Missing You
neelix58 Reviews | 5.84/10 (58 Ratings, 0 Likes, 49 Favorites )
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for Missing You
Anonymous
That was lovely - so much said without actually divulging the exact events.
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted there to be enough without having to hold everyone's hand!
YES!!! Oh yeah! so glad this is the way the story is turning - you've kept me on the edge of my seat - all the way! Thanks for posting!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Glad you're enjoying it :)
Very good update -- Looking forward to finding out where Sev has been...
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
MMM... it's not so straight forward as getting all the answers... Severus and Hermione have conversations (and sex, damn them) without us being there sometimes! So he may explain his absence to Her but not to us! Thanks for reviewing!
Great so far! I can't wait to see where you take this.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks. It's only short and is finished at Chapter 7.
OMG I'm in tears....I can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Hermione!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Yes, she's been through a rough ride. But he's back now... :)
yay! thank heaven. lovely update. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
No, thank You for being such a loyal reader!
Oh, my how tender. I loved how you wrote this, with such feeling. My heart skipped when he moved froom the shadows.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
mm. I did draw on some personal experience for this chapter. Living with someone with depression is like grief, you do grieve for the person who is no longer there, and you miss them. And then if you're lucky, they come back!
A new start? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Could be couldn't it? We'll have to wait and see...
wow, the surge of her responce as realization dawn on her. You did a beautiful job. But where has he been for 3 years?
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!
Three years, hmm? Where has he been all that time, will we get to find out? Liked the awakening sequence and how greatly his returning affected them both. Hermione's going from tears to giggling; part relief at his return, part shock... very nice. Looking forward to chapter three!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I have to be honest and say I did steal that idea from Truly Madly Deeply...but I'm glad I was able to convey their emotions. Next chapter is queued!
Whoo Hoo!! He was still there when she woke! Now what????????
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
ahh... well, I guess that remains to be seen. Thanks for the review!
Oh... but where has he been? I'm sure your explanation will be worth the wait ;-) *being subtle as a sledgehammer*
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol.. you might have to wait a while for any explaination but I hope you enjoy the next bits all the same.
Is he a GHOST????
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol... No he's not, because it's hard to kiss a Ghost. But good idea!!
heart wrenching and beautiful!! Open up where ever it escaped from and let more out!! Thanks for posting!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Ahh, thank you so much! there are more chapters on the way.
Hot dog! I LOVE it!Livvy
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol. Thanks Livvy. Next chapter almost up.
I know you said it was an escaped one-shot, but I think it deserves some follow-up. Nicely written, I had a lump in my throat as I read the end... Even if this is destined to forever stand alone (I hope not), it's a lovely poignant vignette.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Well it was intended to be just that, a little snap shot, but as often happens these things run away with you. Thanks for the review!
Slap him. Why did he take so long? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lmao... he had his reasons! Be nice!! lmao
OMG...I love it! Will there be MORE?? Oh I hope so!Bless Severus' heart!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I know...bless him! lol... There is more...
that was just superb! thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks for the review. I'm pleased it's been so well received so far.
ohhhhhhhhh....so more than a one shot? I like it!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Yes, a few chapters now due to some cajoling! Thanks for the review.
Coming to get her is a good thing, yes?
Say yes, Hermione!
If I understand what has occurred, Hermione teaches Potions after Severus is Killed by Nagini but his body is never found; leaving some to believe he is alive somewhere. Hermione teaches potions and therefore the lab is spotless, but she doesn't live in his old chambers which accounts for the dusty couch. Hermione has some small hope that he is not dead and is waiting for him to show himself to someone who loves him like herself. She watches his old house but never sees a sign of him. What is this hope the drives her to hang on to his memory and wait for him to reemerge
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what a neat scene!! Thanks so much for your work and time!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks, I'm pleased you enjoyed it!