Epilogue
Chapter 7 of 7
neelixVisitors Arrive.
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Severus stretched his longs legs out in front of him and opened that day's edition of the Daily Prophet. There was very little news, apart from the new Minister of Magic taking up his post. Severus snorted and thanked the gods he was no longer in England. Having to answer to Harry Potter might well have tipped him over the edge. He seemed to have conveniently forgotten that Harry's input had released him from the Ministry's clutches all of those years ago, but it had been years since they had breathed the same air. Hermione had maintained some contact for a while, until the children had come along and absorbed her attention, and Severus knew they still communicated occasionally via the Muggle mail system. But Severus had grown into a grumpy old man. Better to hold onto his old grudge and be comfortable than to create new ones at this time of life.
The sun shifted higher, casting its rays over Severus's newspaper. With an annoyed grunt, he squinted and raised his gaze. His eyes were drawn, as they always were, to his garden, and with a huff, he pushed his creaking bones off the sun lounger and decided to take a tour. He lifted the battered straw hat from the table beside him and rammed it onto his head, not caring that he looked ridiculous. It was stained and patchy, with small holes gnawed out of the rim, and old, flaky bits of straw fell from it each time he put it on. Hermione was always on at him to get a new one, but their first-born, Carla, had bought it for him with her first official pocket money. For Severus, it was worth its weight in gold.
Stretching his legs, Severus walked to the arbour and deadheaded a few of his roses. The passionflowers were just starting to open, and his memory was jogged as to the upcoming date. Forty years of marriage needed a gift, he mused, making a mental note to slip down to the market before the weekend. He moved on through the arbour and down the sandy path to the lemon grove.
The largest lemon tree towered over the others, and he smiled slightly as he remembered planting it with Hermione the day after they had moved into the house. It had borne two lemons that year, and Hermione had squeezed them to within an inch of their pith, insisting that they drink the first glass of lemonade together. They had planted another tree for each child thereafter. Carla's tree was graceful but robust, its glossy green leaves turning towards the sun. Ella's tree was more shy and retiring, grown as it was in the shade of Carla's, but no less important. And Dante's tree. Severus frowned slightly. It had grown the strongest and produced the most fruit over the years. It was proud and tall, planted a little further away than the other trees for some reason, but the lemons were sweeter. Severus shook his head slightly and moved on down the garden to check on his herbs.
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Hermione lifted the pot of moisturiser from the window ledge and scooped out a soft dollop with her index finger, awkwardly replacing the lid. The scent of lavender and chamomile drifted to her nostrils, making her sneeze as she rubbed the unctuous mixture into her hands. She was still rubbing as she stepped out of the kitchen door and into the bright sunlight and scanned the garden for Severus. It was time for his potion, and Hermione knew he would purposefully forget to take it if she didn't remind him. The ravages of time could be eased but not stopped, and it still amazed Hermione that Severus Snape, of all people, would develop arthritis in his knees in old age. Patting the vial in her apron pocket, Hermione gingerly picked her way down the stone-strewn path around to the back of the house. Severus was in the potting shed, his straw hat dipping up and down in front of the shelves as she walked down the path. She paused only once, watching sadly as he took his time to stand and rubbed at his knees with the flat of his palms. She still loved him with a passion, and to see him age had been a great shock to her. Not that she hadn't aged herself. In fact, she had gone grey before Severus had found his first grey hair, a fact that had caused him to smile smugly at her on more than one occasion.
He must have sensed her presence, as he turned and raised his hand in a wave. Waving back, she increased her pace until she reached the shed and then leaned against the doorway.
'Are you okay?' she asked with concern.
'Stop it,' he muttered. He couldn't be doing with her fussing.
'Sorry,' she murmured, pulling the vial from her pocket carefully. 'Here,' she said, handing it to him without catching his gaze, pretending instead to be interested in his seedlings.
'More lavender,' he grunted as he unstoppered the potion and drank it quickly. Hermione slipped her hand in his and took the vial. Severus didn't let her go so fast, however, and held onto her fingers, squeezing them gratefully. Their eyes met, and Hermione smiled warmly at him.
'It's almost lunchtime,' she said quietly. 'Walk back with me?'
Severus took a last look at his new plants and nodded, following her out of the shed and closing the door firmly behind them. He took Hermione's hand in his, and they walked slowly back towards the house in companionable silence.
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Carla walked around the side of the house and watched as her parents trudged up the path. Her hearted melted as she saw her father take her mothers' hand, and she smiled to herself. She had never known a couple as much in love as her parents. She could only hope that she and Enrico would be as happy in the years to come. She looked down at Severo, who was pulling at her hand in excitement, his dark hair swinging around his head.
'Can I, Mama?' he whispered again.
'Sure. Just go carefully. Don't knock Grandpa off his feet like the last time, ok?' She smiled at him indulgently as he turned his grin to her, letting go of her hand and running excitedly down the path.
