Oh crap and now they are engaged to marry. I loved your description of their reactions at the table when the annoucement was made- it was funny. I could feel them coming unglued.

What a tangled web you weave - people he currently hates are in this world they become his family and mistress - poor guy. The stepped into their very own nightmare - lol. Sybil - I cringe.

Things are looking very entertaining... Transported back in time by a portkey - her parents are in this lifetime not deatheaters even though Lucius is now her dad and Severus is some sort of nobility. What an original concept... I cannot wait to see what you make of it.

Good first chapter - I wonder where the book port-key took them. I loved the line she said to him - always a pleasure. Sounded so sexy and mature - not the student of the past but a woman's greeting.

Oh, now wasn't that just cruel!I just found this story today, and have spent the last hour or so reading all of it. You are a wonderful writer, and this story is absolutely terrific! I just love the styles of dresses!The scenes with Draco are so funny! I laughed so hard, my siblings had to whack me with pillows to get me to shut up! They were simply hilarious!I wonder what will happen next! I thought for sure Hermione would burst into tears. I really have to wonder how they're going to take it all. I mean, they must have been in that book for at least a year, and they had just had their first child together. . . let's just say it's going to be an interesting scene in the next chapter! But I have faith in you to make it perfect!Thank you so much for this wonderful story! I have enjoyed it very much, and look forward to the next installment!~Katie

The country estate was a good honeymoon for them - it gave them time to get to know each other a little better. Hermione is going to bed coming to be naked if he keeps ripping night gowns - lol

AAAACCCCCKKKK!!!!  You are pure evil!! ^.~    So much lovely bliss and then THAT???  I absolutely adore this, but now I canNOT wait for the next.  Quick, quick, quick please hehehe

Aaaaaaah!  That was the scream of a reader plummeting over the cliff.  How could you DO that to us?  Them?  Everybody?  Looking forward to the next installment -- even though I'm heartbroken about the baby.  Thanks for your work!

I really think thats a horrible book, to put someone though having a child that they would already love and then snatch it away from them.I like the story though and cant wait for the next chapter.Cheers-K

Sybil was a snarky witch in this one - Well she married Fudge - ewww. I liked the whole chapter and cannot wait to see what happens between them for the falling in love part - Hermione is moody - can she be pregnant?????

Oh, that's just MEAN!!!  I wanted to at least know if it was a boy or girl.  I can't wait to see what happens to our couple next.

Oh no! *sniffle* Why'd the have to go back just then? We didn't even get to find out if the baby was a boy or girl, and we didn't get to see the family's reactions. I knew they were going to go back eventually, but -like Severus and Hermione- I found myself kind of hoping they could stay there a long while longer. I guess now I'm just really hoping that they'll find the happiness they had in the book again now that they're back to the 'real world'. Seriously, I'm really excited to see how this experience has changed them now that they're back in their 'natural' environment.

Oh, NO! I hope things aren't spoiled between them now that they are back in their rightful time.

Ha! I love how Severus tricked Sibyll. Poor Cornelius is stuck with that evil woman unfortunately, but Severus made a clean break. Very glad to see the update!

Ooooh! What an exciting chapter!!!I can't wait for the next update though!!!

OH I'm sooooo tickled to see this update. Funnily enough I just reread the rest last week or so, so it was all fresh in my mind.  ^.^It was great. Loved how Severus got Sybill off their backs for good. Harry made me cringe a little but we'll just chalk that up to him being a big kid hehe. Not so long for the next update?? *hint, hint* ^.~

Yay! To be honest, I'd completely forgotten what this story was about, but I reread chapter 15 and it all came back to me. This chapter was a true joy to read! I am so glad that the whole Sibyll situation has been resolved, though I must admit that her faking her pregnancy was quite a surprise, I hadn't thought about that option at all. I can't wait to see where you take this!

Glad to see the end of the Sybill business. That woman has underhanded ways to get what she wants.

Tis been far too long since the last update....what happened? I love this story and would hate to never see it ended properly.

This is the only 'lost' story I've read continually. I got to wondering while I read this chapter as to what happens when they finally manage to get out of the storybook??? Do they just start up right where they were when they entered the book, or have they actually been gone from their reality for a length of time and do they come back with extra 'baggage'???

Thank you. I've always hated when stories include these amazing orgasms when having sex for the first time. I love that hermione's only orgasm came from foreplay!I really enjoy your snarky, yet teasing Snape.

good chapter.

Oh I was so tickled to see this update!!  FANTASTIC way to start my day!LOVE "General" Hermione.  So "her", but still so funny.  And Severus knows enough to just grit his teeth and say "yes ma'am".  Too great.I wonder about the "slight frown that fleetingly crossed" Harry's face.  Hmmmm.  Could be some waves on this serene little lake they're currently residing on.  Can't wait to see if it really means anything.Hope real life is kinder to you. ^.^  Keep up the great work!

I'm so glad for the update. Things seem to be too perfect there. Is there a catch? I guess Severus and Hermione will soon find themselves back in their reality. i wonder if Hermione will still be pregnant.

love the story so far.

are u going to update anytime soonn i hope u do