I just started reading this and had to say that your writing style is very real... when Hermione fell onto her broken wrists I actually pulled my hands away from the keyboard and balled my fists because I could almost feel her pain.  

So... I just finished all eighteen chapters that you have posted so far.  I'm not usually into dark fics, but I'm really. . . enjoying doesn't seem to be the right word, so perhaps intrigued? by this fic of yours.  It presents a very interesting perspective on the human psyche and explores its darker side in a straight-forward and unapologetic way that still comes off as being poetic, not clinical.  I love that you are depicting war as something twisted and complicated, with numerous shades of gray.  The lines between right and wrong are so very blurry, but despite that, true evil can still be recognized.  I feel that a lot of fics, and even the books themselves, deal with the issues of war, murder and death, but gloss over the less clean-cut aspects associated with them.  Torture is something very real and would have to have been a part of a war involving a truly sadistic creature such as Voldemort.  I appreciate the fact that you're delving into those dark, secret places that, to some extent, dwells within each of us.Great writing!  I look forward to reading more.

Excellent chapter!  Those three kids... did one of them truly let things slip, or did Draco leak it? Is Draco considered one of the "junior DEs"?  Looks like the exercise is good training for Draco and Harry.  Poor Severus; I hope he keeps healing potions in his robes, not just a poison.  Thanks for the new chapter!! I hope RL settles down for you and the boys.

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read more! I hope RL clears up for you some!

Whoa.  How'd Draco get there?! O_o

Yes! Keep on going! It's worth it :)Livvy

interesting.  I wonder who this is.

poor draco.  it remains to be seen what he has gotten into.  wonderful update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Keep it up! I love this story :)Livvy

Wow! just spent the past 2 days reading this story and I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Interesting story thus far, just started today. :) I rather like your development with Hermione. However it would be rather fun if Draco further complicated things, it seems he is a weak mind that can be cultivated for the 'greater good' however it would be interesting if this was just another ploy of the Dark Lord, or rather an independant action of Draco to accend to power and remove his father from the inner circle. People always want Draco to be saved, but what if he wasn't salvagable, or what if he takes Severus's advice to heart and serves his own purpose and his is limited by a need for revenge against his father in the ways in which he is most firmiliar..?

i do hope draco is salvagable.  severus did take a giant risk.  wonderful update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Oh no! I feel so sad for Narcissa! Wonderful chapter again. And we even get a glimpse of Hermione. Thanks for not abandoning this story! xox

Didn't Draco see Hermione?  Or was he Obliviated?

Your are the writer and I follow your path.Lead me.

What a very dark story.  I'm not usually one to read this type of story, but you had me hooked from the beginning.    Poor Hermione.  My heart is just breaking for her in this story. You are definitely a gifted writer.  I do hope you'll continue on with this story.

Ack!  I know it was best for Severus to leave before Mundungus could possibly out him, but it's important for him to know about how Mundungus died and what he said.  Will Hermione be ordered to kill Mundungus?  Eeps!!  I know you're way busy with real life, Babe, but I still hope you can update again soon.  Thanks for the new chappie!!

Wonderful as ever, always leaving us hungry for more and scratching our heads wondering what will happen next. Brava 

Hey, hey! I'm not Slytherin, and I'm reading! Glad you're back. It's been a long vacation, eh? "grins" Just copying this chapter so I can read it in leisure later, then review.

eagerly awaiting the continuation. 

Who is the person willing to be killed for the cause?  Why is he/she so willing, what is killing that person?Will Draco turn to Severus for help?

i would like to see severus and remus become at least semi-friendly.  wonderful update.  thanks and smoochies

I really like how you develop this AU. It all fits. Dumbledore as the puppet master makes me think almost as much as Lucius behaviour. But who is going to sacrifice? Mysterious... I love it!Thanks so much for keeping up the writing!Kisses

I like that you're including severus more in the story but for the love of god give him and hermione something to do!  Everyone seems so miserable, you evil, evil, author!  As always, thanks for writing and sharing. :)

sad and rather terrifying.  thanks