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hexgirl147 Reviews | 6.71/10 (147 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Miss Granger,
I have something which belongs to you. If you wish to claim it, my home address is 49 Spinner’s End, Swinton. 8.30p.m on Tuesday would suit me best.
Severus Snape
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I just wanted their dialogue to go on and on - yum! But, the fabulous climax of the ending of this chapter is so fast- heartbeatingly wonderful, leaving us all in breathless *anticipation*! The way you've woven and layered on and revealed all of the information and clues is just so delicious, Severus and Hermione are sooo fantastically in character - I can't squee enough!!! Severus has such dignified, reserved stealth and precision with every look and word *swooning* and Hermione equally has such dignity and determination, with a touch of vulnerability and compassion beyond her control - just wonderful! xxx
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awwww! Thank you for saying such nice things. I'm glad Severus and Hermione seem in character, or as much as is possible when us fanfic writers force them to do things their creator would be appalled at. I think Hermione always feels a too in awe of Severus to feel anythging but vulnerable (wouldn't we all?) :)
Ooh, excellent twist! Well, it was best that Harry "die" so Hermione would have messed things up if she had given the tears to him. I wonder if Severus would like to know that part of the story. Thank you for the new chapter!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you. Glad you liked it. There is plenty that each other don't know yet, and I have a feeling that Snape knows more than we think.
Ohhhh this is good.. I can't wait to find out just what happen the day he gave them to her...
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. There is much to be revealed, but the next chapter is queued and will be along soon.
What an awful place to leave us! Wonderful, wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what she finds in those memories and how she feels about it. I do hope a new chapter is on the way!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Yeah! Sorry about the cliffie. The next few chapters deal with her returned memories and the first of those is in the queue and should be posted soon. Thanks for reading.
What a fantastic start! I am not supposed to be starting any new stories; that's a self imposed rule that no one seems to be enforcing. So here I am, and yay for me because this is an exceptionally intriguing start. I would say more great things, but there is another chapter available and I am greedy!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
LOL! I should feel guilty then, but I don't. Thanks for breaking your 'no new fics' rule.
Oh my gosh, oh my goodness.... I was so excited to see that this story had updated. It was a wonderful chapter. When Severus said that he had put too much faith in her, I immediately realized that it must have been him, too. And what an ending! I'm so looking forward to chapter three!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awww! Thanks for your review - chapter 3 should be up soon. The next few chapters deal with the returned memories - hope you enjoy them.
Just when I think I know what might be happening, bam! Plot twist! I love it, and can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well I like to keep you on your toes ;) Thanks for the review - the next chapter is in the queue and will be posted very soon.
I'm so glad you posted! And see what a fabulous response you received. So, what about your complaints and doubts? I told you it was a super super start! Brava, eccellente risultato! (I hope you don't need a translation ;)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Awww! Thank you, dear!! Of course I don't need a translation; I'm practically fluent by now. Abbraccione (see);)
Excellent beginning! And a interesting premise to boot. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well thank you very much. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Good to see a new story from you, dear Hexy and this one certainly promises to deliver. So she says in a totally platonic way...Get your coat coz you've pulled! BTW....Swinton's only about half an hour away on the M60. If I put that address in my SatNav can I go and harrass/stalk/molest the Potions/Head master? Please??? Best wishes, Love Ali xxx.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hi Ali - well I'm even more happy to see a review from you. I've got me coat, where are we going? Swinton is about the same distance from me too ;) Shall I see you at Spinner's end in half an hour for a bout of harrassment? I'm old-fashioned, lets leave the molesting for the next visit eh? :)Ta for the review - I hope you like the rest of it ;)
What a pity this story has been " Forgotten " it was very good.
This was great, please update soon!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. Once I have taken care of my other commitments I will be back to this and focusing on it until it is finished.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. Once I have taken care of my other commitments I will be back to this and focusing on it until it is finished.
I'm really enjoying this - I was nervous reading a WIP and hope there is more to come.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. There is much more to come and I will be continuing very soon. I have other commitments right now, whuch means I've had to put this on hold for a month or two, but I will be putting all my energies back into this in a couple of weeks.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. There is much more to come and I will be continuing very soon. I have other commitments right now, whuch means I've had to put this on hold for a month or two, but I will be putting all my energies back into this in a couple of weeks.
