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Forgotten
hexgirl147 Reviews | 6.71/10 (147 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Miss Granger,
I have something which belongs to you. If you wish to claim it, my home address is 49 Spinner’s End, Swinton. 8.30p.m on Tuesday would suit me best.
Severus Snape
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What a great story! I'm looking forward to the next developments.
This was a really great story! I liked it, will you ever add more to it? It would be great if you did. :-)
it's 2014 now. what have you been up to, now?
I am just roaming through my bookmarks tonight, leaving a note on those stories that haven't been updated for awhile. Just a quick message to say that I- and surely many others- would still love to see this updated. Happy writing!
I'm still checking for the next chapter too... This was such a great beginning, and I truly cannot forget the story. You really got me hooked... Please continue it!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hi. Thanks for your comment and for sticking with this; I truly appreciate it. I have had so much RL stuff going on that I have had little time to catch up on my writing, but the muse has been stirring lately, so I'm about ready to get back to this.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hi. Thanks for your comment and for sticking with this; I truly appreciate it. I have had so much RL stuff going on that I have had little time to catch up on my writing, but the muse has been stirring lately, so I'm about ready to get back to this.
Still checking for the next chapter. I hope you will update soon. :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I'm concentrating on the LJ SS/HG gift exchange at the moment, but that is coming to a close so I will be concentrating on 'Forgotten', (which Im thinking of changing to 'Not Forgotten':)))) very soon. Thanks for sticking with it - I won't let you down.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I'm concentrating on the LJ SS/HG gift exchange at the moment, but that is coming to a close so I will be concentrating on 'Forgotten', (which Im thinking of changing to 'Not Forgotten':)))) very soon. Thanks for sticking with it - I won't let you down.
Oh WOW I never would have guessed that Snape knew as well. Talk about being sneaky! I am loving the direction this is going!!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Glad to have surprised you. It HAS been mentioned that I've been chanelling my inner Slytherin for this fic :))
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Glad to have surprised you. It HAS been mentioned that I've been chanelling my inner Slytherin for this fic :))
Oh WOW I never would have guessed that Snape knew as well. Talk about being sneaky! I am loving the direction this is going!!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
And thank you very much for reading on and for reviewing. I hope you like the rest of it.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
And thank you very much for reading on and for reviewing. I hope you like the rest of it.
Curious. Hermione went back in time to save Snape and now she doesnt want to tell him? Hummm Severus is a fool if he thinks berating Hermione is going to make her confess. Silly man.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well, that's one way of interpreting it ... :) It remains to be seen if you are right :))Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well, that's one way of interpreting it ... :) It remains to be seen if you are right :))Thanks for reading and reviewing.
love this...keep up the good work.
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Thank you.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you.
Once again, I've broken my rule of not reading works in progress, (I get so impatient), and now I read this bit of loveliness. I have this story bookmarked, and it has been added to the list of stories I desperately want to see completed. I am loving it so far!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well I'm very glad you broke your rule. I won't let you down, I promise :) Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm working on the next installment.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well I'm very glad you broke your rule. I won't let you down, I promise :) Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm working on the next installment.
Very much adore this story. So twisty and involved. Looking forward to reading the aftermath.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. Aftermath up very soon :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. Aftermath up very soon :)
This is such a beautiful, powerful and nuanced story. Your Snape is supremely stoic - I absolutely love it. Very true-to-life yet intriguing scenes - the ending was a beautiful surprise even despite being rather logical overall. I cannot wait to read more - keep up all the good work, and thank you so much for delightful bedtime reading! :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you for such a wonderful and encouraging review. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far. The next chapter is all finished and at the beta stage, then it only has the queue to contend with.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you for such a wonderful and encouraging review. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it so far. The next chapter is all finished and at the beta stage, then it only has the queue to contend with.
Oh, please, update soon! I am so absolutely in love with this story and your brilliant writing! Fantastic! Breathtaking.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Oh thank you so much. I have completed the next chapter and am just in the process of polishing it up, so it should be queued soon.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Oh thank you so much. I have completed the next chapter and am just in the process of polishing it up, so it should be queued soon.
