Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 29
phoenixHermione continues her vacation, trying to find a way to relax despite having chosen the same destination as someone quite unexpected, Lucius Malfoy
ReviewedA/N: First off, my apologies to everyone who was following this story for my extended absence. RL attacked and the muses fled to Tahiti (or perhaps Hawaii where I was able to locate them after the first child free vacation since the oldest war born 7 years ago). The muses are quite refreshed and my wonderful beta, beaweasley, is graciously helping me out again. Now to pick up where we left off...
Chapter 7
Tuesday morning, she did the reef dive and marveled at the wide variety and sheer number of colorful fish. She had always wanted to go diving, though she had never envisioned it like this. Being a witch meant that you did not need all that cumbersome diving gear that a Muggle required. A simple Bubble Head Charm and to transfigure her feet into flippers was all that one needed. Now that she realized how easy it was, she knew that she would have to go diving again. Of course, this was not something that could be done around Muggles, but she was sure that the wizarding world had other diving spots that she could explore.
In the afternoon, she went on the sailing trip and was not really surprised to see Lucius was one of the other guests on the boat. For most of the cruise she avoided him, which was impressive since it was not that large a boat, and there were only about twenty guests in total on the voyage. But several people recognized her, and those who didn't did know of her by name as the famous friend of the world-renowned Harry Potter, and she found herself engaged in conversation through most of the trip, meeting some lovely couples. Near the end of the voyage, Lucius approached her as she was watching dolphins jump in the bow wake of the boat. He offered her a glass of wine, and they silently watched the frolicking dolphins.
They parted ways after the cruise, and she decided to take in the Luau for dinner. It did strike her as a little odd to be attending a Luau in the Bahamas, but it was an enjoyable evening and the others at her table provided interesting conversation.
Despite her earlier vow of trying to avoid Lucius, she found that it was harder than she thought. She had arrived at the horseback tour of the island on Wednesday and saw that Lucius had selected the same activity. Naturally he was an amazing equestrian, and he had a perfect seat: perfect balance, completely relaxed in the saddle, a light hand on the reins and seemed to have a flowing connection between himself and his horse, and he seemed to do so effortlessly. Hermione was jealous. Hermione's mother had been an equestrian most of her life, and had competed in show jumping as well as riding in the hunt whenever she could. Hermione had taken lessons since the age of seven, although she had never gained the level of competency of her mother, and they had gone ridding every summer and winter holiday Hermione spent at home.
Through the countryside, under the dense canopy of the tropical hardwoods and flora and along the edge of the swash, a breathtakingly beautiful secluded sandy beach on the south shore. She saw hundreds of birds including flamingos, hummingbirds, and other small birds and waterfowl, as well as a few lizards, an iguana and some frogs.
The riders enjoyed a light lunch under an open tent set up on the beach, and she engaged Lucius in pleasant conversation and they rode back to the stables side by side.
She decided that trying to avoid him was pointless. He was good company, and she found that the solitude was not nearly as relaxing as she thought it might be. That afternoon she took Lucius up on his offer of wine tasting. When he escorted her to the room that had been provided, she was somewhat startled. She had not expected that it would be in the wine cellar, but now Lucius' tip to bring a jumper made perfect sense.
"Wine keeps best at fifty-five degrees," he informed her as she put her jumper on. "Most reds will need to warm a little before serving, but generally you don't want anything over sixty-five degrees. Sadly, many people don't realize that and serve reds at room temperature which does not optimize their flavor. Whites are served in the forties, with the temperature varying based on how robust the wine is."
She was also a bit surprised to see an elderly wizard waiting for them and not a house-elf. Other than the personnel at the desk and running the programs, she could not recall having seen a single human staff member.
"Monsieur Demeaux, a pleasure to see you again," Lucius said warmly and presented his hand to the elderly wizard.
"Monsieur Malfoy," the wizard replied in a French accent as thick as Fleur's, "Always a pleasure to have you here. You know that I love to share my passion for vin."
"That I do, and as always I appreciate you sharing your knowledge. My friend, Hermione, is a wine novice, and I thought who better than you to educate her," he said politely.
