Six
Chapter 6 of 7
neelixa gathering
ReviewedA/N: Warning for unashamed romantic fluff. Sorry!
The sun was high in the sky, and as Maria Gonzalez paused on her walk up the side of the sloping meadow, she squinted slightly and ran her hands through her glossy black hair. Smiling to herself, she carried on up the incline, shifting the weight of the trug basket slung over her arm. It was a happy day, and as her mother always told her, the sun shines on the righteous.
As she neared the house, Maria saw Severus walk out of the front door and down the stone steps. His hair glinted like the black of a crow's wing as the sun hit it, and his skin had darkened so much he could pass as a local. He had even perfected the accent typical of the region, and Maria shook her head as she mused on his arrival all of those years ago. She hadn't noticed until he had brought the girl along that he hadn't been whole at first. She had thought the house had been a folly, but all along it had been a labour of love, built with his own bare hands and a little help from the local labourers. And when the girl arrived, Severus had changed. His demeanour had lightened, and the rumour of him actually laughing had spread through the village like wildfire, intriguing everyone so much that an impromptu party had been thrown to welcome the girl responsible for his smile. There had been wine, music and dancing, and the whole village had been swept along by the joy that had emanated from Severus and his girl.
Severus walked down the path, and Maria beamed at him.
'Congratulazioni, Severus. The sun is shining for you today,' she said warmly.
'Grazie,' Severus laughed softly, bending to kiss Maria on both of her crinkled cheeks.
'Where is she, the beautiful bride?' Maria asked, tipping her head to one side with a slight smirk.
Severus smiled widely. 'She is beautiful, Maria. In every way possible. She's upstairs, I believe, gilding the lily.'
'Eh?' said Maria, not understanding the expression.
Severus laughed and shook his head. 'Never mind. Upstairs.' He gestured with his hand, and with a slight nod, Maria walked into the house and was immediately glad of its coolness.
'Maria?' Hermione called, peering over the top of the bannister rail. 'Did you get them?'
'Yes, 'Emione, I have them.' Maria waved up at Hermione with a smile, and then she proceeded to walk up the stairs.
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Laughter was filtering through the open windows of the ground floor of the white stucco house on the hill. The sound of children squealing and playing amongst the grape vines was almost like music as Hermione walked slowly into the library. She took a deep breath as she eyed the gathered throng through the open patio doors, and Maria placed a reassuring hand on her arm gently.
'You are beautiful, Emione. Now, go marry him before I change my mind about my Silvano and decide to jiggy with Severus instead.' Maria laughed warmly, and Hermione grinned back at the older woman, knowing full well that Maria only had eyes for her own husband. The thought of Severus waiting for her steeled Hermione's resolve, and she lifted her head high, clutched her flowers tightly, and stepped barefoot into the garden. A hush descended, and even the children stopped running around and paused to watch as she walked slowly to where Severus was waiting at the newly erected arbour. After a few silent moments, a collective sigh ran through the womenfolk of the village, followed by a ripple of gentle applause.
Severus turned to watch as the guests at his wedding closed ranks behind Hermione, who was walking demurely towards him with her eyes never leaving his face. Severus smiled as she neared. She looked incredibly pretty, and he marvelled at how such a simple dressa plain, white sundress caught around the waist with a dark purple satin sashcould look so lovely on the right person. Around her neck, Hermione was wearing the amethyst pendant he had bought for her in the market only the week before, but what made his eyes widen and fill with very unmanly tears were the flowers in her hair. He shook his head in disbelief at the intricate way her hair, hanging in loose ringlets, was interwoven with passionflowers. Severus brushed away a tear and laughed, a little embarrassed.
'You knew,' he stated as Hermione reached his side with a soft smile on her face. She nodded and lifted her small bouquet, passionflowers and calla lilies tied with purple ribbon. Taking a passionflower, she reached up and threaded it through the lapel of Severus's jacket, and he covered her hand in his before leaning forward and planting a delicate kiss on her lips.
