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The Mutual Deal
Southern_Witch_69182 Reviews | 5.68/10 (182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 212 Favorites )
Hermione and Draco pretend to be dating in order to dodge realtionships with Ron and Pansy. Will they truly develop feelings for each other?
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for The Mutual Deal
I still can't get over that Snape reference! So So funny!!! I am really enjoying this so far! Can't wait for chapter 3!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
teehee... There is another Snape portion in the next part. :)
I really liked this story can't wait to see where it goes.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! I'm sending chapter 3 to beta right now. I'll try to have it up tomorrow at the latest. Cheers.
I think that this story is a wonderful idea - cookies for whomever made you dust it off. I know quite a few SS/HG shippers that started out as DM/HG shippers (me, for one). It's because we know that Hermione is way too intelligent to end up with Ron. He's cute and sweet, but temporary. This is a fabulous fic - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
I definitely agree. I like Ron, but just not with Hermione. Hehe! Thank you!
Love the story so far. Its awesome! Keep up the great work. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! I am happy that you are enjoying! I'm editing the next bit now. I have a couple of things to change about.
Another brilliant chapter. I wonder who Pansy's interest is? I love this Draco and so I suspect does Hermione.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks, doll. Pansy's interest will come out soon enough. It's quite convenient. lol... Hermione is definitely falling. :)
I really like your Draco and love this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! I'm glad you like this Draco. I'll have more up soon.
'She grimaced as Professor Snape's face appeared in her mind. Not in a million years!'
Are you sure this isn't going to be Snape/Hermione? Darnit!
It's still cute though. Please post more, I want to see what happens next.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Teehee~! When I wrote that, I never dreamed I'd be writing ss/hg one day.
~snicker~
Perfect! My only comment is more please Miss Southern?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
certainly. I'll go through the next chapter very soon. I have it ready to edit, but it's just to get to it! I'm changing some things as I go.
Of course not! He's Malfoy after all - Famous last words. They are both falling, but I'm afraid they will be trying to fight those feelings hard. Hopefully not though. Unfortunately poor Hermione will have Harry's words in her mind anytime she even thinks about doing anything with Draco.
I thought that part about Snape was cute. You know, they are always older and dark and broody in those damned romance novels so technically Snape is perfect. Except for the being a mean bastard part.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Famous last words! And you know... I thought about you. I think you might light this Lucius that I have. He won't be here for a couple of chapters though. :) As for the Snape part, he certain fits the role!
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
Yay! Lucius and me in the same thought. *drools* I have to say, I love reading him both ways, but I especially like seeing him portrayed as a romantic lead type. LOL, I have no illusions, just like with Snape, but hell this is fiction after all. I'm looking forward to seeing what your Lucius is like.
I'm curious who Pansy's "other interest" is. Hey, as long as you're not matching up Hermione with Severus, why not give Severus a love interest (NOT Pansy); it would be an excuse for him to not pay so much attention to what Draco is doing. And is Lucius still a Mudblood-hater at heart? Okay, where's the next chapter!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
lol... I don't touch all that much upon Snape, though Lucius is in a couple of chapters. He feels he's better than anyone not of pureblood, but if someone has a purpose, he is likely to be more accepting. This isn't a very long fic. Pansy's interest will be revealed very soon!
I think this is cute. Only thing that was off was saying that she dated Krum in 3rd yr when they met in 4th. thought you should know :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
thank you! I've fixed that. I've been doing some editing. Before that, I had something like "You didn't know where she was going back in third year, did you? Come to find out, she was over at Hagrid's hut! Didn't know she dated Krum the next year, eh?" But I wanted to cut it down. LOL... see where rushing gets us? I read through it again though and never even noticed. I appreciate you t elling me :)
Lmao--her reaction to the 'tall, dark' romantic-novel hero-archetype, being "Snape", was marvelous! As a dedicated SS/HG 'shipper...you made me giggle with that one! Loved Draco's reply to that, too; why can't he be young and fair, indeed? Hugs, ~Lotm
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
I was laughing about it too when I went over this last night. I told Christy, "Man, this was before I was a SS/HG shipper." Hahaha! Not long after this is when I stumbled upon Ashwinder. Thanks!