Demeaux took hold of her hand in both of his and bowed respectfully. "Mademoiselle, it is my humble pleasure to share my knowledge of the vine with you. Come, we will begin."
Hermione's wine education lasted more than an hour. She lost track of the number of wines that she tried, but she realized there truly was a staggering variety. At first she had seemed horrified at the idea of spitting such fine wines out after tasting them, but as time moved on, she realized the value of doing that. If she had been taking even a sip or two of each wine, she was not sure that she would have remembered anything.
When the tasting was over, Demeaux said, "Now that you have received your education, I think it is time for you to move outside where it is warm, and I will send up a very special wine for you. I think that you have earned it."
While she had learned a lot and enjoyed the experience, she was definitely ready to move somewhere warm. "Merci, Monsieur Demeaux. You are truly an expert, and I thank you for teaching me."
"Au revoir, Mademoiselle Hermione, and it was my pleasure," he replied with a small bow.
As Lucius led her back to the warmer climes of the resort, he said, "I hope that you will not find wine so intimidating now."
"No, I don't think I will. Thank you for arranging this. I can't imagine they do that for anyone." She slipped off her jumper now that they were outside.
He chuckled softly. "No, they don't. But I am a very good customer, and they are more than happy to accommodate most special requests I give them."
"I'm sure being wealthy doesn't hurt, either," she said before she really thought about what she said.
Some of the cheerfulness left his face. "It is true that gold is a valuable tool for getting your way, but not everything can be bought. There are times when loyalty brings more reward than money."
She was surprised to hear him voice that opinion. "Really?" she asked, not hiding her surprise.
He smiled at her. "I'm surprising you, aren't I?"
"Very much so." She decided not to say anything more after already having put her foot in her mouth twice.
"I thought you were the advocate for change?" he asked playfully.
She blushed. "I am, but well... I'll just say that our past dealings have not prepared me for how much you have seemed to have changed."
"I am glad that you are able to see the change. It has not been an easy journey for me, but my eyes have been opened to the fact that much of what I learned growing up is not the truth." He gestured at a nearby table and shortly after they sat down, two glasses of wine appeared. He picked up his glass and held it in salute. "To new beginnings."
"To new beginnings," she repeated, still not entirely sure which new beginnings she was toasting.
After taking a sip of the wine, he said, "I do hope that you have also been using your time here to consider your future. Please forgive me for saying so, but you do know that your considerable talents are being wasted at the Ministry, don't you? I would hate to see you drudging your way, unappreciated, undervalued and over worked for years, making the bureaucracy your life-long career. I have to admit, I was quite... surprised. I'd have thought you'd seek employment in the world of business: international markets, company research, there is so much more to do than bonds and notes, currencies and commodities, earnings reports and foreign trade... so much one can achieve."
She put her glass down after having taking a savoring sip and sighed. "I fear that you might be right. I had such high hopes after the war, but change... Well, it's a long and involved process and so many people are resistant to change."
"Hermione, you have to keep in mind that the wizarding world has been very isolated since the seventeenth century. Yes, we are somewhat aware of the goings on of the Muggle world, but we have become very complacent in our ways. Why change something that has been working for hundreds of years?"
She leaned forward in her chair. "But it hasn't been working. Look at how contentious things are with the goblins. That has come from centuries of being treated as lesser beings. I should realize that I can't expect either side to change their ways overnight, but someone has to give first and why not us? Why does it have to be them? They have everything to lose and nothing to gain by making the first move."
"That is true, but again, while it is not perfect, the relationship we have with them functions. From everything I have gathered about goblins, they have no interest in mingling with the wizarding world. They are happy to have no more contact with us than absolutely necessary in carrying out their banking duties, mining, archeological endeavors and treasure acquisitions as well as working in their craft trades. It is a very complex relationship but one that does function. Is there something you think that goblins would want?" he asked pointedly.
She hadn't realized he was so familiar with goblins and their enterprises outside of the wizard banking services. However, his question hit on the very thing she had been trying to determine since she had started trying to normalize relations with the goblins. "I don't know, but I think that equality is a good start. At least take them out of the Magical Creatures Division. Would it hurt to have a Magical Beings Division for the centaurs, goblins, merpeople and house-elves?"