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Severus and Hermione watched with pride as their daughter spoke gently with her son. She looked every inch the Italian Senora with her long, black hair, white linen suit and designer sunglasses. Marriage to a businessman suited her, and she certainly enjoyed his money. She never forgot her roots祐everus made sure of that傭ut his attention was taken away from his musings as he watched his tornado of a grandson plummeting towards them.
'Here he comes,' Hermione murmured, laughing as Severus muttered an 'oh, fuck' under his breath.
Severo was lithe and taller than most six year-old boys. He was also the spitting image of his grandfather at the same age, and Severus couldn't resist a grin as he came within shouting distance.
'Grandpa! Grandma!' he shouted, his face bright with joy. As he came closer, he slowed to a jog, remembering his mother's words, and then he threw himself on Hermione's legs, wrapping his arms around them and squeezing tightly.
Hermione grinned down at him and ruffled his hair. 'Hello, darling,' she said.
Severo pulled away and smiled up into Hermione's face, and she bent to give him a quick kiss. As she stood, Severo wiped his mouth with the back of his hand and made a face. Severus fought the urge to laugh out loud, but he winked when he caught Severo's eye.
'Hello, Grandpa,' Severo said politely.
'Severo.' Severus bowed his head and held out his hand. 'Walk with us and tell us all about school, young man.'
Severo smiled and took his grandfather's hand eagerly as they began to walk again. He was still chattering away as they entered the house.
The End
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58 Reviews | 5.84/10 Average
You know, Nee, everytime I want to read something really sweet with a hint of lemon, I always end up back here :P Never realised I didn't review it before lol.Excellent work hon ;)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
*waving*Thank you honey! How kind you are.I'm starting my OU Fiction Writing course soon... If I get published I'll let you know. LOL!
very well written. but at the end ... do the children know they are witches and wizards?
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I think they probably do, yes. Thanks for the positive comments!
Very nice story. Thank you for sharing.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Glad you enjoyed it!
What a lovey weding, simple and sweet. I liked that she confessed her accidental intrusion into his mind.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted to bring the story around to the garden and the flowers. It was important to Severus.
How sweet, her reading room just off the potions lab. Although, he could have at least bought a bed!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol.. nope! The bed had to be Hermione's doing. He wouldn't want to assume anything you see.
Hmmm. Loved the fevered undressing. nice leomon as well.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks... I wanted it to be passionate and urgent.. they had something to mend, I think.
There was so mcuch suppressed and burried pain in this chapter, that was being released only to be held by a dam. AND Oh, gosh! That line at the end "I returned to get you," I could have melted in my chair!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol... yes! It made my heart leap when he said that too... sometimes when I am writing the characters come out with things even I don't plan.
what a perfect ending. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
No, thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Yeah! Thanks for such a beautifully told tale!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you fer reading and reviewing!
Nice ending! :)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks sunny, glad you liked it :)
Don't you just write the sweetest and most romantic stories?! I really do love your stuff and have rapidly become an avid fan (and to think it wasn't that long ago that I hated SS/HG pairings!)I somehow always see Severus with Italian or Spanish connections; definitely Medittearean anyway (don't know why really) so you can imagine this fic especially fitted my own viewpoint. Having read this through in one hit (I only just came across it!), I at first thought Severus was a ghost and thoughts of Truly, Madly, Deeply ran through my mind, particularly in view of Hermione's reaction. However, this is a very original fic and worthy of the highest praise. Not only am I a sucker for romance and happy endings but also for 'love everlasting' - I'm so glad that there are other true romantics out there! Thanks for sharing :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Okay, I confess I totaly stole that scene from Truly Madly Deeply - it is my absolute favourite film, it made me fall head over heels for Alan Rickman, and that obsession has never stopped. Anthony Minghella was a genius, there is no other way to describe the way he was able to convey the depth of someone's grief... and of course, Juliet and Alan were just perfectly heartwrenching in that scene...as for being a romantic, I confess I can't write a fic where there is no 'happily ever after' I'm afraid. I just think Severus got the shitty end of the stick and deserves some good times!Thanks for reading and being so enthusiastic xx
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
I completely agree with you about Truly, Madly, Deeply, although I have to say that I think it's Juliet Stevenson's film rather than Alan's - she's just SO good in it! I've watched it more times than is good for me and still end up crying at the very last scene where he stands at the window with his fellow ghosts and waves goodbye to Nina as she kisses her new man at the gate - it's so poignant!I think that most of us on this site would agree that JKR let poor Severus down badly. Having said that, I think it was right that he died in order to make the story more dramatic and significant - but just not in the way that he did and not with such bad feeling surrounding him. I'm sure pretty much everyone on this site would agree with that or else they wouldn't be here looking for 'closure' for the poor man, I guess!It's strange but my own obsession for AR didn't start until I saw him as SS (and that was only in recent years - not long before DH came out - because, up until then, I really wasn't bothered by the whole HP thing!) I started watching/collecting all his movies - and that was it I'm afraid, totally hooked! So glad to be able to share this obsession with others - and so loving ALL your fics - look forward to more! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks so much for your kind words. I do love writing, so it's lovely when a reader enjoys the results.If you are an Alan Fan, have you joined page 394 yet??? If not, why not??? We have a great time and lots of laughs and a few of us girls have met up a few times... The URL is on my profile page - hopefully see you there!!
