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Deception

Pyttan

175 Reviews | 6.25/10 (175 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 22,908 Words 20 Chapters Complete

Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape

Her forced, unhappy and loveless marriage had ended when Draco Malfoy was lost at sea. Now he's back.

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0/10

Oohhh, madam authoress, I think I'll be very careful to never get on your bad side !! You've exacted the most devastating revenge of all !! This was quite the tale - and I enjoyed every chapter thoroughly !! And now, you may have a moment's respite, but only a moment's - since your closing AN promise new delights !!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you and I'm so happy you found the story entertaining. And I thought the punishment fitted the crimes of Lucius and Draco rather well. Somehow I imagined that Severus would like the connection too, and it pleases me no end that you think so too. My next project is already finished. I've written a story for the SSHG Exchange and now I'm working on my Hoggywartyxmas. So, no respite at all really. On the other hand I get grumpy and morose when I'm not writing so ... Now, let's talk about you: can I expect another Winter Apples story soon?

Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)

I've got the next chappie of IHN on the front burner now - and Draco's been in my head as well, so...

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you and I'm so happy you found the story entertaining. And I thought the punishment fitted the crimes of Lucius and Draco rather well. Somehow I imagined that Severus would like the connection too, and it pleases me no end that you think so too. My next project is already finished. I've written a story for the SSHG Exchange and now I'm working on my Hoggywartyxmas. So, no respite at all really. On the other hand I get grumpy and morose when I'm not writing so ... Now, let's talk about you: can I expect another Winter Apples story soon?

Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)

I've got the next chappie of IHN on the front burner now - and Draco's been in my head as well, so...

10/10

This has been a very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. I'm feeling a tad wistful now that the whole story is posted. And thank you for reading and reviewing. It meant a lot to me, and my SSHG Exchange story for this year, has a lot to thank you, and the others who reviewed this story, for. So thank you for keeping me company.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. I'm feeling a tad wistful now that the whole story is posted. And thank you for reading and reviewing. It meant a lot to me, and my SSHG Exchange story for this year, has a lot to thank you, and the others who reviewed this story, for. So thank you for keeping me company.

0/10

Perhaps our boy was advised that failure to cooperate would result in achieving ferrethood on a permanant basis... He may wish for that in the long run - since it appears several of the ladies already have their fangs and claws sharpened and ready to drag whatever advantage they can from his return. I have no doubt the closing chapter is going to be one hell of a ride !!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yeah! Draco is in for it now with those two wanting him. *Snickers* And now I might not dare to post the last chapter ... high expectations scare me witless you realise.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yeah! Draco is in for it now with those two wanting him. *Snickers* And now I might not dare to post the last chapter ... high expectations scare me witless you realise.

10/10

Wow, what does Sev have on Draco to pull this one off?

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Well. It could be anything from a convoluted friendship to sheer brute force. ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Well. It could be anything from a convoluted friendship to sheer brute force. ;)

10/10

LOL She saw through the Ginny look straight away! :)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! Of course she did. I imagine that it would be more difficult posing at someone's double ratherthan change one's look more randomly. But I do think Ginny would be a good look for him ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! Of course she did. I imagine that it would be more difficult posing at someone's double ratherthan change one's look more randomly. But I do think Ginny would be a good look for him ;)

10/10

hahahahaha smooth :) though I'm saddened to hear this is the 2nd last chapter :(

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! And I'm a bit sad too. It's been so nice to publish this piece since you readers have been so very nice about it. But a story needs an end ...

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! And I'm a bit sad too. It's been so nice to publish this piece since you readers have been so very nice about it. But a story needs an end ...

10/10

Ah, Severus, Ginny wouldn't have said, "I am to remove you from the house," she would've just said, "Let's go!" But then, perhaps, you intended to be transparent to Hermione, to forestall any obvious questions as to why Ginny would be there in the first place...

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! He was a bit arrogant about that wasn't he. But I think that he deep down wanted to be recognised for who he really was. So he gave it away, not on purpose maybe, but unconsciously. ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! He was a bit arrogant about that wasn't he. But I think that he deep down wanted to be recognised for who he really was. So he gave it away, not on purpose maybe, but unconsciously. ;)

9/10

love the little twist, in this great chapie..

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! I liked it too so I'm very pleased that you found it so too and chose to tell me about it.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

The twist, I meant in my previous reply. And I'm very pleased you loked the chapter too. Thanks again.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! I liked it too so I'm very pleased that you found it so too and chose to tell me about it.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

The twist, I meant in my previous reply. And I'm very pleased you loked the chapter too. Thanks again.

