Chapter Twelve - Island Idyll
Chapter 13 of 23
AlisonThis chapter begins Part Three. Aiko and Miyatsu are living their dream of creating a new species. In this chapter, we meet some of the results. Sakaki makes his reappearance in the story. Has he really forgiven Miyatsu?
ReviewedPART THREE
Chapter Twelve Island Idyll
The shade cloth flapped gently in the breeze, waking Aiko from the light doze she had slipped into. She yawned lazily and turned her head to see if her mother was awake.
Fujimoto Kagami was lying on a beach chair next to her, watching the children playing and laughing in the water. "Did you drift off?" she asked her daughter.
"Hmm, just for a moment," Aiko answered idly. She started to stretch, and then remembered in time that Benjiro was still curled asleep on her lap.
She stroked his soft fur gently with one hand, and was rewarded by the toddler's drowsy purr. He was the only one of the five children on the beach not yet able to reliably levitate; therefore he still needed to be watched while he was in the water. His older siblings had gone out further than he could manage, so after he'd had a paddle in the little waves and had raced about chasing seagulls for a while on the beach, Aiko had taken him to where Grandma rested under the shade stretched between two trees. The combination of the humid subtropical summer day and the soft wash of waves on the beach had been effectively soporific.
Carefully, so as not to wake the child, Aiko sat up straighter and looked out to where the others were still playing. The eldest twins Mieko and Montaro were levitating completely out of the water while holding the hands of their younger siblings Hanako and Hideaki. They were dragging them through the waves to their delighted laughter. Water splashed and sparkled in the bright sunlight as they played.
"What energy they have," Kagami commented. "And isn't Montaro getting tall! He's eye-level with me now."
"He's beginning to look very like Miyatsu," Aiko agreed. "And Mieko is almost as tall. Although I don't think she'll quite match her brother's length. He seems to be all legs and tail at the moment!"
"Your father was trying to explain accelerated growth rates to me the other day, but I'm afraid he lost me early on. Montaro and Mieko are only ten years old; yet I'm sure Montaro's voice has started to break. When he talks, it's deep one moment and high the next!"
Aiko chuckled softly. Her eldest "son" had been both embarrassed and puzzled about the changes his body was going through as he hit his early-onset puberty. Aiko had already explained the facts of life to her "daughter" Mieko to prepare her for the start of menses and knew that Miyatsu had talked to Montaro about what he could expect.
"Humans have the most extended childhood of any mammal," she explained to her mother. "But like Miyatsu, the kittens are only quarter-human. So they're maturing earlier. It's a learning curve for all of us."
"So Mieko and Montaro are equivalent to... what human age? Twelve, thirteen?"
"Mm-hmm, around there. And while Hanako and Hideaki are chronologically six years old, they're at the same point of development as a human child of about nine or ten. While my little Benjiro," and she smiled down at the kitten in her lap, "at eighteen months, is equivalent to a three-year-old human." She shifted a little. "And as big. My legs are going numb!"
"Miyatsu said he spent a lot of time gestating. Yet the kittens were only in their units for one year."
Aiko rested her hand on Benjiro's soft fur. Unlike Miyatsu, who dated his "birth" from the day his cells were put into the gestation unit, his children calculated their age from the day they were taken out.
"That's because cloning techniques have improved," Aiko answered her mother. "And Miyatsu was kept in the gestation unit much longer than necessary; we've since found out that actually slows growth rates down. When I first saw Miyatsu, he was smaller than me, even though we're the same age. If he'd been taken out of the unit after one year and given some mental and physical stimulation, he'd have been twice my size and nearly pubescent. But of course the researchers back then didn't know, because he was the first of his kind."
"Your father tells me that Miyatsu and the children should have the same lifespan as humans," Kagami said. "But how could anybody possibly know something like that?"
"When we took Miyatsu's stem cells to clone the kittens, we looked at things called telomeres. They're a good indicator of potential aging. Miyatsu's rate of aging is the same as that of a human male. Cat GMAs typically live for around forty years, Coatis a little less. But with his human genes, Miyatsu has a human lifespan." She grinned at her mother. "I'm glad he's got human genes!"
