Part Four
A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap
Chapter 4 of 7
TeddyRadiatorAnd does it not seem hard to you...
This chapter contains explicit sexual content.
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I need to thank on bended knee and present a bottle of Zinfandel (the proper colour, of course) to the world's greatest beta, stgulik, who is my Hermione Granger. Thank you, Jules. I literally cannot do this without you. Well, I can, but why would I?
As always, for DahlraMuse, who woke me one morning with the full story in my head and wouldn't let me rest until I'd typed it out..
Oh, and, by the way, this chapter contains explicit sexual content.
And does it not seem hard to you,
When all the sky is clear and blue,
And I should like so much to play,
To have to go to bed by day?
Bed in Summer, A Child's Garden of Verses RL Stevenson
He led her into his bed chambers. At first, had been a bitter demotion from the plush surroundings of the Headmaster's massive barge of a bed to this smaller one, but as the days wore on, and his indifference and war-trauma burn-out set in his heart like an anvil, he stopped caring so much about how far he had fallen.
Now, he felt a momentary squeamishness. What was he doing? He was the worst sort of shabby little pervert, with nefarious plans toward fucking his student. Toward his brilliant, sexy, troublesome, perfect student. Oh, Merlin. All the feelings of unrequited love, guilt, anger and envy over Lily unravelled from his head like a puff of smoke.
Lily might have jilted the fuck out of him, but he had a feeling this randy little witch was going to fuck the jilt out of him. He examined that feeling for a moment. Yes, he was, in fact, perfectly happy with that. She had already shifted a lot of things back into perspective.
No sooner had she entered the room than he locked and warded the door within an inch of his life. She drew near to him, and with a soft, knowing smile, she began to undress him. She undid each button with slow, secretive pleasure, as if she'd given the act a lot of thought on more than one occasion.
He was breathing hard as she removed his white linen shirt, and she smiled at his pale, slim torso. It was scarred, but that seemed no more important to her than their age or their status. She pressed against him lovingly. "You're beautiful. Do you know, Severus?"
"No, I'm not." His voice sounded sullen to his own ears. "There is no need to patronise me. I know what I look like."
Hermione just shook her head and gave him a look of infinite patience. "No, this is no time to feel insecure. I like what I see. I want to see more." She planted soft kisses over his chest, her breath whispering across his skin, and he thought for a moment he might hyperventilate.
He fumbled at his belt buckle, but Hermione playfully pushed his hands away, scolding, "Oh, no; this is my treat. I've wanted this. Don't deny me." She smiled up at him. "I'm enjoying this. I want you to enjoy it as well."
He closed his eyes. "To be perfectly honest, I can't tell you what my present emotion is. I'm fairly sure it's positive, but we're so out of the realm of my experiences right now I might as well be classified as another species."
He was babbling, and he felt like an idiot. Where was the brilliant, urbane wizard who'd engaged in such frothy conversation with the young witch sitting atop his ball-bursting erection not ten minutes ago? He was gone. Why? He gazed down at Hermione. Why shouldn't he enjoy himself with this pert little witch? She was crazy about him; he'd obsessed over her. And what, really, was worth ruining that? His insecurity? Fuck that.
She continued to undress him as if he were some sort of present to open. She knelt, and as she slid his trousers and his underclothes from his slim hips, she looked up at him with wonder, like beholding a god ready for worship. She gently removed his boots; when he lifted his foot, he placed a hand on her shoulder and leaned on it to keep his balance. She felt surprisingly solid. He felt appallingly dizzy; women did not touch him like this, nor did they look up at him with such longing and desire.
He was trembling as she gently stroked his calves and thighs. Warm, soft hands moved over his arse and gave it a playful squeeze, and when she grinned up at him and announced, "I bet I could bounce a Sickle off your bottom, Severus," his old feller opened a sleepy eye and decided to have a stretch and look around.
To his astonishment, she leaned down and kissed his feet. He gasped and closed his eyes. Watching her obvious adoration of his body would send him tumbling over the edge too soon, even after coming in his trousers like a fourth-year Hufflepuff at a Yule Ball. He had never recovered from an orgasm this quickly, except, perhaps, when he was her age. He cringed a little at the thought.
