Deception
Pyttan175 Reviews | 6.25/10 (175 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Her forced, unhappy and loveless marriage had ended when Draco Malfoy was lost at sea. Now he's back.
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She didn't seem too perturbed it was Snape. She just wanted to be sure it was him! Yay! :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
She's a bit drunk. And it wasn't Draco. And an old hero of hers turns out to be alive. Life feels quitegood a this point I would say. Now, ask me if Snapeis the type to take advantage ... Thank you for reading and reviwing. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Is Snape the type to take advantage? :D
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
XD I think the next two chapters might answer that. *Giggles some more*
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
She's a bit drunk. And it wasn't Draco. And an old hero of hers turns out to be alive. Life feels quitegood a this point I would say. Now, ask me if Snapeis the type to take advantage ... Thank you for reading and reviwing. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Is Snape the type to take advantage? :D
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
XD I think the next two chapters might answer that. *Giggles some more*
Severus!!!!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
But ... but ... but ... I thought he died? Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
But ... but ... but ... I thought he died? Thank you for reading and reviewing.
It's Severus. Enough said :) Although I'm not sure how Snape could be interested in Hermione....
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm still not admitting to anything. However, your question is one I have asked myself at several occations. Not an easy pairing, at least to my mind:). Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm still not admitting to anything. However, your question is one I have asked myself at several occations. Not an easy pairing, at least to my mind:). Thank you for reading and reviewing.
The "Miss...Hermione" was a total dead giveaway! HAHA... it's Snape! Wonderfully written, dear author :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm admitting nothing. But I thank you so much for your kind words. I hope you'll like the rest of the story.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm admitting nothing. But I thank you so much for your kind words. I hope you'll like the rest of the story.
You were right, more questions. At least she had her wand, although, if she continues to turn it on him, it may not last. My new guesses are: 1) It's really Draco, but he's been abducted by aliens, and upon return is a new person. 2)Severus' body was damaged, draco's was in good shape when he died, so Snape's insides and Draco's outsides combined to form a new improved person. 3)Draco is from an alternate universe where he is sweet and Hermione is a bitch. Am I ever going to get close? :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
The way I see it you don't need to be close because I'm thinking your plotbunnies are better than mine, and I actually would like to use at least one or two of them, with your expressed premission of course. Thank you for reading and reviewing. So glad to still have you along with me!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Haha. I hereby declare any plot bunny left in a review is open source and may be snagged at any time. So long as the resulting story is made available for my reading pleasure. :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
The way I see it you don't need to be close because I'm thinking your plotbunnies are better than mine, and I actually would like to use at least one or two of them, with your expressed premission of course. Thank you for reading and reviewing. So glad to still have you along with me!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Haha. I hereby declare any plot bunny left in a review is open source and may be snagged at any time. So long as the resulting story is made available for my reading pleasure. :)
It's Severus - he almost called her Miss Granger - yep, it's him... no, it's not... it's Draco... no, it's - oh hell, woman... You are EVIL and BRILLIANT !!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I could just hug you! I'm so glad you enjoy reading this tale. It ran off with me and did its own thing and for a while I wasn't sure about it. Thank you, dear!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I could just hug you! I'm so glad you enjoy reading this tale. It ran off with me and did its own thing and for a while I wasn't sure about it. Thank you, dear!
Oh man, that was too short. I need more! I haven't a clue what's going on. Hermione seems to have covered many bases with no answers. My new theories are long lost twin, Lucius from the past using a time turner, or Hermione is in Azkaban having lost her mind, and this is all in her head, LOL. Give me another chapter and I'll speculate some more. :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Hermione, poor thing, hasn't got a clue either ... and it'll get worse. Two chapters are in queue. Both slightly longer than this one, and I'm fondly hoping they will give you even more questions, rather than answers as you read them. I'm cruel that way ;). Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you'll like the rest ofthe story.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Hermione, poor thing, hasn't got a clue either ... and it'll get worse. Two chapters are in queue. Both slightly longer than this one, and I'm fondly hoping they will give you even more questions, rather than answers as you read them. I'm cruel that way ;). Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you'll like the rest ofthe story.
You always leave me begging for more! Good update
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. More is on the way. And I hope I'll keep you begging ;).
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. More is on the way. And I hope I'll keep you begging ;).
The only wizard we know of with a sufficient level of skill would be Severus - but to what end?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
You have a point. But Severus is dead ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
And I'm so glad you are still following my story!
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Well in SOME peoples' perceptions, Severus is dead - however there are those of us who hold different views on the matter, you see.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
That is a good point. Buuuuuut ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
You have a point. But Severus is dead ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
And I'm so glad you are still following my story!