Her mother smiled back. "So am I. I must admit, I don't think of him as an animal anymore. I haven't for years. He's my son-in-law. Oh, I know you could never officially marry, but still, that's how I think of him. Just as much as if he were a human. What are humans, anyway, but intelligent apes?"
Benjiro moved slightly and Aiko looked down at him fondly. He drowsily licked the fur of one hand in his sleep, the kitten equivalent of thumb sucking. She sighed.
"What's wrong?" asked her mother. "You sound sad."
"I'm just thinking how Benjiro is the only one of the kittens without a twin. Montaro has Mieko; Hanako has Hideaki. Even Raku and Raiden will have each other, once they've finished gestating," she said, referring to the newest pair of kitten foetuses, currently growing in the gestation unit.
"And you're worried because Benjiro has nobody of his own age?"
"Yes. You know none of us, not me or Dad or any of the other researchers, could find what caused his sister's... failure to thrive," she said, using the polite euphemism for death during gestation.
"You were an only child, Aiko. And it did you no harm. Benjiro has four siblings, six if you count Raku and Raiden. He'll be fine."
Aiko nodded. "I know. It's just..."
"You're like your father: when Miyatsu's cloned siblings began to fail, he became very discouraged when he couldn't find the cause. But babies don't always make it to birth. It's not your fault, or anybody's. It just -- happens, sometimes."
Suddenly Montaro gave a shout and shot straight out of the water. Like an arrow he headed for the open sea, levitating so low his feet and tufted tail skimmed the surface of the waves, leaving a choppy wake. Hanako and Hideaki followed him. But Mieko hesitated for a second and then sped towards Aiko on the beach.
"Dad and Grandpa are nearly home," she said as her feet touched down on the sand. "Can we go out and meet the boat, Mum?"
Aiko laughed, thinking it would be rather pointless to refuse now that the others were so far out. "Off you go, then."
"See you later!" And Mieko turned tail and raced to catch up with her siblings.
Aiko watched the little group as they sped away over the bright water. The male kittens were all clones of Miyatsu and unrelated to Aiko genetically. But the girls were another matter. They were unrelated to their "twin brothers" in that the Shima researchers had used a different set of Adersi leopard, Coati, and human genes, kept in the same proportions as those that had created Miyatsu. Aiko had provided the human component for the girls. Although she thought of all the kittens as her children, the girls were the only ones related to Aiko genetically.
They all had warm brown eyes instead of blue, and their fur was not the same color as the males in the family, but had Aiko's black hair tipping the fur, so that their coloring was an attractive silver-gray with black rosettes, toning to a slightly darker dove-gray on their stomachs and tails. It also meant that Aiko's daughters were genetically her younger sisters...
"How do they know?" Kagami wondered, breaking into her thoughts, and confusing her until she realized her mother was talking about Miyatsu's imminent arrival. "I can't even see the boat yet."
"Miyatsu says everyone has a 'psychic signature'," Aiko explained. "He always knows where I am anywhere within a kilometre radius, and if he levitates high enough, he can spot my signature from further off. The children aren't as good at picking up signatures yet, but they're learning. So if they say Miyatsu's nearly home, then he is. Feel like a stroll to the jetty?" she added.
Her mother stretched and sat up. "All right. A little exercise down the beach before dinner would do me good."
"Come on, Benji-chan, time to wake up," Aiko said, stroking the child's fur and adding the affectionate diminutive to the end of his name.
Benjiro blinked drowsily at her. Bit more sleep, Mummy...
He did not vocalize. Although he could talk, he spoke to her mind to mind when he was sleepy. Aiko felt a wave of love for the toddler -- he looked so like the Little Kitten of her childhood, with his kittenish face and soft baby fur. He had his father's wide blue eyes and sweet nature. She brushed her cheek against his forehead in a brief "kiss".
"Daddy and Grandpa are nearly home," she answered. "Grandma and I are going down to meet them at the jetty."
"Okay, Mummy." This time Benjiro spoke out loud. He yawned, showing needle-sharp kitten teeth, then slid off her lap to stand on all fours on the sand. He arched his back in a stretch, and then rose to stand on two feet, his long tail held in a graceful curve behind him. Standing on his hind legs like this, he was about the same size as a three-year-old human child.
