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The Gilded Cage
ApollinaV311 Reviews | 5.59/10 (311 Ratings, 0 Likes, 221 Favorites )
Clever Miss Hermione Granger believes that by marrying Azkaban prisoner 11652 she can effectively skirt the new Ministry Marriage Law requirements. A story about morality, mortality, and pickled walnuts.
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ApollinaV
Member Since 2008 | 25 Stories | Favorited by 97 | 169 Reviews Written | 627 Review Responses
Like many proud alumni of the honorable Hufflepuff House, ApollinaV is a rabbid Huffle-hugger, champion pear-tickler, and founding member of Cleansweep-Streakers Guild (the AV-Eyeful is so named in her honor). Since graduating Hogwarts, she done 'responsible' and 'professional' things - and resolves not to do that anymore. Dreadful amounts of paperwork.
Reviews for The Gilded Cage
I wonder how Severus will react to his new robes. I think it'll only be a matter of time before Severus will want a real marriage to Hermione. Seems like she's already worming her way into his heart. I hope Hermione is able to aquit him of the murder charge. But I guess that's all in good time.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Absolutely, slowly but surely, they'll make this marriage work. It's a gentle warming. Thank you! AV
Awwww... I can just see his face full of wonder, a boy and his slinky. :)
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Every wizard should have a slinky to marvel over. Thanks sweetie! AV
Hey Apollina! This chapter was amazing! I loved how Severus actually took care of her and also took the opportunity to look at her work. I'm hoping maybe he can help her organize her shit better. Seriously theres no need to be all strung out on happy pills if you've got a Snape in your corner! :-) Hehehe. I can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Hermione needs a lot of help, doesn't she? And Severus too. I think they may be able to help fix one another. Severus needs a sense of purpose. Thank you Brena! AV
Very good chapter, I love the image of him "marking" her paperwork!!! Great work!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Oh, so you like that do you? I'm so glad. And I think it gives Severus a real sense of purpose that's so important. Thanks! AV
Wonderful! So enjoying your story, the interaction between Snape and Hermione are great. Looking forward to more!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thank you. Slowly but surely they are evolving. I have 59 chapters planned at this point. Thanks for the support and the review. AV
Read this on AFF, all I can say is love it!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thank you. I appreciate that. I aim to please. AV
I enjoy rereading a currently posting fic. It soothes me while waiting for an update. It allows me to not be a stalker fangirl. That is a good thing!10 points from Granger Industries for snaping at Lee Jordan in his new baby haze. I am sure the twins will be happy to welcome him back. I am not surprised that Severus does not clue into why Hermione might carry a full medical potions kit with her.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Stalker fangirl? Never. Are you really jonesing for another update? Sorry love. But I'm glad you're enjoying it just the same. How's this for sad though: I've been sitting in the airport since 6:00 this morning waiting for my connection, and everytime they reschedule my flight I shrug, because it gives me more uninterrupted time to work in TGC. That is sad. AV
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
LOL! Im sorry your flight keeps getting delayed. Okay not really because you are writing!!! Good thing you have your laptop with you. Smarty pants AV.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Hey, I'll take quiet writing time any way I can get it.
wonderful!! nice juxtaposition of the realities of the "successful working girl" and the "condemned prisoner" - really enjoying your work - thanks for all the time you put in!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Funny how those go together, right? They've both made gilded cages that they're caught in. And if they're smart, and work together, they just might set each other free. Yeah right. People never act with such clarity. Thanks love! AV
I think that was really sweet of Severus to care for Hermione like he did. I think she's more upset because she allowed herself to relax for once, than for the fact he took care of her. But I think that once she notices he got a lot of her work done, she'll appreciate it. Severus seems to genuinely want what's best for Hermione, and that throws her off, since she only knows him as her professor.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
*nods.* I think you pegged it just right. But remember, she doesn't just know him as her professor. She also knows him as Albus' murderer. He was never exonerated. I think that makes her also hostile towards him. -AV
Poor Hermione. I wouldn't want to be in her shoes. I am however curious to know what will be her rezction when she'll discover Snape's comment on her work papers. Can an Azkaban prisonner be hired in a company? Or maybe this will help him make his decision about his freedom... I know I'm asking a lot, and maybe you'll get confuse enough and give me a clue for what will happen in the future. *grin*
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
If Hermione is smart, she'll see a wonderful opportunity when it presents itself. And Severus seems to be happy marking papers again. Clues? Wow. Uh... How about this... don't ignore the Male OCs. Hopper. Mulciber. and Edwards. How's that, gumshoe? Thanks! AV
Liquid Sunshine. Hmm. I have a few patients who could do with some of that! :)
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Happiness in a bottle? I think everyone has looked for that at one time or another. But there's no such thing as happiness in a bottle. There's always a trade off somewhere. And there is/will be with Hermione. Thanks love. AV
you are fast becoming one of the authors i am most excited to see on the "just-updated" list. i absolutely love the bit about when she falls asleep and her glamours start coming apart. and the Assam....mmmm.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thank you. I appreciate that. I've been working on this fic for a long time now, and I hope that each chapter fits the bill and totally satisfies. AV
Ooo, I hope once she gets over her anger she realizes that he could really help her out of her staffing situation. Another great chapter, showing him putting together the puzzle of Hermione.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Hm? Are you advocating using prison labor? You slave driver, you! (I'd use him too.) And Hermione's not perfect in this fic. Nor is Severus. But I think they're perhaps just perfect for each other. Thanks! AV
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I often have a hard time reading Hermione as some kind of addict or something, but the way you draw these two, I see them filling in each others' empty places. Well, just perfect for each other, as you said.
