Five
Chapter 5 of 7
neelixA new beginning.
ReviewedThanks to kizzy7 for being such a lovely cheerleader and a fab beta.
Severus stepped out of his Floo with a bitter taste in his mouth and a smirk on his lips. The rolls of parchment in his hand held the Ministry seal, applied firmly by the Minister himself. The meeting had been brief but necessary, the final step towards freedom for a man who had never known what freedom really felt like.
Hermione stepped from the kitchen and leaned against the chipped white gloss paint on the doorjamb. She had changed into her Muggle clothes for their journey: faded blue denim jeans and a white t-shirt under a pale blue cotton cardigan. They didn't completely hide her slight frame but they did draw less attention to her weight loss. Her hair was already starting to regain its lustre, and it hung in long, wavy lengths around her shoulders. Severus was confident she would be back to full health in the coming months, and he looked forward to seeing her new curves.
'Done?' she asked him with a quirk of an eyebrow.
'Almost,' he replied. Turning, he stripped off in front of the fireplace, and piece by piece he threw his uniform of black into the flames. He stood and watched his past life reduced to embers, sighing slightly as Hermione wrapped her arms around his waist and rested her soft cheek against his skin. With an sharp exhalation, Severus turned to her and tipped her chin with a gentle finger, dipping his head to kiss her softly. They smiled at the same time, and Hermione giggled as she felt the stirrings of Severus's cock against her leg.
'Later,' Severus chuckled, addressing his comment more to his own appendage than to the willing witch in his arms. Reluctantly letting go, Severus walked to the threadbare armchair and lifted the neatly folded clothes that had been laid out for him. Raising his eyes at Hermione, he laughed out loud and then proceeded to don the pale blue cotton shirt and faded blue denim jeans she had acquired for him. He shook his head, still chuckling. He looked down at himself and then back at Hermione, looking her up and down pointedly. He wasn't sure if he felt flattered or offended that she had staked her claim by making them wear matching outfits. Hermione stared back at him guilelessly.
'What?' she asked, her voice innocent. However, she wasn't able to hide the twinkle in her eye as she appraised his frame in his new clothes and grinned sheepishly as Severus laughed again.
'It's time.' Severus gestured to Hermione to follow him, and they walked together into the back garden. Severus didn't look at anything but Hermione as they wrapped their arms around each other. He had already said a painful goodbye to his precious plants, and it was a necessary separation. To bring them with him would be to bring reminders of a past he no longer needed or wanted.
Neither of them looked back as Severus twisted on the spot and Disapparated them both to a new life.
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The first thing Hermione noticed was the heat of the sun on her hair. Turning out of Severus's firm hold, she looked around herself in awe. There were mountains to the left that dipped down to a green valley edged with trees. Where the ground disappeared in the near distance, a blue sea dazzled like azure, tempting her to dip her toes in at the water's edge. Hermione turned around, and a green meadow spread before her and shimmered lightly with a haze that wasn't just created by the heat of the sun. Severus grinned down at her a little.
'It's Secret Kept. Between us,' he added. He started to walk towards the meadow, and Hermione fell into step beside him and slipped her hand into his. After a five-minute walk, Severus stopped abruptly and bent to Hermione's ear.
'La Nostra Casa,' he whispered, flicking his wand gently. As the house appeared before them, Hermione smiled broadly. It was perfect, as she knew it would be. White stucco walls with pale green shuttered windows were offset by window boxes of trailing pelargonuims in bright, cheery red, but she didn't have time to admire them for too long as Severus pulled her up the steps to the front door.
Inside, the house was airy and bright but devoid of any furniture or décor. It was clean, and the floors were tiled with genuine terracotta, but other than that, no time had been spent to make the place liveable. Hermione turned to Severus with the question on her lips, but he pre-empted her.
'I do gardens and Potions labs,' he explained. 'I have no skill with interiors.' He smiled at her indulgently as he watched the penny drop.
'Oh,' she gasped, looking at the rooms with renewed interest. After a moment, she turned with yet another question hovering on the tip of her tongue. Severus nodded and then sighed as he rolled his eyes.
'I should have known. Come on,' he murmured, although it was clear he was amused. Hermione followed him eagerly, her heart starting to beat a little faster. Across the wide entrance hall, Severus pushed open the door that sat neatly under the curved stairway, stepping back for Hermione to walk inside.
The lab was exquisite. A long workbench dominated the room, and along each side were bottles and cauldrons of various sizes. The myriad of ingredients stacked against the back wall was dazzling, and Severus chuckled as Hermione walked around the room. He didn't think her eyes could get any wider.
'It's incredible,' she breathed.
'I like it too,' he murmured. Hermione was suddenly reminded of his presence and turned her eyes to where he stood.
'Thank you for bringing me here,' she said earnestly.
