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Droxy's Folly
TeddyRadiator174 Reviews | 7.29/10 (174 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
In a world where Lord Voldemort defeated Harry Potter and the Order, the Minister for Magic makes Hermione Granger an offer she cannot refuse - become a spokesperson for the new regime, or rot in prison. But Hermione has her own, dangerous agenda. Can she complete her appointed task without running afoul of the law, or the man she despises most - Severus Snape?
Written by stgulik and Teddy Radiator for Droxy. This story was originally commissioned as a TPP Every Flavour Auction gift, but was actually written for the 2012 Summer LJ het_bigbang fest.
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
Reviews for Droxy's Folly
super story! I await the sequel!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you!
Sequel please!!!! Great story.I look forward to reading more stories from you 2 ladies,
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - I look forward to writing more with stgulik - it was the most positive fanfic writing experience I've ever had.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - I look forward to writing more with stgulik - it was the most positive fanfic writing experience I've ever had.
“No one but you,” she moaned, understanding. “Nothing but pleasure. Make me forget them. Make me feel good again, Severus.”Their lovemaking is wonderful, before and after this extract above--but it really hit home, Severus wishing to erase all of the rape and abuse that she has endured and have it replaced/reprogrammed/reaffirmed with his/their love making--so, so powerful--just beautiful... Really enjoyed the realistic emotional and psychological erotica and love-making layered on second by second, the melting away and replacement of their love and thirst and need for one another manifested on all levels--just gorgeous! Well, I'm going to be late for work today, and yes, I'm guilty! Completely bewitched (willingly so!)!!! Yum!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I am completed bewitched by this beautiful comment. You writers always have such a way with words! I can't tell you what this means to me and to stgulik as well. She and I had such a great time writing this, but moreover, we so wanted it to be a grand yarn that readers would enjoy (especially Droxy, whose comments were just pure joy as well). When I read a comment like yours, I think to myself, "I've done it. I've done what I've always wanted to do - I've become a writer." You have no idea the confidence and encouragement you have imparted with this beautiful review. I'm sorry we made you late for work, but I'll always cherish this amazing comment. Teddy Radiator
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I am completed bewitched by this beautiful comment. You writers always have such a way with words! I can't tell you what this means to me and to stgulik as well. She and I had such a great time writing this, but moreover, we so wanted it to be a grand yarn that readers would enjoy (especially Droxy, whose comments were just pure joy as well). When I read a comment like yours, I think to myself, "I've done it. I've done what I've always wanted to do - I've become a writer." You have no idea the confidence and encouragement you have imparted with this beautiful review. I'm sorry we made you late for work, but I'll always cherish this amazing comment. Teddy Radiator
Wonderful, no folly at all. I do hope there is a sequel telling us about the weapon, their new life and their babies...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! We were afraid we'd be lynched by the ending, but I believe stgulik has something up her sleeve for early 2013! We just appreciate so much you taking the time to comment on each chapter - that kind of feedback is so wonderful to receive.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! We were afraid we'd be lynched by the ending, but I believe stgulik has something up her sleeve for early 2013! We just appreciate so much you taking the time to comment on each chapter - that kind of feedback is so wonderful to receive.
“It was perfect,” he rasped, and kissed her wild hair. He smiled as he crooned, “You were magnificent.”This describes them and this chapter as well: 'perfect' & 'magnificent'!!!Fantastic action-packed, heart-thumping action ending with them in each other's arms-- yeah, baby, yeah!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! This was pure Stgulik - I just played a little with the wording, but all that action and adventure was her - she was nervous about it, but I think she pulled it off like a pro. Seeing her grow and bloom as a writer during this process was one of the great joys of working on Droxy's Folly, and receiving wonderful comments like yours was another.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! This was pure Stgulik - I just played a little with the wording, but all that action and adventure was her - she was nervous about it, but I think she pulled it off like a pro. Seeing her grow and bloom as a writer during this process was one of the great joys of working on Droxy's Folly, and receiving wonderful comments like yours was another.