AWWWWW Oh my god. That was incredible. You didn't fail to deliver. God I need more now. Brilliant. Your style is great. I love how you change our perception through subtle things! It's wonderful
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awww! Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thanks for continuing to read and review. I hope to get the next chapter out soon.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awww! Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thanks for continuing to read and review. I hope to get the next chapter out soon.
"She didn't flinch when she felt the warmth of his fingers surround her hand as it lay on the bed-sheet between them. When he lifted her hand to his lips and gently grazed the flesh of her palm, Hermione knew that her young and tender heart could never now belong to her sweetly ignorant childhood friend."Arrrggghhh! I don't know if they did or they didn't, but when Severus took her hand and she felt his softly sensual lips caress her palm, that was a joining. His lips felt "like the delicious feel of silk on bare skin [and] they caressed her senses. Yes, mam. That's a joining. Or perhaps they did consumate this spell, and the memory of that act was not among the memories he returned to her.However it happened, I am left with the notion that those two were joined and that their futures are forever linked. The foundation has been laid down and now it only remains for them come to realize how much they do care for each other.Thanks for another great chapter!Beth
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I'm glad you are left with a feeling of uncertainty about whether they did or didn't perform the spell, I'd hoped that would be the case. It's quite important to the rest of the story that there is a feeling of ambiguity about it. But I'm also glad you felt that even if they didn't perform it, that they experienced a closeness; you described it as 'a joining' which fits perfectly. Absolutely right again when you say that after this experience their futures are forever linked. Thanks for the wonderfully peseptive review which is much appreciated.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I'm glad you are left with a feeling of uncertainty about whether they did or didn't perform the spell, I'd hoped that would be the case. It's quite important to the rest of the story that there is a feeling of ambiguity about it. But I'm also glad you felt that even if they didn't perform it, that they experienced a closeness; you described it as 'a joining' which fits perfectly. Absolutely right again when you say that after this experience their futures are forever linked. Thanks for the wonderfully peseptive review which is much appreciated.
Oh, my.... what a shock to return to the present with THESE memories -- of how hard she wanted to keep the memories, how strongly he warned her of the dangers. I'm glad it's all out in the open now. Thank you for the new chapter!!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you! Yes, now it is all out in the open, the problem remains of what to do with their new awareness of each other and how each will react to the other.Thank you for sticking with it so far.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you! Yes, now it is all out in the open, the problem remains of what to do with their new awareness of each other and how each will react to the other.Thank you for sticking with it so far.
Very good chapter, I really enjoyed it so much. Nice and long. Lots of thought and excellent writitng. Looking forward to more.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. More on the way soon (I hope) ;)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. More on the way soon (I hope) ;)
Very good chapter, I really enjoyed it so much. Nice and long. Lots of thought and excellent writitng. Looking forward to more.
Oh, Hexgirl, you've outdone yourself here. So much emotion in this chapter. Many conflicting feelings, and yet it all melds together to bring us to the end of the chapter. The end where everything and nothing happens. I assume that he went ahead and obliviated her, but I suppose there is a chance that they proceded with the spell, and we just didn't get to see the details. So hard to say. The intimacy of this chapter was incredible, especially, I suppose, because they have progressed from him supposedly attacking and her trying to escape, to lying in bed together in such gentle manner, all in such a short span of time. I love, love, loved this!I still wonder though, in the beginning, he told her that she may not like what she sees in the memories. Is there more to come? Does he think she won't be happy because they actually went though with it, and he thinks she will be repulsed that they slept together? Or will she be angry because after all that discussion and set up, he obliviated her anyway, and she feels betrayed. Oooh, I am so excited (and maybe a little nervous) to see what happens!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
You have reacted to the end of the chapter just as I'd hoped so I'm very relieved and grateful for that. I had hoped that the reader would be left wondering. I wanted it to be a sensual and evocative chapter without actually "going there". And I also wanted it to seem plausible and not rushed and hasty and forced, which is hard to achieve when, as you say, they moved from being bitter enemies to practically lovers in very short space of time. I'm glad you remembered that he had told her that she may not like what she sees, and I suppose all I can say is that her reaction to her returned memories will clear that up.Nervous huh? Me too ;)Thanks for your incredibly insightful and thoughtful review.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
You have reacted to the end of the chapter just as I'd hoped so I'm very relieved and grateful for that. I had hoped that the reader would be left wondering. I wanted it to be a sensual and evocative chapter without actually "going there". And I also wanted it to seem plausible and not rushed and hasty and forced, which is hard to achieve when, as you say, they moved from being bitter enemies to practically lovers in very short space of time. I'm glad you remembered that he had told her that she may not like what she sees, and I suppose all I can say is that her reaction to her returned memories will clear that up.Nervous huh? Me too ;)Thanks for your incredibly insightful and thoughtful review.