Awww, this is cute, Sun! I want to see the update, my dear!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks, doll. Hope you like the next!
I really like the idea of this fic and can't wait to read more. This isn't archieved at a Draco/Hermione site already is it? Can't wait to read more!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
I've not archived it any other place. Hope you enjoy!
This story looks really promising. Can't wait to see what happens next and I think Christy may be right.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Hint! Christy may be on to something! lol
Very good. I'm not usually into Draco/Hermione stories but I absolutely love this one.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks, I should add some more in a day or two. Cheers.
awesome start. I love reading your work, but have to admit there's a little part of me that still loves what got me reading fanfic in the first place and it's stories like this that makes me realise it's never truly gone (my love of the blonde bad boy) even though I love my HG/SS stories.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! I feel the same about the bad boys. The first site I found was full of Draco and Ginny stories. I couldn't believe that there was HP fic! hehe! Then, I moved on to Draco and Hermione. After that, I found Ashwinder with the HG/SS. hahaha!
Response from tjbaby (Reviewer)
and you've never looked back since! I have to admit that you kept me sane during my last pregnancy with the Succubus... keep up the great great work Southern! And get that website of yours back up too! (Here's a crate of firewhisky and chocolate mousse to help aid with the task!)
Woo Hoo, a new chapter of Luring and this story all in one day. I think I must be dreaming. I personally like this couple almost as much as I like SS/HG. And you are absolutely right there is something about the bad boy ending up with the good girl. Yum, yum.
I really can imagine Hermione feeling that way about Ron. After watching a guy that I liked flaunt his relationship with another woman in front of me I would not be too keen on giving him another chance. And lets face it what woman would.
I personally think that JKR did it on purpose. She had said that she did not have any intentions of putting any of the characters in a relationship and what better way to shut fans up.
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Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thank you! It's been so long since I even looked at this story, but the more I mess with it, the more I'm glad that I've done so.
About Ron, what a jerk. I would have been jealous, too, but that gets old after a while, you know? It's like, "Too late, buddy." Hope you continue to enjoy. Cheers!
Now, I have to say, it takes some damn fine writing to get me to not only read a hg/dm story, but like it too. I am more of a dm/gw fan myself, and everyone who knows me know hg/ss is my favorite. I love where he is kissing her and she thinks he is acting.
But, I have to admit, I am HOOKED! Great job!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Poor Christy. I really thought you'd hate it. LOL!! "Grrr, Sun is making me beta a dang hg/dm story!" ahahhaa! Thanks, doll. xoox
I love it ! Draco/Hermione are my favorite pairing and I am delighted to see these stories of yours. I cant wait for more !
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
thanks. I thought of you when I uploaded it. I said, "Well, there is one person that might like it."
Response from Lutrica (Reviewer)
I havent seen a story you wrote yet that I dont like.
Ha ha ha!!! Love it! Two idiots in love...one of my favorite types of stories!! LOL...and it's kinda nice to take a breather from the SS/HG ship once in a while, huh? As always, I love your writing. Looking forward to updates!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
I agree. Going back through this story brings such memories.. hehe! Thank you.
Awesome! I am such a sucker for Draco. LOL!! (pun intended)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Oh, my! Muahaha... Most chicks don't admit that. I am certain that Draco is pleased though. ~snicker~
Response from Headmistress (Reviewer)
He was... I mean, he should be... Oh, sod it. ~heehee~
This was soooo fluffy! (And I heartily embraced their OOC-ness, b/c it was such a fun read.) ^_^b Thanks for sharing!
awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet loved the twists and turns and it wouldnt surprise me one bit if lucius would have tried to force himself on hernione kind of like a fudal lordo well glad he didntthanks for the sweet storyyours truly julie
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
And thank you for reading it. I'm happy you liked it! :)