He took another sip of his wine as he contemplated her question. "Probably not, but then again, are any of those beings interested in being part of the wizarding world? Other than the house-elves, none of the others really want to interact with wizards. And it has been that way for ages. That is part of the reason it has never been changed. There has never been any need."
"There might not be a need or an interest, but don't you think their view of wizards might be less harsh if they knew that we considered them something other than creatures? That's such a derogatory word. It implies inferiority, but they aren't inferior, are they? They're just different, and different doesn't mean inferior." She was quite proud of this argument.
He arched an eyebrow at how well her case had been stated. "That is very well said. And I presume you have brought this up through Ministry channels?"
"Several times, but it keeps getting ignored, deemed not important, just like you claimed," she said sharply.
"Indeed I did. However, I do not know that I have heard anyone state the case quite so eloquently. You do not expect that if this change could be made that each of those races would be eager to send a representative to the Ministry, do you?"
Leaning back in her chair as she realized she had convinced him, she said, "No, I don't. But I think that change would make it more likely to gain their cooperation in the future if we should ever need it. The centaurs only helped because of the mutual respect they had shared with Professor Dumbledore." She was interested in hearing his reaction to that given his past power struggles with her old headmaster.
"Indeed. That is what I presumed," he said flatly, clearly not wanting to dredge up memories of the war and his past.
She was a bit disappointed that was all he had to say. A part of her wanted to get into a good argument with him. "So were you wrong about Dumbledore?" she finally asked when the silence became uncomfortable.
He contemplated his wine as he formed his answer. "When he was younger, he was an incredibly talented, very intelligent and outstanding wizard. And mind you, I do realize that Rita Skeeter's biography was not entirely factual, but within her embellishments there was a great deal of truth. He was human and flawed, and his flaws seemed to run deeper than most, perhaps because of how powerful he was. As he grew older, I hold by my belief that he grew out of touch with society. He became isolated in his ivory tower at Hogwarts, allowing things to continue because that is how they had always been. Do you honestly believe that you got the best educational experience you could have?" he asked pointedly.
She considered his words carefully. There were many great professors at Hogwarts, but there had also been several mediocre to poor ones. Hagrid, as big as his heart was, was not the type of person who should have been teaching. And of course there was Professor Binns who lectured more than taught and had no concern as to who his students were or whether they were actually learning anything. Aside from Snape's outward prejudice against Gryffindors, he had been a good teacher. The others Defense Against the Dark Arts aside as that post had been cursed had all provided what she would considered a good education well other than Divination, but they had learned the reason Dumbledore had kept Trelawney on the staff. Replacing Binns and Hagrid would have definitely been within Dumbledore's means. As would have been regulating Snape's behavior.
"Overall it was a good education," she finally responded. "Yes, some changes could have been made, but nothing is perfect. And what's to say the changes would have resulted in a better education? Besides, you were on the Board of Governors for years, why did the board put up with something like Professor Binns?"
He raised his glass in salute. "Touché! I believe we shall call this round a draw, don't you?" he asked, clearly not wanting to continue the argument.
She laughed softly at his behavior and returned his salute. "I guess I'll have to take that since you won't cede the victory."
"You are a very clever witch, and I can see that one must be prepared to debate a point with you," he replied playfully.
"Thank you," she replied quietly, hoping she had not blushed too much at his praise. That was not the sort of thing she had ever gotten from Ron. Normally when she wanted to debate something, he would roll his eyes and give her the 'not again' body language. She actually enjoyed the process of the debate more than whether she scored a victory or not. You could sometimes learn much more by losing a debate than winning one. She finished her wine and set her glass down on the table.
"Now, my dear, I wondered if you might favor me with your company for dinner again tonight?" he asked hopefully.
"I would be honored," she replied without hesitation.
"Excellent. Now, I shall have to decide where we should eat. There are so many wonderful choices here. Why don't we take a walk along the beach while I ponder that question?" he asked and finished the last of his wine.
"I'd like that," she replied and rose to her feet.
As they walked to the beach, he asked her to mention one of her favorite things. She told him that she enjoyed reading.