Aiko stood as well, taking his little hand in hers. This was another area where she and her father as principal researchers had improved on the original genes. Miyatsu had insisted that, if possible, his children should not be hindered by short fingers and long claws. Although these were ideal for a fighting creature, they were a clumsy nuisance in a sentient animal who needed to be able to grip a pen or use a keyboard to write. Accordingly, the two Drs Fujimoto had manipulated the genome of each of the children to develop long fingers, as dexterous as any human's, with a fine pincer grip. Each finger was tipped, not with hooked retractile claws, but with flat human nails.
Aiko gazed out over the sea. The sun was beginning to set, painting the sky in a blaze of bright orange, pink and purple, and the children had disappeared, lost in the glorious colors and distance. The distant drone of a boat engine could now be heard faintly over the murmur of the waves.
Grandma took Benjiro's other hand, and with the child between them, they began to stroll down the beach, leaving three sets of anomalous footprints in the damp sand.
*
Several vessels were moored at the jetty or bobbing at anchor nearby, some belonging to fishing families living on the island, others by staff who worked at Shima labs. By the time Aiko, Kagami and Benji arrived, the big catamaran had been moored in its usual spot. The catamaran was the family's preferred mode of transport. It was fast, comfortable and efficient, and could reach the mainland in around three hours on a calm sea, making day trips feasible.
Dr Fujimoto caught sight of his wife and daughter, hailed them and stepped onto the jetty.
"The BioTech Expo at Kagoshima was very informative," he called out. "Miyatsu and I are planning to go back tomorrow."
Benjiro called out, "Grandpa!" and ran to him; Dr Fujimoto caught him and swung him up high with a laugh, then let the child clamber onto his back and loop his tail loosely around his upper arm.
"Where are Miyatsu and the twins?" Aiko asked. "Are they still below deck?"
Dr Fujimoto smiled enigmatically and shook his head. "They're not on the boat. Look behind you."
Just then Aiko heard Hanako's high childish giggle. She turned and saw Miyatsu and his four eldest children, levitating a little above the sand so as not to leave footprints, all five of them grinning at her triumphantly.
"You walked right past without seeing us!" Hideaki said, wriggling in childish joy at tricking the adults.
"You've done it!" Aiko cried in delight. Miyatsu had been coaching the children for some time to block light and shield their thoughts whilst simultaneously levitating; but only now had they perfected the difficult maneuver.
The five landed on the sand, looking very pleased with themselves.
"I didn't know they'd managed it until they appeared on the boat five minutes ago," Miyatsu said.
"They scared the life out of me," Dr Fujimoto admitted. "We were just discussing the Expo, and suddenly there they all were! I nearly jumped out of my skin. You didn't sense them did you, Miyatsu?" he asked.
"No, I didn't pick up a thing. You approached the catamaran downwind, so your scent didn't give your positions away. Very good, I'm impressed."
"We've been practicing by ourselves all this week," Montaro said proudly.
"Montaro and I got the hang of it a couple of days ago," Mieko continued. "And we've been coaching Hanako and Hideaki. They did well, didn't they?"
"Teach Benji, too?" Benjiro asked hopefully from his grandfather's back.
Miyatsu transferred Benjiro onto his own shoulder. "You need to be a little older yet," he told him. "You have to be able to shield from light first, that's the hardest part."
Benjiro considered this. "Can block light now," he insisted. "Look!" And he screwed his eyes tightly shut in concentration.
With the child flickering and shimmering on his father's shoulder, but never managing to completely disappear, the family began to walk back up the beach towards their house.
*
After the children went to bed that evening, the adults talked for a time about the BioTech Expo in the city of Kagoshima. Dr Fujimoto was effusive about the new developments in biotechnology that he had seen; however Miyatsu seemed to Aiko to be a little subdued. He appeared content to let Dr Fujimoto do all the talking. Finally Grandma and Grandpa retired for the night to their little villa adjoining the main house, and Aiko and Miyatsu went upstairs to their bedroom.
Aiko left the light off and walked out onto the balcony. She watched the moonlight glimmer, leaving a silvery trail on the dancing waves. Miyatsu joined her and stared out over the water, deep in thought, his tail tip flicking idly, his claws extending and retracting continually where his paws rested on the balcony railing.