Severus snorted and stood upright, but he said nothing. Looking at Hermione askance, he walked over to what appeared to be a blank wall beside the cauldron shelf. He murmured something that Hermione didn't catch, and the wall shimmered and vanished, leaving a doorway open and a flicker of dappled sunlight creeping onto the floor of the lab. Severus paused and ran his hand down the clean lines of the door frame, resting his forehead for a brief second. Taking a deep breath, he turned to face Hermione with a look as close to apprehension as she had ever seen him wear.
'What is it?' Hermione asked him quietly. She felt the tightrope of their new found relationship wobbling slightly, and she was scared to put a foot wrong in case they fell and couldn't climb back up again. She waited at Severus seemingly tried to find something to say. He ran his tongue over his lips slightly and closed his eyes, swallowing a little.
'I took a gamble,' he said finally. 'I built this in the hope that... well, go and look.' He gestured half-heartedly with his hand and watched with bated breath as Hermione waked slowly towards the door.
As she stepped inside the room, Hermione could feel her lower lip trembling. She bit it, resolving that today was not a day for tears and she had shed enough already in this lifetime. But the room was magnificent.
Rows of shelves lined the walls, leading to a vaulted ceiling that supported a huge chandelier. It wasn't fancy, just large enough to house enough candles to light the room at night. At the far end of the room, two large glass-panelled doors led out onto a patio, and beyond it was a garden that looked like it had just been dug over. Sunlight spilled into the room but didn't hit the shelves. The room had been constructed to protect the books it would hold and provide a comfortable space to read them in. As Hermione gazed around her, realisation hit her and her resolve crumbled as she saw Severus watching her hopefully.
'You built this for me,' she stated incredulously, and fat tears started to run down her face. Severus walked towards her slowly, searching her face for his answer but asking the question anyway.
'Do you like it?'
Hermione threw herself at him, wrapping her arms around him and pulling him close, burying her head against his shoulder and laughing with joy.
'Like it?' she almost shouted. 'I love it!' She kissed him forcefully on the lips as he started to grin, and as she pulled back, she smiled softly and stroked his cheek.
'I love you, Severus,' she said.
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You know, Nee, everytime I want to read something really sweet with a hint of lemon, I always end up back here :P Never realised I didn't review it before lol.Excellent work hon ;)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
*waving*Thank you honey! How kind you are.I'm starting my OU Fiction Writing course soon... If I get published I'll let you know. LOL!
very well written. but at the end ... do the children know they are witches and wizards?
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I think they probably do, yes. Thanks for the positive comments!
Very nice story. Thank you for sharing.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Glad you enjoyed it!
What a lovey weding, simple and sweet. I liked that she confessed her accidental intrusion into his mind.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted to bring the story around to the garden and the flowers. It was important to Severus.
How sweet, her reading room just off the potions lab. Although, he could have at least bought a bed!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol.. nope! The bed had to be Hermione's doing. He wouldn't want to assume anything you see.
Hmmm. Loved the fevered undressing. nice leomon as well.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks... I wanted it to be passionate and urgent.. they had something to mend, I think.
There was so mcuch suppressed and burried pain in this chapter, that was being released only to be held by a dam. AND Oh, gosh! That line at the end "I returned to get you," I could have melted in my chair!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol... yes! It made my heart leap when he said that too... sometimes when I am writing the characters come out with things even I don't plan.
what a perfect ending. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
No, thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Yeah! Thanks for such a beautifully told tale!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you fer reading and reviewing!
Nice ending! :)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks sunny, glad you liked it :)
Don't you just write the sweetest and most romantic stories?! I really do love your stuff and have rapidly become an avid fan (and to think it wasn't that long ago that I hated SS/HG pairings!)I somehow always see Severus with Italian or Spanish connections; definitely Medittearean anyway (don't know why really) so you can imagine this fic especially fitted my own viewpoint. Having read this through in one hit (I only just came across it!), I at first thought Severus was a ghost and thoughts of Truly, Madly, Deeply ran through my mind, particularly in view of Hermione's reaction. However, this is a very original fic and worthy of the highest praise. Not only am I a sucker for romance and happy endings but also for 'love everlasting' - I'm so glad that there are other true romantics out there! Thanks for sharing :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Okay, I confess I totaly stole that scene from Truly Madly Deeply - it is my absolute favourite film, it made me fall head over heels for Alan Rickman, and that obsession has never stopped. Anthony Minghella was a genius, there is no other way to describe the way he was able to convey the depth of someone's grief... and of course, Juliet and Alan were just perfectly heartwrenching in that scene...as for being a romantic, I confess I can't write a fic where there is no 'happily ever after' I'm afraid. I just think Severus got the shitty end of the stick and deserves some good times!Thanks for reading and being so enthusiastic xx
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
I completely agree with you about Truly, Madly, Deeply, although I have to say that I think it's Juliet Stevenson's film rather than Alan's - she's just SO good in it! I've watched it more times than is good for me and still end up crying at the very last scene where he stands at the window with his fellow ghosts and waves goodbye to Nina as she kisses her new man at the gate - it's so poignant!I think that most of us on this site would agree that JKR let poor Severus down badly. Having said that, I think it was right that he died in order to make the story more dramatic and significant - but just not in the way that he did and not with such bad feeling surrounding him. I'm sure pretty much everyone on this site would agree with that or else they wouldn't be here looking for 'closure' for the poor man, I guess!It's strange but my own obsession for AR didn't start until I saw him as SS (and that was only in recent years - not long before DH came out - because, up until then, I really wasn't bothered by the whole HP thing!) I started watching/collecting all his movies - and that was it I'm afraid, totally hooked! So glad to be able to share this obsession with others - and so loving ALL your fics - look forward to more! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks so much for your kind words. I do love writing, so it's lovely when a reader enjoys the results.If you are an Alan Fan, have you joined page 394 yet??? If not, why not??? We have a great time and lots of laughs and a few of us girls have met up a few times... The URL is on my profile page - hopefully see you there!!
