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The Puppet Master Chapter 4: Four
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melusin

Hermione's on the hunt for arcane information, and there's only one source left to contact. Drabble series written for the 'Foot Fetish'Challenge on GS100.

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It was probably the nicest thing anyone had said to her in a very long time, but clinging to a few words of kindness like some sort of lifeline—especially from Snape, of all people—seemed almost pitiful. Too late, she noticed those dark eyes searching hers again, following her thoughts to that very conclusion. He drew away from her.

‘I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to offend you.’

‘Hmm…? No matter.’ His attention had shifted once more to her feet. ‘That emptiness can be relieved—at least… temporarily. I wish to show you how. That is my price. Miss Granger.‘

*

‘I don’t under—Oh!’ She’d forgotten about those. Energised by some wordless spell, the ribbons on her bound foot were winding their way up her leg, weaving an elaborate diamond pattern over and under her calf and shin as they went, creating little triangles and forming knots at strategic points. When they reached her knee, they paused as if awaiting further instructions.

‘Observe,’ said Severus.

One of the knots began to pulsate against her skin.

‘Oh, that’s-that feels really…ooh… strange… ’ Hermione gasped. ‘What’s it doing?’

’Not much. Yet,’ Severus replied. ‘But note what happens when I do this…’

*

He watched her face intently, counting the tell-tale signs of arousal. Ah, yes, there: the widening eyes and dilating pupils, the silent ‘O’ of the lips, teeth clamping down, eyelids fluttering… ‘As you have probably realised by now,’ said Severus, as Hermione let out a little sigh, ‘my ribbons are designed to have a certain… effect on the body’s nervous system. The little shockwaves of pleasure you are no doubt experiencing can be increased or decreased at my command. Thus.’

Hermione squeaked.

‘Now, imagine how that would feel with the ribbons encasing your entire body. All your body, Miss Granger.’

*

‘A-all?'

‘Yes, all. From the tips of your…’ Severus licked his lips ‘…toes to the roots of your hair—and all… points in between.’ He tweaked the ribbons again and was rewarded with rather a delightful moan.

‘You still—oh—still haven’t told me what it is you want, exactly,’ Hermione managed to gasp.

‘Ah, such fortitude. Such…single-mindedness.’ Severus chuckled. ‘You are to be commended, Miss Granger, for keeping your focus.’ He reached forward to make a minor adjustment to the ribbon, unable to resist grazing his fingertips against her skin as he did so. ‘Not to mention… rewarded.’

*

‘And so, Miss Granger,’ Severus continued as the young woman on his bed sighed deeply, ‘if you will allow me free reign with my ribbons as I see fit, and if, after my best… efforts to convince you that your existence is not pointless, you are still hell-bent on pursuing your route to oblivion, I will show you the Abramelin. I will even help you increase your chances of survival by assisting in the preparations for your pilgrimage—on one further condition.’

‘And what might that be?’

’I would very much like…’ He swallowed thickly. ‘…to fuck your beautiful feet.’

*

Impulsive…reckless…stupid… Severus chided himself, thinking for a moment that he’d overplayed his hand. But then, seeing as he was her last hope, what choice did she have?

Letting his hair obscure his smirk, he began fiddling with the second ribbon in readiness, drawing it repeatedly through his fingers while patiently awaiting her decision. Soon, soon, she would come to the same conclusion as him, accede to his demands and submit to the tender mercies of his ribbons.

He prayed she was adequately flexible—bent backwards, wrists bound to ankles was always the best position…

Please. Just say yes.

*

Severus felt a small hand stay his much larger one.

‘Can they really make me… feel?’

He met Hermione’s gaze evenly. ‘Rest assured, my dear. They will wind their way into your most… intimate places: inflame your fantasies, rip away any and all inhibitions and leave you quivering with desire.’

Hermione averted her eyes and nodded. ‘Well… I knew sex had be involved somewhere.’ With a long sigh, she began unfastening her robe.

‘Only if you wish it,’ Severus murmured, introducing the second ribbon to her naked foot. Only if you beg for it. And you will. Oh, you will.

