Part Five
A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap
Chapter 5 of 7
TeddyRadiatorDoes this answer your question?
Please note that this chapter contains explicit sexual content
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I need to thank on bended knee and present a bottle of Zinfandel (the proper colour, of course) to the world's greatest beta, stgulik, who is my Hermione Granger. Thank you, Jules. I literally cannot do this without you. Well, I can, but why would I?
And special thanks to reviewer vze57t9j, who gave me such a cool review that I had to include her remark in this chapter. Thank you for inspiring me!
As always, for DahlraMuse, who woke me one morning with the full story in my head and wouldn't let me rest until I'd typed it out..
As first they move a little slow,
But still the faster on they go,
And still beside me close I keep
Until we reach the town of Sleep.
IV, Young Night-Thought, A Child's Garden of Verses RL Stevenson
He looked deeply into her eyes. Hermione was staggered at the pure fire she saw in his gaze. He was such a curious mix of power and vulnerability. And he was a flirt, and a tease to boot.
Suddenly he rose from the bed, pulling her to her feet. "I want to remove the rest of your clothing," he said, his voice glazed with the lust. "Then I want you to get on your hands and knees, like a good little girl, and let me take you from behind. But most of all, I want some recovery time. I'm not a machine, pet."
She gave him a lazy, canary-eating smile. "I'll try not to break you."
He gathered her in his arms, and pressed his forehead to hers. She was warm, and a little flushed from their exertions. He kissed her, tasting her sweat on his lips. "Your welfare is touching. I thought you only desired me for my body."
She gave him another one of her Mona Lisa smiles, then took a step back and started unbuttoning her skirt. He stopped her. "No. It's my turn." She looked at him with a mixture of passion and assent as he quickly removed the rest of her school uniform, trying not to think about the connotations of undressing a student. Instead, he distracted himself by placing soft, biting kisses on her lovely, silken throat. He found that to be a most satisfactory diversion. He unfastened her shoes and peeled her socks down smooth, shapely calves, planting kisses along the way.
Her knickers were drawn down next, and as he knelt, he placed a kiss on the soft nest of honey-coloured curls between her thighs. The scent from her was truly delicious. He'd heard of the smell of sex making one's mouth water, but it had never happened to him, until now, and he took another deep, appreciative sniff. She made a sweet, mewling plea, and he chuckled and gave her little mound another kiss before pushing himself to his feet.
Sometime between undressing him and sucking his brains out the slit of his cock, she had removed her shirt and bra, and when he cupped her lovely breasts, so full and creamy and rich in his hands, he had a sudden vision of her nipples dripping milk over his pale fingers, and a little black-haired baby suckling one nourishing teat, and his own mouth laving the other.
Silently, he turned her around and led her toward his bed. She crawled upon it, and he stood behind her, simply drinking in the sight of this stunning beauty, who had changed his life in thirty short minutes. It made him dizzy, as if he was in some Muggle movie played on fast-forward.
Hermione was poised, ready for him. He hesitated, and she moaned, "Please, Severus, love, please do it now! I need you... don't tease me anymore -" She arched her back with a soft, purring stretch that showed off her lovely bottom to perfection. He shook his head, wanting to accept this so badly, wanting the gods to smile on him this one time. He could gladly accept the shit he'd been force-fed his first forty years, if only this wasn't some sort of sick, twisted joke.
"Why me, Hermione Granger?" he asked, looking down at the delicious little witch waiting for him on his bed. "You have glorious breasts and an arse most men would kill for. Your minge smells like candy and I'm going to go out on a limb and wager it tastes the same. You could have any wizard your choose." He stroked her lovely arse, hating himself for asking a question that practically set him up to fall. Exasperatedly, he asked, "You certainly have my attention. Now you want my affection as well. Why? Why do you want me so much?"
Hermione turned and looked at him over her shoulder like a girl in a porn mag. The apology was already on his lips when she rolled over, hopped off the bed and stood by him. Looking up into his eyes, she said, "Do you want the list?"