What a nice ending. I'm glad they were able to make a good life together. I hope to see more of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you - glad you liked it!
I'm so glad that Severus and Hermione had children—three of them, and a "tornado" of a grandson who looked just like his grandfather had at that age. Severo is a bright and respectful child who had been known to bowl his grandfather right off his feet in his enthusiasm to reach him. I'm glad that Severus had planted another "little Eden" to mark the highlights of his and Hermione's life together. Sweet lemon trees and passion flowers were the most meaningful of all.You couldn't have written a more perfect ending to this story! It made me very happy to know that they had a long life together filled with love and family. Thank you for sharing this "one shot that escaped." From Hermione's utter sadness at the beginning to these most blissful years of their long life together, you have given us a peak into what Severus life has been like because he came back for his Hermione.Great writing! Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank so much for the long and thoughtful reviews to each chapter! I appreciate it!
I loved how Maria and the other villagers had marveled at the change in Severus since Hermione came to be with him. She completes him, and it showed in his countenance.Their wedding was sweet, and I can't imagine a bride who would not have felt completely loved and lovely in that setting. The passion flowers were the most wonderful idea, and I found myself laughing when Severus realized that Hermione has seen into his mind when they were making love for the first time in this home he had built, with his own hands, for his wife.Well done, neelix!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
The home Severus has built for Hermione is soooooo beautiful! The secret kept abode is light and airy, with an exquisite Potions lab and a magnificent library built just for her.Our Potions Master certainly loves his witch, and has spared no detail in creating the most perfect place for them to call home.But the question I have on my mind is what did Severus do at the Ministry that had been "the final step towards freedom for a man who had never known what freedom really felt like."This entire chapter made me happy.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I am so glad you've enjoyed this!Severus had to go to the Ministry to sign the declaration of his freedom, I imagine. He couldn't just wak away scott-free, he would have had to make oaths etc. to show he was on the side of good... and wouldn't return to England and rebuild a Death Squad!
I was so happy when Hermione said she would go away with him, and then amused when Severus stifled a laughed and said, "You don't know where I'm going."One thing lead to another, and they shared to most passionate lovemaking! Well done, neelix! I'm grinning.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted there to be very little dialogue betwen them, just some sort of unspoken, basic understanding that comes from knowing someone through a shared history. The little insights into Severus's sense of humour were there to show there was more to him than just angst!
Another beautifully written chapter! The way you described Hermione's reaction to seeing Severus and realizing that he was REALLY there was perfect. Her shaking hands, the hysterical sobbing were spot on. But the most realistic descriptive was "her stomach convulsed tightly as her tears wrenched themselves from her throat." Who hasn't experienced that kind of tearful, gut wrenching emotion at least once in their lives.Fabulous!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Well I know I have... and it usually had something to do with grief... or bad boyfriend action! lol
Oh, neelix, this is excellent! You got me in the very beginning with "It was the only source of light; the only one she needed." I just knew you were writing about Severus. I held my breath as I read her thoughts about the blood on the floor of the Shrieking shack, that night of shared passion and solace in the Arithmancy Tower, and of keeping watch outside Spinner's End. How sad... she only agreed to teach because she hoped he would one day return. "I miss you."And the she slept. And then he came from the shadows and whispered that he'd missed her, too, and sat to wait for her to wake.This is just beautiful! I'm so glad you decided to follow your muse and write the rest of the story.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Oh wow... thank you so much!I hoped peple would realise that I was in fact describing Hermione walking through the lab in sad lament. Severus was already there, watching from the shadows..
Great Lord, you scared me to death!The story his garden tells to the informed soul is filled with his living memories. But he is going away again, going away from "his own little Eden," and he wants Hermione to go with him.You took my breath away, you did.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
awww, thank you so much! I think that was my favourite chapter to write, to talk about his inner soul. And the garden? I have a garden that is planted in a similar fashion - not the same plants, but plants with meaning.
What a nice story. Hermione and Severus growing old together is great ending.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks :) I wanted to show their love lasting.
Absolutely lovely ending! You captured such a realistic and loving relationship between them both. Just lovely. X) Thanks for sharing!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you so much! What a lovely review! I am glad you liked it.