Two
Chapter 2 of 4
melusinHermione's on the hunt for arcane information, and there's only one source left to contact. Drabble series written for the 'Foot Fetish'Challenge on GS100
Reviewed‘What are you doing?’ Hermione asked impatiently. It seemed like he’d been kneeling there for hours, and she had better things to do than examine the top of Snape’s head all evening. Gods, but his hair was still a greasy mess—although there wasn’t a streak of grey in that stringy mop, she’d give him that. ‘Can you hurry up. Please?’
Without warning, Snape lifted the hem of Hermione’s robe, surreptitiously fingering the heavy woollen fabric, and laid it gently over her knees. He swallowed hard and rasped, ‘You have the most delectably perfect arches I’ve ever seen, Miss Granger.’
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And they were, too. Perfect. Just… perfect. As were the toes, the ankles… everything. He hungrily took note of every ridge and dimple of the unblemished skin, traced the networks of veins with his eyes, assessing the overall proportions of each foot. Beautiful. Just as he’d imagined.
She was talking again, but Severus was oblivious, lost in his own little world. He licked his lips unconsciously, already hard in anticipation of actually touching… Savouring… A minute more…
A sharp tap on the shoulder broke the spell. He glanced up only to lock eyes with one very exasperated, cross-looking witch.
*
Severus supposed he owed her some sort of explanation. ‘Has it never occurred to you that, in a society where women are clad in mediaeval robes, the glimpse of a well-turned ankle has a certain… appeal?’
Hermione snorted. ‘How terribly… Victorian. Besides,’ she added, ‘you live amongst Muggles. Just Apparate to Manchester on a Friday night. You’ll see enough flesh there to make your eyes bleed.’
‘Not the same,’ Severus replied, scowling. ‘Now, please. Allow me this. Think of it as an act of atonement, if you must.’
‘Get on with it, then. But I’m warning you: I’m very ticklish.’
*
Hermione flopped back on the bed and stared at the ceiling. On her quest for the location of the earliest known copy of the Abramelin Grimoire, she’d met with all sorts of opposition, been led down several blind alleys and had some rather unsavoury wizards take advantage of her desperation. Enduring Snape washing her feet with a flannel was pretty tame in comparison, peculiar though it was. This was hopefully the final hurdle. Pervy old wizards and the wizarding world would soon be a distant memory. Once she’d gained access to the portal, she’d be free from all of it.
*
The heady scent of something decadent laced with a dash of sin filled the air. Severus smirked as Hermione inhaled deeply, visibly relaxing into the coverlet.
She sighed. ‘Is this where you try to ensnare my senses?’
Chuckling, Severus began drying her feet, paying particular attention to the skin between each individual toe. ‘Only some scented oils. You are far too tense.’ To prove his point, he scratched a nail along the underside of her foot.
Hermione fisted her hands into the bedclothes as she jerked reflexively. ‘Don’t do that.’
‘Relax,’ Severus chided. ‘You never know: you might even enjoy it.’
*
Somehow, Hermione doubted it, but she tried her best not to tense up as dextrous fingers began wiggling toes, articulating each joint, massaging arches: first the left then the right. Whether he’d hit some special pressure point or pinched a nerve, she didn’t know, but the sensitivity was ebbing away…
How curious… Her mind battled with the conundrum and decided it wasn’t worth the effort. Simultaneously, her fingers relaxed their death grip on the quilt. Actually, it was sort of… nice.
The muted sighs from her tormentor and the slight tickling sensation between her toes seemed very far away indeed.
*
Good. It was working. As Hermione’s breathing evened, Severus made the first pass with the ribbon, tucking it carefully around the big toe. Once secured, he let the charm take over.
The ribbon wove its way through the toes, criss-crossing the instep and wrapping around the ankle like a ballet slipper. At that point, Severus halted the charm, looking up anxiously as a long sigh escaped the witch on his bed. But to his relief, Hermione quickly settled back into her comfortable stupor without opening her eyes.
‘Now, Miss Granger’, he urged softly. ‘Hermione… Turn over for me. Please.’
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39 Reviews | 6.1/10 Average
Well, I suppose this was far longer than a drabble reader could normally hope for, but I can't help wanting more. Brilliant ficlet!
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination
Personally, I'm not a big fan of feet, which is why I adore how convincingly you write his enjoyment. The weirdo.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge
Scented oils, eh? I'm loving the fact that he has some charmed ribbons handy for just such an occasion.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev
There's something to off-putting and compelling about this story! Hermione really needs to work on her bargaining skills, though.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
Yay for archiving!
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:)
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
:)
The last line, was just perfect. Thank you.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.
The foot fetish thing, is not realy my thing, but the way you write it ,it is very sensual. It is sad to see Hermione so lonely, hopefully Severus can help.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me
This is quite a picture you are painting, I have no idea why my heart rate is up, but it is.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Lol - thank you
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Lol - thank you
Ok, you have my attention.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
good
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
good
Holy cow, you set the imagination in such a naughty direction and just send it on it's way with a hearty shove. Hee!
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thank you.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thank you.
Interesting to say the least. I gather she will change her mind indeed. I know I would. hee hee
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay
I'm not one for foot fetishes, yet I like to read fetish stories. It simply is interesting to delve into the unknown, to experience other facets of passion. Sadly, fetish stories are rather rare (If you discount the "spank me you naughty Potions Professor" stories.) or treat fetishes somewhat deprecatingly as something only twisted Death Eaters would do. So thank you for an open minded approach.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.
I don't even care about foot fetishes but you made this rather sexy. I love your version of Severus and Hermione tho :D.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.
Ohhh I love your "voice" Your stories are kind of like warm sweaters you just fall into and enjoy the characters. :D can't wait to see the end of this one.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
Mel, I love your writing! Everytime, everything I read is a sonnet! It's beautiful! I cannot wait to read more! Please hurry!
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before. Somehow I thought it was a one shot.I am fascinated and looking forward to more. I am wondering how they can help each other.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.
Oh, Miz Melusin, I need the rest of this series like I need a little Christmas... right this very minute!
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
still not happy with the ending :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)
I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
still not happy with the ending :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)
I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.
Ohhhh dear, a challenge. sqee ;D
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Indeed :)
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
Indeed :)
Still intriguing; still trying to figure out just what Severus's motives are.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks
"Turn Over"... Oh dear lord. Why did I find the ribbons so erotic?
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
heh-hehwe shall see...
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
heh-hehwe shall see...
Eeep! I am a big fan of your writing. Really glad you didn't give Snape a makeover or make him an overnight millionaire, as it is very tempting to do. Great tension. You make every word count. Can't wait to read more.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks. Glad you liked it
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks. Glad you liked it
I am so longing for the next chapter of this fic...
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending
Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)
That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending
Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)
That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.
Love it.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thank you
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thank you
Intriguing. I must know what Hermione needs this text for, as well as just what Snape wants as his payment. Write on, please.
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending
Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)
thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending