New Chapter for Yuletide Revelation
Yuletide Revelation
Southern_Witch_6965 Reviews | 6.89/10 (65 Ratings, 0 Likes, 73 Favorites )
After a chance meeting in Knockturn Alley, Hermione follows Snape home in hopes that he?ll accept an invitation to Christmas dinner. This is my take on the How It Could Be Christmas Challenge that can be found at the Yahoo!Group, Potter_Place.
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I adore the world of HP.
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Yuletide Revelation
Yay, one last chapter to tie things together. I'm looking forward to what they see next.Oh, and do feel free to thump Harry upside the head.
Severus is a lonely soul who see nothing in himself worth loving. I would imagine that he would do everything in his power to minimize the power of others to hurt him. And Hermione has always been searching for someone to appreciate her. Even as a child. It is my assumption that if it had been someone else that had saved her from the Troll in her first year and offered her friendship she would have been just as dedicated to them. But I also believe that Hermione and Severus bring out the best in each other. You have the wonderful ability to make the reader (me) forget that the characters are not real people. Great job. B
goodness, hermione was such a slut! but yay for happy yule stories, can't wait for the last chapter!
Well, Lucius is a slippery bastard, isn't he? I liked the chapter very much. Live long and prosper, Titania
I may not like HG/SS but yes it is another example of your wonderful writing
Oh... the poor pair of them. That would be utterly moritfying! Can't wait to see what you dish up for Severus!
Interesting turn you took with Hermione in this one. It's perfectly plausable, you know, for it's happened to lots of people in real life--well not the Time Stopper thingy- but the whole sleeping with your friends thing. Anyway..excellent fic. If course I'll be reading the next chapter, I've taken a holiday and am using the lazy days to catch up on reading. Live long and prosper, Titania
Shit! Ron AND Harry? Poor Hermione! But hey, do I see a Lucius tryst in there somewhere? LOL, even if you don't write it here, I wouldn't be opposed to a little Lucius/Hermione fic in the future. *looks at SW with puppy dog eyes*I loved the little banter over her breasts, very cute. I'm wondering though what they will see at Sev's turn. I think somehow things may look worse for himOkay, waiting impatiently for more.
FACK! A Cliffie! More, please, dearest Southern
Great story! I cant wait to see what else happens.
Oh, you always leave us hanging...so of course, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Hmmm, she is already taking in his scent--do I smell a little romance in their future? An enjoyable Christmas fic.
great beginning. waiting for more.
Great beginning. Please update soon.
Always so anxious. I have heard that patiences in a virtue, but I am not so much interested in virtues as I am the next chapter. This is fun. I hope you have more soon. -- B
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Yes, I plan to upload the next bit tonight. Out of curiosity, I was just wondering why you gave a lower rating. Were there typos that I have missed? Was it too short? Just wondering. You seem to like it, so I'm uncertain that would be it.I don't have much patience either when it comes to a tale I'm interested in. That's why I try not to follow too many WIPs if I can help it. I feel as though I'm a "greedy" reader!
Response from magicmistress (Reviewer)
Southern - Must have been A MISTAKE if this was given a lower rating. You always get a 10 with content. Only a 9 if you have evil cliffies, So if you got less than that then you should promptly ignore it and remember that I love your work and think you are great. -- B
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Oh, it's all right, doll. I didn't mind. I was just wondering if I needed to work on something a little more. You know I adore your input. :)
*purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr* Can't wait to see more, please! ~Lotm
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Shortly, my dear. Hope you like what I have planned, though some might not. I'm feeling a bit wicked. Teehee
*rubs hands* Well, my mind is to jumbled up with stuff to get anything going creatively. It's good to know others have a clear head.Cool beginning. I'm loving all these little Christmas stories. Next chapter por favor.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Yeah, I know what you mean. The Christmas type stories this year are pleasant, and I wish there were more. I'll post a bit more this evening! Thanks.
This was great, i hope you update soon!
This was so wonderful. I can't help but envy Hermione's happiness. Would that we all could find that type of love! But I'm a firm believer of Karma, and have no doubt that I am paying for breaking someone's heart in the past - how else to explain the amount of tears this fic made me shed! I really enjoyed this. Thank you!!
Severus and Hermione have no idea how much they are loved, so many people had to get together in order to put them on the right track. Wonderful ending thank you.
Not even Lucius can brake them apart now.
I wonder if in saving themselves, they can also save Lucius.
Hermione really went off the rails, Harry and Ron are both idiots, how could they use Hermione like that, and let her take all the blame, it takes two to tango. If I had been Ginny I would have kicked Harry to the kerb. Now lets see what Severus will be getting up to.
Now what the dickens are you up to? I shall read on and see.
Until I realised it was what MIGHT have been I must admit the idea of Ron doing that with Hermione whilst seeing Luna, and HARRY doing it with his wife upstairs made me feel a little ill I must admit....Great twist though that they were seeing what their lives COULD have been!I was completely sucked in for a minute good story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Yeah, me too. Trust me. I don't like "ho!Hermione" at all. LOL Thank you for reading. I'm happy you liked it. :)
this is absoulutley wonderful! i don't normaly like snape/hermione ships but this one was still very good.