Ah!! You can't just stop! lol actually you can, you tied that off amazingly well. Great work, I am eager for the next chapter!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Sorry! ;) I think it was perhaps best to let the curtain fall on this occassion though. Thanks for your feedback, the next one is in progress and I hope it won't be too far away now.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Sorry! ;) I think it was perhaps best to let the curtain fall on this occassion though. Thanks for your feedback, the next one is in progress and I hope it won't be too far away now.
Well, this chapter cleared things up. Severus did seem to feel that Hermione betrayed him in some way, but of course she didn't remember. I'm looking forward to seeing how she reacts to her memories.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I'm glad you feel it cleared some things up. Much more to come though, things are just beginning for Severus and Hermione. Thank you for reviewing.
I'm rather suspicious when people ask me to make promises. I'm sure you can understand why?' - Double HA!'You are wrong; nothing is more seductive than a keen mind and an eagerness for knowledge.' (Tell her, Severus!)For the purposes of Perpetuus,' he said, 'being ourselves is essential. We do not have the release of imagination to get us through this.' - Hexgirl, the rollercoaster of emotions and experiences along with the fluttering heartbeats of this chapter just go endlessly on - you've surpassed my Gothic, stoic dreams with your portrayals - just want it to continue on and on - every nuance and breath and look... and you've so pointedly interjected such wonderful banter being these two in the midst of the angsty atmosphere and sensuous expectations and overtone; Hermione's and Severus' insightfulness and melding one with the other, a meeting of mind and will, drawn moment by moment together (and dare I hope hearts, soul, and why not body while I'm at it? - hehe!). Love your ending - leaving one to imagine what one will! It's so deliciously, wickedly brilliant of you to leave us yearning to know, but at the same time, I don't want to - it's so intimate that I wish it to be left with this intimate mystery that only Severus knows, and if and when he wishes, he'll share the memory of it with Hermione... and if he shares it with you, please have mercy on us and gives us, maybe, a peak (I'm lying--details, of course!)... breathlessly awaiting more! (where's our emoticons?
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thanks for your fabulous review, Nag. I'm sure I don't deserve it but I'm going to bask in the praise anyway. A melding of hearts, souls and bodies!!!??? Steady on! We've a few chapters to go yet before we get to proper melding!! ;) But we'll get there! If Severus shares it with me, I'll definitely give you an eye-ful, I promise :) Have one of these:and maybe a couple of these:
I ran out of time to review back when I read this, and somehow I never made it back. I am too anxious to read on to stop here for long, but what I do remember (and love) most from thsi chapter were the emotions. They, both theirs and mine, were all over the place. In a good way, of course. What a relief it must have been for Severus to get that off of his chest, even if she won't remember. Okay, moving on ...
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awww thanks for making the time to give me some feedback, much appreciated I can tell you. Speaking of emotions, I think mine were pretty full-on when I wrote this as you can probably tell ;)
i liked the way they worked that out , they both are basket cases lol now what will she do to keep him? bring on the next chapter!!! thanks.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well let's face it, basket cases are the best ones to write about, if they were both clinically sane they'd be boring! Yes, well how will Hermione react now is the question. Next chapter in progress and I hope to post it soon. Thank you for your feedback.