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Droxy's Folly
TeddyRadiator174 Reviews | 7.29/10 (174 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
In a world where Lord Voldemort defeated Harry Potter and the Order, the Minister for Magic makes Hermione Granger an offer she cannot refuse - become a spokesperson for the new regime, or rot in prison. But Hermione has her own, dangerous agenda. Can she complete her appointed task without running afoul of the law, or the man she despises most - Severus Snape?
Written by stgulik and Teddy Radiator for Droxy. This story was originally commissioned as a TPP Every Flavour Auction gift, but was actually written for the 2012 Summer LJ het_bigbang fest.
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
Reviews for Droxy's Folly
Ron's death scene was the most bleak, sad, bittersweet thing. I felt sorry for him, but then I realized that he just might have been better off, because in being alive there was really no hope for him. Severus was a tricky bastard. He sat back and pretended he was Harry just to get the information. So Ron was right, even if it hurt to hear. Severus thought it was awful before, it's just become his own private hell... On the other hand, these auctions that Draco takes Hermione to remind me of the pilfering of the Nazi days. Keep what you want, get rid of the rest.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I think there are a lot of parallels between that dark time and how this 'brave new world' would have panned out. I never really thought of Severus as being tricky about all this - I always thought he would listen because he thought he might be able to help Ron. He had no idea what he was going to say, unfortunately.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I think there are a lot of parallels between that dark time and how this 'brave new world' would have panned out. I never really thought of Severus as being tricky about all this - I always thought he would listen because he thought he might be able to help Ron. He had no idea what he was going to say, unfortunately.
Draco is so adorable, I wish I had a friend like him to buy me expensive junk. I was expecting something like a miscarriage; it was hinted at in that chapter where Snape was obsessed with impregnating her. Nevertheless, it still hit me hard when I read it. Great chapter!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks! Yes, Draco is every girl's friend. I'm pleased you suspected the miscarriage. Like everything I write, because I'm sort of receiving it as a 'live feed', I don't really know what's going to happen until it's on the page. Poor Jules has just gotten used to getting all my bits and pieces and trying to make sense of them.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks! Yes, Draco is every girl's friend. I'm pleased you suspected the miscarriage. Like everything I write, because I'm sort of receiving it as a 'live feed', I don't really know what's going to happen until it's on the page. Poor Jules has just gotten used to getting all my bits and pieces and trying to make sense of them.
The Lupins are alive!! And I can't imagine what Lucius' response is going to be to Hermione in his office. Although, I'm certain Hermione will come up with a good excuse. Ah! I'm always so torn when you update... Excitement is the first thing I feel followed closely with sadness because I know it won't be long before I finish the new chapter and have to sit around wondering about what is next lol Awesome update!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you are enjoying the story - I am going to try to have the entire story posted by this weekend, so you won't have too much longer to wait.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you are enjoying the story - I am going to try to have the entire story posted by this weekend, so you won't have too much longer to wait.
Stop making me cry! Omg... what an intense chapter. I can't wait to find out what is in the box. I had to make myself pause to leave a review before charging onto the next chapter because when you put so much time into making such a well written piece, each chapter deserves its own review. Great work!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
<i> when you put so much time into making such a well written piece, each chapter deserves its own review</i>. Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I can't tell you how gratifying such a sentiment is. I am notorious for not commenting - I'm absolutely pants at writing a decent comment. I end up sounding like a complete numpty, but I end up feeling so hypocritical, because nothing makes me happier than a good review! Thank you. I hope the next chapter is enjoyable for you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
<i> when you put so much time into making such a well written piece, each chapter deserves its own review</i>. Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I can't tell you how gratifying such a sentiment is. I am notorious for not commenting - I'm absolutely pants at writing a decent comment. I end up sounding like a complete numpty, but I end up feeling so hypocritical, because nothing makes me happier than a good review! Thank you. I hope the next chapter is enjoyable for you.
Lord Stokenheimer LOL! Okay you have raised the pun stakes now! I'll be counting on more from Phineaus!The art on the walls of the Janus Thickley ward gave me goosebumps. I never would have thought about abstract art moving like paintings do. Freaky. Also the visit with Ron made me cry. Way to punch through my anti depresants! Triple agent? bad-good- bad?????? Nooooooooooo!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I think that was one of stgulik's names - she is hysterical with names. I kept envisioning the art of the patients to be magical and move, which is probably enough to give anyone nightmares! Sorry about your anti-depresants, but I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I think that was one of stgulik's names - she is hysterical with names. I kept envisioning the art of the patients to be magical and move, which is probably enough to give anyone nightmares! Sorry about your anti-depresants, but I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.
I love the way you have decribed their realtionship during the war. The screwing was release focused and yet obviously, it was more than that for both of them. Ack they were both wrong on that last day, said terrible things. What I dont understand is why Hermione would throw Dumbledore in Snape's face after he told her that he loved the headmaster? WAs she saying those things during their dance to hurt him? OH and did his conception spells work?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I think, when we are hurt and cornered, we say things we don't mean. They are the ones we want to take back and we usually say them to the people we don't want to hurt.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I think, when we are hurt and cornered, we say things we don't mean. They are the ones we want to take back and we usually say them to the people we don't want to hurt.