What a nice ending. I'm glad they were able to make a good life together. I hope to see more of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you - glad you liked it!
I'm so glad that Severus and Hermione had children—three of them, and a "tornado" of a grandson who looked just like his grandfather had at that age. Severo is a bright and respectful child who had been known to bowl his grandfather right off his feet in his enthusiasm to reach him. I'm glad that Severus had planted another "little Eden" to mark the highlights of his and Hermione's life together. Sweet lemon trees and passion flowers were the most meaningful of all.You couldn't have written a more perfect ending to this story! It made me very happy to know that they had a long life together filled with love and family. Thank you for sharing this "one shot that escaped." From Hermione's utter sadness at the beginning to these most blissful years of their long life together, you have given us a peak into what Severus life has been like because he came back for his Hermione.Great writing! Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank so much for the long and thoughtful reviews to each chapter! I appreciate it!
I loved how Maria and the other villagers had marveled at the change in Severus since Hermione came to be with him. She completes him, and it showed in his countenance.Their wedding was sweet, and I can't imagine a bride who would not have felt completely loved and lovely in that setting. The passion flowers were the most wonderful idea, and I found myself laughing when Severus realized that Hermione has seen into his mind when they were making love for the first time in this home he had built, with his own hands, for his wife.Well done, neelix!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
The home Severus has built for Hermione is soooooo beautiful! The secret kept abode is light and airy, with an exquisite Potions lab and a magnificent library built just for her.Our Potions Master certainly loves his witch, and has spared no detail in creating the most perfect place for them to call home.But the question I have on my mind is what did Severus do at the Ministry that had been "the final step towards freedom for a man who had never known what freedom really felt like."This entire chapter made me happy.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I am so glad you've enjoyed this!Severus had to go to the Ministry to sign the declaration of his freedom, I imagine. He couldn't just wak away scott-free, he would have had to make oaths etc. to show he was on the side of good... and wouldn't return to England and rebuild a Death Squad!
I was so happy when Hermione said she would go away with him, and then amused when Severus stifled a laughed and said, "You don't know where I'm going."One thing lead to another, and they shared to most passionate lovemaking! Well done, neelix! I'm grinning.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted there to be very little dialogue betwen them, just some sort of unspoken, basic understanding that comes from knowing someone through a shared history. The little insights into Severus's sense of humour were there to show there was more to him than just angst!
Another beautifully written chapter! The way you described Hermione's reaction to seeing Severus and realizing that he was REALLY there was perfect. Her shaking hands, the hysterical sobbing were spot on. But the most realistic descriptive was "her stomach convulsed tightly as her tears wrenched themselves from her throat." Who hasn't experienced that kind of tearful, gut wrenching emotion at least once in their lives.Fabulous!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Well I know I have... and it usually had something to do with grief... or bad boyfriend action! lol
Oh, neelix, this is excellent! You got me in the very beginning with "It was the only source of light; the only one she needed." I just knew you were writing about Severus. I held my breath as I read her thoughts about the blood on the floor of the Shrieking shack, that night of shared passion and solace in the Arithmancy Tower, and of keeping watch outside Spinner's End. How sad... she only agreed to teach because she hoped he would one day return. "I miss you."And the she slept. And then he came from the shadows and whispered that he'd missed her, too, and sat to wait for her to wake.This is just beautiful! I'm so glad you decided to follow your muse and write the rest of the story.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Oh wow... thank you so much!I hoped peple would realise that I was in fact describing Hermione walking through the lab in sad lament. Severus was already there, watching from the shadows..
Great Lord, you scared me to death!The story his garden tells to the informed soul is filled with his living memories. But he is going away again, going away from "his own little Eden," and he wants Hermione to go with him.You took my breath away, you did.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
awww, thank you so much! I think that was my favourite chapter to write, to talk about his inner soul. And the garden? I have a garden that is planted in a similar fashion - not the same plants, but plants with meaning.
What a nice story. Hermione and Severus growing old together is great ending.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks :) I wanted to show their love lasting.
Absolutely lovely ending! You captured such a realistic and loving relationship between them both. Just lovely. X) Thanks for sharing!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you so much! What a lovely review! I am glad you liked it.