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Security Breach
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Advocate Hermione Granger receives a visit from her friend Astoria Malfoy. Draco has been arrested on very serious charges and is in need of a good advocate to defend his case. Hermione agrees to speak to Draco as a favor to Astoria. Draco tries to convince Hermione that the case is worthy of Hermione's attention.
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I love a happily ever after!
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Well, glad that's all cleared up then. It's funny how quickly a misunderstanding can get out of control.
Poor Hermione. If she only knew which of her men they were talking about, she would be ecstatic rather than sad. Can't wait to see how all is revealed.
An interesting and absorbing story, the love story builds slowly, and lasts a lifetime. Thank you.
Untill tomorrow? I can't wait untill tomorrow, I must go to the next chapter, NOW!
Loved this story, Hope you will have something new soon.
I was sort of hoping that Lyra would just walk in and tell them to hook up already, lol. Except she doesn't seem entirely keen on the idea.
These two are being silly. I love how those around them notice the attraction, but the two involved have no clue.
I didn't expect to see Percy. What a nice surprise. Well, sort of. He didn't know what hit him after Hermione made her whirlwind tour through his office, lol.
Go get 'em Hermione!
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
No worries there.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
No worries there.
Well, that went better than expected. And is Severus' protective streak toward Miss Malfoy because she is a love interest, or more like a little sister? Off to find out ...
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Severus has had a long time to come to terms with the past. He's still Severus, but he's far more mellow than canon Severus.Lyra is dear to Severus, and he sympathizes with her struggles.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Severus has had a long time to come to terms with the past. He's still Severus, but he's far more mellow than canon Severus.Lyra is dear to Severus, and he sympathizes with her struggles.
You can understand why Hermione is annoyed with Draco's treatment of her, considering his squib sister. You can also see why Draco found Hermione's abilities to be unfair. The Malfoys aren't completely bad people, they just always put themselves first. Looking forward to the Snape meet up.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Yes, Lyra's existence is a bit of irony that Hermione couldn't possibly have anticipated or understood. Draco was a spoiled kid, but I've been kind to him and given a softer reason for some of their anger at Muggleborns.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Yes, Lyra's existence is a bit of irony that Hermione couldn't possibly have anticipated or understood. Draco was a spoiled kid, but I've been kind to him and given a softer reason for some of their anger at Muggleborns.
Miss Malfoy, huh? I'm more surprised by that than Snape (naturally). I look forward to wherever this is going.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Miss Malfoy is a great secret indeed, or at least she was until the fall of Voldemort. Since then, she still keeps a low profile, but she is no longer hidden.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Miss Malfoy is a great secret indeed, or at least she was until the fall of Voldemort. Since then, she still keeps a low profile, but she is no longer hidden.
Awwwww! And they all lived happily ever after. ^_^
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Thank you for your lovely reviews throughout this story! They have been greatly appreciated.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your lovely reviews throughout this story! They have been greatly appreciated.
I just began this last night. What a clever, believable courtroom drama!! Advocate Granger is brilliant, Percy Weasley is almost smart, and Lyra Malfoy is a great addition. It's fascinating to read an intelligent discourse on one of the implications of the Statute of Secrecy. I can't wait to read the rest.
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Thank you!
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you!
This is a very well written entertaining story. I enjoyed it so much that I went searching for it elsewhere. Keep up the writing, it is great.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you so much. I've got another piece in motion, but I'm going to wait to start posting it until it is complete.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you so much. I've got another piece in motion, but I'm going to wait to start posting it until it is complete.
Great job with the court scenes. Loved how she put Percy and Marietta in their places. Seems there's a bit of a misunderstanding with Severus, Lyra and Hermione. I really think Lucius was speaking of Oliver, who perhaps had asked for permission to court Lyra that evening, yes? ^_^
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your reviews throughout this story. Yes, they still are having trouble understanding one another. It's going to take some meddling from someone else to resolve this, I think.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your reviews throughout this story. Yes, they still are having trouble understanding one another. It's going to take some meddling from someone else to resolve this, I think.
Hermione made Percey look like the twit he is. Hermione needs to ask more questions and get the correct answers not just assume who Draco was talking about. Great chapter
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your kind review. This dance they are doing is frustrating, isn't it?She really couldn't ask any questions in front of Lucius. And even though she and Draco have buried the hatchet, he still isn't a confidante, so she wouldn't seek him out to clarify things later.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your kind review. This dance they are doing is frustrating, isn't it?She really couldn't ask any questions in front of Lucius. And even though she and Draco have buried the hatchet, he still isn't a confidante, so she wouldn't seek him out to clarify things later.
There's still much unsettled here.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
The next chapter unwinds the misunderstandings.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
The next chapter unwinds the misunderstandings.
Percy didn't need any help from Hermione, to show everyone what a first class prat he really is. Poor Hermione, she has such a logical mind, but when is comes to love, I think the logic centers of the brain short circuit. I hope the misunderstanding doesn't take too long to resolve itself, for both of them.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
The story is complete in 10 chapters, and the final chapter really just ties up loose ends. I won't make them wait too much longer to sort things out.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
The story is complete in 10 chapters, and the final chapter really just ties up loose ends. I won't make them wait too much longer to sort things out.
It's no surprise, that they are dancing around eachother, given their backgrounds. Hopefully they will be able to overcome the past, and move into a better future.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
They'll get there eventually. Though they will probably step on their respective toes more than once.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
They'll get there eventually. Though they will probably step on their respective toes more than once.
Aha! The left hand (Hermione) doesn't know how the right hand (Severus) feels. And the center hand (Lyra) looks to be meddling. ^_^
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
They are both very cautious in this area. Lyra isn't meddling, but she has reason to be intrigued about Hermione.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
They are both very cautious in this area. Lyra isn't meddling, but she has reason to be intrigued about Hermione.
Hmmmm. I wonder who Lyra's love interest is; I don't THINK it's Severus...
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
I will say that Hermione and Lyra have similar taste in men.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
I will say that Hermione and Lyra have similar taste in men.
Excellent story! I read it all in one go, up to here. I don't know if Lyra really still has motives on Severus, though. I'm getting mixed feelings like old lovers do. It will be interesting to see the new relationship with Hermione unfold.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your kind review. The story is complete and working its way through the queue. The next chapter reveals more of the backstory. You'll learn more about what has happened since the war for Hermione.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Thank you for your kind review. The story is complete and working its way through the queue. The next chapter reveals more of the backstory. You'll learn more about what has happened since the war for Hermione.
Hmmm? Is this the beginning of a love triangle or is Lyra just afraid she's going to lose a friend? *grin* Love the irony of Lucius and Narcissa using a form of Muggle medicine to help them conceive Draco. ^_^
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Lyra's also just a diva. She's used to most people falling all over her, and she recognizes that Hermione could be a formidable opponent, if the two cross paths. She likes Hermione, but she sees her as a possible threat as well.
Response from reader76 (Author of Security Breach)
Lyra's also just a diva. She's used to most people falling all over her, and she recognizes that Hermione could be a formidable opponent, if the two cross paths. She likes Hermione, but she sees her as a possible threat as well.