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New Beginning
phoenix125 Reviews | 7.11/10 (125 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Five years after the war Hermione's life is stuck in a rut. She's not sure what she wants in life, but she knows it's not starting a family with her husband, Ron. What will it take for her to find direction again?
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I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for New Beginning
While these last two chapters have been a bit slower, I feel like you're building up to something about Ron (hopefully something just a little bit nasty, after the way he's not supporting Hermione).Thank you for sharing, and have a great week!PS: More from Lucius soon, pretty please? :D
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, Hermione is making some really big life changes, so there is a lot to cover. And more Lucius is coming soon. I try to give him time every other or every third chapter. This part of the story is a bit of an exception since there is so much going on with Hermione. Chapter 13 is all Lucius. :)
I know Lucius is being as calm as he can be, but I hope Hermione doesn't get the wrong idea about Elsa, Griffindors have been known to jump to conclusions.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yup, they certainly have been known to take facts out of context and come to the wrong conclusion, haven't they? And he really is being such a good boy about her marital situation despite his desires.
Welcome back...nice chapter
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. I hope that you will enjoy the rest of them (and a new one went about about the same time you reviewed)
Love the build up and flow of this chapter and am so happy that Hermione took the initiative to experience something that she wanted, for herself, and that she and Lucius are sharing a true intimacy with each other--hope there are no regrets! But real life will be challenging their every move... and when Ronald arrives...? Looking forward to more! Great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I think you'll find the next chapter quite enlightening. To say more... just can't do it.
Mmmm... poor dear--good luck with trying to avoid him, Hermione! Maybe she can physically, but avoiding the memory of his enjoyable, atentive company is another thing... I love how you capture the step by step 'platonic' comfortableness between them, and the profound realization that Hermione has re-examining her relationship on top of everything else--Great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I still for the life of me cannot see why JKR would pair Ron and Hermione. I know she just recently admitted that perhaps that would not have been the easiest of relationships and would likely require therapy, but honestly the only way I would see it working would be for Hermione to give up part of who she is, which I don't think she would, and hence we get this story. And I just love how wonderfully perfect Lucius is being. He's working his way into her life so carefully that she doesn't really understand what's happening, does she?
I love the descriptive narrative that Hermione is experiencing--one can truly feel the luscious, relaxing environment she is in. Love the picture of Hermione reading for pleasure... and being interrupted by a mystery *person* Knowing it is not Ron leads to all sorts of possibilities...
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It being not Ron can lead to all sorts of fun, can't it. And I'm so glad you love her relaxing environment. I think my muses knew I needed it when they fed the idea to me and revolted when I didn't act on it, only returning once my own tropical vacation was over.
Surprise, surprise, guess who?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Just might be.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Just might be.
The stunned voice of a certain Malfoy, no doubt.Which leaves me to wonder whether he truly was surprised, or just very much a Slytherin.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, whether or not it's Malfoy will be revealed in the next chapter. As to whether or not it's a surprise, that might take longer. ;)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, whether or not it's Malfoy will be revealed in the next chapter. As to whether or not it's a surprise, that might take longer. ;)
Hermione needs more than the friends with benefits relationship she has with Ron. He is being kind and understanding now, I wonder how long that will last, maybe until she meets someone interesting on vacation.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Friends with benefits is a really good way to describe their marriage. As for how long it will last, I think Ron is just about on her last nerve and all it would take is someone to treat her as a valued equal - to realize what Ron isn't giving her in her relationship.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Friends with benefits is a really good way to describe their marriage. As for how long it will last, I think Ron is just about on her last nerve and all it would take is someone to treat her as a valued equal - to realize what Ron isn't giving her in her relationship.
A nice understanding Ron always makes me feel slightly guilty, as I'm usually just waiting for him to be out the picture! Talking of which, how long til we meet a certain other cast member?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It does hurt to see Ron being considerate when you are rooting for the breakup, doesn't it? This is Ron with the emotional range of a teaspoon, so I wouldn't expect it to last. As to the last, if you are referring to certain Potions Master, I'm afraid he won't be making an appearance. Since this is mostly canon compliant, he didn't make it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I will say I did think long and hard about having Snape in the picture, but decided to keep this as close to canon as possible.
