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Subversa363 Reviews | 7.28/10 (363 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )
War is hell, and the aftermath is often the most hellish part of all. Having lost everyone she most loves, Hermione Granger is only a shell of the woman she had been. Devastated by loss and guilt, Hermione draws the attention of Severus Snape with a random utterance.
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I really, really liked the start, its bit different to your usual stuff, which is probably why i feel compelled to review, but its very much got me intrigued to the answer of that question and where the story is going to go.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
It's a lot different than my usual stuff, and probably will continue to be. We'll see where the Muse leads me. Hopefully we'll up date next weekend. Thanks for the comment!
Oooer, Missus! What a brilliant teasing sentence to end that chapter on. OK Subby....I've got my coat and you've pulled. So bring it on! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Dear Ali,Don't forget your handkerchief (a la Bilbo Baggins!) on this journey. Thanks for the confidence!Love,~s
I hereby submit myself as 'hooked', I will now spend my time between updates anticipating more and refreshing my inbox for that coveted notification.Thanks
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
"Hooked" is my favorite way for you to be. I wouldn't expect an update much before next weekend, though; the beta process takes time.Thank you!
Oh, poor Hermione. I want to give her hugs and cook something good for her.Maybe she and Severus will heal each other.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
She is a mess, isn't she? I want to feed her, too. Thank you!
WOAH. This is prolly not a hurt/comfort fic, but maybe a hurt/recovery fic? Are you taking us into BDSM? I'm strapping myself in for the ride!! Write, Subversa, write! (huddles in corner with SubHub...)
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Well, Shug thinks it's hurt/comfort, but that may be a broad definition. I've never written the genre before, so I'm not sure. I can see where you might suspect it of BDSM, but you'll notice that is not in the warnings.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
Well, I myself am owned by Subversa. I'm only huddling in the corner with SubHub as a precaution.
Wow, Subversa. I know you've warned us that this story was going to be dark, but to see Hermione so bereft, so clearly broken, is heart breaking. What is more disturbing is that no one but the twins comforts Hermione when she says she wants to be owned. She needs something or someone to ground her again. I only hope that Severus can offer her a way to heal her wounds both visible and invisible. Looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Thank you, love. I think the twins are simply harder to repulse than most people are. I do believe that all of them have reached out to her, time and again, and only the twins, on this occasion, were willing to make the effort, as if she's dealt out so many rebuffs that no one knows what to do with her.
wonderful, a new Subversa fic. Very sad, sorry to see Hermione so down. You warned it is a dark fic, hopefully her life will be better
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Yes, this is a very different Hermione than any I've written before. Thank you for taking a chance on it!
Oooooo - a new Subversa story! What a great start for 2011! And such an intriguing beginning - and so very, very sad... It hurts to see Hermione so broken...
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Oh, yes - it does hurt to see her so broken. This is new territory for me. Thanks for giving it a try!
I am totally intrigued, I am really looking forward to read more. Not to mention hwo happy I am to see one of my favourite authors submitting a new story:-))
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
Thank you,
Response from Subversa (Author of Owned)
. More to come fairly soon, I believe.
Really would encourage you to continue this amazing story. I have missed the updates. I can't believe it's been that long. This is an amazing story and I would love to read more.
This is one of the best stories I have ever read onTPP, I have been away for 8mo. and this fic. is one of the reasons I am back to stay. I hope to see this one finished in the near future, but I do understand how RL can get in the way. This was a wonderful update, very well written, but I always enjoy your writing.
Not that I would repeat what everyone else has said, but I hope you will finish this. It is quite good - not just as a fan fiction. You tell the story very well.
This is a great story - I hope you finish it.