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The Puppet Master

melusin

39 Reviews | 6.1/10 (39 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Erotica Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 3,300 Words 4 Chapters Complete

Hermione's on the hunt for arcane information, and there's only one source left to contact. Drabble series written for the 'Foot Fetish'Challenge on GS100.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

About melusin

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melusin

Member Since 2006 | 23 Stories | Favorited by 344 | 77 Reviews Written | 1,999 Review Responses

Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

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http://asylums.insanejournal.com/melusin_la_fey/

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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for The Puppet Master

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0/10

anoesis

Well, I suppose this was far longer than a drabble reader could normally hope for, but I can't help wanting more. Brilliant ficlet!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination

0/10

anoesis

Personally, I'm not a big fan of feet, which is why I adore how convincingly you write his enjoyment. The weirdo.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge

0/10

anoesis

Scented oils, eh? I'm loving the fact that he has some charmed ribbons handy for just such an occasion.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev

0/10

anoesis

There's something to off-putting and compelling about this story! Hermione really needs to work on her bargaining skills, though.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

10/10

droxy

Yay for archiving!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

10/10

mick42

The last line, was just perfect. Thank you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.

10/10

mick42

The foot fetish thing, is not realy my thing, but the way you write it ,it is very sensual. It is sad to see Hermione so lonely, hopefully Severus can help.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me

10/10

mick42

This is quite a picture you are painting, I have no idea why my heart rate is up, but it is.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Lol - thank you

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Lol - thank you

10/10

mick42

Ok, you have my attention.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

good

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

good

10/10

Owlbait

Holy cow, you set the imagination in such a naughty direction and just send it on it's way with a hearty shove. Hee!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you.

10/10

cottontail

Interesting to say the least. I gather she will change her mind indeed. I know I would. hee hee

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay

0/10

nighthawk

I'm not one for foot fetishes, yet I like to read fetish stories. It simply is interesting to delve into the unknown, to experience other facets of passion. Sadly, fetish stories are rather rare (If you discount the "spank me you naughty Potions Professor" stories.) or treat fetishes somewhat deprecatingly as something only twisted Death Eaters would do. So thank you for an open minded approach.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.

0/10

Calicoskys

I don't even care about foot fetishes but you made this rather sexy. I love your version of Severus and Hermione tho :D.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.

0/10

Calicoskys

Ohhh I love your "voice" Your stories are kind of like warm sweaters you just fall into and enjoy the characters. :D can't wait to see the end of this one.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

0/10

Severus49

Mel, I love your writing! Everytime, everything I read is a sonnet! It's beautiful! I cannot wait to read more! Please hurry!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual

10/10

itchyfoot

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before. Somehow I thought it was a one shot.I am fascinated and looking forward to more. I am wondering how they can help each other.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.

10/10

TeddyRadiator

Oh, Miz Melusin, I need the rest of this series like I need a little Christmas... right this very minute!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

still not happy with the ending :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

still not happy with the ending :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.

10/10

cottontail

Ohhhh dear, a challenge. sqee ;D

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Indeed :)

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Indeed :)

9/10

Gyvir26

Still intriguing; still trying to figure out just what Severus's motives are.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

10/10

cottontail

"Turn Over"... Oh dear lord. Why did I find the ribbons so erotic?

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

heh-hehwe shall see...

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

heh-hehwe shall see...

9/10

Belladonna2010

Eeep! I am a big fan of your writing. Really glad you didn't give Snape a makeover or make him an overnight millionaire, as it is very tempting to do. Great tension. You make every word count. Can't wait to read more.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Glad you liked it

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Glad you liked it

10/10

TeddyRadiator

I am so longing for the next chapter of this fic...

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.

10/10

LivingTheDream

Love it.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you

0/10

Gyvir26

Intriguing. I must know what Hermione needs this text for, as well as just what Snape wants as his payment. Write on, please.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending

10/10

siage

Interesting start, looking forward to more. Thanks for writing!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - more soon

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - more soon

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