Happily Ever After
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Professor Snape and Ministry employee Granger get unwillingly sucked into a novel. My answer to the Lost In A Book Challenge by LotM.
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OH MY! What a wonderful chapter!! I adore the memory of their first night spent in the new house. How yummy!!! And then all the visitors were so much fun - even the Fudges. 
And the way she told Severus she was expecting and his (delayed) reaction to that news was just icing on the cake! Just superb! Can't wait for more! But I'll say enjoy the holidays first. 
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you! I am so very glad you enjoyed it. I am going to try to work on the next chapter this weekend but of course, family has a tendency to take up the time. Hopefully won't be long though! Happy Holidays to you!
Ok, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter but I just couldn't resist the lure of new ones when I got down to the bottom. Let me just say ... FABULOUS!!! I am SO adoring this! I think it's definitely one of the best "lost in a book" responses out there. You've got both of their personalities wonderfully shown, but tilted just enough to fit into the new time period they've been thrown into. I won't say I'll "patiently" wait for the next chapter, but I will wait and be here when you get it posted. Enjoy the fall, and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful gem of a story.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i am sooo glad you are enjoying my story! the summer slowed me down w/ updating, but i should be getting better now that winter is setting in. i am working on chapter 14 and tinnidawg, my most awesome beta, is prodding me with a rather sharp stick! check back soon for a new chapter.
That's sweet! Buying her a house of their own!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I figured it was time for them to have some quality alone time. Of course, there will be the settling in phase! Glad you liked it.
Great descriptions here. Heh, I'm happy she's got her house, and isn't it just like mums to try to butt in? Teehee
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Nothing like a new home. I figured it would be fun to see the different personalities of Minerva, Hermione, Narcissa and Severus collide. The next chapter mostly takes place in their new home!
good chapter how many more chapters are there
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
A lot more than I originally planned. I originally thought only about 16 chapters total. I am thinking it will be closer to 25 or more. Chapter 14 shouldn't be too much longer in appearing! Glad you enjoyed this one.
that was great!
poor hermione. geez now i wonder when they will be asking when the first baby will be born. that was a question asked of me and mine after we got hitched.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
thank you. yes, it is the inevitable question isn't it? don't worry, it will be coming!
Great chapter! Just read the whole story, actually, and am really enjoying it!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. It it has been fun to write. More is definitely to come!
the lemons were very good in this chapter
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. I really am glad you like it. I had the worst time writing the lemons. Tricky that.
excellent. thank you.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. More will deinitely be coming.
I really liked the kiss they shared and can't wait until the next chapter. I'm certain things will get awkward. However, if the kiss is anything to go by... Good work!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you very much! The next chapter is written, just the editing & revamping w/ Tinnidawg. I will definitely have to bump the rating up.
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to read what happens next. The whole love, marriage, and baby carriage story is great. Teehee!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
thank you. i am glad you are still enjoying the story. thank you for making it one of the featured stories. chapter 7 should be posted shortly and chapter 8 is almost done, my beta is looking it over again. 8 will be long!
i just read both of these and realised how much i adore this story. very nice
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. Next chapter should be coming up soon.
You adore me and I adore me. 
Ah, good job, good job. Here, have a lemon sherbert.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I loved writing Draco's lines! He is so much fun. Hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thank you for the sherbert.
This sounds like a fun challenge. I am really looking forward to where you take the story now that they've been transported into the story. A wonderfully tempting beginning!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. I am glad and very humbled that you like it. I will go ahead and post the 2nd chapter. Chapter 5 is residing with my beta.
Oh my! You really must update again soon! And *happy dance* that Hermione is expecting *smile*
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I am trying to find my notes for the next chapter. Hopefully will be up in the next couple of weeks. Glad you like it! This one was very fun to write.
Great chapter. Loved the ending.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
glad you liked the ending. just a few more chapters to go. thank you for reading the story so far!
Yay! you updated!! I love this story..I can't wait to see what happens next....A baby?! 
hehehe Keep at it ....this story is awesome!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Gald you liked the chapter! So happy that you are following the story! It will be exciting to do her pregnancy!
woo hoo excellent chapters. i'm glad the syb was put in her place. the family clans will be most pleased to hear about the off spring. waiting for more. have a great week and thank you for the update.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
You are welcome. I believe Sibyll will make another appearance or two before I retire her! Hee Hee. She is actually fun to plot.
i hope Sibyll's baby is not severus's that would suck
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I did consider that. Just so you rest easier, Severus is telling the truth. Hee Hee! But that is all I am revealing! There are other little surprises that Sibyll has planned!
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
how is the next chapter coming along and how long will it be before they get out of the book. and is that a real book your using to put hermione and severus.
Very cute.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. So glad you have enjoyed it so far! More to come.
beautiful!!!
that is just so cute. cant wait for next update.
-karlamarie
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. Glad you have enjoyed it. I've got to get to work on the next chapter! Hopefully, will have it up soon.
I am not really good with reviews, but I just had to tell you that I absolutely loved this story. I was laughing through most of it. Please don't stop writing.
Finding myself wishing we could see how Severus and Hermione get together after being home. It was a wondetful period piece I very much enjoyed it.
Entertaining, inded.