10/10

The mental image of Severus trying to impersonate Ginny Potter is just priceless. Ginny's pretty face and Severus' snarl would be a mismatch indeed. But, was Draco under the Imperius curse? Or some other more primitive form of coercion?

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

But I think Ginny's smirk and Severus' smirk would work quite well. And you'll have to wait for the last chapter before you get the answer for those two last questions. :)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

But I think Ginny's smirk and Severus' smirk would work quite well. And you'll have to wait for the last chapter before you get the answer for those two last questions. :)

10/10

Yay! It did pay to trust him. Now, I just wonder what was said or done to Draco to convince him to go along with this plan.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Indeed it did. But he still deserves to be smacked hard on the back of his head. Hermione is far too tolerant. And there is one single chapter left ... ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Indeed it did. But he still deserves to be smacked hard on the back of his head. Hermione is far too tolerant. And there is one single chapter left ... ;)

10/10

oops. I forgot to rate your story!! Thanks for the chapter!!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! For both reading and reviewing.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Thank you so much! For both reading and reviewing.

0/10

Oh God!! At least!! Hermione is free!! and with Severus!! But... what will happen with Draco?? He could say the truth, and Hermione would be in troubles!!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

All I have to say is: one chapter left ... ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

All I have to say is: one chapter left ... ;)

10/10

Oh well, it was a nice scheme while it lasted.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes it was. But Severus knows how to improvise. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Two more chapters to go ...

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes it was. But Severus knows how to improvise. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Two more chapters to go ...

10/10

Sev needs a good smack upside the head. Once his migraine is better, so he can appreciate it properly.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

He needs to learn how to share doesn't he? And I totally agree: a swift, firm smack in the back of his head is what he deserves.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

He needs to learn how to share doesn't he? And I totally agree: a swift, firm smack in the back of his head is what he deserves.

10/10

I love a Sev who will blithely kill for his loved ones.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

And I truly think he would too. And he wouldn't even think twice ...

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

And I truly think he would too. And he wouldn't even think twice ...

10/10

~fan~ ~fan~ ~fan~ ~fan~ is it warm in here, or is it just me?

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

I hope it's warm. Hot even ;). It is my first piece of explicit smut so I'm very happy it warmed you up a bit.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

I hope it's warm. Hot even ;). It is my first piece of explicit smut so I'm very happy it warmed you up a bit.

10/10

Malfoy lifestyle without the Malfoy attached. Such a deal :D

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! It is, isn't it. And having Lucius cater to your whims in the meantime ... not a bad deal at all.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! It is, isn't it. And having Lucius cater to your whims in the meantime ... not a bad deal at all.

10/10

Sevametamorphmagus? How much fun has that go to be? :)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Endless fun, actually ;).

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Endless fun, actually ;).

10/10

Ahhh, Hermione's hair, the natural enemy of the house elf, lol. It is going to be hard for her to just trust him. I do hope that he at least shares a little info with her. Can't wait to see what he has planned!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! Indeed her hair is that. But the problem is that he hasn't learn't to share. I wouldgo so far as to say he hates sharing. Which is both a good and a bad thing in this scenario. And I so hope you'll like the two last chapters.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Heh! Indeed her hair is that. But the problem is that he hasn't learn't to share. I wouldgo so far as to say he hates sharing. Which is both a good and a bad thing in this scenario. And I so hope you'll like the two last chapters.

0/10

Ahhh, evil cliffie - Draco's going to show up?!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes, evil cliffie, and I'm not telling. ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes, evil cliffie, and I'm not telling. ;)

10/10

Mmmmm, nice kiss. Am hoping fake-Draco isn't classed eith thr exceptions.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Writing good kisses are hard, so thank you for telling me.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Writing good kisses are hard, so thank you for telling me.

10/10

Hermione is hiding but i'd like to be a doxy in the curtain for this fight.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

And you will be ... in a way. :D

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

And you will be ... in a way. :D

10/10

Well, now. I'm very curious about the parts of the story 'Draco' left out.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

It does seem to be a fair part missing, doesn't it? ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

It does seem to be a fair part missing, doesn't it? ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing.

10/10

That was almost a "Miss Granger". Hee!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes indeed. And who what call her Miss Granger? Hmmm ... Oh, Flitwick would! ;)

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Yes indeed. And who what call her Miss Granger? Hmmm ... Oh, Flitwick would! ;)

10/10

Good for Harry, checking up on Hermione.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Harry is sweet. I always liked him. But what can he do qhen she is being stubborn, trying to protect the ones she love. Poor Harry and poor Hermione.

Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)

Harry is sweet. I always liked him. But what can he do qhen she is being stubborn, trying to protect the ones she love. Poor Harry and poor Hermione.

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