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War is hell, and the aftermath is often the most hellish part of all. Having lost everyone she most loves, Hermione Granger is only a shell of the woman she had been. Devastated by loss and guilt, Hermione draws the attention of Severus Snape with a random utterance.
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I know they mean well, but her friends seem to delight in torturing her.
It's hard not to compare their pain, and see it as some kind of odd 'tie that binds'.
Having Severus champion Hermione's cause, of wanting to be left in her misery was very entertaining. Percy is no match for Severus intellectually. (I loved the 'mate' comment. What a dry word to use on someone like Severus who played the fence in order to survive.) I'm sure he only wanted to spare her the pain of the illusion of normality that she would be expected to project if she joined the others for a night cap. Was this his way of reaching out to her, a want to protect her from her well meaning friends? Possibly an act of selfishness on his part? *smirk*
Lovely, indeed.
Thanks again, again...*giggle*~Elou
Intriguing how her comment has piqued his interest. Wonder what his motivation is. Dominance? Empathy? Curiosity? :D
Whoop! Squee! I'm so excited to see this new story from you, compounded by some anticipation of where this might be going. Regardless, your stories seldom disappoint. Oh, but what is 'spag bol' for goodness sake?
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
It's spaghetti bolognese sauce, what the Brits call the dish Americans call spaghetti with meat sauce. New chapter coming up very soon!
Oh my goodness. I haven't read any SS/HG for sooo long, and this felt like coming home. I will wait with great impatience for your next chapter, and the next, and the next ... I enjoyed every single delicious word. LBxxx
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
*hugs you fiercely*Thank you, darling. It means more to me than I can say for you to read my fanfic. Bless ou!
and i would like to know when we will get more of this story! i was trying to not start this until you'd posted more because i knew i would want more than just this tiny taste, but tonight i couldn't resist. so sad. and i'm in a melancholy mood, so this bleak version of events hit the spot. more, please!
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Chapter 2 is almost through the beta process, honey, and chapter 3 is well under way. Sorry for the wait! It makes me happy, though, to know that you couldn't wait to read.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
yay! i'm happy to know that there will be more soon.
Boot's on the other foot now. :)
At least she has the energy to muster some rage. That has to be good, doesn't it? :)
I hope you continue this story. I really miss reading it.
So this on a fanfic rec list and knew from the get go that it was incomplete. I really enjoyed what you’ve written of this story so far. My expectations from the first chapter have shifted slightly but not for good or bad. I wish there was more and wonder if you’ll come back to this. Best wishes and thanks for sharing this xx
I love this story! The writing is wonderful, as always. I hope you are able to continue with it very soon. :)
I have to say that I found this story really lovely. I was surprised when I had reached the last chapter and noticed it was a work in progress, however it could have ended there okay, leaving it open for a sequel. You captured the nuances of depression very well. I hope you do come back to it, but I know sometimes the muse leaves us on some stories. Thanks again! Cheers!
I love this chapter. I really enjoyed them finally getting to some kind of understanding and acceptance even if unspoken.
Forgot to mention on the last chapter- Snape's flashes of his past when Hermione touched his chest are a nice twist.
Now for this chapter: His discomfort at her emotional collapse is a bit funny. But what I love best is the very last line: ...basked for the moment in the silent approbation of Severus Snape. Very poignant. Do you have an approximate chapter count for how long this will be when all is said and done?
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
It will be a long story, but no, I haven't got any idea how long, at this point. I am currently writing for the SSHG Exchange on Live Journal, and when that project is complete, I will devote myself again to Owned. Thank you for you comments!
Forgot to mention on the last chapter- Snape's flashes of his past when Hermione touched his chest are a nice twist.
Now for this chapter: His discomfort at her emotional collapse is a bit funny. But what I love best is the very last line: ...basked for the moment in the silent approbation of Severus Snape. Very poignant. Do you have an approximate chapter count for how long this will be when all is said and done?
Just how long will it take for Hermione to figure out that he is easily manipulating her into health? Love the angry indignation at the disappearance of her sleep potion.
I love how easily the compliments appear to flow from Snape's lips, shocking her so well. He is navigating such rocky terrain with Hermione, and doing so quite well.
Thanks, I´m looing forward to the next chapter.
Never thought I'd see Hogwarts, a History used as a bedtime story! :)
love this story and all your stories, please don't take it down, would love to se it finished but as it is it is still wonderful
Excellent chapter!
I love how they've been circling around the issues and around one another, yet slowly making progress. Finally, they're understanding and accepting another level of interest in one another.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
This is now absolutely 1 of my all-time favorite SS/HG stories - & it's not even finished yet! Oh please update soon - you have me so very hooked :)
Is this story abandoned?
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
I wouldn't yet classify it as abandoned, but I am not currently working on it. If there comes a time that I decide not to work on it, I'll take it down. But I've never left a story incomplete yet, so I hope not to break faith with you or my other readers. Thank you for asking me.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
I wouldn't yet classify it as abandoned, but I am not currently working on it. If there comes a time that I decide not to work on it, I'll take it down. But I've never left a story incomplete yet, so I hope not to break faith with you or my other readers. Thank you for asking me.
More please? You have a great style of writing. :)
I know you are busy with real life, I hope some day you revisit this story. It is haunting ang I love it so much! Thank you for your wonderful words!