New Chapter for The Mutual Deal
The Mutual Deal
Southern_Witch_69182 Reviews | 5.68/10 (182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 212 Favorites )
Hermione and Draco pretend to be dating in order to dodge realtionships with Ron and Pansy. Will they truly develop feelings for each other?
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for The Mutual Deal
Great chapter. Just like teenagers, no one wants to take the first step in admitting their feelings but they do seem to be edging closer. Maybe they'll be toe to toe before they realise it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks so much! Too right!
When is it that Snape comes in and says that he's loved Hermione from afar all this time?
Okay, seriously, I thought it was a sweet chapter and I was glad that Draco stood up to Lucius. I KNEW that Pansy had the hots for Ron. Hehehe.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
LOL I wish! (about snape) Snerk.
Another enjoyable chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thank you.
I am still loving it! I am going to keep my hope that they end up the happy couple and admit their feelings for each other. Ms Southern I cant wait for more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
~grin~ So happy you enjoyed this.
Lucius didn't threaten to cut Draco off without a galleon? Sounds like Lucius really doesn't take Draco-Hermione seriously. Wonder how long for Ron-Pansy to "take"..... Thanks for updating!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! Lucius always finds a way to twist things of course. :)
Goodness these two. I swear, would it kill them to just express how they truely feel. It can take quite a bit of courage to tell someone you have feeling for them before you are sure of their reaction. But if someone does not take the first step, even if it is doozy, then you will be stuck in neutral. And let's face it things go much farther, much faster in drive.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
LOL Thank you!
I enjoyed this chapter. I love how they both seem to care, but are scared to admit it!
I want to see some Ron/Pansy and some snoggin Harry/Ginny! Can't wait for the next one! xoxoxox
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
xoxooxoxoxo
Thank you for the new chapter. Great chapter. Glad Draco stood up to daddy dearest. Hopefully they will realise their feelings soon. Or will it be Harry that points it out.. Hope your Thanksgiving was nice. Patty
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Same here! Thank you, Patty
I love that Ron and Pansy will be neatly tied up with one another. What a clever way to get them out of the way of Hermione and Draco's future happiness. I do so hope that Hermione can sort out her feelings for Draco and knock some sense into him before he walks away. Wow...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks. I sort of like Ron / Pansy. :)
I guessed that Pansy was interested in Ron. Draco's confession was interesting... it doesn't seem like Hermione heard any of it, though. LOL! Hmmmm, when is the Potions master going to come in and sweep Hermione off her feet? :-)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Pansy and Ronnie sitting in a tree. K i s s i n g. lol
I really love this story. It's fun & upbeat.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
thank you!
And here comes daddy! LOL I am ready to see what sparks fly and from who when Lucius gets there. Will Severus join in "the talk?" I understand why Hermione wants to wait on sex, so when (and if) it does happen...wow! Can't wait for #5!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
~nod~ lol
I was hoping it would be Ron for Pansy for some reason I have always liked that combo
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks, me too!
Ron and Pansy are a good couple together. No killing one of them off in this fiction. And I think that after all of the hard times he has given Hermione over the year a little confusion is what he deserves. But you are right about Hermione needing to realize her feelings soon, because if she doesn't she is libel to lose him before she ever really had him. -- B
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thank you so much! :)
great update. glad he can't get the girl off of his brain. glad pansy is there to assist in oblivating mione of the mind.. waiting for more. hopefully soon .
happy thanksgiving. p
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Teehee! You know it!
Another brilliant chapter, love the dark haired Snape paws bit, you know what I mean LOL. I wonder where Herm went off to? Great Pansy and Ron and now maybe Harry and Ginny. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Uhhuh. LOL Thank you!
I'm loving this story!! But I'd be lying if I said I didn't want more lemony goodness with Hermione and Draco!!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Teehee. Thank you!
I'm very happy Pansy is okay with all of this and I find it cute that Ron would wonder why she's interested in him
I especially like how things are moving along with Draco and Hermione. I'm afraid of Lucius' (mmm...Lucius) visit. I hope he doesn't mess things up with them, especially since Draco seems to be really caring for her.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks, doll. I appreciate it. LOL Lucious, you mean? :)
Ms Southern you are my idol ! This story is so wonderful. I sat down at my desk for the first time all weekend for over 5 minutes and for my update message on this so I had to treat myself to a quick read for now but will be back later to read it again and again. Thank you for writing it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Awww, you are too kind, doll. I'm gonna have to write another draco/hermione soon. :)
Hmmm...... is Lavender going to be a problem, since she is currently boyfriend-less? Can't wait for Lucius to arrive! (And I've never said that before!) Hermione is absolutely right to hold off on shagging; no need to muck things up until she and Draco are completely clear on their feelings for each other. Thanks for updating!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks for reading!
Great chappie.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
thanks! More up soon!
Who are they kidding, this was a really romantic chapter. Brilliantly written, can't wait for more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! I thought the "studying" bit was sort of romantic, too!
I'm glad that someone can see past the ruse to the real feelings beneath - I wonder when Draco is going to really fall for her. Hmm... Or does he?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
He shall fall for her... at some point... maybe he has already... :)
Hmm....I'm going to have to watch Ron and Pansy a bit here. I get the feeling something will be brewing with those two soon.
Poor Hermione, can't see the forest for the trees can she?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Good eye, as always, my dear!
Nicely handled! Can't wait to read more, please! ~Lotm
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of The Mutual Deal)
Thanks! More up shortly.