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Well in SOME peoples' perceptions, Severus is dead - however there are those of us who hold different views on the matter, you see.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
That is a good point. Buuuuuut ...
Well, it seems clear it's not Draco. Wonder if Lucius knows but it is conveniently overlooking the fact?
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
It's been years, so I think that Lucius accepts any changes his son displays as something natural in the circumstances. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
It's been years, so I think that Lucius accepts any changes his son displays as something natural in the circumstances. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Excellent!!!!!!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so.
Oh, I do like Plucky - let's get her together with Turtlefoot! What a time they'd have !!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Oh, that would be nice. They would get on wonderfully! I'm going to marry Plucky off at some point, just so you know. And I know to whom.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Oh, that would be nice. They would get on wonderfully! I'm going to marry Plucky off at some point, just so you know. And I know to whom.
This dinner should be interesting, or terrifying.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Terrifying, actually. Utterly horrofying.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Terrifying, actually. Utterly horrofying.
Very Interesting, can't wait to read more.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that, and the next chapter is in queue already. The story is finished, and I'll post regularly.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I'm very happy to hear that, and the next chapter is in queue already. The story is finished, and I'll post regularly.
This is chilling and you've got my head awhirl with questions, questions, questions....
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! more questions are coming up in the next chapter ...
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! more questions are coming up in the next chapter ...
Ok - so now I'm wanting more.... Next chapter is in queue, yes???
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm very pleased that you do, and yes, it is.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm very pleased that you do, and yes, it is.
OOOO! this is going to be good!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I hope you'll continue to think so as we go along.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you! I hope you'll continue to think so as we go along.
Wonderful story!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much. I'm very happy you liked it.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much. I'm very happy you liked it.
Well, that was fun! I'd love to know "what happens next" and hope you'll write more. Thanks for your work!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm so glad you think so, and thank you for telling me so. I will write more. An epilogue for this one might have to wait since I have a couple (read as five) projects I need to finish. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I'm so glad you think so, and thank you for telling me so. I will write more. An epilogue for this one might have to wait since I have a couple (read as five) projects I need to finish. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
He's right. Better to get your revenge and not be caught, rather than get all gloaty about it and get your comeuppance! :D
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Indeed it is. The only good revenge is the one you get away with ;). Thank you so much for following the story, reading and reviewing!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Indeed it is. The only good revenge is the one you get away with ;). Thank you so much for following the story, reading and reviewing!
A great read all around: I enjoyed this thoroughly!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the read!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the read!
waw!!! that was a wonderful story!! I loved the end!!Severus were very smart!! I love him XD jajajaja thanks for the chapter... thank you very much!!!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story along the way! And I kind of love Severus too ;)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story along the way! And I kind of love Severus too ;)
I love that the ending both explained what happened, and indicates that there will be a happily ever after of sorts without being too long winded. We know all we need to, and this ended perfectly. Nicely done!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I worried about the ending as I wrote this, but in the end, being a Hermione POV, this felt ... right, I suppose. With that said I'm so very happy, and flattered, that you feel this way about the chapter and also very glad that you chose to tell me about it. Thank you for keeping me and my story company.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
I worried about the ending as I wrote this, but in the end, being a Hermione POV, this felt ... right, I suppose. With that said I'm so very happy, and flattered, that you feel this way about the chapter and also very glad that you chose to tell me about it. Thank you for keeping me and my story company.
This was such a great read! I enjoyed the ride we were taken on and am so tickled with the ending "explanations". Very fitting revenge was delievered. Thank you so much for sharing this!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means a lot to me to hear that you liked it. Especially that you liked the ending. I worried about it you see, since it wasn't much action in it. And as far as the revenge went, it felt like something Sverus would have dealt out. So thank you again!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means a lot to me to hear that you liked it. Especially that you liked the ending. I worried about it you see, since it wasn't much action in it. And as far as the revenge went, it felt like something Sverus would have dealt out. So thank you again!
awesome!!! thanks for the explanations :) any chance of an epilogue? :)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you sp much! It has meant a lot to me to recieve your reviews and they actually helped me along as I wrote another story. And your request actually gave me an idea. Not an epilogue exactly since you will be able to read it as its own story, but it could easily be a continuation of this if one wanted it to be ... After New Year maybe? ;)
Response from Pyttan (Author of Deception)
Thank you sp much! It has meant a lot to me to recieve your reviews and they actually helped me along as I wrote another story. And your request actually gave me an idea. Not an epilogue exactly since you will be able to read it as its own story, but it could easily be a continuation of this if one wanted it to be ... After New Year maybe? ;)