"You've been shielding your thoughts since you got home," Aiko accused her mate gently. "What happened at the Expo that upset you?"
Miyatsu glanced at her with a slight smile. "You know me too well. I wasn't shielding intentionally. I ran into an old friend of ours at the Expo. The Raikatuji Corporation has a stall there, showcasing some of their new developments. I saw Sakaki."
"Sakaki?" Aiko's former boss had not contacted the pair since the day they'd left. She'd assumed this was because he felt guilty about the manner of their parting. "Did you speak to him?" she asked.
"Yes. His mental shield is as tight as ever, but I believe he was happy to see me. He was eager to talk and wanted to know what we've been doing since we left. But I've never been able to completely forgive him for that day. I'm not as generous as you. I felt a little uncomfortable speaking with him again." Miyatsu's voice was wistful as he said this.
Aiko put one arm about her mate's waist affectionately, leaning her head against his upper arm. "It was twelve years ago! I've forgiven him. He didn't mean it, you know that; it was just a silly overreaction on his part. How was he? Did he look well?"
"A little older-looking. He's still as charming as ever. He wanted to know if you were with me at the Expo; I think he was disappointed when I said you'd decided to stay on the island."
"I'm beginning to think I should have gone after all. I've always thought what a pity it was we let a ridiculous misunderstanding destroy our friendship. Sakaki's basically a good man, I believe, just too used to getting his own way."
"I'd like for us to be friends again," Miyatsu admitted. "Before we came here to the island, you and Sakaki were the only family I had. Your father wants to go back to the Expo; there's such a lot we didn't get to see today. I told Sakaki I'd look in on him tomorrow. Why don't you come with us?"
Aiko nodded. "Yes, I think I will. I'd like to see Sakaki again."
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32 Reviews | 5.94/10 Average
OMG! I LOVED THIS! I COULDN'T STOP READING! this was SO AWESOME! MiyatsuxAiko 4ever! I was so glad to see that you are planning a sequel! It doesn't matter how long it takes, I will NEVER be separated from the Fujitaka family....Miyatsu doesn't have a last name, does he? whatever. :D I LOVED THIS! THANK YOU FOR A WONDERFUL TIME AWAY FROM REALITY! "Cheers!!!" 1000000000000000000000000/5 stars
Wow. I can't believe this is finally over. It was such a wonderful story, so romantic and full of adventure and mystery, I just loved it. It should definitely, definitely be published.I don't suppose there's hope for a sequel, is there? *pleading eyes*
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Thanks for those nice comments, I'm currently in the process of trying for publication. As to a sequel, well I've had a few ideas, but it will have to wait until I've got more time.I'm glad you liked the story!Alison
Very sweet reunion. They deserve that peace after all they've been through.
For some reason, I suspect Sakaki's easy acceptance of their relationship. That may have more to do with my cynical nature than anything you've written, though. I was surprised that Suzu reacted quite that strongly, but I think it works for that reason.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hi
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, it's nice to hear from you again. Your comment re Suzu was spot on. I won't spoil the story by revealing too much, but she is something of a hypocrite. And as for Sakaki, well ... again, don't want to be a spoiler for my own story.Thanks for your review - I love getting feedback!Alison
This chapter is so awesome! Of course, the reunion was sweet--the high emotion brought me to tears--but I also loved how the youngsters' personalities all worked together, especially M&M, that this whole horrific experience of the last few chapters has bonded them more firmly, and now they truely are soul-mates.
I've already read this chapter four times; it is one of my favorites.
Beautiful chapter! I love the way you've shown all of the family interaction. From the moment Aiko's mom brought out her old little kitten, it's been neat to see them so supportive, and I love how both of her parents see their family with the same uncondtional love as if they were all 100% human.
I love M&M finishing each other's sentences. I love how Montaro is always so impulsive, leaving Mieko to explain things and then catch up. It shows how perfectly in tune they are with each other. Again, all of the interaction between the siblings and the older generations are so real. You've shown that though the children are 'clones,' they have different personalities.
You've dealt with some tough things in this chapter with just the right touches. Yutaka is the best dad ever!
Somehow I don't trust Sakaki...
The bonding is an interesting idea. :)
Poor Sakaki. It's interesting that he can't translate the loss he felt when Koneko died to the more deep feelings of feline mates. It also makes me wonder if maybe Suzu's sedative wasn't as safe as they'd thought, and that was when Koneko had died.
