gah! you simply must write more! it sounds a bit cute (he last bit of this chapter). i jsut read from chapter one to three now. :) i like it a lot.

I am thrilled to see a new HG/SS story from you. This one looks very entertaining. Skeeter is a great scoundrel. Snape acquiring the particular house elf he did is smirk worthy.  The escape is enterprising and is only dampened by the particular volume they hide in. Very funny.

It's so funny to drug them and listen to them spill their secrets.  Hermione admitting she was hoping he'd come was priceless.  Silly Hermione with her questions; just enjoy the snuggling while it lasts.

OOOOOhh!!  How convenient!  Great chapter.

Our Hero to the rescue!  This is just awesome.

hee.  gives new meaning to taking refuge in a good book.  :D  i appreciated especially the touches of humor such as these:Was it a promotion or demotion to move from dimwit to fuckwit?...‘Do you think I can levitate you up through the trap door and fight off your captors at the same time?’ he snapped.Hermione looked up at him with an expression of absolute trust. ‘Yes,’ she replied, surprised that he even had to ask.

I absolutely love it!! Severus and Hermione trapped in a book. A lot can happen in that time.

HG saved herself with that copy of A Holidaymakers Guide to Antigua in her pocket. Very sneaky way of finding her SS! I think I hurt something when I snorted with laughter at their being stuck in the index. LOL. I wonder if HG will keep the candy wrapper as a book mark??

Rita is such a hack! THey have got to get her fired and moved to Greenland. Although I did enjoy the idea of a past KS/HG relationship. Hermione has created library police?? Id hate to have mr. Nott show up to collect my overdue books. Meeps!

Do my eyes deceive me? Nop it really is you! I am tickled pink that you and subhub have returned to SSHG. forget about that original novel and write funny smut please. Were any owls harmed in the writing of this chapter? lolLoved the bit about funding the war orphans and Gabs the silenced elf. Tis perfect as you well know!!! 

Reinforcements? Who could that be. And couldn't he have been a bit more specific? 'Choose a map', perhaps, instead of just 'open the damn book'? Is the book still in the room? What if the kidnappers take it with them, will Severus and Hermione be trapped inside the book? Eeeeep... needs new chapter, soon. :)

"Good girl" indeed. Methinks that the professor is hot on the trail of the missing archivist, even as I write. ;-)

Oooh... A new Subversa story. I am intrigued that it was launched from Subhub's plot bunny, how neat is that?  This chapter has left me wanting more. Of coursewe know the victim is Hermione, but why do they think she is the love of his life? She must work at the National Wizarding Archives. I'm rushing off to chapter 2 to fnd out what happens next! Thanks so much for the Halloween treat.

OHHH THIS IS SO GOOD!! DONT STOP NOW!!!!

I wonder what happened to Rita? :D

I know they made it as a couple from their exploded kisses but also from their conversations and the way they react to each other.

Lol..maybe Rita is a seer :)) They should thank her..maybe not :)

Loved your story. Thank you.

Pure love for this! I think the epilogue needs an epilogue lol.

Such a delightful read.  Loved the moment with Lily.  You did a fabulous job of conveying their understandable securities and so happy with the ending.

I liked the story, you and sub hub make a good team. I thought the rescue part was kinda over quickly, but maybe that's just because I expected a longer story overall. But a happy ending to the story is always awesome, so that balances out lol.

Interesting plot bunny so far. I was figuring it might be a joke as well until the owl exploded. Poor owl! Unless its one of Hermiones conjured birds, like her canarys she attacks Ron with? (Could a conjured bird carry anything? I guess it depends if its an African or a European canary, right?)
Interested to see where it goes..

Another fantastic story.  Superb!

What a wonderful, fun story. Thank you so much for sharing!

*is a puddle of goooo*

So sweet!

*giggles* Severus is so much fun. And a spell to enter a book ... an oldie but goldie, and the idea of ending up in the index is just too funny for words. Brilliant!

I just love all the twists and little details in this chapter. Wonderful!

Oh, what a wonderful beginning.

I like Snape having a good life!

But of course you couldn't let him get away with that, could you? Well, I'm looking forward to seeing how this mystery will play out.

Exploding the owl to prevent having it tracked was a nice touch. (Poor owl, though!)