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New Beginning
phoenix125 Reviews | 7.11/10 (125 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Five years after the war Hermione's life is stuck in a rut. She's not sure what she wants in life, but she knows it's not starting a family with her husband, Ron. What will it take for her to find direction again?
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I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for New Beginning
Tragic conversation between the young couple! It was really affective, i almost pitied Ron, Almost!Now I'm done with pitying, looking forward for Lucius and Hermione's little chat!GOOD LUCK
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
If Ron wasn't being such an arse, he would be worthy of more pity. Funny how it's a Weasley so concerned about perceptions, isn't it? Maybe something of Percy rubbed off on him. Or just him finally being important and thinking life was great and having it yanked out from under him made him snap.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
If Ron wasn't being such an arse, he would be worthy of more pity. Funny how it's a Weasley so concerned about perceptions, isn't it? Maybe something of Percy rubbed off on him. Or just him finally being important and thinking life was great and having it yanked out from under him made him snap.
Lucius is showing great restraint and sensitivity in his dealings with Hermione, I'm sure his patience will be rewarded. I was feeling a little sorry for Elsa, untill Herr Weiss started slinking in the shadows, it makes me think Elsa has someting other than romance in mind for Lucius.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Lucius is very politically astute and he is going to do his best to be a good boy. He's done a good job so far showing her how the grass is greener on the other side. As for the shadow, we don't know who that was, but poor Elsa was just a little late in trying to get Lucius' attention, wasn't she?
I really glad with how their relationship is progressing. I wasn't expecting Ron to aquiese like he did so I will worry there is still nastiness to come there.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, Ron didn't really acquiesce since he is contesting the divorce, but thankfully it seems as though he dished all his dirt in one go. I'm sure Hermione will be happy when this is all over.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, Ron didn't really acquiesce since he is contesting the divorce, but thankfully it seems as though he dished all his dirt in one go. I'm sure Hermione will be happy when this is all over.
I love the golden hearted Slytherin that Lucius is being. He is plotting yes, but not in a negative way. Why do I think Draco's impression is going to cause Hermione heartache?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Thank you. It is nice to see that someone can plot and scheme, but not necessarily for evil purposes, isn't it? While it was said that basically all the Death Eaters were in Slytherin, it wasn't said that everyone in Slytherin went on to become one. And in fact you saw that not all of them did in DH. I would have to agree that it seems pretty unlikely Draco would approve of his father's choice of paramor, but I somehow doubt Lucius cares what his son thinks. LOL
Really enjoyed your update. Thank you for the great read.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
So glad you are enjoying. Thanks for letting me know and I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
I do admire his patience!;-) But I think for all his worldly ways, Elsa might be unchartered territory and a woman who doesn't like to be ignored... Poor Hermione, she does seem to be lost and wandering into the shades of depression or denial or... something, but I understand her taking comfort in reading :-), however, Lucius seems to know what she needs better... but patience seems to be the key right now... Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
This is where a young know-it-all like Hermione really needs a confidant with more worldly experiences. She does like to take comfort in her books, but that is not all the world has to offer her. Hopefully she will let him provide the direction she needs.
I've a feeling about herr Weiss! ;)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
He does put off a bad vibe, doesn't he?
There's no easy way to do this, and Hermione is being honest... and Ron is being honest... and Harry is being honest. Just painful but honest, realistic slices of life.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
There really isn't an easy way to do this. Sometimes folks like to romanticize things, but this isn't one of those that can. As an author it's been interesting to explore the demise of a long term relationship.
Mmmn, so things are going Lucius' way, little by little Hermione is trusting him in more ways than one, and this is also allowing him to reach out to formerly severed ties--his sister, hope she will give him a second chance, as he does seem sincere in his reinvented life and attitude:-)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I can only imagine the level of excitement Lucius must be feeling over Hermione bringing up ending her marriage. He must be nearly salivating. Hopefully his patience will hold out. As to him having changed, I've been off and on working on a story set during DH and afterwards that will show some of this transformation, but there will be some more illumination in Chapter 19.
Hmmn, Lucius' perfect place... *sighing* hehe!Well, Ron had to bring it up, and Hermione had to hear it, truly hear him, and she needed to make a decision, once and for all, for her own sanity... Some things are just not meant to be... glad she has a friend, even an opportunistic one, to help listen to her--but hey, being opportunistic can be a good thing and maybe lead to a happiness she never knew existed;-)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
You and Lucius seem to be on the same wavelength. Perhaps Hermione has finally reached the end of her rope with Ron. Sometimes things are broken beyond repair, and I think she's finally realizing that.
Yes, Lucius is very patient and sure of himself;-) But he might need to be careful about the other witches he is, um, intentionally or not intentionally leading on in his wheeling, dealing ways--hehe!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
He's very sure of himself, isn't he? And as you point out, that can cause some problems. He sure is complicating his life, isn't he?
Oh, what a tease! The Hermione/Lucius scene in the office was titillating--but the bubble burst quite quickly as soon as she got home... Of course someone else, Seamus, helped Ron find something nice--not an original, romantic bone in his body... well, he is loyal, very, boorishly so... and he does care for her in his own unique way--so if Hermione's willing to keep giving him a chance, I will...
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Hermione does keep getting these little hints from him that there is something so much better than Ron waiting for her. Ron does deserve some credit for trying, but lets see what he actually makes of this opportunity. This is Ron after all. LOL
Oh, I don't think Lucius needs Elsa's special attention now that slowly he's getting what he wants......Someone in the shadows? It seems like it means trouble in the shadows:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
A few months ago, Lucius might have enjoyed her attention, but now it's just one more distraction, isn't it? And yeah, not very often someone in the shadows is doing something good, is it? Glad you are enjoying it.