"This would be more fun if you divulged things I didn't know about you. I promise to do the same. Such as..." he paused thoughtfully for a moment. "What is your favorite color?"
She thought it was rather odd and fun at the same time as they took turns picking something at random as they strolled shoeless along the surf in the cool sand. The longer they walked, the more esoteric the 'thing' became until they both collapsed into a fit of giggles when she asked him what his favorite worm was.
Once they had recovered from the silliness of favorite things, he said, "I hope that you won't find this presumptuous when I say that spending time with you has made me feel years younger."
She was not sure what to think about that. It was very flattering and also quite flirtatious. "I don't know what to say," she finally replied after a silence that was quickly turning uncomfortable.
"I had come here hoping to merely escape the dreariness of England and drudgery of work instead, I truly feel refreshed and relaxed. It has been a pleasure sharing your company," he said sincerely.
She blushed slightly at his words. "Thank you. I have enjoyed spending time with you as well. I've actually been able to completely forget the Lucius Malfoy I thought I knew."
He bowed his head slightly at her. "I am very pleased to hear that. Now, as to your future..."
Her eyes widened at those words. "My future?" she asked cautiously.
"I was wondering if you have given any consideration to changing your career? You have all the information one could want on Malfoy Industries, and I was wondering if you would consider working for me in some capacity."
She decided there was no point in lying. "I have considered it, but also several other companies as well."
"That is to be expected. But I think you will have noticed that none of those companies have the wide variety of options I do. It would be quite a simple matter for you to find a job that perfectly suited your talents given the number of holdings that I have. Another company might not offer that."
"Are there certain areas where you are hiring?" she asked.
"I am always looking for the best talent in the wizarding world. And right now, you are one of the best who is woefully under-employed. I can offer you the challenges and opportunities that you are not getting at the Ministry. And I assure you the salary I would offer you would be more than competitive."
"I'm not in it for the money," she replied simply.
"That may be true, but why not be adequately compensated for your work? I assure you, the Ministry is not adequately compensating you for the amount and quality of work you are providing," he replied definitively. "You are the classic definition of overworked and underpaid. Not to mention that you could always rejoin the Ministry at some point in the future when you have gained more influence."
She had thought that 'overworked and underpaid' was purely a Muggle saying, but apparently not. And he was right about the fact that she could always return to the Ministry if that was what she wanted down the line. "And if I agree to work for you, when would I start?"
"I leave that decision to you. If you want to take time off before starting, there is nothing wrong with that."
She pondered his words. Everything he was saying were things that had caused her to rank working for his company first on her list of potential new places of employment. "I'll have to think about it. Changing jobs is a very big step. And of course I'll have to discuss this with Ron."
He arched an eyebrow in surprise. "Of course. Though I do hope that you won't let his opinion keep you from doing what is best for you."
"It hasn't yet," she replied quickly and then realized she had probably said too much.
"Oh?" he prompted.
She realized she had to give some sort of answer and actually found it liberating to say, "Let's just say that Ron wants me to be more like his mother even though that's not me. It just seems to be getting worse lately."
"That is a pity. Of course there is nothing wrong with a witch staying at home to raise children, but you have so much potential, and it would be a shame for you to give up on that potential," he replied wisely.
"That's exactly what I keep telling Ron, but he keeps telling me that once the kids are in school I can have the career I always wanted." It felt good to have someone finally agree with her viewpoint.
"Yes, well that is true, but you have to look towards your personal happiness. Not everyone is prepared to be a parent at the same stage in their life. For you, it may be something that is destined to wait a few more years."
"If only I could convince Ron of that," she said wistfully. "That's what this week was supposed to be about, but he couldn't get time off from work," she said, not bothering to hide the irritation in her voice. She sighed. "I vowed that I would relax, but just thinking about Ron..." She balled her fists in frustration.
Lucius placed a calming hand on her shoulder. "Then we shall not speak of him anymore. I would hate to be responsible for your bad mood."
She relaxed a little. "It's not really a bad mood, it's just stress. And the point of being a vacation is to get away from the stress, isn't it?"
