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Droxy's Folly
TeddyRadiator174 Reviews | 7.29/10 (174 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
In a world where Lord Voldemort defeated Harry Potter and the Order, the Minister for Magic makes Hermione Granger an offer she cannot refuse - become a spokesperson for the new regime, or rot in prison. But Hermione has her own, dangerous agenda. Can she complete her appointed task without running afoul of the law, or the man she despises most - Severus Snape?
Written by stgulik and Teddy Radiator for Droxy. This story was originally commissioned as a TPP Every Flavour Auction gift, but was actually written for the 2012 Summer LJ het_bigbang fest.
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
Reviews for Droxy's Folly
Yum, love Mr Thoreau, the magic transom, the narrative details of all the crooks and crannies of the RCMC, the grotesque auction, although smiled at Hermione's goodies Draco got for her, and adore the Ronald and Severus' scene with all of the heavy revelations--wonderful, powerful elements of storytelling; Ron is at peace from his tortured existence--powerful lead up depicting the medi-witch leaving him alone, and he taking matters into his own hands
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! It's always wonderful to know what parts a reader enjoys, and find that they are the ones you enjoy as well. The bust of Nimue, one of stgulik's creations, is one of my favourite things - I wish I had one.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! It's always wonderful to know what parts a reader enjoys, and find that they are the ones you enjoy as well. The bust of Nimue, one of stgulik's creations, is one of my favourite things - I wish I had one.
glad to see he found what he was looking for. thanks!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! I love this fic and how Snape and Hermione are still working behind the scenes to help everyone!! This should have been another double chapter!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!! Fear not, I will be uploading the remainder of the story this weekend - promise!
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
YAY!!!!!!! And it was awesome!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We really appreciate your comments.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!! Fear not, I will be uploading the remainder of the story this weekend - promise!
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
YAY!!!!!!! And it was awesome!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! We really appreciate your comments.
Another great chapter. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
Is it odd that I like Pansy? lol Her character is very interesting in your story, not her usual one dimentional self. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - a lot of people have said that! From the beginning, stgulik wanted a Pansy that had a personality, and was gutsy, sexy and smart. I thought of how Kate Blanchett had looked in the last Indiana Jones film (real Louise Brooks haircut, tough as nails, etc), and Pansy was born!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - a lot of people have said that! From the beginning, stgulik wanted a Pansy that had a personality, and was gutsy, sexy and smart. I thought of how Kate Blanchett had looked in the last Indiana Jones film (real Louise Brooks haircut, tough as nails, etc), and Pansy was born!
Ohhhh, Severus and Hermione--you came sooo close to... *sigh* but the truth came out! Powerful, powerful dialogue and action--squirming and squeeing!!! Love the evil cliffie!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I hope you will continue to enjoy the rest of the story!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I hope you will continue to enjoy the rest of the story!
"Hermione rolled her eyes. Typical, typical. She was surrounded by the most unrepentant bunch of opportunists known to mankind. Slytherin’s House symbol should have been a blackmail letter instead of a snake." What a wonderfully sarcastic bit of humor in an otherwise tense chapter! God, I love that line!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad that line worked - I was a little worried about it, but it seemed to do the trick!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'm really glad that line worked - I was a little worried about it, but it seemed to do the trick!
Lucius Malfoy deserves to die slowly and painfully.Man... Severus and Hermione are so cruel to one another.I like the portrait of Lugubrious. It would be lovely to have portraits to go to for wisdom.Oh, shit!! That damned Lucius again.(Great job, ladies!!)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks, sweetie! Tell your friends! I liked Lugubrious so much. Every time I read him say, "He loves you, Hermione." I would tear up. Hell, I did it uploading this chapter! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thanks, sweetie! Tell your friends! I liked Lugubrious so much. Every time I read him say, "He loves you, Hermione." I would tear up. Hell, I did it uploading this chapter! ;)
LOL... "cobwebby". I love how she got Draco to buy the box (and I giggled at the bust of Nimue winking fitfully).Oh, that's so terrible about the baby! :(No... not Ron. Stop making me cry, damn you!! (I should expect this, you know. I'm not new here.)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yes! Another stgulik was the winking bust, which made me giggle like a giggling thing. I know - I seem to enjoy making my friends cry.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yes! Another stgulik was the winking bust, which made me giggle like a giggling thing. I know - I seem to enjoy making my friends cry.
