Deception
Pyttan175 Reviews | 6.25/10 (175 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Her forced, unhappy and loveless marriage had ended when Draco Malfoy was lost at sea. Now he's back.
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???????? Enough said...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
You might have to feel that way for a while longer ... hope you don't mind. 
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
You might have to feel that way for a while longer ... hope you don't mind.
Oh crap I dont know if its a good thing Draco is back or a bad thing! When is the next chapter coming so I can stop screaming and pulling out my hair??
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
*Giggles* Next chapter was 9 in queue last time I checked. This story is already finished, so as soon as a chapter goes up, I'll post the next one.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
*Giggles* Next chapter was 9 in queue last time I checked. This story is already finished, so as soon as a chapter goes up, I'll post the next one.
Good heavens she was drugged into marrying Draco? And then continued to be drugged. Funny she seems to just pissed at Lucius. Didnt Draco have anything to do with it too? I hope to hell she doesnt plan on eatting or drinking anything while at the manor. ACK!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Horrid isn't it. And Draco's dead so she only has Lucius and Narcissa to be angry with, poor thing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Horrid isn't it. And Draco's dead so she only has Lucius and Narcissa to be angry with, poor thing.
Lucius talking about the Malfoy family line gives me the willies. I do appreciate Hermione sense of humor about her inlaws.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. The Malfoy sense of family is scary. At least in this story. And that sense of humour ... She needs it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. The Malfoy sense of family is scary. At least in this story. And that sense of humour ... She needs it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Good grief - how did she get into this in the first place? Did they have an arrangement? Was it love? Ever? Now? Never?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Ah. That is the big question at this point. It will be explained ... Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Ah. That is the big question at this point. It will be explained ... Thank you for reading and reviewing.
This is a wonderful story - so full of twists and turns!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I had a hard time getting it to work at times and I'm so happy to hear you liked it all the way through. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I had a hard time getting it to work at times and I'm so happy to hear you liked it all the way through. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Snape-as-Ginny is hilarious! How did Snape persuade Draco to turn up and agree to a divorce?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
COuldn't help myself. The idea was just too fun not to do. Glad you found it fun too.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
COuldn't help myself. The idea was just too fun not to do. Glad you found it fun too.
Plucky is a brilliant little character!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I like house elves so much and I think fandom sees far too little of them. It means a lot to me that you like my little hous elf.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I like house elves so much and I think fandom sees far too little of them. It means a lot to me that you like my little hous elf.
Where has he been all this time? Will he have done anything that bad?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm sorry. Still can't say ... we'll get there ... eventually ;)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm sorry. Still can't say ... we'll get there ... eventually ;)
What an awful time for him to make a reappearance! Interesting that his parents don't know he's alive...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Well, we will get to that part ... so gad you are still with me and this story!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Well, we will get to that part ... so gad you are still with me and this story!
Phwoar! Hot stuff, pyttan!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you. This is the only proper lemons I've ever written so I'm glad you seem to like it.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you. This is the only proper lemons I've ever written so I'm glad you seem to like it.
Can they do that? I really, really hope they can!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes they can :). Maybe.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes they can :). Maybe.
Maybe Draco as an option is less distasteful after all?
Of course not!
"Is this your real face, then? How do I know?"
How does he do it?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Of course she doesn't want Draco. Fake Draco needs to work on his selfesteem. And the way I'm thinking fake Draco played in the potionslab to much and ended up more than a bit of an animorphmagus.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Of course she doesn't want Draco. Fake Draco needs to work on his selfesteem. And the way I'm thinking fake Draco played in the potionslab to much and ended up more than a bit of an animorphmagus.
Yay for her secret would-be husband. Of course, all this begs who, why and just where is the real Draco?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Can't tell you. It would totally sink the rest of the story if I answered you ;)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Can't tell you. It would totally sink the rest of the story if I answered you ;)
Narcissa and Lucius are just foul! I'm starting to like this Draco.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. Draco does seem to have cleaned up his act since he came back, sticking up for Hermione.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. Draco does seem to have cleaned up his act since he came back, sticking up for Hermione.
His persistence is a little terrifying! Lucius' little tantrum was amusing - he's not used to a Draco who answers back apparently.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Not used to having opposition at all, Lucius is. And yes, Draco is very frightening when presistent. Rather obsessive and scary, I would say.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Not used to having opposition at all, Lucius is. And yes, Draco is very frightening when presistent. Rather obsessive and scary, I would say.
"Worthless Mudblood slut." Draco was screaming the words at her, and she just didn't understand. She loved him ...
How impossible - poor Hermione.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Such a horrible, horrible situation and no way out. Poor Hermione.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Such a horrible, horrible situation and no way out. Poor Hermione.
Whoever he is, it can't help that he looks like Draco!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
What? Can't hlp he looks like Draco? I don't understand ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
What? Can't hlp he looks like Draco? I don't understand ...
Poor Hermione, she's so broken in this. It must have been such a relief that she thought Draco was dead.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. And such a shock for her, discovering that he's alive ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. And such a shock for her, discovering that he's alive ...
What an awful family! That threat to her family was incredible unsubtle. Boo, Lucius!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Lucius is mean, blunt and he suck. I second your Booing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Lucius is mean, blunt and he suck. I second your Booing.
I think there's an awful lot that young Plucky isn't telling me!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Young Plucky is an odd one. A lot of that going around among the house elves :D. I love house eleve and we see far too little of them in HP fan fic.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Young Plucky is an odd one. A lot of that going around among the house elves :D. I love house eleve and we see far too little of them in HP fan fic.
I love that she's willing to fight him if needs be!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. She isn't completely downtrodden. She never will be and I love that about Hermione.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. She isn't completely downtrodden. She never will be and I love that about Hermione.
Oh no! The evil Draco returns!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
DAnd that is a bad, bad thing indeed.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
DAnd that is a bad, bad thing indeed.
I love that Harry is still so concerned about her :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Harry and Hermione are pretty much brother and sister to my way of thinking. Siblings that like each other and will be there for each other. I love that about them.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Harry and Hermione are pretty much brother and sister to my way of thinking. Siblings that like each other and will be there for each other. I love that about them.
Ooh, I remember this one! Hermione's in for a shock when she gets to the manor!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. Poor Hermione. Once a Malfoy always aMalfoy, and al that.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Yes. Poor Hermione. Once a Malfoy always aMalfoy, and al that.