A murmur of approval went through the crowd, followed by a couple of ribald comments, until the priest, an elderly man with salt and pepper hair and a liking for robust red wine, which showed in his portly build and sometimes unsteady gait, clapped his hands to signal the start of the ceremony.
Watching from amongst the guests, Maria slipped her hand into Silvano's, rubbing her thumb over his papery skin and gnarled knuckles and resting her cheek against his arm. Smiling down at the dark head of his wife, Silvano planted a kiss on her forehead and then turned his attention back to the wedding.
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Severus and Hermione clung together, dancing on their candlelit patio to the sound of Italian opera coming from a very old record player belonging to Silvano. The guests had long since wound their way back down to the village to let them have their night together, and Severus was nuzzling Hermione's ear and trying to sing along to the words. Rather than being romantic, his singing was hopelessly off-key, and the words were all wrong. Hermione laughed until her sides ached. With a sigh, Severus gave up, but Hermione could feel his grin against her skin.
'It's been a lovely day,' she murmured, her face nestled into the front of his shirt.
'It has,' Severus replied softly, kissing the top of Hermione's hair. His lips brushed a passionflower, and he pulled away to look into Hermione's face. 'Explain the flowers,' he whispered, pausing his gentle rocking movements.
Hermione smiled. 'I knew you would want to know,' she said, blushing slightly.
Severus watched as she closed her eyes and took a deep breath.
'It was an accident,' she said softly, 'and I promise you it will never ever happen again. I saw inside your mind, Severus.'
'You used Legilimency?' Severus sounded shocked, and he loosened his hold as he stepped away, looking at Hermione incredulously. He didn't even know she had the ability, let alone the intent, to use it without his permission.
'Not on purpose.' Hermione shook her head vehemently. 'I told you..' She paused. 'It was an accident. I didn't even know what it was at the time.'
'How did it happen?' Severus asked, puzzled. His brow was furrowed. He didn't want his wife exploring his thoughts whenever she felt like it.
'It's a bit embarrassing. But you can see it, if you want.' Hermione stepped closer and took hold of Severus's hands. Realising she was opening herself up to him, he gazed deep into her eyes and whispered, 'Legilimens.'
Finding himself inside another person's mind after such a long time was a little disorienting, and Severus had to steady his breathing as he sifted through the many thoughts that were swirling around. Suddenly, they were making love---their first time in the new house, in the bedroom that Hermione had lovingly transformed into a place of tranquillity. Hermione was whispering Severus's name over and over as he slowly thrust into her, and as their passions started to build, Severus could hear his own voice saying Hermione's name. Hermione orgasmed first and opened her eyes languidly to watch Severus's face as he came. At the critical point, Severus's eyes flew open to look at Hermione. Before he knew it, he was inside his own thoughts at the point of his orgasm, and saw he Hermione's face surrounded by thousands of passionflowers.
Severus gently pulled himself from Hermione's thoughts, holding on to her as she swayed a little. Raising her eyes to him, Hermione smiled slowly.
'Am I forgiven?' she whispered.
'There is nothing to forgive. It has given me an idea, however. Something involving our house and that wonderful bed you made,' Severus whispered seductively. He bent and kissed Hermione until she was breathless, his tongue stroking her desire to the point of no return. Pulling away slightly, with her eyes still closed, Hermione sighed.
'Bed...' she murmured. Severus chuckled as he wrapped his arm around her and walked his bride inside the house.
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You know, Nee, everytime I want to read something really sweet with a hint of lemon, I always end up back here :P Never realised I didn't review it before lol.Excellent work hon ;)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
*waving*Thank you honey! How kind you are.I'm starting my OU Fiction Writing course soon... If I get published I'll let you know. LOL!
very well written. but at the end ... do the children know they are witches and wizards?
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I think they probably do, yes. Thanks for the positive comments!