I really wish Hermione would teach me how to do the Number One with my hair. I'd also like to get my hands on a copy of The Magical Kama Sutra in Victorian England, by Lord Stokenheimer.Love Noddy!!“I cast quite a formidable Tergeo,” he offered. *snort*
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I'd love a Number One myself! ;) The Numbered hairdo's are pure stgulik. When she mentioned them, I had to chuckle - it sounds exactly like something Pansy would do. I have read the Victorian Kama Sutra. It reads like a cooking manual! ;) I'm really glad you are enjoying the story, babe.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I'd love a Number One myself! ;) The Numbered hairdo's are pure stgulik. When she mentioned them, I had to chuckle - it sounds exactly like something Pansy would do. I have read the Victorian Kama Sutra. It reads like a cooking manual! ;) I'm really glad you are enjoying the story, babe.
hmmmm i don't know who to Gibbs slap first, Sev or Hermione...nah, i'll slap em both.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, a lot of pain has been felt between them. They have to get over it and start working together...
Response from keske (Reviewer)
that's true too of course. they need a good mediator. I volunteer! i volunteer as tribute!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, a lot of pain has been felt between them. They have to get over it and start working together...
Response from keske (Reviewer)
that's true too of course. they need a good mediator. I volunteer! i volunteer as tribute!
Evil, evil cliffhanger, just as I was about to relax ... You certainly do keep your readers on their toes. I think you story is wonderfully paced, thank you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! It was an evil cliffie, but we are going to upload the rest of the story this weekend, so all will be revealed soon. Thank you for your lovely comments.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! It was an evil cliffie, but we are going to upload the rest of the story this weekend, so all will be revealed soon. Thank you for your lovely comments.
I have a feeling things are going to be getting even more intense! Awesome work :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
Another wonderful chapter, Hermione has been through so much, it isn't any wonder that she has trouble trusting anyone. And severus trying so hard to help, but being frustratedat every turn. Finaly a light at the end of the tunnel, and thud, she runs into Malfoy.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Yes, this is a bit of an evil cliffie, but I've promised to upload the rest of the story by Sunday, so hopefully this will help!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Yes, this is a bit of an evil cliffie, but I've promised to upload the rest of the story by Sunday, so hopefully this will help!
You must have shares in Kleenex, you make me cry so much. Every word you write rings true, and touchs the heart. Ron's death was so sad, but now he's at peace. I just know that Severus is going to blame himself for this too, as well as for the baby.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Your little quivering lip icon was so sweet it brought tears to MY eyes! Ron's death was probably the hardest thing I've ever written, but at least I know that readers understood the whys of it. I am always afraid that the death of a major character might be seen as gratuitous - to pump up the drama of a story. I'm glad this was seen for what it was. And I'm sorry I made you cry so much.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Your little quivering lip icon was so sweet it brought tears to MY eyes! Ron's death was probably the hardest thing I've ever written, but at least I know that readers understood the whys of it. I am always afraid that the death of a major character might be seen as gratuitous - to pump up the drama of a story. I'm glad this was seen for what it was. And I'm sorry I made you cry so much.
oh man, this is so good! i get so disappointed when i reach the end of one of your chapters, because i always want to keep reading! you draw me in so quickly with your writing that i tune out everything else
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Stgulik and I had such a wonderful time co-writing this story, and I'm thrilled you are enjoying it. I place to post the rest of the story throughout this week.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Stgulik and I had such a wonderful time co-writing this story, and I'm thrilled you are enjoying it. I place to post the rest of the story throughout this week.
Yay!! There is hope for them yet! Now to figure out where Severus went! Great chapter with great info! Can't wait for the next!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'll be uploading the remainder of the story this week - promise!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I'll be uploading the remainder of the story this week - promise!
ut ohhh shes in for it now! whatt?? the entire story posted by this weekend <<<<doing happy dance welll i wanna thank you for that!!! (puttong you on xmas list) thanks huggs.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yay! I love giving people reason to do the happy dance.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Yay! I love giving people reason to do the happy dance.