~ finite ~

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Puppet Master

39 Reviews  |  6.1/10 Average

0/10

anoesis

Well, I suppose this was far longer than a drabble reader could normally hope for, but I can't help wanting more. Brilliant ficlet!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - i'll leave the rest to the readers imagination

0/10

anoesis

Personally, I'm not a big fan of feet, which is why I adore how convincingly you write his enjoyment. The weirdo.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

me neither, which was why it was a bit of a challenge

0/10

anoesis

Scented oils, eh? I'm loving the fact that he has some charmed ribbons handy for just such an occasion.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

never one to look a gifthorse in the mouth, our sev

0/10

anoesis

There's something to off-putting and compelling about this story! Hermione really needs to work on her bargaining skills, though.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

10/10

droxy

Yay for archiving!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

:)

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

:)

10/10

mick42

The last line, was just perfect. Thank you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing.

10/10

mick42

The foot fetish thing, is not realy my thing, but the way you write it ,it is very sensual. It is sad to see Hermione so lonely, hopefully Severus can help. 

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

not mine, either which is why the challenge appealed to me

10/10

mick42

This is quite a picture you are painting, I have no idea why my heart rate is up, but it is.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Lol - thank you

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Lol - thank you

10/10

mick42

Ok, you have my attention.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

good

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

good

10/10

Owlbait

Holy cow, you set the imagination in such a naughty direction and just send it on it's way with a hearty shove. Hee!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you.

10/10

cottontail

Interesting to say the least.  I gather she will change her mind indeed.  I know I would.  hee hee

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

well, i would hope she'd have a good reason to stay

0/10

nighthawk

I'm not one for foot fetishes, yet I like to read fetish stories. It simply is interesting to delve into the unknown, to experience other facets of passion. Sadly, fetish stories are rather rare (If you discount the "spank me you naughty Potions Professor" stories.) or treat fetishes somewhat deprecatingly as something only twisted Death Eaters would do. So thank you for an open minded approach.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Yeah, i have to say i really don't get the appeal of feet so this was a challenge to write in more ways than one.

0/10

Calicoskys

I don't even care about foot fetishes but you made this rather sexy. I love your version of Severus and Hermione tho :D.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - not my bag, either, so a bit of a challenge to write. Still struggling over the ending, but i hope to get the last past posted before the new year.

0/10

Calicoskys

Ohhh I love your "voice" Your stories are kind of like warm sweaters you just fall into and enjoy the characters. :D can't wait to see the end of this one. 

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

0/10

Severus49

Mel, I love your writing! Everytime, everything I read is a sonnet! It's beautiful! I cannot wait to read more! Please hurry!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - the ending is proving to be more of a struggle than usual

10/10

itchyfoot

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before.  Somehow I thought it was a one shot.I am fascinated and looking forward to more.  I am wondering how they can help each other. 

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

It is, sorry. By mistake, i managed to load a chapter of a different story to it, then deleted it. But the PPP remained in the list of new stuff. Sorry to disappoint you.

10/10

TeddyRadiator

Oh, Miz Melusin, I need the rest of this series like I need a little Christmas... right this very minute!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

still not happy with the ending :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

still not happy with the ending :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

I totally understand. And like for Christmas, I'm more than willing to wait - you're worth it.

10/10

cottontail

Ohhhh dear, a challenge.   sqee  ;D

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Indeed :)

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

Indeed :)

9/10

Gyvir26

Still intriguing; still trying to figure out just what Severus's motives are.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks

10/10

cottontail

"Turn Over"... Oh dear lord.   Why did I find the ribbons so erotic?

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

heh-hehwe shall see...

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

heh-hehwe shall see...

9/10

Belladonna2010

Eeep! I am a big fan of your writing. Really glad you didn't give Snape a makeover or make him an overnight millionaire, as it is very tempting to do. Great tension. You make every word count. Can't wait to read more.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Glad you liked it

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks. Glad you liked it

10/10

TeddyRadiator

I am so longing for the next chapter of this fic...

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks Teddy. It's more or less finished, but i'm still fiddling with the ending

Response from TeddyRadiator (Reviewer)

That's great news! Something to look forward to, then.

10/10

LivingTheDream

Love it.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thank you

0/10

Gyvir26

Intriguing.  I must know what Hermione needs this text for, as well as just what Snape wants as his payment.  Write on, please.

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - it's virtually finished apart from the ending

10/10

siage

Interesting start, looking forward to more. Thanks for writing!

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - more soon

Response from melusin (Author of The Puppet Master)

thanks - more soon

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