Hmm, I remember doing such naughty things, as that at the Three Broomsticks, back when my hubby and I were dating (before getting married and having children)./sigh, to be 20 years younger again (or at least the stamina of that age) /wink;D

10/10

firefly124

Another excellent read!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Thank you so much! I rather liked this story. I should re-read it myself.

9/10

dara st john

I'm glad Snape didn't change too much. Once a snarky bastard, always a snarky bastard. Oh, I wish I were Hermione!! Heavy sigh...where's MY snarky bastard?

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Exactly what I was thinking when I was writing this!

0/10

queenp

*giggle* I loved it....I could just imagine, though, that Hermione set up the drinks at the bar and the various reasons for the others to leave just the two of them together there...*grin* ESPECIALLY after finding out about the younger Parkinson's scheme to get detention...:D I enjoyed this...congrats on job well done...

10/10

phoenix

Very nicely done. I really enjoyed the first person veiw of this. There are so many little gems in there. One of my favorites was the part where he talks about hating people turning statements into questions and even more hating when he does something he hates. LOL This story is the perfect balance of hotness and humor.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Thanks. I love writing in first person. It lets me explore the thoughts that run through people's heads. Severus is like a gold mine; he's got lots of little nuggets like that one.

0/10

MollysSister

OUuuu I love this one shot! One of the best from the sex god challenge. Lovely.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Thank you ... I had such fun writing it too.

10/10

janis

You've succeeded in making me want to change places with Hermione!Lovely story. I can picture Severus making a conscious decision to make some changes. He's quite methodical and it would be logical for him to feel that he could make those changes in a post defeat of the Dark Lord era.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

It makes me happy to hear that you can see Severus being this way. Even though it is an answer to a makeover challenge, I tried to do it as realistically as possible. Thank you!

10/10

PlaidPooka

Fabulous! Snarky, hot, and fabulous! You remain the Queen of Sassy Smut! :)

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Ah, such kind words from the Queen (Mistress) of Romance!

0/10

nightqueen

Mmmmmm, Mmmmmm, Good!!! That was an absolutely delicious treat! I loved it! Severus deciding that a little make over wouldn't kill him and doing it with Slythrin subtlety was perfect. I really love how Hermione told him that even before he made the changes she was attracted to him and that if he had showed any interest she would have been all over him. He so needed to know that she wanted him not just for his new looks, but for who he is regardless of how he looks! As always your stories are fantastic! Thank you.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Thank you,

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

. I love this Severus, too, before and after, so it was only fitting that Hermione should as well.

9/10

mekareami

Very hot! I must admit the idea of cleaning up his hair with some pantene like substance has been circling madly in my head for months now >:)Thank you for writing

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Yeah, that would probably be the one thing I'd hope he would change.

0/10

Pearle

Great story! I really enjoyed it. I liked the insights into Severus's mind and thoughts as he "transforms" in a sex god...grin

0/10

justjen

Woo hoo! I love the fact that he didn't feel the need to change much. Obviously showing his intelligence in that matter. I want to find myself one of my very own.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

I figure, he's pretty damn sexy as it is. Just a few minor adjustments were all that was needed. Just enough to make him feel better about himself.

10/10

MagicAlly

*has just popped upstairs for a quick eh-lie down and will be back on liine in a little while* phew!

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Glad you liked it.

0/10

ancientgirl

I want one of him, maybe two. Great story as always. I loved that he just made a few minor changes and didn't do anything drastic.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Oh, definitely two... more possibilites.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

You know what I think already.****Yum****This is a great response to the challenge. I like that she was attracted to him before. That gives it an extra bit of "rightness."

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

I'm glad you liked it ... you know how unsure I was. Serves me right for writing Severus in first person. I don't think I've really ever done that before.

10/10

Maddy Riddle

*is drooling and unable to review*

Response from notsosaintly (Author of Metamorphosis)

Ah, but this is one of the nicest reviews... Thanks!