Now she rose back on her knees and took his foolishly bobbing cock in her hand. He hissed; it didn't matter that he'd just ejaculated shortly before, the feel of her soft hand closing over his rapidly inflating prick made his legs feel weak and he thought for a moment he needed to sit down. She moved to cup his balls in her hands, as if holding a prize, and looked at his cock with eyes that were dark with arousal and warm with adoration.
She smiled affectionately. "I think you're beautiful. Come here, sweet baby," she crooned, and pushed toward him until he penetrated her mouth in one long, exquisitely slow stroke. He made a gasping, strangled sound. She grasped the base of his shaft, moving his cock in and out of her mouth very slowly, gently, drawing out the pleasure. His heart was beating hard and heavy, and he could feel it pound in his shaft against the inside of her mouth as she painted him with her warm wet tongue. It felt like his entire body was melting in a pool of lava.
"Oh Merlin," he moaned, shuddering. He was torn between wanting to thrust in her hot wet mouth, and desperately trying to hold on for as yet unannounced delights. She took pity on him and kept her slow, sensuous pace, swirling her tongue over the head as she pulled away, licking the tip, bathing it with long languid strokes, savouring each lick as if sampling an exquisite morsel to be slowly enjoyed.
As she pulled back, she placed tender kisses on the head of his cock, calling him filthy things no woman had ever called him. The crippling pleasure intensified until he was moaning with each breath and holding onto her hair hard enough to hurt. He wanted to tell her it was indecent to be able to suck dick this well, but he could not clear his mind of this endorphin-soaked bliss long enough to form the words. Her head rolled sensuously against his crotch with each inward stroke, and her nose tickled his pubic hair.
Very gently she caressed his perineum, until she insinuated her hand fully between his legs. With a silent charm, she lubricated her first two fingers, and gently encircled the tight bud of his rectum. With one fluid motion, she inserted her fingers into his waiting hole and began to suck him harder, even as she finger fucked him.
He was thrusting in her mouth with abandon now, holding on tightly to her hair. He could feel a deep, melting sensation blooming in his groin, tightening his balls and saturating his body with unspeakable pleasure, and he grabbed her head and babbled, "Oh, suck it, girl, oh, gods, I'm going to come in your mouth... make me come - make me come -"
His words were lost in a tidal wave of sensation that robbed him of breath, sight and hearing, and he howled his release into the room. Hermione moaned ecstatically as he spurted into her mouth. He cried out her name, and she could feel his legs trembling. She removed her fingers from his body and cleaned them with a quick spell, holding him around the waist with her free hand.
"Oh, fuck me, that was incredible," he moaned, stumbling back until he was sitting on his bed, breathless, flushed and dazed. He collapsed back, fighting tears.
With a stunned, troubled look on her face, Hermione moved onto the bed and took him in her arms. Deftly, she leaned over him and offered him her breast, and he latched on, whimpering, sucking her nipple, wetting her skin with his tears. He stroked his deflating cock with one hand, as if soothing it. Gradually, he calmed, and the fierce hold on her breast relaxed, and he put his arms around her and pulled her against his chest and kissed her forehead hard.
As he came down from the dangerously addictive high she'd given him, she wiped the tears from his face and kissed him, easing her tongue into his mouth. He could taste his own salty, bitter flavour, and held her against his mouth for a long time. "You taste good, don't you?" she whispered huskily, and he nodded. He did taste good in her mouth.
For a while, they were silent, lying sprawled on his bed like exhausted cats, all tangled arms and legs. Finally, when enough blood flowed back into his brain to re-engage his thinking processes, Severus cleared his throat. In a surprisingly normal voice, he announced, "While I'm reveling in your desire to give me a new lease on life, not to mention recovering from the best blow job I have ever received, I feel I need to redress the balance. And although sucking those delicious little nipples has no doubt been mutually beneficial, I cannot help but think that I've been a monster of selfishness."
Hermione giggled, a sound which he found rather pleasing. "That's amazingly erudite for someone who's just received the best blow job of his life."
"Indeed. I'm rather pleased with myself."
"So it really was the best one you've ever had?"
