mr. Malfoy?" he asked.
"Ah, Reg, wonderful to see you," Lucius replied jovially. "As much as I would love for this to be a social call, I do have a bit of a legal dilemma that only you can handle properly."
Reg looked very curious. "And what might that be?"
"I have a dear friend who is in an unhappy marriage." He knew there was no reason to mince words and it was better to get to the point. "She is interested in learning about her options and getting your opinion well the opinion of an expert on divorce."
Reg's eyes widened momentarily. "I see."
Lucius knew that Reg would never ask for details. "I'll send her to you tomorrow at noon, if that's all right with you." He knew what Reg's answer would be.
"Of course. I shall make sure I clear my schedule."
"Wonderful." Lucius could not help the smug smile that crossed his face.
"Am I to assume that she will be my client or is this merely for advice?" Reg was trying to find out what his duties would be.
"For now, it will just be advice, though I do hope that she will make use of your talents. I need you to put her at ease. She may be a bit apprehensive not only about the divorce I of course told her how it is generally viewed in the wizarding world but about having someone of your caliber at her disposal."
"So, she's Muggle-born?" Reg asked probingly having caught the undertones in Lucius' comments.
"She is. And I think that has contributed to some of her... difficulties. If you could take in mind her ignorance of some of the nuances of wizarding society, I believe it would help in your discussion with her. It is Mrs. Hermione Weasley," he added, realizing he had not told Reg who he was to meet with.
"You know that I am someone who reserves judgment. I will do what I can to make her feel comfortable, and I'll gladly keep all communication with the young lady under the strictest confidentiality." After a moment's pause, Reg asked, "Is there anything else I need to know?"
Lucius considered the question for a few moments as he watched his brandy swirl in the glass. "She was married soon after the war, ostensibly of her own volition, so this was not an arranged marriage. I don't believe there is a marriage contract."
"That will simplify matters," Reg resonded. "Anything else?"
"No. I think that will be sufficient for now," Lucius replied.
"Then I bid you a good evening, Mr. Malfoy," Reg said as he rose, bowing his head slightly.
Lucius replied, "And to you." He knew that Reg was the best there was, but then he would not hire anyone other than the best. He could only hope that Hermione could be convinced to avail herself of his services if she decided to go through with the divorce. Lucius could think of no one else who could get her through this with her reputation intact.
He was smiling smugly and enjoying his drink when he was interrupted.
"Well, if it isn't the kneazle who ate the canary. What has you so happy?" Connor asked as he slid into the recently vacated seat across from Lucius.
"Connor? What are you doing here?" Lucius asked, surprised to have his reverie interrupted.
"Business dinner that just finished. I was on my way home when I saw that look in your eyes." Connor considered him a moment. "This wouldn't have anything to do with your mystery witch, would it?"
Lucius knew better than to try to lie. Depending on how things progressed, the identity of his mystery witch would not remain a mystery much longer, at least to Connor. "It does, though I would prefer not to go into details right now as nothing has been decided."
"Yet you clearly believe the winds are shifting in your favor," Connor offered.
"Perhaps," Lucius replied, draining his brandy and ordering another. "Only time will tell, but the more I learn, the more hopeful I become."
"Just be careful that you don't overstep your bounds," Connor cautioned.
Lucius knew that his friend did not approve of his interest in a married witch, but Lucius knew how to be careful about appearances. He would never do anything to let anyone think that he had anything to do with the breakup of a marriage. Of course, this was a marriage that was sorely in need of breaking up as far as he was concerned. He would prefer that he be the one whom Hermione chose, but almost anyone would be better than Weasley. "Oh, you know me. I know all the rules of society and have you ever known me not to abide by them?" he replied smugly as he drunk from his freshly refilled grass.
"Normally, yes, but you have not seen a witch socially in the last three years. That is most definitely not normal as far as the rules of society are concerned," Connor pointed out.
Lucius looked slightly uncomfortable. "Well, that may be, but you have seen the quality of witches who have shown their interest in me. Can you blame me for playing the grieving widower card for as long as I have?"
Connor chuckled. "No, I can't say that I can. But that still doesn't mean you should be careless with this new witch. You're playing with Fiendfyre," he warned.
Lucius sighed. "I am well aware of that fact. I had never intended for it to turn out this way. However, if she was truly happy in her relationship, it would not have turned out this way." He contemplated the swirl of his drink for several long seconds. "There are times when I think I should walk away, but then I know the way I feel, and I see the way she reacts when she's around me... I know it sounds trite, but we complete each other. I only hope that she will one day admit to herself how she feels."
