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Dark Santiago
Lariope104 Reviews | 6.41/10 (104 Ratings, 0 Likes, 116 Favorites )
Magical and Muggle worlds collide when two displaced survivors of the second war meet in an unlikely place.
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Reviews for Dark Santiago
Heremione always learns best from Severus
And they lived hopefully ever after.
A beautiful chapter, thank you.
Hermione is asking questions, she must be feeling better.
I keep waiting for Hermione to explode, all that pain and he has bee alive all the time.
What a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it.
This is so completely fantastic, I love the quality of your writing. It's been so many years now since you wrote it, but is there any chance at all that you could be convinced to write a sequel? I would love to read more of this, maybe a couple years after Hermione has left and settled into her career? I would love to read about them reuniting.
Exquisite.
Breathtaking! A truly amazing story. I loved it from start to finish!
I really enjoyed this story - it just seemed so real and honest. Thank you for sharing!!
I enjoyed this so much.
"He is lovely in his discomfort." I love that. Excellent.
Awesome
Wow. this is such an unusual, awesome story. I do wonder what happens to them in the future.
This whole scenario is weirdly, fascinatingly compelling.
Wow...I think this story is beautiful. It's rare that a ff has ...so much quality. I mean, we all like the clichés (we love them so much we come back for more each week, each day) but to come across a story such a this... such a bitter-sweet story, really.
As I type this I wonder if you've written a sequel, or if you plan on it. A part of me cannot accept this end you've given us but another part of me would have accepted nothing else.
What I want to say, really, is well done.
Bittersweet ending - truly, I did not expect that! Perfect, though, and much closer to real life than the usual "Love forever" endings which I am guilty of writing myself most times ;-)
Lovely story. Just one minor thing: Lupin, my dear, is not dead!
Hugs, hon, and thanks for writing this!
This story is drawing me in, dear, you know that? Yesterday, I was watching an episode of Torchwood, where they had to deal with a cinema and gypsies and fortune tellers - your story reminds me of those times, and I must say, it is a most original, new way to bring those two together.
Fascinating idea, that not using magic could make a witch ill - or a wizard, of course. I've read a few fics where they lose their magic, but this here makes even more sense, especially because it is Hermione who's doing it. Excellent idea, dear!
What a wonderful beginning! Took me a while to find the time and read your fic, but believe me, Im most glad I finally did it. The pace is perfect in it's slow, tantalising rhythm, the tense is unusulal and very interesting to read, and the pictures you create... well, I stop babbling now and continue with the next chapter.
Love this story, sad that we will never know what great things Hermione went on to achieve or what becomes of Severus. Well done
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
I'm glad you liked it, Snakekat! Thank you :)
What surprised me the most is that he is secure enough with her to ask for his quilt. He must really feel lonely, so I hope she won't wait too long before giving it back to him.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
I think he thought he could let her go without a word and then found he couldn't. :)Thank you!
*sweet smile* It's curious how he's let his guard down so easily that she can read his face. After all I've read about them, I'm a firm believer that, whatever the circumstances are, they're good to each other.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
I do think they are. It amazed me, trying to write Snuna for Snuna exchange, how firm my OTP really is--Severus and Hermione belong together. As you said, they're good to each other. And I am a lunatic. :) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Snuna? Is that for Snape and Luna. I'm curious to read about that.
I'm speechless because of you wonderful skills as a writter. I do want to comfort the both of them to hug them and whispered that everything will be alright. But i guess they don't need me for that. *wink*
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
LOL! Thank you so much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! xoxoxo
I'm so glad you're back. It's such a great pleasureto read you again. I've missed the bittersweetness, the way you describe inner, intricate feelings with such accuracy: it's just as if I've cast Legilimens myself. I love it.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you! I've missed you, and it's good to be back. I'm so touched by your comments, and I'm so glad you're enjoying this little story. xoxo