"Indeed it is. And I know the perfect place to dine tonight. We shall dine on The Wharf surrounded by the water." He led her down a path that cut across the island.
She was trying to remember having seen a restaurant on a wharf and could not.
Before they got to the opposite beach, he led her down a tunnel that had the wharf inscribed over the entrance. She had not realized The Wharf had been the name of the restaurant. And she also had no idea what it was referring to since they were underground.
When they were seated, she realized that Lucius had quite literally meant 'surrounded by the water' since The Wharf was a restaurant under the ocean in a bubble with the fish swimming all around them. It was a circular restaurant with each table having a view of the water on both sides, as well as above and below. "You sure know how to pick the right place to cheer a girl up," she replied.
"I thought you might enjoy it here. Narcissa did not much care for it because of the water. While it is perfectly safe, she still did not like the idea of being underwater for so long. I presume you have no such phobias?"
"Oh, no. It's lovely. It's even better than taking the dive because you don't have to get wet and you get to enjoy a nice meal at the same time," she replied as she watched the fish darting around and investigating the patrons.
"That's wonderful to hear," he replied. "Naturally, this is a seafood restaurant, and I'm sure you will be pleased with the cuisine."
"I have no doubt. I have yet to be disappointed by anything here," she replied cheerfully, thoughts of Ron pushed from her mind.
Dinner was wonderful and Hermione both ate and drank too much. After dinner, Lucius walked her back to her bungalow, and she found herself leaning against him for a little support, her arm hooked in his.
When they arrived at her door, she leaned against it and looked up into his eyes. "Thank you for a wonderful evening."
"I should be the one thanking you," he replied softly, gazing deeply into her eyes.
Her heart beat faster at the look of longing he gave her. He started to pull away, but she squeezed his hand, not wanting him to leave.
Slowly he leaned towards her and gently brushed his lips against hers. When she did not try to turn away, he pressed his lips more firmly, intensifying the kiss. Her head soared as her pulse quickened and without thinking, she parted her lips, tasting his lips with her tongue. He responded, his mouth opened slightly and their tongues met. Every nerve in her body seemed to react and she placed her hand on the back of his head as she deepened the kiss.
He eagerly responded, pressing his body against hers, urging her to take the advantage while at the same time submitting to her lead. It was heady indeed, Lucius Malfoy, one of the most influential wizards of the age, powerful, capable, undeniably masculine, suave and yet potentially dangerous, was allowing her, Hermione Granger, swot extraordinaire, to take what she wanted without reservation. There was no struggle for dominance, no hurried rush, no pressure, just the soft caressing of lips, the sensual exploration of mouths and light brush of warm breath on her cheek and the feel of his silken hair in her fingers as his fingers stoked her hair in kind.
Lust consumed Hermione's thoughts. Wanting more from him, she reached back and turned the doorknob, leading him into her room. Once the door was closed behind them, she started unbuttoning his shirt, eager to run her hands on his muscular chest.
He reached behind her and unzipped her dress. Letting it drop slowly to the floor. He then expertly unhooked her bra and gently fondled her breasts, his touch sending shivers of anticipation through her body.
Neither of them said anything, but at this point words were not needed.
She slipped her hand past his waistband to rub his throbbing erection, eliciting a moan of pleasure from him. He reached down and unfastened his trousers, letting them fall to his feet. She was slightly surprised that he had not been wearing any underpants. As he stepped out of his trousers, he slowly pushed her backwards, towards the bedroom.
When the back of her legs hit the edge of the bed, she allowed him to lower her to its surface. He pinned her arms next to her head and gave her a deep, passionate kiss. She could not remember the last time she had felt so alive, so desired.
He looked into her eyes, the longing clear, and she felt she could spend a lifetime lost in their depths. Gently he shifted her so that she was fully on the bed and began caressing and teasing her body. His soft touch elicited moans of desire and the throbbing between her legs was becoming unbearable.
She took his hand and placed it between her legs, showing him how much she desired him. He grinned playfully as he used his fingers to stimulate her. She rolled her hips, helping him find that magic spot.