What an amazing journey this story has been! You two write very well together, and should definitely do it again... perhaps in the form of a sequel? Wonderful story, and the ending inspires a lot of hope for the future! Just curious... do you already know what the weapon does, or is it a make it up as you go kinda thing?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for your great comments throughout the story. We have talked alot about a sequel, and stgulik has a good idea what the weapon does - but I have high hopes that we'll get together in early 2013 and do the continuing saga - like you, I'm excited to know what happens next.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for your great comments throughout the story. We have talked alot about a sequel, and stgulik has a good idea what the weapon does - but I have high hopes that we'll get together in early 2013 and do the continuing saga - like you, I'm excited to know what happens next.
Now I really want more!!! Sequel!!! Awesome fic though and the love between Sevvie and Hermione is awesome and well written here!!! But do much more could be done!!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! You never know what we might be working on in early 2013....
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
If only it were sooner, but I really hope there will be a continuation!! Even if I have to wait!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! You never know what we might be working on in early 2013....
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
If only it were sooner, but I really hope there will be a continuation!! Even if I have to wait!!
Their time in the bath was very touching (no pun intended). I am eager to jump to the next chapter but sad because I know it's the end... great job!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - and thank you for the great comments you have given our fic throughout. We appreciate it so much!
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
I know I love the feeling when I get an alert about a new comment, so when I read such an amazing story I have to stop to tell the author that their hard work was worth it and very appreciated!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I know the feeling - I am awful about leaving comments. Usually because I have no idea what to say - so hypoctical, especially since I love receiving them so much!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much - and thank you for the great comments you have given our fic throughout. We appreciate it so much!
Response from BellatrixLives (Reviewer)
I know I love the feeling when I get an alert about a new comment, so when I read such an amazing story I have to stop to tell the author that their hard work was worth it and very appreciated!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
I know the feeling - I am awful about leaving comments. Usually because I have no idea what to say - so hypoctical, especially since I love receiving them so much!
Love the interactions and mystery layering with the Constable, and the fantastic Droxy's Folly tale within a tale with Ms Hope--I can't quite gush enough about you and stgulik and your dynamic, intricate storytelling skills and magic leaving me gaga every bloody wonderful chapter--but I'll try to write something coherent... Your narrative keeps me hypnotised and your poetical prose, especially in the later part of this chapter with Severus experiencing Hermione's magic and love/love magic, just has left me breathless *even put my morning java aside and substituted it with some lemon green tea--much healthier and hopefully will help keep me *calmer* when and as I read your incredible story - lol!*'(...)with that diamond-hard, soul-quenching passion that is the birthright of any true love.' --if I could breathe enough to blubber, but right now I'm just basking in the warm rays of this *love magic* of writing Beautiful work!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - your amazing comment has left me absolutely speechless. The part you mentioned, with Severus within Hermione's wards, was the first thing sgulik and I spoke about with this fic, and it was the first visual image I got - and it's still my favourite thing! Thank you for your marvelous comments throughout the story - they mean so much to us.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - your amazing comment has left me absolutely speechless. The part you mentioned, with Severus within Hermione's wards, was the first thing sgulik and I spoke about with this fic, and it was the first visual image I got - and it's still my favourite thing! Thank you for your marvelous comments throughout the story - they mean so much to us.
A wonderful fic, simultaneously full of both despair and a burgeoning hopefulness. Droxy is very lucky indeed to have received such an thought-provoking gift, and the rest of us are profoundly grateful to you for sharing this magnificent story!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Your comments throughout the story have been so very much appreciated, and it's been our pleasure to share this story. Thank you for such a beautiful comment - it will be treasured forever.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! Your comments throughout the story have been so very much appreciated, and it's been our pleasure to share this story. Thank you for such a beautiful comment - it will be treasured forever.
Hats off to you two for a wonderful story. Great hot and steamy love scenes.
The ending screams for a sequel... any chance?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for reading and giving us such encouraging and supportive reviews - I really do hope we will write that sequel - Stgulik has written an outline for one, and I would love the chance to work on it with her.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for reading and giving us such encouraging and supportive reviews - I really do hope we will write that sequel - Stgulik has written an outline for one, and I would love the chance to work on it with her.
Hey, you stinker! You left a loophole here for a sequel, you know that? You'd better think about doing one after HM, after LML...after??
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Did we leave a loophole??? I really must speak to stgulik about this...she's supposed to catch these things, after all.... you just wait, I'm going to have a word with that wench....