Severus dropped his eyes. "It would be... helpful," he replied, refusing to meet her eyes.
Hermione took one of his hands in hers, and together they studied them. His was long, slim, with slender fingers and myriad scars from countless nicks and burns and battles with uncooperative ingredients. Hers was warm, feminine, elegant; it was the colour of cream and softer than anything he'd ever touched. "I love your hands," she murmured, raising his to her lips, pressing a kiss against the tip of each finger. "You can tell so much by a man's hands." She lowered his hand until it nestled in the crook of her thighs. He slipped his long fingers between her silken labia. She was slick and wet and needy, and he moved his hand until he found her clit, hard and stiff and hot, and he rubbed against it teasingly. She leaned against him and closed her eyes.
"Is that it? Just my hands?" he asked, and she smiled at the insouciant tone of his voice. "Any other body parts you've considered?" She shifted to allow him better access, and he pushed her back down on the bed, so that her legs dangled over the side. "Do spread your legs, Hermione. How am I to fit my shoulders between your lovely thighs if you have them clamped together so tightly?" He sank to the floor and crouched between her soft thighs, placing kisses against the firm, smooth flesh as he traveled toward his teasing fingers. He could hear her soft, hopeful whimper, and between kisses he said, "Keep your focus, pet. What else?" He licked the seam of her cunt and raised his head with a jolt. "Circe's girdle, you do taste as sweet as candy. I definitely regret not locking you away now."
Hermione gasped and giggled, shaking as his wicked tongue curled and danced around her folds. She made a little growling noise. "I'm sure I could have forced myself to make the sacrifice if this is what you had in mind."
He laughed his nasty, orgasm-inducing laugh. "Indeed. Think of how good you would have been for my anxiety. Bend your knees, darling. I want to get a little deeper. Where was I? Oh, yes, I would definitely have benefited from this in the last few days before Tom Riddle decided to rearrange my larynx."
She giggled and gave a little squeal. "Are we bad to be talking so glibly about those days like this, Severus?"
"I think this is the only sane reaction to those days, don't you?"
Hermione stilled, so much that Severus paused, and lifted his gaze above the apex of her thighs. She looked like a right little reprobate, and Severus felt his heart flip dangerously in his chest.
She took a handful of his greasy hair in her fist, and cooed huskily, "You want to know why I want you so much, Severus Snape? You excite me. You're the smartest wizard I know, and you don't make me dumb down. You make me think, you make me crazy, you make me want to make you smile.
"You make me want to suck your cock at every available opportunity just to hear the sound you make when you come." She used his hair to pull him back up to face her. He let her. "You smell like Amortensia, you have the nastiest laugh in Wizarding Britain, and I could look into your eyes for the rest of my life and never get bored of what I saw."
She placed a soft kiss on his large nose. "And most of all, you make me want to crawl into your pocket and stay there forever."
Severus paused, looking up at her. She met his gaze, her eyes glassy and her cheeks pink. Suddenly, all of Severus' questions didn't matter one damn bit. She had already given the only real answer he'd ever wanted. "Are you in love with me, Hermione Granger?"
"If I say yes, will you please shut up and finish eating me out? I'm on fire."
He blinked. "I will take it under serious consideration." He grinned. He couldn't help it. Here he was, wet from forehead to chin with the juices of a witch half his age, feeling like he'd been born yesterday and could live forever. Why not lie here between her lovely thighs for the rest of his life, gurning like an idiot and making her scream like a banshee? "Well? I'm waiting, Hermione."
She smiled and rolled her eyes. "Yes, you great pillock. I love you." Her eyes grew soft. "You bring out the worst in me, Severus Snape. And I bring out the best in you. And you don't believe it, but I seriously believe you're actually worth the trouble. Do you love me?"