She became lost in her physical desires until she felt herself rushing towards orgasm. She wanted to feel him inside her, wanted them to come together. Reluctantly she pushed his hand away, softly asking, "Please?"
He took his moist fingers and seductively licked them, fueling her desire even more. "As you wish," he said, positioning himself over her, and he slowly entered her moistness.
She moaned as he filled her. This was exactly what she wanted. She wrapped her legs behind his, pulling him deeper. While a part of her did not want this feeling to end, the rest of her knew that she could not hold back much longer. Urging him to thrust faster, she raised her hips, wanting to feel him deeper inside her. She exploded around him, rippling waves that crashed and rolled, repeating and repeating under and around him.
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I'm enjoying this a lot, pheonix. I'm looking forward to he next curevball thrown at them.
Buongiorno mia bellissima amica scrittrice! Ah, these new chapters! I find myself drawn even deeper. Lucius is growing in many ways, not the least of which is in self-knowledge, an often hard won and "hard-to-swallow" medicine. I did find the declaration of mutual affection a bit, not forced exactly, but more like not in keeping with the tension thus far developed; but as a segue to bringing Lucius' sister into the "mix", however, a clever and clean device. So, I await developments with Hermione, now. With her and Lucius' declarations, how will she view and interact with Gilles? What happens now with Harry and Ginny (and others)? When the attempt is made to return to the Hogwarts Board of Governors, will Hermione allow her lingering doubts (about Lucius' possibly using her as a mere stepping-stone back into power and influence) to come full force? What of Elsa? Have we seen the last of her? Waiting... :)Your Constant Reader~Heidi R.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm still here and am going through the next chapter. I have had fun with showing Lucius' development from anti-Muggle Death Eater to respectable wizard. It's also been interesting to show how grieving over Narcissa's death and finally coming to terms with the fact that life does go on has helped him grow, too. It will definitely be interesting to see how this mutual declaration changes how they react to others - and of course there will be poor Hermione trying to explain this to her friends. Not an easy pill for them to swallow. I hope to have the next chapter up by Monday at the latest. RL can be such a pain in the butt (kids had 2 weeks off school and family was visiting and we got sucked down to a one car family, which wouldn't have been too bad, but DH's ship was not underway like it should have been entailing much driving around for me as the family chauffuer. LOL
Lucius seriously I know you are trying to be careful but are you really telling me that you aren't sly enough, sneaky enough, Slytherin enough to send Hermione little notes during these few weeks you are going to be a part? Really? Come on! :) Great chapter as always.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, he'll send notes, he's just a bit concerned about the lack of physical presence in her life where he thinks a certain other wizard might have the chance to step in. But as he is sneaky, I'm sure he'll figure something out.
The divorce is settled, and all seems well, but I don't like the sound of Skeeta scuttling around the Ministry.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Anywhere there is juicy news to be found, Rita is there. She just can't resist, though the Prophet seems to be using less of her 'news', but when it sells papers something tells me it will be hard for them to resist publishing her version.
Hermione should feel very disappointed that Lucius behaves this platonic! I bet this isn't her definition of romantic feelings^_^Hope they can be together soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I know, poor Hermione. She thought things would change significantly after the hearing, but they didn't, did they? Lucius who says he doesn't care what others think, really does to a point. If she can be patient, I'm sure it will be rewarded.
Great^_^ Everything will be ok. Can't wait for them to be together......Good luck
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It sure is looking pretty good, isn't it? I'm sure Hermione can't wait to start this new chapter of her life.
The best part of this chapter was the flash back just because if anyone had forgotten how wrong those two were each other, that was a clue by four to the back of the head. I also really liked your subconscious gravitation that Lucius and Hermione are experiencing towards each other. I don't even think they realize it. It is similar to when they were on vacation but with a more perminant vibe to it. I am curious as to what they are going to do after she moves out. I see caldestene meetings at the library. Thanks for the refresh on the 6 weeks. Good luck with getting everybody in school. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you liked the flashback. I don't always go for that sort of thing, but it seemed a great way to work out how Hermione was going to explain what happened at the hearing without it getting overly tedious. It's been nice watching the slow burn on this relationship as they each try to figure the other out and where they stand. I think that poor Lucius will be a bit lost when she is removed from his life upon moving out. I do think he might try to 'run in' to her. ;) And kiddo 1 is settling in school. Start of term is very hard for her and kiddo 2 I'm going to start the enrollment process for 3 day a week preschool. Hopefully that will go well for him. He's excited about it, but we'll see how it goes when he's left in a strange place without me. Then again, he's gone over to a friend's house to be babysat and was okay with that because there were other kids, so he might do just fine.