Connor stared at him. "I do hope that you are considering your future should it not involve her. While I know you are quite confident, it could be possible your own feelings are getting in the way of interpreting hers. While you are usually right, you do make mistakes from time to time. And I have found that emotions can cloud good judgment."
Lucius knew that Connor had his best interests at heart, but Lucius also knew that he had no intention of losing to Weasley. It might not happen in the near future, but he intended to have Hermione. "I have the utmost patience with respect to this situation. While I may not care about appearances as much as I once did, I do understand what sort of effect handling this situation poorly could have." He paused a moment. "I do appreciate your concern, but you need not worry that I will do something foolish."
No, he would not do anything foolish, but he would continue to be her friend. He knew that she would need one now more than ever since her closest friends were also Weasley's relations. For him the biggest problem would be walking the fine line between providing support and courting her. No one could ever suspect that he had feelings for her, least of all her. Though he suspected that a part of her realized how he felt about her, that part that flirted back to him.
He would be the perfect gentleman, platonic friend. He would be there if she needed a shoulder to cry on or just someone to confide in. And hopefully by spending time with her, she would come to realize where she belonged.
Lucius returned home to his cavernous, empty manor and found his previous good mood ebbing away. He sighed as he mounted the stairs to put away his outer robes, barely noticing the ornate carvings on the newels that Narcissa had chosen during the renovation. It was always the same. The huge manor held so many memories, so many horrors. They had removed all physical traces of those horrors, but nothing would ever stifle the memories.
As he walked down the upstairs hall to his bedroom, he was still struck by the newness. Yes, some of the family's antiques had survived the occupation and searches by the Aurors, such as the serpent curtain hooks his twice great-grandmother had commissioned for the family wing, but much of it was new. He let his hand brush the heavy velvet drapes as he walked by.
Once in his bedroom, he dumped his outer robe on a chair, stripped to his shirt sleeves and let his hair hang loose before he proceeded to his study to go through the day's correspondence the same routine as any other day. This small room had always been his sanctuary, one the Dark Lord and his minions had mercifully ignored.
It had been five years since the occupation had ended, and although the manor had been renovated and redecorated as soon as Lucius had access to the funds to do so, there were times late at night when he could still hear the echoes of the Dark Lord's voice.
He pushed those thoughts out of his mind and tried to remember the happier times, the times when the Malfoys would throw magnificent balls for all the major holidays. There would be dancing, laughing, happiness. Narcissa had rejoiced in getting to plan one of her balls. No detail was too insignificant for her. Even though they were always extravagant and expensive affairs, he had never been bothered with the cost. The happiness it brought Narcissa was worth every knut.
He sighed as he saw the stack of correspondence. There were three invitations to minor social events that he put off to the side. He would have his assistant send regrets tomorrow. There was a letter from a charity soliciting funds to save the Crumple-Horned Snorkack. He had no idea what that was and binned the letter. Some trivial letters from acquaintances that he found he just wasn't in the mood to deal with presently.
Rising to his feet he went to the sideboard and poured himself an ample measure of Scotch and decided to wander the halls. When he reached the end of the main hall, instead of turning right toward the ballroom and dining room, he turned left towards the storerooms and kitchen. As he walked down the smaller hall, he caught a glimpse of a portrait on the wall he had paid little attention to in recent years. It was the movement at the edge of the portrait that had caught his attention. His mother was serenely seated in a chair, with his father standing behind her, his hand possessively on her shoulder. He, as a young man of twenty, stood proudly to his father's right. On the right side of the portrait, he could occasionally see a glimpse of yellow Delilah.
He remembered that day. It had been a lovely late spring day, shortly after Delilah had graduated from Hogwarts. It had been their last family portrait. It has also been the last time he remembered her being truly happy. Two days later, Abraxas had announced her betrothal to a much older wizard.
For ten years she had suffered in her marriage, trying to make it work, trying not to bring shame on the family. Finally she had decided she could take it no longer and had filed for divorce. Their father had gone into a rage. He had forbidden her from pursuing the divorce due to the shame it would bring upon the family. She had insisted on seeing it through, and Abraxas had launched a media assault against her and disowned her from the family. At that point, all of her images had been banished from the household and this portrait had been moved to a secluded spot. Mentioning her name was forbidden.
But now... Now Lucius had come to realize that Delilah had done what was right for her, just as he hoped Hermione would do. While divorce was frowned upon, he had seen first-hand how miserable someone could be in a loveless marriage. How could he hope that Hermione would take the same path as his sister and allow Delilah to remain isolated from her family?