Response from anoesis (Reviewer)
Well, I suppose you can't have everything... I'll be interested to see this side of Lucius develop, though. He's a very interesting character, even in canon!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It does hurt to see Ron being considerate when you are rooting for the breakup, doesn't it? This is Ron with the emotional range of a teaspoon, so I wouldn't expect it to last. As to the last, if you are referring to certain Potions Master, I'm afraid he won't be making an appearance. Since this is mostly canon compliant, he didn't make it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I will say I did think long and hard about having Snape in the picture, but decided to keep this as close to canon as possible.
Response from anoesis (Reviewer)
Well, I suppose you can't have everything... I'll be interested to see this side of Lucius develop, though. He's a very interesting character, even in canon!
Lucius caught in a fit of altruism? Seems far too good to be true, although if anyone could help her succeed...
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, I wouldn't necessarily call it altruism. ;) After all it behooves him to have the best and brightest working for him, doesn't it?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, I wouldn't necessarily call it altruism. ;) After all it behooves him to have the best and brightest working for him, doesn't it?
Ooh, I've never seen the results from someone's NaNoWriMo before. I like the promise of some 50k+ ahead of me!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I hope you enjoy this. I just wish it hadn't taken so long to get it out in public. As it stands right now, it's over 100k, so there is plenty of story to go. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I hope you enjoy this. I just wish it hadn't taken so long to get it out in public. As it stands right now, it's over 100k, so there is plenty of story to go. :)
I do so like Ron. I almost feel bad about wanting Hermione to elope with Lucius.I'm ooking forward to Hermione's vacation and wondering wether she'll bump into a certain someone?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Sometimes Ron really does get it right, doesn't he? Of course being Ron that's not likely to last, is it? Would be interesting if she would bump into a certain someone, wouldn't it?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Sometimes Ron really does get it right, doesn't he? Of course being Ron that's not likely to last, is it? Would be interesting if she would bump into a certain someone, wouldn't it?
Love the development and the lengths of Lucius' efforts to know more about Hermione; he's found/rediscovered his spark again, and I love how he is insightful to see that's there's so much more to her that's not being developed--now to approach her about it and her response to *him*!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Lucius just needed a nudge to re-engage with life. Of course he know has the condundrum that the person to give him that nudge is unavailable. Stay tuned for what he does and how she reacts. Thanks for your review.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Lucius just needed a nudge to re-engage with life. Of course he know has the condundrum that the person to give him that nudge is unavailable. Stay tuned for what he does and how she reacts. Thanks for your review.
Mmmm... yum! I love the premise set up and the realistic portrayal of Ron and Hermione's relationship, the painful, needy comparisons that keep being pressured onto Hermione--very powerful and effective; just as lovely is the wonderful sanctuary of the library and the delicious, subtle encounter between Hermione and Lucius! Again, yum!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like the portrayal of things five years on. For Hermione I imagine the library is a huge comfort to her since at Hogwarts her first response to anything she didn't understand was to run to the library. I just loved that brief little encounter and how something so simple can cause big ripples.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like the portrayal of things five years on. For Hermione I imagine the library is a huge comfort to her since at Hogwarts her first response to anything she didn't understand was to run to the library. I just loved that brief little encounter and how something so simple can cause big ripples.
Lucius wil have to very charming to win Hermione over, she is a very loyal and faithful person, and won't cheat on Ron even if he's being a prat.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, this is fanon Lucius who can be very charming, and he's rather bored with his current existence, so we'll see how she reacts to him.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, this is fanon Lucius who can be very charming, and he's rather bored with his current existence, so we'll see how she reacts to him.
Ooh, clever Malfoy. And lonely too. I'm looking forward to his manipulation of her. And whether he realises the reason for his interest in her, or she makes him.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
The poor man really is lonely and I think that simple conversation with Hermione finally made him realize how pathetic and lonely his life really is. All it took was another wounded soul to snap him out of funk.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
The poor man really is lonely and I think that simple conversation with Hermione finally made him realize how pathetic and lonely his life really is. All it took was another wounded soul to snap him out of funk.