Even now before we hit double digit chapters Severus is noticing details about Hermione that shows he cares. Her glamour, her perfect hair etc...Makes me smirk yes it does.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
I can't believe you're re-reading this! But hey, I'll smile and feel the warmth love, just the same. Besides, I totally credit you for spotlighting this fic. You rec'd it to...everyone, and they followed. Thanks love. AV
The description of Hermione's work day is just as horrific the second time I read it. Ugh. I am glad things have turned out with her buiness the way they did. What a soul anchor.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Indeed. They're so good for each other... in a twisted, messed up sort of way. Granger Industries is running her into the ground. She totally needs a Severus. Everyone needs a Severus. Let's all get one! Thanks! -AV
It was enough happy juice to make a Dementor produce its own Patronus. That's my favorite line in the entire chapter! Tee hee! I can't wait until Hermione sees the notes Severus wrote in the margins of her notebooks. And like he said, what else can she do to him? He's already in Azkaban. Besides, his insights may be so clever that she starts coming over every night and not just twice a week...Lovely stuff! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Actually, that's one of my most favorite lines in the whole fic. If Hermione is smart, she won't callously disregard what the Potions Master has to say about her work. Thanks love! AV
The renovations on his cell have begun and so has the time she spends in prision with him. Ahh the good old days .
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Ha! 'Good old days!' There's a funny thought. Who could predict that things could get so confused from here on out? Ah-well. I suppose now, knowing what you know, you can see the trainwreck coming. -AV
Actually, I believe that Rowlings Snape is a prickly thorn with the most tender roses of any character in her books. Well said!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
I whole-heartedly agree. Thank you. AV
Poor Hermione, trying to cram 48 hours into a 24 hour day... It's a good thing she doesn't have access to a Time-Turner, or she'd be physically 80 years old by now! And already her mind is working on magical air fresheners for Severus' cell. Sure, it'll probably make her some good money once it's invented, but she's doing it on his behalf! Is there perhaps a tiny corner of her brain that doesn't really believe he's a filthy murderer, or at least doesn't want to? It would be so easy for her to provide him with items of average quality, but she's insuring that what he gets is well-made and to his liking.I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Severus will be able to lighten the load of Hermione's schedule in the future as a return gift to her... I can just see the two of them eventually "talking shop" on her visits to the cell, brainstorming ideas for the business and thoroughly enjoying themselves...On to the next chapter!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
I always pictured Hermione in an unstructured environment that did not regulate when she could eat and sleep, would be a total mess and drive herself into the ground. But will it benefit Severus? And more importantly, does she want it to? Perhaps. Probably not now, but as they develop their relationship, it's a good bet. Like it or not, they're going to have to get along and play nice. Thanks love! AV
Aw, Severus took care of her, sort of. Poor Hermione sounds really far gone. That's just sad... Nice work.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thanks, love. Yep, it's got co-dependence written all over it. Hopefully they can take care of each other and give themselves what they need. AV
Good chapter -- has Hermione charmed the calendar she gave Severus to show when she plans to visit?
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
You know, that's something I had never thought of. And what a great idea. Thank you! AV
Oh, this is hard. You thougt that it was becoming to fluffy.
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Meh - I may stray into some fluffy-ness. A little levity amongst the darkness and gloom breaks things up nicely, but I wouldn't characterize this as a fluffy-fic. Thanks so much! AV
Oh, I am a bellydancer, I see that I make practice in my sexlive.I like the story a lot, and happy that your write again
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thank you my dear, I appreciate the encouragement! AV
Poor little rich boy... And Hermione's day sounds awful too, I'm looking forward to seeing the changes their mariage will bring... Great chapter!!!
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
Thank you! Poor little rich boy indeed! I know that despite both of their best efforts, the marriage is bound to throw everything on it's ear. AV
he wouldn’t dare throw them atop his fetid mattressI hope she will provide him with a new one. How is she going to take advantage of him on such a filthy thing? *grin*
Response from ApollinaV (Author of The Gilded Cage)
She is absentminded, but the new bed is coming. It actually gets its own chapter. And I love a good filthy fic, but soiled bedsheets isn't what I was thinking of. Thanks love! AV