Good chapter, though i may have to back track. I'm not sure i read the last chapter. Its always hard to remember a story after readung so many WIP.I look forward to more,soon I hope.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Yes, I know what you mean - I may have to do short summaries before each new chapter so that everyone isn' completely lost. Thanks for reading and reviewing though :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Yes, I know what you mean - I may have to do short summaries before each new chapter so that everyone isn' completely lost. Thanks for reading and reviewing though :)
So many questions! But I will wait patiently for you to carfully reveal the answers (well, somewhat patiently lol). Loved Hermione's reaction to the idea of Jessica, by the way. But I'm not asking about her... just sitting here quietly waiting for the next chapter... : )
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hehe! Thank you for not asking about the much speculated upon Jessica: love child, pet or spawn of the devil???? I expect we'll find out :) Thanks for reading. More soon.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hehe! Thank you for not asking about the much speculated upon Jessica: love child, pet or spawn of the devil???? I expect we'll find out :) Thanks for reading. More soon.
Oh my gosh! That was fantastic! I do hope Jessica turns out to be his ill-behaved familiar or a housekeeper though :) I'm anxious for more!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Ill-behaved familiar huh? Maybe, maybe ;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing - more soon!!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Ill-behaved familiar huh? Maybe, maybe ;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing - more soon!!
What she said and what he did--perfect! Absolutely brilliant chapter. Thanks!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. I'm always nervous when not writing Snape, I feel a bit out of my depth. I'm certainly not used to writing Harry so I'm glad he came across okay.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Thank you very much. I'm always nervous when not writing Snape, I feel a bit out of my depth. I'm certainly not used to writing Harry so I'm glad he came across okay.
Yes, inquiring minds are dying to know who this Jessica is....
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Haha! They are aren't they? Well I guess you will be among the first to know ;) Thanks for your support, chuck :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Haha! They are aren't they? Well I guess you will be among the first to know ;) Thanks for your support, chuck :)
Great story! Haven't read something like this for a long time now... I adore the way you describe Snape. Honstly, who wouldn't want someone like him ;-) Hope you update soon!
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I agree, who wouldn't want someone like him? Glad you're enjoying it so far. I'm working on an update so watch this space :) Thanks for reviewing.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
I agree, who wouldn't want someone like him? Glad you're enjoying it so far. I'm working on an update so watch this space :) Thanks for reviewing.
Who's Jessica? ;P
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well that would be telling ;)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well that would be telling ;)
Oh Hexy. Forgive me for being remiss in my reviews. I need...no...demand a bloody good caning and if the Potions Master is up for it then so am I. I just love your prose and writing and the suspense you have now created in throwing Jessica into the mix is genius. So do I get a few more chapters quickly now? Hope you didn't get caught out too badly in the recent floods. I live quite high up in the Rossendale Valley but our field had a lake in it at the bottom. As always your humble reader. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hi Ali! Nothing to forgive, lovely - you can read and/or review whenever you damn well feel like it :) But if it's a Potions Master caning your after... bad girl!! Detention after class!! We escaped the floods mostly, but we'll be in Whitby next week so I'm taking the arc. Ta for sticking with it. We may find out who the much-maligned Jessica is very soon.
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Hi Ali! Nothing to forgive, lovely - you can read and/or review whenever you damn well feel like it :) But if it's a Potions Master caning your after... bad girl!! Detention after class!! We escaped the floods mostly, but we'll be in Whitby next week so I'm taking the arc. Ta for sticking with it. We may find out who the much-maligned Jessica is very soon.
Hmm. Jessica, huh? Maybe she's his pet mouse. :D
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
When I first read this I thought you said pet mousse and had this image of Snape sitting in his front room, reading the Daily Prophet with an enormous mousse looking over his shoulder (ignore me, I'm over-wrought ;)) - I'll keep taking the pills). Thanks for reading. More soon :))))
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
When I first read this I thought you said pet mousse and had this image of Snape sitting in his front room, reading the Daily Prophet with an enormous mousse looking over his shoulder (ignore me, I'm over-wrought ;)) - I'll keep taking the pills). Thanks for reading. More soon :))))
Damn, he chickened out! :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well there seems to be some serendipitous confusion about whether he did or not ;)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well there seems to be some serendipitous confusion about whether he did or not ;)
That's one way of getting it off your chest without compromising security! :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well, I figured it would be quicker than all that tedious explanation business ;)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
Well, I figured it would be quicker than all that tedious explanation business ;)
Ah - really cliffhanger like that. I'm putting money on Jessica somehow being the child of Severus and Hermione from the spell which she can't remember and the memories which she doesn't have. any hints? am I way off? :) i tend to be a bit far-reaching at times
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
No hints. But very interesting guess. Thanks for reading :)
Response from hexgirl (Author of Forgotten)
No hints. But very interesting guess. Thanks for reading :)