Lucius placed his hand on the right edge of the portrait. "I think it's time for you to come home, Delilah," he said softly to the bit of yellow skirt peeking at the edge of the frame. For a fleeting moment, he thought he caught a glimpse of her blonde hair.
Leaving his half-empty glass on a nearby table, he returned to his study, finally ready to reach out to his sister.
He sat at his desk and stared at the blank parchment for some time, tapping the quill against the side of his head as he thought about what to write.
Dearest Delilah,
I hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me for ignoring you for so long. I'll spare you the excuses. Merely know that I was wrong. I never should have let the old man dictate my behavior, especially after he was gone.
If you can forgive me, I would like to invite you back to the family. Much has changed over the years for me as I am sure it has for you, and I would enjoy the opportunity to catch up with you.
If you cannot... Well, I can't say that I blame you. I could have been a better man, should have been a better man.
I hope this finds you and your family well.
Your remorseful brother,
Lucius
He thought about writing a longer letter, longed to tell her everything that had happened, but he did not want to overwhelm her before he knew that she would even be interested in having him back in her life.
He would wait and if she wrote back to him, he could start filling her in bit by bit and even invite her to come for a visit, though he was sure it would not be in the immediate future, that she would want time get to know him again. He hoped that after all these years, this was one wrong that he could right.
A/N: As always, many thanks to the wonderful beaweasley2 for her magnificent assistance as my beta. I hope that you, dear readers, are enjoying this story as it unfolds. I know it has been a long journey that has taken far too much time due to a RL hiatus, but we are rolling towards the end and the journey is about half over now. Many thanks to those who have taken the time to leave reviews. Nothing warms an author's heart more than knowing people enjoy what they have written.
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I'm enjoying this a lot, pheonix. I'm looking forward to he next curevball thrown at them.
Buongiorno mia bellissima amica scrittrice! Ah, these new chapters! I find myself drawn even deeper. Lucius is growing in many ways, not the least of which is in self-knowledge, an often hard won and "hard-to-swallow" medicine. I did find the declaration of mutual affection a bit, not forced exactly, but more like not in keeping with the tension thus far developed; but as a segue to bringing Lucius' sister into the "mix", however, a clever and clean device. So, I await developments with Hermione, now. With her and Lucius' declarations, how will she view and interact with Gilles? What happens now with Harry and Ginny (and others)? When the attempt is made to return to the Hogwarts Board of Governors, will Hermione allow her lingering doubts (about Lucius' possibly using her as a mere stepping-stone back into power and influence) to come full force? What of Elsa? Have we seen the last of her? Waiting... :)Your Constant Reader~Heidi R.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm still here and am going through the next chapter. I have had fun with showing Lucius' development from anti-Muggle Death Eater to respectable wizard. It's also been interesting to show how grieving over Narcissa's death and finally coming to terms with the fact that life does go on has helped him grow, too. It will definitely be interesting to see how this mutual declaration changes how they react to others - and of course there will be poor Hermione trying to explain this to her friends. Not an easy pill for them to swallow. I hope to have the next chapter up by Monday at the latest. RL can be such a pain in the butt (kids had 2 weeks off school and family was visiting and we got sucked down to a one car family, which wouldn't have been too bad, but DH's ship was not underway like it should have been entailing much driving around for me as the family chauffuer. LOL
Lucius seriously I know you are trying to be careful but are you really telling me that you aren't sly enough, sneaky enough, Slytherin enough to send Hermione little notes during these few weeks you are going to be a part? Really? Come on! :) Great chapter as always.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, he'll send notes, he's just a bit concerned about the lack of physical presence in her life where he thinks a certain other wizard might have the chance to step in. But as he is sneaky, I'm sure he'll figure something out.
The divorce is settled, and all seems well, but I don't like the sound of Skeeta scuttling around the Ministry.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Anywhere there is juicy news to be found, Rita is there. She just can't resist, though the Prophet seems to be using less of her 'news', but when it sells papers something tells me it will be hard for them to resist publishing her version.
Hermione should feel very disappointed that Lucius behaves this platonic! I bet this isn't her definition of romantic feelings^_^Hope they can be together soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I know, poor Hermione. She thought things would change significantly after the hearing, but they didn't, did they? Lucius who says he doesn't care what others think, really does to a point. If she can be patient, I'm sure it will be rewarded.