Yay another chapter! That bit with Ron made me sniffle. I've just finished reading another angsty story (Yea, Though I Walk by Aurette) and then I come back to TPP to read this, and I'm just a mess at this point. I love reading about this desperate hunt that you've set Hermione on. All your characters are just so very alive... even Ron's healer has a personality. Well done!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I love writing secondary characters - they are such a lovely frame for the portrait of the main characters, I find.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I love writing secondary characters - they are such a lovely frame for the portrait of the main characters, I find.
Poor Ron... you are starting to make a habit of making me cry. Great chapter! This story is wonderfully written and always leaves me begging for the next update.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Just for that, I'm gonna update two chapters tomorrow - my TPP friends have been so patient.
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
Yay!! So excited!! Do you get to bypass the queue? I've been waiting two weeks for my chapter to go through and I'm still only 21st in line.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I have been very fortunate to be a validated author for this site, which means I am able to post immediately. I am sorry for the delay (had to work all day - work sure does interfere with my fanfic habit ;)
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
Well at least that means I get to read your awesome story without having to wait forever! I completely understand why the queue takes so long, and I definitely try my best to be patient .
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Just for that, I'm gonna update two chapters tomorrow - my TPP friends have been so patient.
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
Yay!! So excited!! Do you get to bypass the queue? I've been waiting two weeks for my chapter to go through and I'm still only 21st in line.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I have been very fortunate to be a validated author for this site, which means I am able to post immediately. I am sorry for the delay (had to work all day - work sure does interfere with my fanfic habit ;)
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
Well at least that means I get to read your awesome story without having to wait forever! I completely understand why the queue takes so long, and I definitely try my best to be patient .
Poor Hermione , having to see Ron like that, is heart breaking.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for your comments. These were hard chapters to write.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for your comments. These were hard chapters to write.
Thank you so much for another fast and interesting update! Can't wait to see what happens next with HG and SS... :) Will they bump into each other at St. Mungo's?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - I won't tell what's happening next, though - you'll thank me later! ;)
Response from madhatter24 (Reviewer)
Of course I wasn't expecting you to give it away - just musing out loud :))
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - I won't tell what's happening next, though - you'll thank me later! ;)
Response from madhatter24 (Reviewer)
Of course I wasn't expecting you to give it away - just musing out loud :))
What a heartbreaking chapter. I wanted to cry after her visit to see Ron.
But I know there is so much more to Snape and his motives than Hermione realizes.
I'm really enjoying this story. Although I don't think Snape and Hermione would have carried on like rabbits under normal circumstances, people do crazy things during war time. They both were broken and despirate, not to mention lonely.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Desperation and lonliness will make one do foolish things, especially in times of war. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, strange circumstances do make for strange bedfellows!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Desperation and lonliness will make one do foolish things, especially in times of war. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, strange circumstances do make for strange bedfellows!
Your descriptions of Ron are so heartbreaking. Mental illness is never easy anyway, but coupled with the fact that this was done as an unknown hex that they can't deal with - in an AU that we've come to believe could cure almost anything - is even sadder. Although perhaps in this New World, maybe anyone that's on the side of the Light and broken, isn't meant to be mended anyway. Maybe that's just the way the government likes it...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
You know, you may be right. It wouldn't be in anyone's best interest for him to get better, although I think the staff of St. Mungo's would try. We did have a reader on another site who actually works in a mental hospital, and said that our descriptions of behaviour and environment were pretty accurate.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
You know, you may be right. It wouldn't be in anyone's best interest for him to get better, although I think the staff of St. Mungo's would try. We did have a reader on another site who actually works in a mental hospital, and said that our descriptions of behaviour and environment were pretty accurate.
The detailed description of the Janus Thickey Ward, the medi-witches, and everyone is so wonderful--was really there! Loved the powerful, poignant scene with Ron, his despair and inability to know reality from his deluded escapism, how his mind protects what little awareness he has with the repetition to shield him from the unbearable pain--so very effective, poor love. Hermione's pursuit of the second portrait and all the characters she's coming in contact with are so intriguing; loved the Snatcher scene--taking a an open drink from His Excellency Snape--the pillocks are lucky that they were left in Knockturn Alley, seedy but in one piece-lol!-wonderful story--just savouring every drop!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We had a lot of fun in this chapter - and it amazed me when I read it that SO much was going on! The Snatchers were pure stgulik - the Hubs Brit-picked their dialogue, which was a hoot, hearing my Home Counties Husband, sounding like a Sauf London wide boy! I'm really glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We had a lot of fun in this chapter - and it amazed me when I read it that SO much was going on! The Snatchers were pure stgulik - the Hubs Brit-picked their dialogue, which was a hoot, hearing my Home Counties Husband, sounding like a Sauf London wide boy! I'm really glad you are enjoying the story.