Looking forward to reading more. I only saw one mistake, i was so hooked on the story.I assume you meant Nicholas Flamel was an advisor. I believe you wrote fannel....
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad that you are enjoying this and thanks for catching the misspelling. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
I think Lucius just out manuvoured hims into a co he isn't quite prepared to be in just yet. Yes, Hermione knows he is interested in her as more than just a friend, hurrah. However Lucius know gets to battle his own libido to keep from touching her in a way he shouldn't. Once the hearing is over it will only get worse. I need to go back and read the part with Reg describing the procedure. She has the hearing but then there is a period of time bef she is actually divorced, right?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Correct on the latter. There is a six week period between the hearing and the finalizing of the divorce. I figured in this case wizarding Britain would mirror Muggle Britain. And poor Lucius has definitely made his life more difficult. It was easier to maintain the facade of friendship when their feelings weren't out between them.
You have me thinking about this story night and day!!! I am not usually a Hermione/Lucius fan, but dang, I've got it bad. :) I am so glad they finally admitted how they feel. I just hope it doesn't ruin his well-laid plans to keep his distance. Not knowing how the other felt kept the relationship safe. As they say, it's a lot easier to let the cat out of the bag than put it back in.Seriously cannot wait for more. Please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad to have turned you into a fan. This was a ship I wasn't sure about at first, but then I read a few that were really well done and became a believer. Hopefully now that it's out in the open between them, it won't become weird between them or obvious to others. I hope to have the next chapter up this week - end of summer vacation and back to school are wreaking havoc with my writing.
So goooooooood that the feelings are mutual! Hope the hearing to come and go soon:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It has to be a relief to the two of them to know that they weren't imagining things. Hopefully this will not turn into one of those periods where time seems to utterly drag for them. So glad you are enjoying this and hope to have the next chapter up this week (end of summer vacation and back to school are wreaking havoc with writing).
I'm a little worried about Elsa," hell hath no fury " and all that, I hope she knows how to take no for an answer gracefully. I'm glad it's all out in the open between them now.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Hopefully Elsa will be the mature 30-something she should be. Of course, there's not much she could do and retain her positon. Something tells me if she went psycho on him, he would see he removed from the family company. At least he shouldn't have to deal with her advances, though something tells me she might avoid him for a while for making a fool of herself. ;) And bigger bonus, he's put his foot in the door for a relationship with Hermione, hopefully edging out Gilles.
I wonder what the Wealseys have up their sleeves for the hearing. Loved the family reunion, little Scorpius seems to have inherited his fair share of Malfoy charm.
I hope Lucius didn't see that, he may get the wrong idea.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yes, he could definitely get the wrong idea from that.
I wonder what the Wealseys have up their sleeves for the hearing. Loved the family reunion, little Scorpius seems to have inherited his fair share of Malfoy charm.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
You would imagine there would have to be something, wouldn't you? And what 1 year old isn't charming? Heck, my almost 4 year old still works that charm on everyone he meets. But Scorpius is definitely a Malfoy. LOL
Thank you so much for a great update. I really like that you have added a sister for Lucius, that gives more to the story in my humble oppinion.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I always bemoaned that so many in the wizarding world seemed to be only children whose parents were only children and who seemingly don't have a close relationship with other relatives (granted our view is limited and Nevile and Ron are the only ones who really revealed any additional family, well Sirius). I love the idea that Lucius would have a sister who got exiled for embarrassing her family. It really does add more to him as a character and helps humanize him.
I do a little happy dance every time I see an update. The delicate balance of Lucius's perceived arrogance and vulnerability is endearing and spot on.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Even after everything that's happened to him, there are times when he does get a little full of himself, aren't there? This was definitely one of them. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story and hope you continue to do so.
