Chapter 2 - Once Upon A Time
Chapter 2 of 18
kbauman24601Author's Notes: Again, Tinnidawg, you are the greatest!
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Chapter 2 – Once Upon A Time
Looking around, they noticed they were standing on the pavement of a cobbled street. Instead of cars and buses, however, there were horse drawn carriages and people riding on horseback. Hermione saw women dressed in long, empire-waist gowns while the majority of men wore light colored, form fitting pants with short dark jackets. Severus, though he had traveled extensively, did not recognize any familiar landmarks.
“Hermione! What are you doing out there? Come inside. Father wants to speak to you.” Hermione whipped around and saw Draco coming down the steps of a very large brick townhouse.
“Severus! We have been looking for you all over, old chap. Ron and Remus are already at the club!” Severus looked up and saw Harry Potter headed towards him with a very happy expression on his face. He turned a horrified face towards Hermione.
“Oh, no! Not them,” Hermione groaned.
“Not them? You have ten seconds to explain this to me before I start hexing Potter,” Snape growled out of the corner of his mouth.
“Just go along with Harry! Please? I will meet you later. We have to find out exactly where we are. Besides, I am not sure that we can do any magic. Nobody I see is carrying a wand.” Despite landing in an unknown situation, Hermione’s eyes were at once cautious and excited. Severus rolled his own eyes and steeled himself for whatever horrible punishment was sure to come. She heaved a sigh of relief when he allowed himself to be hauled away by a very happy Harry.
“What were the Duke of Walforth and you talking about? Father will want to know this immediately. Come inside before people start commenting about you standing in the street.”
Hermione let herself be ushered into the large townhouse before her. Her mind was racing, trying to understand this new world. She had the vague feeling that she had heard the name Walforth before. She had learned over the years to control her questions, as observation and patience usually yielded the same results.
Nothing prepared her for meeting her “father” however. She was ushered into what she assumed was a library and came face to face with none other than Lucius Malfoy. He was dressed in black trousers and a long black frock coat. His long silver blond hair was tied back with a narrow black ribbon. She felt the blood drain from her face. She pinched the back of her hand, fervently hoping she would wake up from this dream.
“I thought you were in Azkaban. What are you doing here?”
“Young lady, that is not amusing. I have never been to this place you call Azkaban, as you well know. Your brother noticed you standing in the middle of the street creating a spectacle of yourself with the Duke of Walforth. What do you have to say for yourself?”
Hermione looked down and let out a soft gasp. Her black robes had changed into a soft blue, high-waisted gown. How interesting for the transportation spell to change a person’s clothing and setting so completely, she thought. “Well, sir. I honestly do not recall how I met him. He just appeared and helped me up, sir.” Oh, Merlin, what have we gotten into? she thought.
“Well, my poppet, it appears that you two are familiar with each other. Am I correct then in assuming that nothing unseemly is going on between you two? Did he mention anything about tonight?”
“No, sir, he did not. I think I would like to go to my room now.” Hermione turned away to leave the room, but his voice stopped her dead in her tracks.
“Of course, of course. Before you go, did he mention anything about, oh, I don’t know, marriage?”
Hermione whipped around. “What?” she screeched.
“Kindly moderate your voice, young lady! What would your mother say to hear you raise it in such a fashion? Go to your room and freshen up.” Lucius dropped a kiss on Hermione’s forehead before turning away to sit behind his desk. He immediately pulled paper and pen towards him and started writing. “Don’t forget the supper we are attending tonight at seven.”
Hermione turned and walked out of the door in a daze. It was a strange day when Hermione did not know what to think. This would be the second time in her life when she was so shocked. She mounted the staircase and turned down the corridor at the top. She was going to have to play “guess the room,” as she had no idea which room was hers.
“Little sister, I really think you should start paying attention to where you are headed,” a voice lazily drawled.
“Hmmm?”
“Your room is two doors back.” Draco opened the correct door and followed her into her room. He sprawled in one of the chairs and watched her as she paced around the room. “You know, you are acting very peculiar. What is going on, Hermione?”
“Draco, how well do we get along?” She was guessing on the name, but as he called her by her own name, she assumed his was the same as well.
Draco cocked an eyebrow, amused. “Well enough, I guess. You are my favorite twin sister. You adore me and I adore me. Why?”
“I was just curious. How well do you know the Duke of Walforth? Were those friends of his that dragged him away?” No time like the present to start gathering information. Now that some of the shock was wearing off, Hermione thought she would enjoy this, if only for a short while. It was very surreal to think of Lucius Malfoy as her father and Draco as her caring, twin brother. How ironic that the two people who hated her most in her world were actually related to her in this world.
“I know that he and father used to be friends, but had some sort of disagreement. Father has been trying to get back into his good graces and advance his influence within Parliament. We belong to the same Club but are not close intimates. Harry is his younger brother, and they are very close. Ron and Remus are close friends of His Grace’s.” Draco watched her make another circuit around the room. “You are going to make me dizzy. Lie down and rest, Hermne. I will see you later. I believe all of us have to attend the supper tonight.”
Hermione lay down on the bed. Hermne? She shuddered at that name. When she had time, she vowed to get to the bottom of that nickname. She was not very tired, but decided she could put the quiet time to good use. She was starting to suspect what had happened but needed to gather more information. She had to bite her tongue to keep from laughing when she thought about Severus and Harry being related. Now, she just had to figure out how to get out of this world, but in the meantime, things looked like they could be very entertaining.
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Aww,... what a wonderful end to a wonderful story! :D
I like happy-ever-afters! :D Having such a partner for Harry was a blast of genius!
Amazing,.. you really know what we readers like! Sev playing the piano indeed!
My fav chapter thus far! Why yellow and black for the ballroom? Is it yellow for hufflepuff and black for ravenclaw?