Severus felt something large and heavy crack in his heart and fall away, allowing him to breathe again. It might have been a Horcrux, forged in the fires of Lily's rejection, burned within and caught in the blister bubble of Dumbledore's death. It might have been etched there by the jagged edge of one of his father's broken gin bottles, or stained by the ink of his Dark Mark. Whatever it was, it had been weakening steadily under the pressure of his undeniable desire for her. Now it was gone, and he couldn't remember why he had held onto it so tightly in the first damn place.
The realisation that she meant what she said made him smile, and sent his libido into overdrive. Without warning, he pushed himself back down to the apex of her thighs and plundered her red, wet cunt, tearing a sound from her throat that made him lightheaded. He flicked his tongue over her sweet smelling folds, and she shuddered and began to undulate against him.
He did everything he'd ever done or ever wanted to do to a woman, and when he plunged his tongue into her tight passage and rubbed his nose against the little pearly button, she seemed to gather inwardly, as if preparing to take flight. Her clit was as stiff as one of her little nipples and he suckled it the same way. His long fingers pumped in and out of her tight, tight cunt while he performed the charm to ease the way into her tiny fundament. She yielded to him like fruit ripe for the taking, and he moaned into her, sending vibrations through his body as well as hers.
"Severus, oh, gods, yes," she babbled, clearly almost gone.
"I told you what I wanted, witch," he growled, outside himself with desire. "Do it for me!"
She gasped, and he felt her body tense so much she actually lifted from the bed, and her lovely pulsing, clenching pussy clamped down on his fingers, and he sucked her clit into his mouth again and flicked it hard with his rasping tongue. Her thighs clamped against his shoulders. "Oh, yes, Severus, don't stop, don't, please!" She grabbed his hair and surged upward, into his waiting mouth, screaming his name with each breath, with each pulse of that beautiful little nub of flesh thumping like a heartbeat against his tongue. It was amazing; he'd never actually felt a woman orgasm.
"That's my girl," he said, his voice gentle, as he tried to hold the pleasure within her. "What a good girl, to come so hard for me." He placed a gentle kiss on her clit, and watched as her tight passage quivered open and closed, like a tiny, gasping mouth. All the breath left his body. "Oh, you sweet little succubus," he marveled.
Even as her legs splayed apart with blissful relaxation, he climbed over her like the richest, most sumptuous of coverings, all velvet and silk and darkness, and as he slid up her body, he entered her as naturally as if she'd been designed for him. "Does this answer your question?" he whispered in her ear. "Does this answer your question?" He kissed the words into her mouth, and withdrew from almost entirely. With a triumphant roar, he drove into her as hard as he could, and proceeded to fuck the words directly into her body. Does. This. Answer. Your. Question. Witch?
They moved together as one, their bodies tangled, until they were fighting to reach the bottom of the other, each trying to beat the ecstasy into one another, moving like lightning, fast and electric, their cries like harmony, like incantations. Hermione's body, primed by what felt like a lifetime, enveloped his in a pulsing, clutching vise that made her scream his name again, scream it like she truly wanted to shatter the glass in the windows, shatter all the fear and pain and desperation he'd felt since the night he found her comforting another black-haired boy and jealously wanted it to be him...
He cried out in counterpoint as his orgasm pulled him inside out, flooding his rigid body and mind with so much pleasure he knew he'd never survive it. He cried out her name, and sprayed his seed into her, praying for it to find purchase, wanting to make her pregnant, wanting to etch a new Dark Mark on her skin, piss on her if he had to; anything to mark his territory, to keep her in his bed until he died...
He was heavy as he collapsed against her body, and they both struggled to breathe. "Does that answer your question, Hermione Granger?"
"Yes," she said, moaning feverishly, kissing him, crawling all over him. "Yes!"
He kissed her passionately. "Mine," he said, his voice hoarse from shouting. "You have given yourself to me, Hermione. You're mine now. I'm a selfish, possessive man, and now you belong to me. Mine. Say it!"
