“Besides, you owe me, remember? A thousand times, you said.”I like the way they have shared their truths about how they had felt drawn to each other for so long.  The journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step.  Let their journey begin.Beth

Hot damn!!!  The Serpent is awake, and the Lioness will follow.  Woo hoo!  I'm off to the next chapter, Teddy.Beth

What a wonderful way to start a Teddy story!  I was drawn right in to the situation with Hermione and Norton and then Snape's reaction to the return of the vial of Murtlap essence.  I nearly teared up when that very same vial fell out of his robes when Hermione was caring for him after the battle.  Great oaks from little acorns grow.I'm so glad you're posting your stories here, too.  Reading here at TPP is much easier on my eyes.  Now I'm off to find out what happens next with my favorite couple.Beth

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is what is known as intellectual porn, and a HAPPY ENDING (JKR I'm glowering in your general direction!)

" we’re so out of the realm of my experiences right now I might as well be classified as another species." You really have some *fantastic* lines, you know that???

". Let all mortal flesh keep silence, and stand in fear and trembling." This may be one of the best sentences ever written in the history of literature.

Oh. Wow. Kind of sad and beautiful and in keeping with the poetic inspirations.A question: was the first child a muggle, hence dying of old age before his dad?

Whoa! What a proposal!

Made me sit and think for a long time.

Should I cry or sigh?...++=

Too bad it's a work night. By the time everyone else here goes to bed it will be too late to find solace with my happy rabbit friend.  The lazy asssed adult kid who moved back home never sleeps except in the day.  

It's been a while since I've visited mister cotton tail and papa has had broken bits since Lord of the Rings was published. A case of perpetual depression that I mistook for deep and pensive. Alas...I was not Hermione enough to revive said bits. Gods know I tried for the first 10 years. After 33 years I'm still sad about it, too. He does me favors like making my lunch and filling the car with gas hoping we won't ever have to talk about it.

He asked me what I was reading and I told him Snape smut. He he said there was better stuff to read. I told him, "But it's so smutty and romantic!" He tried to tell me that Jules Vern was romantic and I told him salaciously, "When Snape is a poor little abused boy and Hermione needs to make it better, it's romantic." He said, Gerrrf! and asked why it always has to be Hermione?  "Because she's the brightest witch of her age, of course!" He just answered he was going to take a bath and go to bed, then left the room.   Papa says I'm base. I just laugh evilly.

I'm sorry I didn't get to write reviews for the other chapters yet. I couldn't stop reading and I wanted to finish before my bedtime. I loved it very, very much. I mean no disrespect and hope I don't offend when I say that "D" is a very sweet but naughty muse. The best kind, if you ask me.  Goodnight. 

Very tender and moving, I loved it. 

No matter how many times I read this, I end up with tears running down my face. Such a lovely ending, to a wonderful story.

Wait, he doesn't have a class waiting for him on the other side of the door, does he, LOL?  Cause I'm pretty sure they're not coming out anytime soon.They've covered so much ground in such a short span of time, not only physically, but emotionally.  No denying they are good for one another.You bring out the worst in me, Severus Snape. And I bring out the best in you.I think this is what makes this pairing work so well, here and always.  Another great chapter!

Oh, come now, he isn't going to make her choose just one is he?  Man, this is abolutely steamy.  I think that writing pure and simple smut is not an easy feat, but to infuse it with such emotion and healing and tenderness while not losing the down and dirty hotness of it all is rarely done well.  Score one for you.  Okay, make it two.  This was really good.

Well, now I've gone and drooled all over my keyboard.  You are causing me a lot of grief tonight, missy.  ;) I am so amazed and thrilled at how very little actually went on physically, and yet it was so erotic and sensual and emotionally good for both of them.  If things were this intense just from this encounter, what will it be like when they really get down to business?  You paint such a lovely picture with your words, I find myself hanging on every last one.

I find that I can't even properly review your chapters.  I can't say what  I love about them without just rehashing the entire thing.  I am not prone to speechlessness.  Damn you, indeed.  Off for more ...

Severus being called "cool" is a dead giveaway, loved the whole interview with Minerva. The proposal and acceptance were lovely.

Teddy, Teddy, Teddy ... I have read six gazillion pounds of fanfic in my time.  How did I never know about you before?  If I fail my school classes, or get fired for not coming in to work, or my children get taken away because I sat at the computer rather than feeding them for a week, well, there is no one to blame but you and your great stories.  I hope you feel sufficiently guilty :)

Now they belong to each other,body and soul.

Brilliant proposal! :)

I'm glad that's sorted out. He's hers, she's his. Um, what about the headmistress? ;)

Half-time, change sides! Oops, I mean, Herms' turn! :)

Very sensual. And they've barely started! :)

This story is hot and sweet at the same time. Lovesssss it.

So intense and hot. Love it!

Hot and sweet, just perfect.