So the confrontation with Sybil finally came to pass! I was wonderin' if you'd write about thaaaaat. I really like how you made this story at such a tripping pace. I wonder if a vindictive Sybil will re-appear again?
This was such a sweet story. Thanks for all your effort and time!
The first 17 chapters were great but I felt that the last one was a bit of a let down. I guess I was expecting them to stay, but that's just not how that book works.
I liked the last chapter - this was a great story and good original idea - you are definitely tallented with imagination.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
thank you very much. that means a lot, especially as this was my first story!
OH MY! I'm short of breath knowing that this is over. I just loved it all so much. I hope they find a future together like the one they shared in the "past". With a little girl to love and cherish like they would have if they had stayed "in the book".Now I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in your next story! ^.~ Keep up the writing and I'll keep up the reading!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed my story. It will probably be about a month before I start posting my other stories. Just to warn you, though. I am going to post a DM/HG next. Don't worry, I will write another one about SS/HG soon though. I already have it outlined!
Oh, I am so glad I found this story! It was the most enjoyable experience I think I've had in a long time! I thank you so much for this wonderful story and all the emotions it gave birth to in me! (No pun intended!)Again, thank you.~Katie
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I am glad you found my story too! I am happy that you enjoyed it. I like long stories that make me feel different emotions. It makes me very happy that my little story did that for you!
Oh, it's over! I hope you put up an epilogue with a flashforward of some sort. I feel like it ended rather quickly, but an epilogue would tie that up.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I considered it, but I think I will leave the story ended this way. I will write another story though where I plan to have everything tied up nicely in the end. It just won't be a continuation of this one though. Yet. :)
It was a girl....that was heart-wrenching when they left what they had in the book world. Hopefully (since they both admit to it) they will find the same in this world. Thanks
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
I know. As a parent, it would crush me to leave behind a child. But I definitely wanted to give them a feeling of a happy future. I am glad that you liked the story. My next one won't have them leaving a child and a life behind. don't worry!
Oh man - they have everything in this story - good family and friends, wealth, wonderful lives, love and a baby and now poof they are back at Hogwarts without any of it. What a cliffie - please write more soon.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i just submitted the final chapter. hopefully it will be up soon. it is a long validation line though. the mods do a wonderful job of moving the stories thru the que so i am not too concerned.
Well that was a good chapter - what a way to get rid of Sybil - good writing. Well he loves her, she is pregnant - all is left is for her to love him and then they will be home??
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
thank you. glad you approve of the way i handled sybil. she was just getting too possessive and crazy. haa haa. but i still liked her character.
The family knows - it would be funny to have seen the look Lucius gave Severus at the table when he narrowed his eyes. I cannot wait to see how Sybil takes this.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
yes. i can just see lucius being the protective father for his only girl. even if it is his best friend. hmmm, wonder how a duel would turn out, with sabres instead of wands. oh, the wheels are turning for another story!
Well - Hermione's pregnant - Sybil is meddling and trying to pawn off her kid possibly as Severus's without saying much or just trying to hurt him - I am not sure yet - cannot wait to see what happens next.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
sibyl was just trying to interfer and get poor severus back into her arms. but of course, you probably have that figured out by now. glad you are liking the story so far.
Well - I liked the grape scene but if he chokes to death does she get out of the story - LOL. I cannot wait to see where you take them to get them to fall in love but their own place is a start for privacy.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
haa haa! i had never thought about that aspect. poor hermione would probably have been left in the book forever.
OMG evil cliff hanger!
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i know. but i figured i should have at least one in this story! it will be resolved soon if that helps! hee hee!
I have been waiting for an up-date to you FOREVER! Thank you BUT this was such a cliffie (such a cliffie) please do not keep us in suspense to long, PLEASE. (I wish you had left them there, they were so happy)
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i know. but i have always meant for them to return home. i promise, my next story won't be so cruel as to yank them away from such a happy place! glad you kept waiting for me to finish. i don't like abandoned stories, i just had to get real life straightened out first.
Good chapter - I loved how you had him come to her room - pick her up and then dump her on his bed - so manly. I wonder if they will be married when they get back to their own time.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i know. i have to stop reading romance novels. i keep picturing what fabio would do! haa haa!
Wow - so they are playing out the book and they have married - good chapter - the kiss between man and wife was good. I cannot wait to see how you handle the honeymoon.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
yes. i figured the honeymoon would have to wait until next chapter. weddings are so nice!
Well at least now they are considering give it a true go - the scene at the picnic and then him taking her home was good...not to much too fast - just right.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i tried to make it as realistic as possible. glad you agree. he will just have to bow to the inevitable.
I think the Albus of the story might know more than the other characters or everyone is interfering to get them together - either way it is a brillant concept. The sex talk - lol poor girl.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
albus is always knowing more than he lets on. i just wanted to make him a minor character though for this story. he is fun to write. yes, the all dreaded sex talk from your mother. ewww! haa haa! i had just finished watching "my big, fat, greek wedding".
Well at least Severus and Hermione understand what the book entails and what they need to do to get home. Poor Hermione - she did feel ill in this one. Severus is going to have to be less Snarky in this one to capture the love requirement.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
i know. i sort of based it on my pregnancy. oh the joys of experience! hee hee! life can't be too easy for severus, he will have to become a little more emotionally involved.
Well leave it to Severus to start the slytherin plotting early on by thinking of how to get out of marrying Hermione.
It is surreal how you set-up the characters but not in a bad way. The way that I meant was if they could have had a different path in life - what they would have become.
Response from kbauman24601 (Author of Happily Ever After)
hee hee! thank you. no matter how severus is portrayed, i just can't imagine him willing to marry anyone if at all possible. not that he didn't love her, he is just afraid of the commitment and possible closeness.