Owned
Subversa363 Reviews | 363 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )
War is hell, and the aftermath is often the most hellish part of all. Having lost everyone she most loves, Hermione Granger is only a shell of the woman she had been. Devastated by loss and guilt, Hermione draws the attention of Severus Snape with a random utterance.
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not good at leaving eloquent reviews...love the way this story is shaping up so far...thank you!
I am completely speechless. However, reviews feed the plotbunny, so - what you are capturing here, with a downright CREEPY level of intesity, is nothing short of enthralling. Are you presently accepting new worshipers?
This is wonderful - the base you're building between Severus and Hermione is great. I'm just eating up the tension here, even if it is at poor Hermione's expense. Also, I love how Severus keeps going back and forth between the mysterious one and the comforting one.
I'm sending you a space heater, an appropriate beverage and a blanket to make sure the cold doesn't keep you from writing! <3
Loveit..moremoremore!!
You made me cry.
No, really, you did.
The way Hermione punishes herself is so absolutely hear-wrenching. All the others "just" have to deal with their grief, but Hermione has the guilt to cope with as well. No Order member's had the capability to reach her, yet, but Snape.
I like it how, when it comes to him, she isn't able to suppress her urges completely. How she found herself drawn to the library, something she probably has denied herself since the war, or how she reluctantly went to his room, even if she didn't knock.
He seems to be her life-line back.
I'm lookin forward to where you will take this story.
hiya girly just passing by to see if you updated hopeing all is well with you.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
All is well, my friend. Hope you are well too!
This is so wonderful,I hope you continue wih it someday.
Just beautiful. Perfect, really. And my only complaint is that this chapter ended much too soon, and now I must fill my time until the next. xxx
Poor lonely Hermione. It's hard to see her this way. And I'm wondering if Severus is going to try to help her or to take advantage of her.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
It's equally hard to write her this way, I promise you. As for Severus, of course, more will be revealed as we go forward ... Thank you for the note!
oh my goodness gracious, that was fantastic! More please...
Ohhh, what a great start!!! Poor Hermione... she seems so desolate and lost. I am glad the Molly had to guilt her into staying because if she didn't Hermione just may have lost herself. I'm sure Molly is just being her usual 'motherly' self. As for what Hermione meant about being owned, I am totally intrigued. That can go so many ways. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
I think bullying Hermione into guilt is the best Molly can do for her. You're right about that. Thank you!
Cough CoughOwned like Rene owned O? Or something completely different? Bring it on Subversa! Woot! 
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
My goodness! What in the world have you been reading, missy? The Story of O? 
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Yup
Poor Hermione, it's a pity she couldn't find adequate help in her situation. I have the feeling Severus is goinf to strike a "bargain" with her.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
I imagine if she had tried, Hermione could have found help. I think she's in a position where she feels she doesn't deserve help, which is heartbreaking. Thank you!
Oohh... I'm very intrigued! I want to know what she meant as well... and what does Severus have up his sleeve? Great start! Update soon. :)
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Severus has a thin, if wiry, and very pale arm up his sleeve - both of 'em! Thank you for the comment, my dear!
Oooh, I look forward to another chapter. I am intrigued.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Thank you! I hope I can keep it interesting.
That is a very promising beginning. Let's just hope he will be the owner.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
~grins~ Do you think he wants the job?
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I certainly hope so. Now I suppose it is up to you!
Severus voiced my question perfectly. What did Hermione mean when she said she wished to be owned? Does that mean she wants someone to care for her, or does she want someone to care for? Perhaps it could even mean she wants someone to take charge of her life, because she can't for herself. This has the potential to be either very sweet, or very dark. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Could it be darkly sweet? Hmm, that's an interesting combination. Like dark chocolate ...
Fantastic start! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Thank you,
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
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AGGHGGHGHGHGHGHGHHHHHHH!You just had to end it there, didn't you?Are you trying to drive me barmy?~glares~
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
~hugs you~But it's a short trip, honey. ~ducks~
Evil Cliffhanger on the first chapter -- GAH! Too bad Ron and Harry died. Although I don't understand what "for neither could live while the other survived." has to do with it. I mean, if one survives, the other would die, right? But how can they both be living to begin with? Stupid prophecies. I'm glad to see another story from you and can't wait to read more. I hope Hermione regains her strength. I can't wait for the next chapter! Ahem, "Squeeeee!"
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
The prophecy, I must agree, is convoluted at best. I'm so glad you're excited about the story. I am too!
AND I SAY AGAIN THIS IS GOING TO BE GOOD , IN THE PIC OF HER IS HER MOTH SEWN SHUT???? I HOPE NOT I MAY NEED MY NIGHT LIGHT ON LOL .
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
No, the pictures are supposed to be of a depressed girl, but not one with her mouth sewn shut. Scary!
Response from PHONELADY (Reviewer)
I THOUGHT SO TOO!! LOL I THOUGHT IT WAS ONE OF THOSE BSDM TALES THANKS.
YAY...Subversa. Waiting Chapter 2....
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
I'm writng, I promise!
Ohhh - I am intrigued! I can't wait to read what is next.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Thank you! More to come soon!
Hello Sub,Thank you for starting a new story.this one was started off quite interesting.Waiting for more.PattyHow is Sub Hub doing?One more question on your banner is the girl's mouth suppose to look like it was sewn shut?Just curious.Have a great week.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Hi, Pickles! No, the girl's mouth isn't sewn shut! But you're not the only one to ask, either. Maybe I'll change it out ...SubHub is doing some better. Thanks for asking!