Great^_^ Everything will be ok. Can't wait for them to be together......Good luck
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It sure is looking pretty good, isn't it? I'm sure Hermione can't wait to start this new chapter of her life.
The best part of this chapter was the flash back just because if anyone had forgotten how wrong those two were each other, that was a clue by four to the back of the head. I also really liked your subconscious gravitation that Lucius and Hermione are experiencing towards each other. I don't even think they realize it. It is similar to when they were on vacation but with a more perminant vibe to it. I am curious as to what they are going to do after she moves out. I see caldestene meetings at the library. Thanks for the refresh on the 6 weeks. Good luck with getting everybody in school. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you liked the flashback. I don't always go for that sort of thing, but it seemed a great way to work out how Hermione was going to explain what happened at the hearing without it getting overly tedious. It's been nice watching the slow burn on this relationship as they each try to figure the other out and where they stand. I think that poor Lucius will be a bit lost when she is removed from his life upon moving out. I do think he might try to 'run in' to her. ;) And kiddo 1 is settling in school. Start of term is very hard for her and kiddo 2 I'm going to start the enrollment process for 3 day a week preschool. Hopefully that will go well for him. He's excited about it, but we'll see how it goes when he's left in a strange place without me. Then again, he's gone over to a friend's house to be babysat and was okay with that because there were other kids, so he might do just fine.
Looking forward to reading more. I only saw one mistake, i was so hooked on the story.I assume you meant Nicholas Flamel was an advisor. I believe you wrote fannel....
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad that you are enjoying this and thanks for catching the misspelling. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
I think Lucius just out manuvoured hims into a co he isn't quite prepared to be in just yet. Yes, Hermione knows he is interested in her as more than just a friend, hurrah. However Lucius know gets to battle his own libido to keep from touching her in a way he shouldn't. Once the hearing is over it will only get worse. I need to go back and read the part with Reg describing the procedure. She has the hearing but then there is a period of time bef she is actually divorced, right?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Correct on the latter. There is a six week period between the hearing and the finalizing of the divorce. I figured in this case wizarding Britain would mirror Muggle Britain. And poor Lucius has definitely made his life more difficult. It was easier to maintain the facade of friendship when their feelings weren't out between them.
You have me thinking about this story night and day!!! I am not usually a Hermione/Lucius fan, but dang, I've got it bad. :) I am so glad they finally admitted how they feel. I just hope it doesn't ruin his well-laid plans to keep his distance. Not knowing how the other felt kept the relationship safe. As they say, it's a lot easier to let the cat out of the bag than put it back in.Seriously cannot wait for more. Please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad to have turned you into a fan. This was a ship I wasn't sure about at first, but then I read a few that were really well done and became a believer. Hopefully now that it's out in the open between them, it won't become weird between them or obvious to others. I hope to have the next chapter up this week - end of summer vacation and back to school are wreaking havoc with my writing.
So goooooooood that the feelings are mutual! Hope the hearing to come and go soon:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It has to be a relief to the two of them to know that they weren't imagining things. Hopefully this will not turn into one of those periods where time seems to utterly drag for them. So glad you are enjoying this and hope to have the next chapter up this week (end of summer vacation and back to school are wreaking havoc with writing).
I'm a little worried about Elsa," hell hath no fury " and all that, I hope she knows how to take no for an answer gracefully. I'm glad it's all out in the open between them now.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Hopefully Elsa will be the mature 30-something she should be. Of course, there's not much she could do and retain her positon. Something tells me if she went psycho on him, he would see he removed from the family company. At least he shouldn't have to deal with her advances, though something tells me she might avoid him for a while for making a fool of herself. ;) And bigger bonus, he's put his foot in the door for a relationship with Hermione, hopefully edging out Gilles.
I wonder what the Wealseys have up their sleeves for the hearing. Loved the family reunion, little Scorpius seems to have inherited his fair share of Malfoy charm.
I hope Lucius didn't see that, he may get the wrong idea.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yes, he could definitely get the wrong idea from that.
I wonder what the Wealseys have up their sleeves for the hearing. Loved the family reunion, little Scorpius seems to have inherited his fair share of Malfoy charm.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
You would imagine there would have to be something, wouldn't you? And what 1 year old isn't charming? Heck, my almost 4 year old still works that charm on everyone he meets. But Scorpius is definitely a Malfoy. LOL
Thank you so much for a great update. I really like that you have added a sister for Lucius, that gives more to the story in my humble oppinion.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I always bemoaned that so many in the wizarding world seemed to be only children whose parents were only children and who seemingly don't have a close relationship with other relatives (granted our view is limited and Nevile and Ron are the only ones who really revealed any additional family, well Sirius). I love the idea that Lucius would have a sister who got exiled for embarrassing her family. It really does add more to him as a character and helps humanize him.