What a sad chapter! Poor Ron and Hermione. great story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
I love the portrait hunt Hermione's on - a clever way to rebel, and it fits her so well. And the characters are great - Pansy, the portraits, Snape in his new role.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad you are enjoying it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad you are enjoying it.
another great chapter. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
Breathtaking and brilliant--love the dynamics and ho-paced flow of this chapter- Merlin's balls! Wonderful! the tumultuous scenes of intimacy and need.. just wonderful, and painful, the one thing she couldn't tell and he couldn't know--so true to life... Just gaga, stgulik & teddyradiator--thank you for a fantastic tale, highlighting the human condition of our beloved Sevrus and Hermione!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Oh wow! Thank you so much. What an incredible comment, and we so appreciate it. This was such an important story to us (I had felt so guilty for not giving Droxy her promised story), and to know that it is being enjoyed by other writers is just wonderful.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Oh wow! Thank you so much. What an incredible comment, and we so appreciate it. This was such an important story to us (I had felt so guilty for not giving Droxy her promised story), and to know that it is being enjoyed by other writers is just wonderful.
Mmmn... yum! Love the narrative description and political/sexual intrigue and parlaying--delicious, thick with dubious intent all around! Relished Severus and Hermione's dialogue/dancing, as well as Snape's double-role playing with all! Wonderful!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We're delighted at the reception this story is receiving, and I'm thrilled you are enjoying it - you can tell we had a lot of fun writing it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We're delighted at the reception this story is receiving, and I'm thrilled you are enjoying it - you can tell we had a lot of fun writing it!
Ooooh! I love that they were lovers during the Trio's lovely dropout camping holiday. I'm a bit bummed by how it ended. In protest, I'll not move from this spot until you guys fix it.(Be prepared for grumpy!Jen. I'm not good at sitting still.)Seriously, I'm really loving this twisted tale.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, if you think you didn't like reading it, imagine me writing it! It was tough. I understand. I will get things moving right along!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, if you think you didn't like reading it, imagine me writing it! It was tough. I understand. I will get things moving right along!
*snort* Malfoy and Zabini were gettin' busy in the loo and it seems that Granger and Snape got busy in the forest. Busy bees, the lot.Unwanted advances, garlic breath, Postlethwaite.. Snape. Wait! That was the high point.Lucius makes me nervous. That's all I have to say about that.(Mine aren't really reviews, are they? They're more like one-sided chapter discussions.)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yours are the best kinds of reviews! We love knowing what makes our readers tick and what they enjoy about a chapter - you just keep up the good work, J!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yours are the best kinds of reviews! We love knowing what makes our readers tick and what they enjoy about a chapter - you just keep up the good work, J!
Pansy seems to have much more depth than I'm used to. I like that. Characters with actual dimensions are so much more fun.I hate the horrors that poor Hermione has faced; but she's alive, paroled and has a (somewhat dodgy) wand. It's a start.Arthur and Neville had me in tears... damn you. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks, babe! We had a lot of fun rendering Pansy. She's got potential, just like Millicent Bullstrode. JKR didn't give them a lot of meat on the bones, but it was fun fattening them up. Arthur and Neville were sad facts of the defeat of the Order, but at least they were there to help her.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks, babe! We had a lot of fun rendering Pansy. She's got potential, just like Millicent Bullstrode. JKR didn't give them a lot of meat on the bones, but it was fun fattening them up. Arthur and Neville were sad facts of the defeat of the Order, but at least they were there to help her.
I was almost feeling a teeny bit sorry for Lucius until he left Azkaban. Then it went away. I was also very pleased to see some spark left in Miss Granger.I'm not usually one for Voldy wins fics, but I'm more than a little intrigued. (Now that I've finally decided WHERE I want to read DF, LOL. I don't do well with too many choices.)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Hey, I'm just glad you're here! I hope you enjoy the story. It's done, so I'm uploading it pretty quickly. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Hey, I'm just glad you're here! I hope you enjoy the story. It's done, so I'm uploading it pretty quickly. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.
What's this about the Forest of Dean????I love that former Headmaster Black is back in the thick of things. It's so sad that the former Heads' portraits were destroyed. Oh, and our sexy Slytherin playing chess with a mentally damaged Ron. That made my heart swell with pride.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I love making Severus sexy! And yes, I've always had a soft spot for Headmaster Black, ever since As Morning Falls...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I love making Severus sexy! And yes, I've always had a soft spot for Headmaster Black, ever since As Morning Falls...
This chapter made me cry... first at Severus' outburst at Spinner's End, and again when it switched to Hermione's perspective. Also when she said, "My wards will always recognise you, Severus." I totally got goosebumps. Great work, you are definitely getting an emeotional response out of your readers. As always, I'm eager for the update!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - I will confess, this is my favourite chapter, but wow, that last part was sooo hard to write. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - I will confess, this is my favourite chapter, but wow, that last part was sooo hard to write. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
I'm diggin' all of the characterizations. The Printsesa file and the toasts... those hit me in the gut.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much, babe - I'm really enjoying your comments!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much, babe - I'm really enjoying your comments!