"I'm yours," she breathed, holding him close, delirious. "I'm all yours-"
"No!" he said, pulling away from her, leaving her bewildered and exhausted. "I already know that! Mine. Say it," he pleaded. His eyes were enormous and nakedly vulnerable. "Claim me."
Hermione pulled him down to her breast, and his mouth was soft as comforting to her as her flesh was to him. "You're mine," she breathed into his black, tangled hair. "You gave yourself to me. You belong to me now, Severus. You're mine."
He nodded, and rolled off her, pulling her into his arms. "Thank the gods."
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap
87 Reviews | 6.44/10 Average
Very well written. Sensuous, erotic and beautiful. Wish I had a male in my life to make love to me like this. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you for your kind words!
and once again, you've made me cry at the ending, and I don't even have the excuse of being pregnant and hormone-riddled now. :( such a sad yet happy ending.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Murtlap is one of my personal favourites - I'm always so thrilled when someone likes it.
I've read this before on another site, and loved it. time to read it again, since it popped up in my search. I was sorry to hear about Norton, too. :(
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you - I have always felt sad about Norton myself.
Well, that was a fun run! I have read many of your stories since my last review and I can only say, "Brava!" Each was different, interesting, hot, and loving in their own ways. You are a very good writer and I hope to read more of your work soon! Thank you for every syllable! HG4eva
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying my fics. And I really appreciate your kind comments.
tears roll down my cheeks as I write. My heart is full. You have genuinely touched me with your words, characterization, and story. I am staggered and so very thankful for your time and effort in writing this heartfelt work. thank you...♥
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you for your kind words. I am so glad this story brought your pleasure and joy. It is a privilege and a calling for me to write, and a privilege to know others have enjoyed what I have written.Thank you for your lovely comment. It means so very much to me.
So sad and yet such a happy ending at the same time. Amazing for Severus to be gifted with such a long life and to finally know happiness.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
That's why I keep writing fanfic. I want him to finally have a happy ending!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
That's why I keep writing fanfic. I want him to finally have a happy ending!
That was definitely unexpected. I like how the vial has become a running joke in their relationship.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!
I'm sure this will rank as his bet day ever.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
LOL I'm sure you're right!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
LOL I'm sure you're right!
I think there is definite healing and nice to see him thinking about her, too. I just wonder when the OMG did we really just do that? Will kick in
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well I'm sure it will soon. Probably right before the 'OMG let's do it again' kicks in.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well I'm sure it will soon. Probably right before the 'OMG let's do it again' kicks in.
Poor Severus and his initial performance. I'm sure he'll do better later
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well, poor guy... it has been a loooong time..
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well, poor guy... it has been a loooong time..
Well that's one way to snap him out of his funk. Wonder what happens next and if this can be kept secret
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Men are so easy to get out of a funk! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Men are so easy to get out of a funk! ;)
After the strong emotions of the earlier chapters, this epilogue is painfully sad to read but it doesn't balance the whole fic so well. I'm a bit sniffy now, even having read this so often before
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
I really wanted to bookend the two 'boys'. Norton, whom he so related to, and himself, the lost boy that just wanted someone to love and take care of him. Young Severus brings out every protective instinct, and knowing Hermione, the comparison of Norton and Severus was not lost on him. He found his first and his last comfort in Hermione.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
I really wanted to bookend the two 'boys'. Norton, whom he so related to, and himself, the lost boy that just wanted someone to love and take care of him. Young Severus brings out every protective instinct, and knowing Hermione, the comparison of Norton and Severus was not lost on him. He found his first and his last comfort in Hermione.