I do a little happy dance every time I see an update. The delicate balance of Lucius's perceived arrogance and vulnerability is endearing and spot on.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Even after everything that's happened to him, there are times when he does get a little full of himself, aren't there? This was definitely one of them. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story and hope you continue to do so.
Heat does this Gilles guy want? He has became too sweet, I hope he won't be a obstacle on Hermione and Luvius way.....Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad you are enjoying. Gilles is a bit of an enigma right now, isn't he? Does he want to be more than a friend or is he just one of those guys content to have a female friend? Only time will tell.
Ron does seem to be a one note song doesn't he, the Weasleys' are going to have to do better than that. I loved Felicia telling Connor and Lucius off, like they were a couple of school boys, not that it is all that far from the truth. Hermione is growing so close to Lucius, she can't see it yet, I just hope no one else can, and reports it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Felicia is very prim and proper and does not like it when something upsets what she sees as the proper order of things, and a couple of grown men acting like 12 year olds would be one of those. But hey, Lucius is finally out of his funk. :) The good news on the Lucius/Hermione front is that he realizes that being seen together in public would be a very bad idea, as much as he might want to be seen with her. And Ron's whole world has been thrown upsidedown. Poor lad. He just doesn't know how to cope with this. Kind of like when he went off in a snit in DH.
Hermione is starting to get there, her subconscious has recognized what Lucius is up to. Now she just needs to connect why she doesn't want to tell Lucius about Giles. I wonder if Felicia has invited Elsa to the dinner party hoping to 'help' Lucius out, that could be interesting, sticky, and amusing all at once. Lucius may need to step up his stealth courting once he finds out about Giles.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Wouldn't that be something of Felicia to do. LOL Thankfully she tends to be a bit more subtle. And yes, Lucius is definitely going to be concerned about Gilles. He's worked so hard over the months to work his way into Hermione's life. I don't think he would easily let another wizard steal her affection.
Wonderful update, hurrah for it being much earlier than you promised. I love how naturally they are evolving into courting each other. Hermione asking about the upcoming week and Lucius spending every free night with her. I wonder if either of them even realize it. I can't help but feel Ron isn't through and what about the person following Lucius in Paris (or was that the reporter, humm have to think about that.).
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Of course Lucius realizes it. His behavior is all very calculated. Hermione likely does not consciously realize it. Of course this is the only behavior she has seen from the post-Azkaban Lucius, so that would make it easier for her not to notice it. :) And Ron definitely won't let this go without a fight even though he has to realize they are past the point of no return. His smear piece in the paper really did that in. As to the shadow, you have figured that out.
O my GOD!!!!!!! It looks badly like a real trouble. Has anything happened to Ron? Recently in the most stories i read people commit suicide and I'm getting a paranoia about it, i think everybody is going to kill themselves:-)Pls update soonGood luck mate:-)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It is trouble, but I will assuage your fears and tell you not that kind of trouble. I believe in warnings for that sort of thing and while this fic does have some darkness in it, nothing that bad. Next chapter should be up before the end of the week. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Oh shit, what has the little toe-rag done now?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
LOL This is my new favorite review. LOL I'm so glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read it. The answer will be coming in a few days. :)
The dye is now cast, I hope Ron is not going to be to much of an arse.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, considering how petulant and moody he's been, I wouldn't hold out hope for him not being too much of an arse, but time will tell.
Oh cliffie!!! Now the question is did someone spot them at Lucius' club or did Ron do something else? Could he (meaning Ron) actually remembered that Hermione and Lucius had been aware of each other while she was on vacation? Is he going to try to label her an adulteress?? Did I tell you that I love Deliah? I find the idea that her fleeing for a reason other than blood politics really interesting. The fact she hasn't ever told her husband who her family is is also really interesting. Great chapter. Now I wait on pins and needles to find out what the paper says.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I always found it odd that so many of Jo's characters were apparently only children. I know it simplifies her already very complex world, but you would think with all the talk about how important being a pureblood and a Malfoy was that Lucius would have had siblings and that it's pretty odd Draco doesn't. And this was such a great way to provide a previously unknown sister for Lucius. Considering she married a humble farmer, I can't blame her for not mentioning much about her family - especially since she probably never expected to hear from them again. As for the cliffie, later this week will be the next chapter. :) Thanks for reviewing.