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Did we leave a loophole??? I really must speak to stgulik about this...she's supposed to catch these things, after all.... you just wait, I'm going to have a word with that wench....
Severus has thought of everything, hasn't he?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
He's a resourceful wizard - sort of the ultimate wizarding bad boy scout.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
He's a resourceful wizard - sort of the ultimate wizarding bad boy scout.
Can we get a woot woot for Phineas? He's better than a guard dog - he can talk!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Love me some Phineas!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Love me some Phineas!
So, because the brush grew up so much around it, Hermione was able to disillusion the Folly, so that no one could see it and she could use it as shelter? Ah...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Something like that...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Something like that...
Wonderful! The magical world is not lost yet as they reunite.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - Never give up, never surrender!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you - Never give up, never surrender!
Mmmm... another evil cliffy! But I forgive you, as I fell in love with Pansy -- so, like Lulu, my attention was only on her, and her sweet ministrations-lol! Loved her strategic maneuvers to help Hermione out-- still grinning like the Cheshire Cat about it! And now, what has naughty, paranoid Lulu in mind for our dear Gryffindor?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, Pansy was a lot of fun to write - and I think one of my favourite lines was about the 'Mighty Chief of Staff'!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Well, Pansy was a lot of fun to write - and I think one of my favourite lines was about the 'Mighty Chief of Staff'!
Forgive me Babes...but I'm site hopping so catching up reading multiple chapters....and I've just got rid of my sister back to Nottingham after the weekend. Whoa...intense scary and rivetting action. So glad that Sev was able to save her this time. But why is Lucius being such a bastard and what are all the artefacts she is collecting? Anyway good to see that Severus had borrowed my Mum's shoes and found the scones!!!!!!! LOL! Now then is there another site that has more chapters? Best wishes, Love Ali xxx.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Ali darling - look at you, hopping over to TPP! I'm going to be uploading the remainder of the story today. Thanks, sweetie, for being such a loyal and loving reader.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Ali darling - look at you, hopping over to TPP! I'm going to be uploading the remainder of the story today. Thanks, sweetie, for being such a loyal and loving reader.
WOW! I'm breathless, heart pounding, they are safe{for now} the bastard Lestarange brothers are gone.Hermione and Severus back together.Thank you, for the fast updates.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I will finish posting today!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I will finish posting today!
Heart-pounding excitement! I'm so glad they realize now that they still love each other. They both have a way of twisting things in the wrong direction and believing the worst. Hope they can manage to change that aspect of their relationship.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! We were nervous about the chase scene, but I think stgulik did an awesome job of rendering it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you! We were nervous about the chase scene, but I think stgulik did an awesome job of rendering it.
Annnnd again: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! Yay for Sevvie coming to Hermione's rescue as the perfect time!! Glad the Lestrange Bros. are gone, bad bad men. And Lucy needs someone to slap him, such an ass! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
LOL It always makes the heart sing when you get such happy reviews! I'm just so glad you are enjoying it. I'm uploading the rest this weekend, so you won't have to wait long!
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
Sweet!!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
LOL It always makes the heart sing when you get such happy reviews! I'm just so glad you are enjoying it. I'm uploading the rest this weekend, so you won't have to wait long!
Response from LioSaoirse (Reviewer)
Sweet!!!!
I hope that Hermione will listen, and not hex first,and ask questions later.Beautifully told, story within,a story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I will be uploading the rest of the fic in the next couple of days.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I will be uploading the rest of the fic in the next couple of days.
Pansy is one tough cookie, and so is Hermione, in her own way. I realy don't like the sound of,the plans that Lucius is making.I love the passion, that the portrait headmaster still has, for his old school.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing Pansy. I just pictured her as this real hard-bitten type who would feel like she needed to be tough no matter what - but she's really struck a chord!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing Pansy. I just pictured her as this real hard-bitten type who would feel like she needed to be tough no matter what - but she's really struck a chord!
Very touching. Another wonderful chapter :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you so much!
there's a song/video floating around on youtube called Magic Carpet, and is of a red piece of fabric floating in air. I think the song would fit this chapter nicely as a sort of bittersweet rememberance, perhaps ^.^
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for the rec - I'll look it up!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Droxy's Folly)
Thank you for the rec - I'll look it up!