Yes, the division between Hermione and Ron is going from a gully to a canyon *sigh*George is such a sweetie! So happy that he and Angelina are supportive of Hermione; it's awful when all of the in-laws are not understanding and supportive, and just having one of them be open and kind to her is lovely!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
LOL Nothing like cheering on a breakup, is there? And despite all the mischief and mayhem Fred and George caused, I always thought they were very practical and level-headed, more mature than you would expect. Something tells me that Molly won't be so understanding.
Why do I think there is more to divorce in the Wizarding world then Hermione has figured out yet? I am glad that you gave (or are giving) their relationship a dignified end. I haven't ever shipped Ron & Hermione but when an author takes the time to give the end of their relationship a realistic feel of a dying marriage, I appreciate it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yes, poor Hermione is about to learn some things about the wizarding world that Hogwarts never prepared her for. Poor girl. The magical education was pretty good, but the social aspects, not so much. I'm glad you find the ending of the marriage realistic. They've been through so much and tried so hard, there really is no easy way out. Like you, I've never really understood the pairing, but I felt it would be wrong to just discard it. Ron's for the most part a decent bloke and doesn't deserve to be chucked out with the rubbish.
It's both painful and intriguing to watch Hermione try so hard to fill up the missing intimacy she needs in their relationship *sigh* Ronald does seem to care for her in his own way, his own limited way, and likewise it's painful to see him unable/incapable of truly being aware of and sensitive to Hermione's needs and accomplishments and yearnings... I'm glad she is staying strong (that's our girl)! And going after what she needs and desires to explore and develop... So few do. But now Ron has Harry supporting his suspicions--had to laugh at Ron wavering at the news of her salary rise--HA!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It really is difficult to watch, isn't it? It's hard for Ron being the near baby - thus his Erised moment. He's more concerned with trying to impress and outdo his brothers than his relationship with his wife. And I really loved the moment when someone who had hand-me-down and second-hand everything was presented with a rather large jump in family income. He must almost feel like a traitor to his Malfoy hating principles. LOL
Yes, Lucius, you still 'have it', and then some! silly wizard! ;-)Enjoyed reading Lucius' pov, but am worried that this Elsa is going to cause quite the interference and distraction from where his heart truly lies... But as is written, 'After all, he was a man and men had certain urges.' Hmmn, how strong will he be?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yes, he is being a bit of a silly wizard, isn't he? But as he had been avoiding female contact for years, I can see his reason for self-doubt. And Elsa is definitely one to watch out for. Lucius may come to regret pouring on the charm. LOL
Things between Hermione and Ron are getting more serious, sooner they get divorce, sooner Lucius would be able to win Hermione:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Thank you and glad you are enjoying it. And that is exactly what Lucius has been thinking. I'm sure he is quite pleased at the turn this is taking.
Looks like the only way Hermione can get loose from her marriage, is for Ron to fall for someone else.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It really is looking that way, isn't it? Hopefully he will come to see reason.
Loved the update, finally Hermione has done the right thing and said the D-word aloud. While I don't hold my breath waiting, one could hope that Ron would be able to face fact too: He and Hermione is totally unsuitable for each other, she will never be a copy of his mother and that is what he wants. There was a lot about Hermiones ability to bend to his wishes and why she went through with the marriage, will for instance Harry ask Ron the same questions? Will he ask Ron if he truly considered who Hermione was as a person before they got married? Studios, totally uninterested in quiddish, always wants to learn new things, wants to make a difference. Did he think that her stribe for good grades and her work etich was only a preparation for a future as his wife? They are both equally to blame for marrying someone they truly didn't know and if Hermione shall take the heat for it, so must Ron. His immaturity will obviously be a problem thogh, running away to his friends or mother in stead of taking the talk as a grown man, nor standing up for his wife against his mother, no matter what, should tell both him and the rest of the Weasleys that the marriage is doomed, though I wont hold my breath waiting for any of the W's to use common sense.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It is a big 'finally' moment seeing Hermione finally admit it's not working and there needs to be a big change, isn't it? Hopefully someone in the Weasley family will be able to overcome their natural temperment to realize that Ron and Hermione really aren't a good match. Glad you enjoyed the update.
Lovely:-)Hope for more Hermione and Lucius conversation in next chapter!Good luck
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Don't worry. He's slowly but steadily becoming a fixture in her life. After all, he's a Slytherin who is going to take his time, not some Gryffindor who's going to go charging in.
Oh dear, I get the feeling that Ron is about to put his foot in it.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
This is Ron and he does have a special sort of skill for that, doesn't he? This is probably one of those 'sure bets' in life.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know , but Hermione is so hopeful , and has a head full of romance, she is going to be dropped from a great hight it's going to hurt, but then again Lucius is waiting in the wings to break her fall.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
There is that for her romantic intentions. Ron and romance is not something that naturally goes together.
Well, seeing Hermione's relation with Ron is getting better really isn't the point of story, unless it's a calm before storm. Of course nevertheless their arguments are very interesting:-)Good jobP.s: sorry if it's full of errors, I'm a bit dizzy!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, this is Ron and he seems to have a special sort of skill for not improving their relationship. Let's see what happens next. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far and hope it continues to entertain. No worries about the errors. No one betas reviews. :)
Well, at least George has some sense, I hope Hermione comes to her senses soon.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Not every Weasley is like Ron. Good thing, too. I think she's finally awakening to the possibility that there is life away from Ron. And a certain suave widower might be having something to do about that.
Oh dear God, is Ron trying to drive Hermione away? he is such a crashing bore ,it's a wonder she has stayed this long.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well, Ron is pretty thick and for Hermione, I think she just never really thought about their being other options, but now she certainly is, isn't she?