And yay for Mieko and Montaro. They'll never have to be lonely like Miyatsu was. That's awesome.
Oh, I love how the description of the kittens is just like how she imagined they would be all of those years ago. It looks like they are good parents.
I am still loving this story very much. It's great to see Miyatsu and Aiko having a family of their own. :-)Happy new year and good luck with getting this published!
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hi
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, it's great to see that you're still following the story! Chapter Twelve brings this story to it's halfway point, showing what Miyatsu and Aiko are doing re: creating his species. From the next chapter the action starts to pick up again. I hope you continue to enjoy it.Alison
I haven't heard that song in a long time, and it is very evokative of the peacefulness of spring. The first couple of sections are so beautiful with Miyatsu being reunited with some happy memories of his past and his sweet birthday gift to Aiko.
But Sakaki was scary! I wondered how Miyatsu kept Aiko from being hurt by all of that broken glass. I'm glad they're getting away from him.
Suzu really is a piece of work! Sakaki's right about her being a hypocrite. Of course Miyatsu is romantic. He is so much more than he seems, and Sakaki's intensity is unnerving.
Oh, how sad for them to be separated, but I like the way you did each of her parents' responses. I usually scoff when people use 'soul mates', but you've done a good job actually showing us that they are joined. I love that her mother brought her little kitten down for her. That Aiko made her own little Miyu as a child is an excellent reminder of the length of their connection.
Well, ouch. But at least Sakaki was cool about it.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hi
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, I'm so glad you've read the last two chapters and let me know that you liked them! Glad I haven't squicked you yet, that's one of the things I worry about with this story, that people won't be able to get past the fact that Miyatsu is three-quarters animal, or as my daughter would say, three species rolled into one. I really liked your "alien" analogy, btw!I didn't realise you're one of the admins, I'll get to work tonight and make the corrections on the next chapter. Yes, Suzu was not happy, was she? And while Sakaki is fine with it *now*, wait until Chapter Ten (mwahahaha!)Thanks for your kind words.Alison
Sorry I haven't reviewed in weeks. Sooo busy.
Oh, the water shield is cool--I love the details, and I love how he admits that she made him feel special. I am such a sucker for stories with telepathic lovers, and this is so amazing! I guess I don't see the squick because I see it as strictly SciFi, as though he were a sentient alien. And since I've been watching Star Trek since before I could read and reading SciFi since I was old enough to be turned loose unchaperoned in a library, it seems normal to me, and (as I said before) telepathic is my favorite kind.
“Exactly like the wild Purshans,"
Way to build anticipation! And their first non-kiss was so sweet, the way he started purring.
The tone of their encounter was perfect, and the pillow talk was touching. It felt very genuine, like echoes of every couple that has problems with fertility.
I was so relieved when she finally said she loved him back. Now I get to read the next chapter.
Oh, he loves her!
Watching Aiko come to terms with her emotions and desires was interesting. I can kind of begin to see what the long story is going to be, freeing Miyatsu from Sakaki and doing the cloning.
I DO hope we'll get a new chapter soon. Now that she knows... and I'm very afraid concerning all the evilness you've probably still planned for them. :-/
*is speechless* *takes another moment* That was unexpected (only because by the third chapter, I forgot this was higher-rated) and hot. I'm so glad that the next chapter is in the queue because I'm really curious now about them. I'm so glad she decided to go out there and comfort him. This story is almost as fascinating for what it doesn't say as what it does.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hi
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, and thanks for all the nice comments so far! I love receiving feedback. I hope you like the rest of the story once it's all posted, as well. The next chapter has just been sent to me for corrections, so I'll do them and get it posted up asap. Alison
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
From what I read in another review, is it actually complete, so we're just waiting for it to be posted?
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
That's right, it's actually 22 chapters long. But both my beta and I seem to have a blind spot where correct punctuation is concerned (particularly commas! I either put them in the wrong place or leave them out altogether) and typically each chapter needs a good edit before it's posted publicly.Please note: the next chapter has a higher rating than the previous ones. But only to advance the plotline!Alison
Oh, another clever twist. She's lucky that Sakaki feels that kindship with Miyatsu. This is so neat!