"Don't trawl for compliments. I already told you it was. And I'll have you know I've experienced professionals." His eyes, large and black like lozenges, slid languidly over her body, and he peered into her face. "I'm almost afraid to ask where you learned to do that so well."
Her smile was both pleased and secretive. "I'll do you a deal. I won't ask about your 'professionals,' and you don't ask about my 'instructor.' Isn't it enough we have one another now?"
He raised his head from the bed and looked at her. "I will concur. Deal." He tucked one arm behind his head with a contented sigh. He caressed her back and she cuddled up to him softly, making him hum.
"You are quite a kitten. A dirty little pussy, make no mistake. I'll bet you're dripping wet right now."
Hermione pressed against him. "Very." She smiled, lightly running her fingers over the trail of hairs that rose above his groin. "I've had wet knickers since I kissed you."
"Indeed. Never fear. I did promise to redress the balance, didn't I?"
"Oh, yes. Where were we?"
"It's quite simple, pet. I have a sudden, almost irresistible urge to hear you howling my name in the throes of passion." He rolled over until they were facing one another on the bed. Stroking her cheek, he purred, "So, tell me what you want. Do you want me to lick you or fuck you?"
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap
87 Reviews | 6.44/10 Average
Very well written. Sensuous, erotic and beautiful. Wish I had a male in my life to make love to me like this. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you for your kind words!
and once again, you've made me cry at the ending, and I don't even have the excuse of being pregnant and hormone-riddled now. :( such a sad yet happy ending.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Murtlap is one of my personal favourites - I'm always so thrilled when someone likes it.
I've read this before on another site, and loved it. time to read it again, since it popped up in my search. I was sorry to hear about Norton, too. :(
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you - I have always felt sad about Norton myself.
Well, that was a fun run! I have read many of your stories since my last review and I can only say, "Brava!" Each was different, interesting, hot, and loving in their own ways. You are a very good writer and I hope to read more of your work soon! Thank you for every syllable! HG4eva
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying my fics. And I really appreciate your kind comments.
tears roll down my cheeks as I write. My heart is full. You have genuinely touched me with your words, characterization, and story. I am staggered and so very thankful for your time and effort in writing this heartfelt work. thank you...♥
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you for your kind words. I am so glad this story brought your pleasure and joy. It is a privilege and a calling for me to write, and a privilege to know others have enjoyed what I have written.Thank you for your lovely comment. It means so very much to me.
So sad and yet such a happy ending at the same time. Amazing for Severus to be gifted with such a long life and to finally know happiness.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
That's why I keep writing fanfic. I want him to finally have a happy ending!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
That's why I keep writing fanfic. I want him to finally have a happy ending!
That was definitely unexpected. I like how the vial has become a running joke in their relationship.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!
I'm sure this will rank as his bet day ever.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
LOL I'm sure you're right!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
LOL I'm sure you're right!
I think there is definite healing and nice to see him thinking about her, too. I just wonder when the OMG did we really just do that? Will kick in
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well I'm sure it will soon. Probably right before the 'OMG let's do it again' kicks in.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well I'm sure it will soon. Probably right before the 'OMG let's do it again' kicks in.
Poor Severus and his initial performance. I'm sure he'll do better later
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well, poor guy... it has been a loooong time..
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Well, poor guy... it has been a loooong time..
Well that's one way to snap him out of his funk. Wonder what happens next and if this can be kept secret
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Men are so easy to get out of a funk! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Men are so easy to get out of a funk! ;)
After the strong emotions of the earlier chapters, this epilogue is painfully sad to read but it doesn't balance the whole fic so well. I'm a bit sniffy now, even having read this so often before
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
I really wanted to bookend the two 'boys'. Norton, whom he so related to, and himself, the lost boy that just wanted someone to love and take care of him. Young Severus brings out every protective instinct, and knowing Hermione, the comparison of Norton and Severus was not lost on him. He found his first and his last comfort in Hermione.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
I really wanted to bookend the two 'boys'. Norton, whom he so related to, and himself, the lost boy that just wanted someone to love and take care of him. Young Severus brings out every protective instinct, and knowing Hermione, the comparison of Norton and Severus was not lost on him. He found his first and his last comfort in Hermione.