Heat does this Gilles guy want? He has became too sweet, I hope he won't be a obstacle on Hermione and Luvius way.....Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad you are enjoying. Gilles is a bit of an enigma right now, isn't he? Does he want to be more than a friend or is he just one of those guys content to have a female friend? Only time will tell.
Ron does seem to be a one note song doesn't he, the Weasleys' are going to have to do better than that. I loved Felicia telling Connor and Lucius off, like they were a couple of school boys, not that it is all that far from the truth. Hermione is growing so close to Lucius, she can't see it yet, I just hope no one else can, and reports it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Felicia is very prim and proper and does not like it when something upsets what she sees as the proper order of things, and a couple of grown men acting like 12 year olds would be one of those. But hey, Lucius is finally out of his funk. :) The good news on the Lucius/Hermione front is that he realizes that being seen together in public would be a very bad idea, as much as he might want to be seen with her. And Ron's whole world has been thrown upsidedown. Poor lad. He just doesn't know how to cope with this. Kind of like when he went off in a snit in DH.
Hermione is starting to get there, her subconscious has recognized what Lucius is up to. Now she just needs to connect why she doesn't want to tell Lucius about Giles. I wonder if Felicia has invited Elsa to the dinner party hoping to 'help' Lucius out, that could be interesting, sticky, and amusing all at once. Lucius may need to step up his stealth courting once he finds out about Giles.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Wouldn't that be something of Felicia to do. LOL Thankfully she tends to be a bit more subtle. And yes, Lucius is definitely going to be concerned about Gilles. He's worked so hard over the months to work his way into Hermione's life. I don't think he would easily let another wizard steal her affection.
Wonderful update, hurrah for it being much earlier than you promised. I love how naturally they are evolving into courting each other. Hermione asking about the upcoming week and Lucius spending every free night with her. I wonder if either of them even realize it. I can't help but feel Ron isn't through and what about the person following Lucius in Paris (or was that the reporter, humm have to think about that.).
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Of course Lucius realizes it. His behavior is all very calculated. Hermione likely does not consciously realize it. Of course this is the only behavior she has seen from the post-Azkaban Lucius, so that would make it easier for her not to notice it. :) And Ron definitely won't let this go without a fight even though he has to realize they are past the point of no return. His smear piece in the paper really did that in. As to the shadow, you have figured that out.
O my GOD!!!!!!! It looks badly like a real trouble. Has anything happened to Ron? Recently in the most stories i read people commit suicide and I'm getting a paranoia about it, i think everybody is going to kill themselves:-)Pls update soonGood luck mate:-)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It is trouble, but I will assuage your fears and tell you not that kind of trouble. I believe in warnings for that sort of thing and while this fic does have some darkness in it, nothing that bad. Next chapter should be up before the end of the week. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Oh shit, what has the little toe-rag done now?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
LOL This is my new favorite review. LOL I'm so glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read it. The answer will be coming in a few days. :)
The dye is now cast, I hope Ron is not going to be to much of an arse.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, considering how petulant and moody he's been, I wouldn't hold out hope for him not being too much of an arse, but time will tell.
Oh cliffie!!! Now the question is did someone spot them at Lucius' club or did Ron do something else? Could he (meaning Ron) actually remembered that Hermione and Lucius had been aware of each other while she was on vacation? Is he going to try to label her an adulteress?? Did I tell you that I love Deliah? I find the idea that her fleeing for a reason other than blood politics really interesting. The fact she hasn't ever told her husband who her family is is also really interesting. Great chapter. Now I wait on pins and needles to find out what the paper says.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I always found it odd that so many of Jo's characters were apparently only children. I know it simplifies her already very complex world, but you would think with all the talk about how important being a pureblood and a Malfoy was that Lucius would have had siblings and that it's pretty odd Draco doesn't. And this was such a great way to provide a previously unknown sister for Lucius. Considering she married a humble farmer, I can't blame her for not mentioning much about her family - especially since she probably never expected to hear from them again. As for the cliffie, later this week will be the next chapter. :) Thanks for reviewing.