Interesting start, well written and plotted. Since I absolutely hate the Hermione/Ron pairing, I will wait patiently for a few chapters before I start groaning about them being together. Just pleace keep all mentioning about sex between them to a minimum, I don't think I can take to much of that idea:-)) (Now, Hermione and Lucius, there you can mention sex as much as you want and then some:-))))
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like the beginning. I'm not a Ron/Hermione shipper, so don't expect too much here. As for the other, you'll just have to wait and see. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like the beginning. I'm not a Ron/Hermione shipper, so don't expect too much here. As for the other, you'll just have to wait and see. :)
I'm very fond of Ron, and like your portrayal of him. It sounds very reasonable that Ron and Hermione would disagree about children, seeing how different their backgrounds are.I'm wondering whether Hermione will suddenly have an urge to spend more time than strictly necessary at the library?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like how I've portrayed Ron. I don't dislike Ron, I just tend to think that he's all wrong for Hermione. Though honestly I'd like to take the entire Ministry to task for the cavalier way Muggleborns seem to be treated - not told until they are 11 why they are so different which just leaves them as such outsiders when they start school and probably beyond. As to the library, you'll find out. ;) Thank you for yoru review.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like how I've portrayed Ron. I don't dislike Ron, I just tend to think that he's all wrong for Hermione. Though honestly I'd like to take the entire Ministry to task for the cavalier way Muggleborns seem to be treated - not told until they are 11 why they are so different which just leaves them as such outsiders when they start school and probably beyond. As to the library, you'll find out. ;) Thank you for yoru review.
You paint a rather sad picture of Ron and Hermione's life together,which is how it should be, they are so badly matched.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad other see that. Honestly, we're expected to believe that Ron figuring out to use the basilisk fang and repeating Parseltongue he heard Harry mutter in his sleep is supposed to be the uniting catalyst between someone who is not academic and loves quidditch and someone who values knowledge and education and eschews sports? I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride and thanks for the review. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad other see that. Honestly, we're expected to believe that Ron figuring out to use the basilisk fang and repeating Parseltongue he heard Harry mutter in his sleep is supposed to be the uniting catalyst between someone who is not academic and loves quidditch and someone who values knowledge and education and eschews sports? I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride and thanks for the review. :)
I'm so happy that now they can be together, waiting was becoming frustrating
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It really was frustrating, wasn't it? And Lucius was being such a good boy, patiently waiting for things to work out in his favor.
What a wonderful present! I love this chapter. Lucius' bits of insecurity about Giles but his total surety with Draco are a wonderful view of Lucius' personality. Ron is still a twit ball I see. Clearly he knows even less about his ex-wife then we thought. I wonder what Harry will say. That's the big one. Connor is as always adorable. He and Lucius talking is like watching a fencing duel between Olympic masters.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Gilles definitely makes Lucius realize how big the age difference between him and Hermione is and it makes him nervous to a certain extent. Of course, he's doing what he can to make sure she never sees Gilles in a romantic light. And of course now that he's pretty sure he's done that, he can be quite confident with Draco. Poor kid, he's completely off guard, isn't he? And Connor has been so much fun. Creating new characters can be difficult, but Lucius really needed a good friend and since I stuck with canon on poor Severus' death, that left a big void. But in this case, I think having a married friend has been good for Lucius.
I feel that Draco has a great deal more to say, but will wait untill he has talked it over with his wife. Lucius { as usual } could give cucumbers a lesson in cool.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I really loved the scene with Draco. It's one of my all time favorite scenes I've written. And he definitely does want to say more, he's just too emotional to actually be coherent. I think it's also sinking in that his father has his minid set on pursuing Hermione. Talk about that being a potentially very awkward 'meet in the inlaws dinner' LOL
Lucius has gone to a lot of trouble to set this up, I hope it all works out the way he wants,but Ron is rather a lose cannon. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yup. Ron is Ron. He definitely didn't want to lose Hermione and now he sees someone he can't stand and doesn't trust moving in on his territory. Not a good combination.
I { along with Lucius } am getting a little worried, Hermiome has lost so much, I'm not sure any realationship could survive her losing all her friends.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Hopefully they will be level headed. Harry is at least willing to give her the benefit of the doubt. Hopefully Ginny and some of the other Weasleys can be convinced. I think she is just now starting to realize how small her network of friends is, not that it's entirely bad, but it is isolating when so many are connected to your ex.