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Dark Santiago
Lariope104 Reviews | 6.41/10 (104 Ratings, 0 Likes, 116 Favorites )
Magical and Muggle worlds collide when two displaced survivors of the second war meet in an unlikely place.
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This is wonderful enough to make me want to visit a seedy little bar-- except your Snape wouldn't be there to offer life advice.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Ah, but I'm always looking for him. :)Thank you, Makaem. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. xoxo
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to reading more!!!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you very much, Gabi! I hope you enjoy it. :)
I have loved all your HG/ss stories and this one has started really well...more more soon!!!!!!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Aw, thank you so much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! I really appreciate that. More is on the way very soon! The story is finished, so it should post fairly quickly.xoxox
I'm so happy and excited that you've starting another fic! I'm loving the drama already! :)
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you very much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! I'm glad to be back. I'm warning you that this is a short one. :) I'm not starting any epics until the summer when I'll have more time (I'm a teacher). But I'm so glad you are liking Dark Santiago so far. I hope you continue to enjoy it!! Thanks for reading. xoxo
Now that's an intriguing start! I'm so glad that you decided to give us another piece of your excellent writing.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Oh, thank you,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
. I'm very flattered, and glad you found the beginning intriguing! More quite soon. xxoox
I have to say, this is one of my favorite fics from the Exchange. It is beautifully written and pulls the reader along on an emotional rollercoaster, or should I say ferris wheel?
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you so much, Blackeyedlily. I'm so happy to hear that you liked it! xoxxo
Good Lord, you're a fabulous writer. It is such a gift to be able to open a story with just enough exposition to suck the reader in, but still leave so much mystery that we're crying for more chapters.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
I'm kind of blushing and stuttering right now. Thank you very much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! More is on the way very soon.
Oooh! Intruiging! I love it so far!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you! I hope you will continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading! xoxo
Wow- great read - this piece is intoxicating - you have a great plot and you've done wonders with your imagery - keep up the good work - can't wait to see more!!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you very much, Mom7Knox! I'm really glad you liked this chapter. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the fic. Thank you for reading and reviewing! xoxo
Wow- great read - this piece is intoxicating - you have a great plot and you've done wonders with your imagery - keep up the good work - can't wait to see more!!
marvellous, you are back, as ever in fluent language, a joy to read and a new topic, too. Who wants more? Me....xoxox
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Hi, Oneira!!I've had work tied up in exchanges for a while now, so yes, I'm back. And I've missed being here! Thank you for your lovely review--the story is complete, so there will be more soon. :)xoxo
Welcome back, sister!There are about 30 other things that I need to be doing right now - chief among them going to bed - but I was so delighted to learn that you'd started another story, that all other plans have been mercilessly abandoned. What a *delicious* idea. I have often wondered how Hermione's parents ended up; at this point, I've read so much ff on the subject that it actually takes me a minute to remember that JKR probably would have given them back their memories, seamlessly, so as to better wrap up her larger tale. Your path for them is far, far more interesting.Talk to you again soon!Cheers,Christina
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Christina! I'm so glad to hear from you. And I am sorry that I kept you from important things like sleep. ;)I'm so glad to hear that you're interested in the story so far--as usual, I can't let the war end without ramifications. :) Lariope the angst queen. But in any case, the story is complete, so there will be more soon!Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...xoxox
I'm torn between waiting anxiously for the next chapter to post and rushing over to LJ and the rest right now. I turly like reading (and reviewing) here on TPP best due to the ease of seeing responses, etc. but boy have you made it hard to wait. lol Will Severus let her walk out? Will he stop her?? What might he say to her now and why did she let him just waltz through her mind like that? So many questions and the answers just a click away... ~sigh~ I will try to be patient and wait for the chapters to come to TPP, but my reviews may end up scattered all over the interweb before the entirety of the fic is posted here if it is a long one. :)
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Hi,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! The fic isn't that long--only four chapters, so you'll know more very soon if you'd like to wait, but if not... :)I'm so glad about the questions you asked! Exactly the ones I'd hope for! Hurrah!Thank you so much for reading!
What a lucious beginning, Lariope! I can hardly wait for more.I can see Snape quite clearly in his fortune teller role, only granting readings when he has built up enough energy to suffer through all of those endless hours with the public. He finds his strength from within. These sessions tax his reserves, but he is strong, or he was until Hermione showed up at his door...
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! And thank you for that perfect description of Snape in this story--that's exactly how I see him, and it makes me very glad. xoxo
Wow, what an excellent, original story! I hope you update frequently, because I'm REALLY looking forward to more.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you,
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
! I'm so glad you liked it. The story is done, so I should update fairly quickly. Thank you for reading!
facinating!! what a phenominal story. i really love the fact that you've examined what happened to her parents and how they dealt with what she did. great stuff. thanks so much
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! More is on the way soon. xoxox
Ooh...fascinating premise! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
I'm so glad you're interested! The story is finished, so more will be on the way soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
what a sexy f***ing cliffy! Lurve!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
*cackles evilly* I've spent a long time perfecting my evil cliffies.... lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing! xoxo
Wow. What an amazing start. I love the originality of the idea behind this fic. I am most intrigued and completely hooked already. Of course, because it is YOU, I knew that it would be phenomenal. I eagerly await the next installment dear!
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you so much, MarbleMeadow! It's very nice to be writing back to you again! And thank you for this lovely review. It made my day. More on the way quite soon! xoxo
I really, really, really want to read the next chapter of this.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Thank you! I'm so glad you're looking forward to it! The story is finished, so the updates should come fairly quickly. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
That was wonderful. I didn't realize until I saw your name how much I've missed reading your writing.
Response from Lariope (Author of Dark Santiago)
Oh, Makaem, thank you. That made me cry a little. I hope you will continue to enjoy it. xoxo
That was so sweet and kinda sad at the time. I am not sure whether to be sad for them, or happy.
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This...was awsome. Beautiful. And should certainly be longer. <3
Not a "love at first sight story" for me but a wonderful one after I looked at it a little longer. At first I could not imagine a world in which even a noncanon Snape would dress in the way you described it and work as a fortune teller. But - and honestly I normally decide very fast if I continue stories - I could not leave it. I had to read further. And after I finished I was still a little bit disturbed, not of the ending but of my opinion of the whole thing. And now even after some days I thought about it again and had to come back to leave a few words. I think you have the very rare talent to convince people of your stories even if the don´t want to. The same thing happened to me witzh Second Life. So please convince me further. I´m looking forward to read some more of your stuff.
A wondeful and unique story, so glad that I found it! Really wish there was a sequel, so that we could see how/whe/if Hermione ever finds her way back to Snape. :)