With an elaborate swish and wave of his wand, bright lights sparked over the entire Great Hall, causing shouts of surprise and squeals of delightShow off! Still, you're not going to say no when someone asks like that"
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Hey, what good is having the ability to do magic if you're not prepared to show off a little ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Hey, what good is having the ability to do magic if you're not prepared to show off a little ;)
"Mine. Say it,” he pleaded. His eyes were enormous and nakedly vulnerable. “Claim me.” Love!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Would that we all could! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Would that we all could! ;)
Yeah, the smut is impressive, but it's the emotion in this piece that gets me every time. His reaction to the simplest of her touches is just... gah. Gah, I tell you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much. I really do have a soft spot for this fic. It's sort of a PWP that grew legs and ran away.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much. I really do have a soft spot for this fic. It's sort of a PWP that grew legs and ran away.
This chapter would have been a few short lines in any other fic - I love that you can draw something like this out until it becomes almost a story in its own right. So incredibly erotic and she's only undone a few buttons. Genius.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Uh oh, is this a really sweet way of hinting that Im long-winded? LOL Thank you - I really had an indecent amount of fun with this fic.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Uh oh, is this a really sweet way of hinting that Im long-winded? LOL Thank you - I really had an indecent amount of fun with this fic.
Possible the hottest literary kiss ever. *nods*
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!!! A good kiss is as much fun to write as good sex, I think!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you!!! A good kiss is as much fun to write as good sex, I think!
Snape's reaction to seeing her with Norton is so intense that it makes the hairs on the back of my neck prickle.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you. This scene came complete into my head - I barely could keep up with the Muse typing it! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you. This scene came complete into my head - I barely could keep up with the Muse typing it! ;)
What an interesting start. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
I think this is probably one of the best fan flics I have ever read, it was truly beautiful, you are a fantastic writer!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your kind words, especially for this particular fic - it is special to me for a lot of reasons, and it always thrills me when someone enjoys it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your kind words, especially for this particular fic - it is special to me for a lot of reasons, and it always thrills me when someone enjoys it.
thank u ...another story i can finish in the day when kids are at school and my demanding 18 month old grand daughter bosses me and her papa around! lol...hugs and chocolates dear one!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This epilogue brought tears to my eyes. I love your stories, and this one is no exception. The journey from reluctant survivor to beloved husband and father never ceases to warm my heart and make me glad.Thank you for this love story. It has the Teddy-touch like only you can do.Hugs you, BethPS-Go Teddy Peeps!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much, Beffey - you and the 'Teddy Peeps' are my lifeline - and I am so grateful to be surrounded by such incredible, nurturing, encouraging friends like yourself. Thank you for helping me to believe that I can write.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much, Beffey - you and the 'Teddy Peeps' are my lifeline - and I am so grateful to be surrounded by such incredible, nurturing, encouraging friends like yourself. Thank you for helping me to believe that I can write.
Minerva's reaction to catching them in the middle of "things," cracked me up, as did her advice to learn to use Disillusionment and Notice-me-not charms, and her reference to Leonard Cohen (I love that man's music!).Ten points to your House for Severus' brilliant proposal to Hermione. *applauds like crazy* You write great SSHG!!!Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words.
“You smell like Amortensia, you have the nastiest laugh in Wizarding Britain, and I could look into your eyes for the rest of my life and never get bored of what I saw... And most of all, you make me want to crawl into your pocket and stay there forever.” This. This is what it's all about. Finding that perfect place where both of you are not only where you want to be, but where you have to be. Home. Together.Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
When they both found what they needed, it just seem to all fall into place - Thank you for your lovely comment!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
When they both found what they needed, it just seem to all fall into place - Thank you for your lovely comment!
That was a helluva first step in their journey. I do believe Hermione is well on her way to rescuing Severus (and herself) from the lives that were left to them as a result of the war. *fans self* Well done, Teddy!Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
*Waves a fan in Beffey's direction* Thank you, sweetie, I really appreciate your comments along the way - it's so good to be 'home folks' here on TPP.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of A Treatise On The Healing Properties of Murtlap)
*Waves a fan in Beffey's direction* Thank you, sweetie, I really appreciate your comments along the way - it's so good to be 'home folks' here on TPP.