Oh my gosh that was sad! I'm not a huge fan of Ron but at least his suffering is at an end. It was interesting getting more information on Hermione and Severus' back story. Looking forward to seeing how Severus will react to seeing Hermione again!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I've never been a fan of Ron, and it's been hard for me to give him a 'voice', but I think we did pretty well here. I will admit that writing a suicide made me feel very sad for several days. It's hard to get into the head of someone who feels that they have no other choice.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I've never been a fan of Ron, and it's been hard for me to give him a 'voice', but I think we did pretty well here. I will admit that writing a suicide made me feel very sad for several days. It's hard to get into the head of someone who feels that they have no other choice.
I was so sure that Hermione was going to find Everard's portrait at that auction in Ch 7! I am so hopeless at predicting anything. Guess I'll just have to sit back and enjoy instead...not a hard task. I can't wait for Hermione and Severus to really reconnect.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - we give bonus points for speculating! ;) I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - we give bonus points for speculating! ;) I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
OMFG!!! This fic is AWESOME!!! I was super excited when I saw two chappie updates! Though a forewarning not read it in public would have been nice, Ron made me tear up and I really had to suck it in because I was in a public place!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I almost put a warning, but I didn't want to spoil it. We uploaded two chapters because all our TPP readers have been so wonderful about commenting and making us feel so good about the story, so Stgulik and I decided we'll try to upload the rest of the story by Sunday. I'm sorry you got caught out, though! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I almost put a warning, but I didn't want to spoil it. We uploaded two chapters because all our TPP readers have been so wonderful about commenting and making us feel so good about the story, so Stgulik and I decided we'll try to upload the rest of the story by Sunday. I'm sorry you got caught out, though! ;)
Ok I'm back... I wish I could hate Hermione for refusing to see Severus for what he really is, but I just can't. She's been through some pretty unimaginable travails, and I can understand that her mistrust is nothing more than a basic defense mechanism. She doesn't want to believe the worst of him, though, and that is what redeemed her for me. I hope Snape gets over his resentment and clarifies things with her. I am in love with your Phineas, he's so delightfully snarky and clever, but at heart he's quite the softy. Great chapter!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I fell in love with Phineas when I was working on As Morning Falls - I thought of him as someone who secretly enjoyed being with the trio, instead of the mind-numbing life of being a portrait on a forgotten wall. I think he would have seen it as an adventure.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I fell in love with Phineas when I was working on As Morning Falls - I thought of him as someone who secretly enjoyed being with the trio, instead of the mind-numbing life of being a portrait on a forgotten wall. I think he would have seen it as an adventure.
Wow, what an update... These chapters were very hard to read, but very well-written! I am entirely thrilled that things are starting to look up by the end of this chaper, with Hermione finally starting to see things clear. I can't wait to read more about them making up... I can already feel the excitement of their newly-rediscovered romance welling up :) Can't wait to read more! And - as ever - thank you for being such a fast and efficient updater! It makes a world of difference to impatient readers like me :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I am impatient as well - so I hope to upload the remaining chapters by the end of the weekend!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! I am impatient as well - so I hope to upload the remaining chapters by the end of the weekend!
Hearing of Severus' tireless work because he loves Hermione so deeply made me tear up. It's human nature to think the worst of people when you've had too much bad luck for too long. But to find out from more than one source that he did love her, and that according to Lugubrious - he still loves her - changes everything. It's time to try to make amends.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Oh, that part was pure stgulik, and it still makes me tear up every time I read it. I was tearing up just posting this!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Oh, that part was pure stgulik, and it still makes me tear up every time I read it. I was tearing up just posting this!
I love this delicious misunderstanding between Hermione and Severus. I have to go right now but I'll leave a more detailed review when I get back, haha :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I'm glad you liked it - I found it so hard to write - I don't like them fighting ;) I'd much rather having them fight together on a common cause - I'm not an angsty person by nature, and writing them at odds is always hard for me.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I'm glad you liked it - I found it so hard to write - I don't like them fighting ;) I'd much rather having them fight together on a common cause - I'm not an angsty person by nature, and writing them at odds is always hard for me.