Very nice story. Thank you for sharing.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Glad you enjoyed it!
What a lovey weding, simple and sweet. I liked that she confessed her accidental intrusion into his mind.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted to bring the story around to the garden and the flowers. It was important to Severus.
How sweet, her reading room just off the potions lab. Although, he could have at least bought a bed!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol.. nope! The bed had to be Hermione's doing. He wouldn't want to assume anything you see.
Hmmm. Loved the fevered undressing. nice leomon as well.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks... I wanted it to be passionate and urgent.. they had something to mend, I think.
There was so mcuch suppressed and burried pain in this chapter, that was being released only to be held by a dam. AND Oh, gosh! That line at the end "I returned to get you," I could have melted in my chair!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
lol... yes! It made my heart leap when he said that too... sometimes when I am writing the characters come out with things even I don't plan.
what a perfect ending. thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
No, thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Yeah! Thanks for such a beautifully told tale!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you fer reading and reviewing!
Nice ending! :)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks sunny, glad you liked it :)
Don't you just write the sweetest and most romantic stories?! I really do love your stuff and have rapidly become an avid fan (and to think it wasn't that long ago that I hated SS/HG pairings!)I somehow always see Severus with Italian or Spanish connections; definitely Medittearean anyway (don't know why really) so you can imagine this fic especially fitted my own viewpoint. Having read this through in one hit (I only just came across it!), I at first thought Severus was a ghost and thoughts of Truly, Madly, Deeply ran through my mind, particularly in view of Hermione's reaction. However, this is a very original fic and worthy of the highest praise. Not only am I a sucker for romance and happy endings but also for 'love everlasting' - I'm so glad that there are other true romantics out there! Thanks for sharing :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Okay, I confess I totaly stole that scene from Truly Madly Deeply - it is my absolute favourite film, it made me fall head over heels for Alan Rickman, and that obsession has never stopped. Anthony Minghella was a genius, there is no other way to describe the way he was able to convey the depth of someone's grief... and of course, Juliet and Alan were just perfectly heartwrenching in that scene...as for being a romantic, I confess I can't write a fic where there is no 'happily ever after' I'm afraid. I just think Severus got the shitty end of the stick and deserves some good times!Thanks for reading and being so enthusiastic xx
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
I completely agree with you about Truly, Madly, Deeply, although I have to say that I think it's Juliet Stevenson's film rather than Alan's - she's just SO good in it! I've watched it more times than is good for me and still end up crying at the very last scene where he stands at the window with his fellow ghosts and waves goodbye to Nina as she kisses her new man at the gate - it's so poignant!I think that most of us on this site would agree that JKR let poor Severus down badly. Having said that, I think it was right that he died in order to make the story more dramatic and significant - but just not in the way that he did and not with such bad feeling surrounding him. I'm sure pretty much everyone on this site would agree with that or else they wouldn't be here looking for 'closure' for the poor man, I guess!It's strange but my own obsession for AR didn't start until I saw him as SS (and that was only in recent years - not long before DH came out - because, up until then, I really wasn't bothered by the whole HP thing!) I started watching/collecting all his movies - and that was it I'm afraid, totally hooked! So glad to be able to share this obsession with others - and so loving ALL your fics - look forward to more! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks so much for your kind words. I do love writing, so it's lovely when a reader enjoys the results.If you are an Alan Fan, have you joined page 394 yet??? If not, why not??? We have a great time and lots of laughs and a few of us girls have met up a few times... The URL is on my profile page - hopefully see you there!!
What a nice ending. I'm glad they were able to make a good life together. I hope to see more of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you - glad you liked it!