This is amazing, his mind reaching hers and his purring when they embraced. I love how she helped him to renew their friendship.
And I'm blinking back tears myself. I think I've just gotten hooked on your world.
THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY. I WAS NOT SO SURE TO START WITH, BUT YOU HOOKED ME! GOOD CHARACTERS AND DRAMA GALORE. I LIKE FURRY FICTION AND TPP WAS THE LAST PLACE I EXPECTED TO FIND IT . BUT THIS IS GOOD. HOPE YOU PUT UP THE SEQUEL HERE TOO (HINT, HINT).READ SOME OF YOUR OTHERS TOO & LIKE THEM TOO. GOOD LUCK GETTING PUBLISHED & KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! JIM
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Thanks, Jim! I appreciate your kind comments. I do have plans eventually for a sequel, but that is still a way off in the future, as Real Life leaves me with very little time to write: I'm beginning university in the New Year, and will be studying a lot! However, there will be holidays in which to write, so I'll see what I can do!You might like to go have a look at my DeviantArt gallery, I have the story up there under the title: "The Miyatsu Project" and various artists have done drawings of their interpretations of the characters. Just put Fayzbub DeviantArt into your search engine and it should bring it up - I'd love to see you there!Merry Christmas!Alison
I've enjoyed this story immensely so far - very intelligent SF. What's more, you've managed with the first chapter what many published books haven't managed this year: you've made me care about your heroes! I want to know what happens next and I want both of them to be all right.Great job. Keep writing and good luck for when you try to get published.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Thanks very much for your nice comments,
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! There will be lemons from chapter four onwards, but only where it's integral to the plot. I hope that doesn't squick you.As a matter of fact, I'm hoping to get a manga publisher interested in the story but wanted to try it out on the internet first to gauge the level of interest. Myatsu might be a bit difficult for a manga artist to draw though! Although I've got his general body shape fixed in my head, I have no idea what his face would look like, even though I invented him!Alison
Response from JunoMagic (Reviewer)
Not squicked, no. I feel for Myatsu, and I want him to find comfort and love in his lonely existence.And I'm also very curious about how people will react for professional reasons. I've got a manuscript for a fantasy novel in the works that has a race which are a kind of furry fay living at high altitudes in the mountains. And I have to admit that ever since I read about furry fandom, I've been unsure whether to continue or not... It's difficult enough to write not-quite-human in a plausible and poignant way...Won't publishers frown if they hear that the story was available on the internet? Or are manga publishers cool about that? Oh, and if Myatsu ever gets drawn, please let us know over here. (I'd LOVE to see him.)I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hi
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
! Best of luck with your novel, BTW, fantasy seems to be the way to go nowadays, it's a big market. I usually write scifi, but there's often a large fantasy element within most of my works.The story is with a publisher at the moment and I've let them know that it's on the internet (I had it on my webpage in total until my site crashed, and I'm s-l-o-w-l-y rebuilding it now!) I'd had up to 20 000 hits on the story, and used that as a "selling point" to get the publisher interested, along with the fact that I've been professionally published for a number of years past. If the publisher decides to go ahead and publish the story, I will of course take the story down. But I'll leave up a note on the vacated story site so that people following the chapters can email me and I'll send them the story in it's entirety.Don't worry, if the story does make it into manga, *everybody* who has ever commented on my story will be told! (And the nice comments will get a free copy from me, hee hee!)It's nice to hear back from you, I only hope you continue to find the story a worthwhile read!Alison
I am so surprised that there aren't any reviews yet. The plot is very original and one I am enjoying so much. I cannot wait to see how it progresses.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Thanks
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's 22 chapters long, I hope you like the whole thing once you've read it all through!Alison
Um. Wow. *fans self * I can't say that I've ever had that reaction to a documentary, but I've never had a genetically modified hottie asleep on my couch, either! Beautifully done.
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
Hello
Response from Alison (Author of Love Inhuman)
, it's nice to meet you! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and I loved that you thought Miyatsu was a hottie! Thank you for the nice comments, and I hope you continue to like this.Alison
Response from Melenka (Reviewer)
A tall, strong, sensitive guy who purrs? Yeah, that's pretty hot. LOL