This Present Darkness
kizzy7236 Reviews | 6.14/10 (236 Ratings, 0 Likes, 178 Favorites )
Hermione is forced to consult a bitter Snape on a mysterious potion... Rating is for later chapters. Completely AU.
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I'm a sucker for happy endings.
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Reviews for This Present Darkness
Well I had tears in my eyes all the way through that. I'm still in two minds who this killer could be! And Solomon, how dare he hit Severus like that. I look forward to the next chapter very much.
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
*tissue* Yes, Solomon was out of a professional line there, but he really hates poor Sev. Thanks,
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
! The next chapter, I'm very happy to say, is in the Q!
Gods – now you have me chewing my nails until the next chapter gets posted!
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
It's in the Q, dear! Thanks,
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
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oh my god... I think I have just worked out who the bad guy is.This was heart wrenching, and now I am crying.... but it is brilliant! Hurry up with the update... Please??
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
*hugs* doll. Thanks so much! The next chapter is in the Q AND I actually finished the story! *happy grin*
Life on the run wouldn't be so bad. Who cares what Rita says? Aaarrrgg!
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Amen. Come on, Hermione! Thanks,
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
-- next chappie is in Q!
I vote we all go bust Sev out now! His girl needs him.
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Yup, let's go! Thanks,
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
! More soon.
It's got to be Solomon. That was my first instinct, but then you threw me off his trail... Clever, clever, clever! I'm ever so glad you've updated again, and sorry that I've been one of the things taking your time. Brilliant as ever, dearest!! *hugs*
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
*red herrings galore* Hehe. Oooh, my dear, believe me that you were not taking up any of my story finishing time-- not you at all! I've really enjoyed working with you, and I have been stuck for other reasons. But I finally finished, so now I can post this and move on! *hugs* back!
OK, that was really stupid on Hermione's part. So, now she opens herself to be attacked.
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Yeah, she wasn't thinking, for sure! Thanks, blue. More up soon!
I wonder how long Severus will be in prison? Will his spying affect the sentence?
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Oh, you'll see soon, dear! Thanks,
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
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I'll bet that chubby guard blabs! :)
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Oohh, sunny. You'll see! ;-) Thanks!
Well, at least Snape knows Hermione's character well enough to know that she wouldn't run away with him, despite her feelings for him.I can't wait for the next chapter. I have an idea on who the killer is, but I want to see what happens. Also want to see what happens with Snape now that he's back at Azkaban.
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
At this point, Hermione can't run away with him... More will be up soon. Thanks, Rhiannon!
I have been secretly reading this. Secretly? you ask. Yes. I found this story when it was like 8 chapters in, and normally, I review after each chapter, unless it is not a WIP and is old and stuff and just review at the end...But. I haven't been able to STOP READING THIS STORY. Not even long enough to review, and for that, I apologize. However, just know that I have been salivating to contiune after each chapter is finished. And guess what? Chapter 10. It's it. No more. None in queue. And I have time.But, because I am on fucking pins and needles waiting for an update, all I am going to say is:Oh, well, nevermind. I'll make you wait for my thoughts, just as I have to wait for more chapters. (You know I'm evil. And I know you do because you read my stuff and KNOW the kind of things I like to do.) Well, okay. I have a little emotion in my black heart to tell you:I AM HOPELESSLY ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! *gushes*
Hopes Rl is slowing down for you to write. 
Response from kizzy7 (Author of This Present Darkness)
Oh, shell! ~hugs you~ And, yes, I am fully aware of your evilness. I know! I was really, really good about updating, once a week. The next chapter IS done (as are the next four chapters!)-- I'm waiting to get back from my beta. So hopefully I'll be able to put the next chapter in the queue soon enough. This week, I'm thinking. And speaking of freakin' evil... when is your next chapter coming out? Perhaps I am being greedy, but the last cliffie was sheer evil genius. Hehe.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Reviewer)
OH, THANK THE MIGHTY GODS!!!! Hurry up beta! Sheesh, don't they know I need my FIX????? How rude of me... I should offer cookies or coffee or some shit to get it back faster... wait, that's not me--I could always... well, nevermind. I'll behave. For now. My next chapter? Hm. Good question. *turns to the man sitting on her shoulder* Severus? Are you going to coroperate long enough so we can write the next action-packed scene? The bastard said No. But, Hermione said yes. And you know who wears the pants in ThAT realtionship. So, soon, my dear. Hopefully next week. Thank you for asking.