I'm so glad that Severus and Hermione had children—three of them, and a "tornado" of a grandson who looked just like his grandfather had at that age. Severo is a bright and respectful child who had been known to bowl his grandfather right off his feet in his enthusiasm to reach him. I'm glad that Severus had planted another "little Eden" to mark the highlights of his and Hermione's life together. Sweet lemon trees and passion flowers were the most meaningful of all.You couldn't have written a more perfect ending to this story! It made me very happy to know that they had a long life together filled with love and family. Thank you for sharing this "one shot that escaped." From Hermione's utter sadness at the beginning to these most blissful years of their long life together, you have given us a peak into what Severus life has been like because he came back for his Hermione.Great writing! Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank so much for the long and thoughtful reviews to each chapter! I appreciate it!
I loved how Maria and the other villagers had marveled at the change in Severus since Hermione came to be with him. She completes him, and it showed in his countenance.Their wedding was sweet, and I can't imagine a bride who would not have felt completely loved and lovely in that setting. The passion flowers were the most wonderful idea, and I found myself laughing when Severus realized that Hermione has seen into his mind when they were making love for the first time in this home he had built, with his own hands, for his wife.Well done, neelix!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
The home Severus has built for Hermione is soooooo beautiful! The secret kept abode is light and airy, with an exquisite Potions lab and a magnificent library built just for her.Our Potions Master certainly loves his witch, and has spared no detail in creating the most perfect place for them to call home.But the question I have on my mind is what did Severus do at the Ministry that had been "the final step towards freedom for a man who had never known what freedom really felt like."This entire chapter made me happy.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I am so glad you've enjoyed this!Severus had to go to the Ministry to sign the declaration of his freedom, I imagine. He couldn't just wak away scott-free, he would have had to make oaths etc. to show he was on the side of good... and wouldn't return to England and rebuild a Death Squad!
I was so happy when Hermione said she would go away with him, and then amused when Severus stifled a laughed and said, "You don't know where I'm going."One thing lead to another, and they shared to most passionate lovemaking! Well done, neelix! I'm grinning.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
I wanted there to be very little dialogue betwen them, just some sort of unspoken, basic understanding that comes from knowing someone through a shared history. The little insights into Severus's sense of humour were there to show there was more to him than just angst!
Another beautifully written chapter! The way you described Hermione's reaction to seeing Severus and realizing that he was REALLY there was perfect. Her shaking hands, the hysterical sobbing were spot on. But the most realistic descriptive was "her stomach convulsed tightly as her tears wrenched themselves from her throat." Who hasn't experienced that kind of tearful, gut wrenching emotion at least once in their lives.Fabulous!Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Well I know I have... and it usually had something to do with grief... or bad boyfriend action! lol
Oh, neelix, this is excellent! You got me in the very beginning with "It was the only source of light; the only one she needed." I just knew you were writing about Severus. I held my breath as I read her thoughts about the blood on the floor of the Shrieking shack, that night of shared passion and solace in the Arithmancy Tower, and of keeping watch outside Spinner's End. How sad... she only agreed to teach because she hoped he would one day return. "I miss you."And the she slept. And then he came from the shadows and whispered that he'd missed her, too, and sat to wait for her to wake.This is just beautiful! I'm so glad you decided to follow your muse and write the rest of the story.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Oh wow... thank you so much!I hoped peple would realise that I was in fact describing Hermione walking through the lab in sad lament. Severus was already there, watching from the shadows..
Great Lord, you scared me to death!The story his garden tells to the informed soul is filled with his living memories. But he is going away again, going away from "his own little Eden," and he wants Hermione to go with him.You took my breath away, you did.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
awww, thank you so much! I think that was my favourite chapter to write, to talk about his inner soul. And the garden? I have a garden that is planted in a similar fashion - not the same plants, but plants with meaning.
What a nice story. Hermione and Severus growing old together is great ending.
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thanks :) I wanted to show their love lasting.
Absolutely lovely ending! You captured such a realistic and loving relationship between them both. Just lovely. X) Thanks for sharing!
Response from neelix (Author of Missing You)
Thank you so much! What a lovely review! I am glad you liked it.