A well-written and really catching chapter! It leaves me rather puzzled, though, as so much doesn't seem to make sense right now... so I will patiently wait for you to tell us.

Author's Response: Alcina-- thank you so much for this wonderful review! I really appreciate it. This is my first longer story, so any and all words of encouragement/concrit/comments are greatly appreciated! Ah, yes. You will find out what is going on... eventually. I hope you continue to enjoy! ~kizzy

All evidence aside, I still don't believe it. Can't wait to see your story unfold. In hindsight, I wonder if Hermione wishes she had stayed anyway and if she had would things have gone differently.

How interesting!! I can't wait to read more. But did Hermione just trust the "official" pensieve? Because surely there must be more to the killings... as I'm sure we'll find out in further chapters. :*)

Zinnia? Must you continue with the flower names? Well not continue since she is long since died I guess! Icky. Dare I hope that it is Mr. Severus Snape crashing through the door? ((wimpers))

Drats, another evil cliff hanger!  Bad, bad author!  Very suspenseful chapter, I can't wait to see how it works out.

Nice work my dear. You have really 'fleshed' this story out from what I read before (bad pun not intended, but kept once realised...). I will be interested where you take this now that (Ta Daa!) Severus saves the day!

Well, I must admit that you had me completely fooled -- my hunch about the murderer's identity was quite wrong.  My first suspicion was that it was Henry -- but as the story went on, it became clear that it couldn't possibly be him.  That's when I started to think that perhaps it might be Solomon -- that the loss of his wife drove him insane and eventually caused him to come up with a twisted plan to resurrect her.  I never even thought about the guard.  In fact, I didn't even remember him -- I see now that I shall have to go back and re-read some of the earlier chapters and look for what I missed...

Thank you....at least we know that someone came for her (Severus to the rescue)!

SEVERUS! IS HERE!! WHOOP! But leaving it there? With only two chapters to go... evil author LOL! Love this.

I'm going to ask a slightly different question . . . where (or why) did you learn what a decaying body looks like?  O_o

YES!!! Here comes Severus, and he's wearing his Underwear over his trousers and his special Superman T-Shirt!!!Awesome chapter... although it did make me go 'eughhh!' lol....Can't wait for the update.

Oh!  That was exciting, gross, intriguing.  You've truly displayed the mind of a madman.  But why, why, why did you leave us hanging?  Nasty kizzy and her terribly nail-biting cliffies!  I would HOPE that the next chapter is in the queue, or close to it!  By the way, super-fantastic job, m'dear.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! you're evil. i'm sure i've said it before. pure evil. and i love it.

OMG. That desciption was PERFECT. Exactly what I wanted you to say! Squeeeeee!!!! Great job!!!!

Eww, I don't think I would want to come back to life if my body looked like Zinnia's. He was kissing her? Major gross out. LOL. OMG I hope it is Severus to the rescue!

OMG!!! It's Severus isn't it??? *sniff* I absolutely love that darling man!! Okay, dead body description is absolutely horrid, but accurate from what I've heard. Good job. Things like that ought to turn one's stomach! I am loving this... I only hope when all is said and done that Sev & Hermione waltz off into the sunset!! *hugs*

Oh my GOD - that's what I think after every chapter! The corpse made me feel sick. And of course Severus would come!!

Author's Response: I was a bit queasy writing it... one of my betas is a real life pathologist, and so I glean as much info from her as I can... sometimes rather gruesome info, lol! Thanks, sweetie!

Yay!  The cavalry arrives! :)

HERE THEY COME TO SAVE THE DAY!  i can't wait to see who it is!

seviekins to the rescue!  what a horrific scene you painted, tho.  well done and thanks so much

seviekins to the rescue!  what a horrific scene you painted, tho.  well done and thanks so much

Who was responsible for that blast? I'm ready for the next chapter.

AWESOME! you've got me all psyched! i must know what happens next!

yikes!  the thot plickens!  it's getting even more exciting.  thanks so much and i look forward to further developements.

I know running away would have messed up your storyline, but I don't want him to go back to prison. And she would be safer.  Although I guess Henry and Snape will be able to find common ground in saving the woman they both love.