With an elaborate swish and wave of his wand, bright lights sparked over the entire Great Hall, causing shouts of surprise and squeals of delightShow off! Still, you're not going to say no when someone asks like that"
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Hey, what good is having the ability to do magic if you're not prepared to show off a little ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Hey, what good is having the ability to do magic if you're not prepared to show off a little ;)
"Mine. Say it,” he pleaded. His eyes were enormous and nakedly vulnerable. “Claim me.” Love!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Would that we all could! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Would that we all could! ;)
Yeah, the smut is impressive, but it's the emotion in this piece that gets me every time. His reaction to the simplest of her touches is just... gah. Gah, I tell you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much. I really do have a soft spot for this fic. It's sort of a PWP that grew legs and ran away.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much. I really do have a soft spot for this fic. It's sort of a PWP that grew legs and ran away.
This chapter would have been a few short lines in any other fic - I love that you can draw something like this out until it becomes almost a story in its own right. So incredibly erotic and she's only undone a few buttons. Genius.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Uh oh, is this a really sweet way of hinting that Im long-winded? LOL Thank you - I really had an indecent amount of fun with this fic.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Uh oh, is this a really sweet way of hinting that Im long-winded? LOL Thank you - I really had an indecent amount of fun with this fic.
Possible the hottest literary kiss ever. *nods*
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!!! A good kiss is as much fun to write as good sex, I think!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!!! A good kiss is as much fun to write as good sex, I think!
Snape's reaction to seeing her with Norton is so intense that it makes the hairs on the back of my neck prickle.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you. This scene came complete into my head - I barely could keep up with the Muse typing it! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you. This scene came complete into my head - I barely could keep up with the Muse typing it! ;)
What an interesting start. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
I think this is probably one of the best fan flics I have ever read, it was truly beautiful, you are a fantastic writer!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your kind words, especially for this particular fic - it is special to me for a lot of reasons, and it always thrills me when someone enjoys it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your kind words, especially for this particular fic - it is special to me for a lot of reasons, and it always thrills me when someone enjoys it.
thank u ...another story i can finish in the day when kids are at school and my demanding 18 month old grand daughter bosses me and her papa around! lol...hugs and chocolates dear one!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This epilogue brought tears to my eyes. I love your stories, and this one is no exception. The journey from reluctant survivor to beloved husband and father never ceases to warm my heart and make me glad.Thank you for this love story. It has the Teddy-touch like only you can do.Hugs you, BethPS-Go Teddy Peeps!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much, Beffey - you and the 'Teddy Peeps' are my lifeline - and I am so grateful to be surrounded by such incredible, nurturing, encouraging friends like yourself. Thank you for helping me to believe that I can write.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much, Beffey - you and the 'Teddy Peeps' are my lifeline - and I am so grateful to be surrounded by such incredible, nurturing, encouraging friends like yourself. Thank you for helping me to believe that I can write.
Minerva's reaction to catching them in the middle of "things," cracked me up, as did her advice to learn to use Disillusionment and Notice-me-not charms, and her reference to Leonard Cohen (I love that man's music!).Ten points to your House for Severus' brilliant proposal to Hermione. *applauds like crazy* You write great SSHG!!!Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words.
“You smell like Amortensia, you have the nastiest laugh in Wizarding Britain, and I could look into your eyes for the rest of my life and never get bored of what I saw... And most of all, you make me want to crawl into your pocket and stay there forever.” This. This is what it's all about. Finding that perfect place where both of you are not only where you want to be, but where you have to be. Home. Together.Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
When they both found what they needed, it just seem to all fall into place - Thank you for your lovely comment!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
When they both found what they needed, it just seem to all fall into place - Thank you for your lovely comment!
That was a helluva first step in their journey. I do believe Hermione is well on her way to rescuing Severus (and herself) from the lives that were left to them as a result of the war. *fans self* Well done, Teddy!Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
*Waves a fan in Beffey's direction* Thank you, sweetie, I really appreciate your comments along the way - it's so good to be 'home folks' here on TPP.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
*Waves a fan in Beffey's direction* Thank you, sweetie, I really appreciate your comments along the way - it's so good to be 'home folks' here on TPP.