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The Runner
sunny33557 Reviews | 7.09/10 (557 Ratings, 0 Likes, 433 Favorites )
Who is the mysterious, early-morning runner out on the Quidditch pitch? Hermione discovers more than just his identity.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for The Runner
I just discovered your story this morning and read straight through to the current chapter. Each chapter is very entertaining. The beginning of the story is a refreshing surprise as a premise on which to initiate Hermione's interest in her Potions Professor. The Prof's training regimen is certainly unconventional and I can see why he performs in the dark. The whole voyeuristic aspect gives the Prof. such a boost in confidence and a naughtiness to the tale itself.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
She hadn't really seen him as a man before, then - Wham! :)
How wonderful and sweet Severus is.Harry- all grown up! Hope Hermione gets better soon.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
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Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
She will. She has a good caregiver! :)
That was just sweet. Surprising maturity on Harry's part. (Yay! He's growing up!)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
He is, deb. :)
I love the way Harry and Poppy both are looking out for them. Lovely story, you made my day.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thanks! :)
Awwww. A reasonable Harry? And a well written one at that! And Severus' reaction... so cute!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Harry will feature a lot more from here on in. :)
I think it's brilliant how you countered the increase in physcial contact in the last chapter with the increase in emotional contact in this one. It makes the relationship feel very balanced. *sigh* A man who will take care of you when you're really ill is a keeper!! LOL
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
He sure is! :)
Oh....this is such a sweet and sexy story, more please and hurry!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Pace yourself, girl. It's comin'! :)
That was intense. I can't think of anything else to say. It's the slow burn of a lingering passion. Wow.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thanks, Rhiannon! :)
Oh, the last scene was so peaceful and lovely. I'm so happy for them! And loved the mature Harry, handling it calmly instead of flying off the handle.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
He is post-war, and post-seeing Snape's memories. It helps. :)
That was beautiful, sunny. I always knew Snape had a tender side. He just needed the right person to bring it out.I can see why you thought my previous comment about developing a fever was so funny. LOL!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Yes, it was very appropriate! :)
nice job - so hard to pull off a believable teen HG, but your characterization works so well - thanks for your hard work and your timely updates -
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thank you. :)
Just when I’ve girded up my loins for another chapter of lust and slow burn desires, you surprise me and make me go all mushy and fuzzy, I now feel I need to find some kittens to play with, when I should be working. Once again I cry more, more, faster, faster, chapters that is of course.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Did you find the kittens? :)
Haha if we can't have the famous potter temper we'll be getting the weasley one!!! Oh good lord woman this just gets better and better!!! I can't wait for the next update. Something in my mind is telling me that molly will be the next to find out... Hahaha she thinks it has been so long for sev that she gives him the sex talk!!!haha
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Molly will find out in due course. A sex talk, hmm. Or a slapping, not sure which! :)
They're havin' a heat wave... A tropical heat wave...The temperature's risin'...It isn't surprisin'...They're havin' a heat wave... That was totally hawt, sunny! Woo hoo!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
LOL. Thanks, Beth! :)
Oh noes!Poor Hermione!Wizarding fever!That sounds dreadful!I love your Severus in this!He's adorable!Angela~~
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thanks, Angela. :)
From porn to love story in one chapter, great stuff. Please say the next chapter is in the queue, this is the best story around at the moment. Very well written and I like confused Harry.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
The next chapter will be up in a few days. Thanks for the review! :)
Aaahhh... that was sooo lovely! I am pleased that someone else has sussed what's going on. It will make for interesting interactions when Hermione is better. Nice chapter!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
She will be surprised how observant people are. :)
That was hot!Wonderful description and interraction.*big hug*Thanks for the update ;p
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thanks, dear, *hugs back* :)
More!!!!!! ~fans self, hunts for cigarette~
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Soon, dear, soon! :)
Wow. Well they are away from the portraits, so they have some privacy. McGonagall is going to flip.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
You may be surprised. Those in glass houses etc. ;)
Wow, gulp, just wow. Great chapter, I love your Severus and Hermione.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Thanks, Flittterkat! :)
Ahem - isn't this just a little bit dangerous? Out in the Quidditch stands, where anybody could see them? I'd hate to see Severus lose his job...
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Those lazy teenagers won't get up that early, and he knows the staff's habits. Let's just assume that being a smart ex-spy, he has some sort of warning charm in place, shall we? Or maybe he likes a little risk? ;)
Yum! But yikes...aren't they gonna be seen? We all know he's dramatic but apparently Snape is a little exhibitionist too ;-) - LOL
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Runner)
Who else would be around at that hour of the morning apart from fitness freaks and nosey know-it-alls? :)
Response from snapesphoenix (Reviewer)
Well - I suppose you're right but you never know. All the same I like this risky seductive Snape. :-)