Chapter 20: I Definitely Do!
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debjunkThe happy end to our tale.
ReviewedChapter 20: I Definitely Do!
Severus Snape pulled his new wife to him and kissed her passionately. His hand came up and cradled her face as he enjoyed her mouth. He never wanted to pull away, but the lack of oxygen was going to his head. Finally, he pulled back and smiled at his bride. She still wore the simple—yet elegant—wedding dress. Her black hair was curled and pulled back from her face. Her eyes gazed upon him with utter devotion. Unable to resist any longer, he scooped Sybill up and carried her over the threshold of her… no, their… cottage. With long strides he brought her to the bedroom and laid her gently on the bed.
The wedding had been small and quiet, except for the cackling, and crowing of the chickens that were Sybill’s friends. They’d taken over everything, sweeping Sybill from her home early that day and bringing her to a classroom that had been converted to a dressing room. They’d pampered her and fussed over her, making her into the most beautiful bride Severus had ever laid eyes upon. They’d even descended upon him, rushing into his dressing room en masse, clucking away about his appearance.
“Severus!” Minerva shrieked. “You can’t leave your hair down like that!”
Severus looked to Minerva curiously. “What’s wrong with my hair?”
“This is your wedding day, Severus. It’s not as if you’re just taking a stroll around the lake!” Pomona piped in.
Severus’ eyebrows furrowed as he looked in the mirror. “What should I do with it? I’ve always worn it this way.”
Rolanda came up behind him and began fussing with his hair. She picked up a section of it and examined it closely, turning it this way and that. “That’s just it, Severus, you always wear it this way. It should be special for today.”
Severus felt himself lose patience. “So, what do I do with it?” he snapped.
Rolanda had now taken all of his hair and waved her wand over it. It suddenly appeared to be very curly, bordering on frizzy.
“Gads, woman, I look hideous!” Severus cried.
Rolanda quickly reversed the spell. Pomona bustled over and began to feel his hair. She was soon joined by Minerva. The three women spoke amongst themselves while weaving their fingers through Severus’ long locks. Finally, at his wits end, he pulled away and scowled at the three harbingers.
“For Merlin’s sake, keep your hands to yourselves!”
Minerva went up to him and placed her hands on his shoulders, directing him back to the mirror.
“Severus, what do you think about hair extensions?”
Severus sputtered. “What?”
Minerva picked up a lock of hair. “Your hair is too short to pull back comfortably. If we added some extensions, you could tie it back behind you.”
Severus glanced in the mirror and tried to envision himself with longer hair, pulled back behind his neck. He was horrible at imagining such things. Huffing in exasperation, he looked back at Minerva.
“Show me,” he demanded.
Pomona and Rolanda clapped their hands together and giggled in appreciation as Minerva waved her wand, and Severus’ hair grew another six inches. With another wave, it was secured behind his neck with a black, silk tie that had been fashioned into a bow, the ends left to hang alongside the tail. Minerva motioned for him to take a look. Severus frowned, but looked into the mirror anyway. The sight before him was not entirely loathsome. He arched his head to the left, then to the right. It definitely could be worse. He turned so he could see the back.
“It will do,” he muttered.
The women all nodded and began to cluck among themselves once more. Their hands were all over him, straightening his tie, brushing imaginary dust from his suit-coat, and generally fussing about his outfit. At long last, they pronounced him perfect and disappeared as quickly as they’d appeared.
The ceremony had been beautiful. Lucius had been Severus’ best man, and Narcissa, the Matron of honor. The Malfoys had hugged both Sybill and Severus furiously once they’d been wed.
“Congratulations, my friend,” Lucius said as he pulled away from Severus. “I hope she makes you as happy as Narcissa makes me.”
Severus’ grin was not the first of the day, nor would it be the last. “She does, Lucius.”
“Well, don’t take her for granted. Narcissa has been explaining my past self’s treatment of her.” Lucius gave Severus a disgruntled look. “I’m half tempted to hex myself!”
Severus laughed heartily. “We all have a chance at a new life, Lucius. This is your chance to make amends for prior wrongs. It certainly feels good to be able to do that.”
“Indeed it does,” Lucius agreed.
Now, Severus looked to the woman who’d agreed to spend the rest of her life with him. He certainly would not take her for granted. She had hidden in the shadows for too long. It was time for her to shine, and he would be there to help her always see how wonderful she was and how much he loved her. Seeing her glancing at him lovingly, Severus felt the urge to shout out to the world that she was his. He restrained himself, of course.
oooOOOooo
Sybill looked to her husband with love. She couldn’t believe how incredibly handsome he looked with his hair pulled back and an impeccably tailored black tuxedo gracing his frame. Her breath hitched in her. She couldn’t believe that this incredibly wonderful man loved her. She wanted to shout out to the world that he was hers. She laughed loudly, instead and pulled him onto the bed and over her.
Grasping his neck, she pulled his head down and gave him a searing kiss. “You are the sexiest thing alive, Severus.”
“You, my dear, are the sexy one. When I saw you in this dress, all I could think of was that I wanted to tear it off you.”
Sybill arched her neck back as Severus’ lips covered it with passionate kisses. Her breathing was getting a bit fast and her pulse was beginning to race.
“I felt the same way when I saw you in this tuxedo. You make wearing black a fashion statement, love.”
Severus said nothing, but continued to trail kisses down her neck. Finally, he lifted his head and gazed into her eyes. Sybill caught her breath again as she stared into his eyes, seeing an eternity of love in them.
“I love you, Sybill,” Severus choked out, his voice now rough with emotion.
Sybill’s face lit up as she smiled at her husband. “I love you too, Severus, more than life itself.”
Severus smiled back at her, before descending and capturing her mouth in a heated kiss. Sybill’s heart fluttered at his closeness. She could feel his hands caressing her body as she did the same to his. Her mind was lost in his dizzying kiss. This man was hers, and they would be together always. The life she’d hated before had finally become a joy to her, as she’d found this amazing man to share it with. This would be the first day in a lifetime spent happily in each other’s arms. Sybill truly couldn’t have asked for anything more.
The End
A/N: Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews throughout this story. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. A final bow to my beta, Lilith Kayden, who has done a remarkable job as always.
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a real chicken party. *lol*yes, this is what happens when women cometogether to chat about such an event as marriage.!And when a certain Snape is involved, the reactions must me even more chaotic.So cute of him to take her away before the "surprise party" to make such a sweet proposal - scene.very nicely written! he hasn't got any spare ring for another Sybille? No? It is so much fun to open box after box. nasty boy.“Sybill, you are everything I want. You have helped me to become more of the man I wanted to be. You love me and make me feel worthwhile. I can’t imagine being without you. I want you with me always.”THIS is what a girl wants to hear! yes, well chosen! if that would not turn her, what would.thank you for ther chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I'm pretty sure she was turned already, but his words were the icing on the cake to help her know how much he feels for her.
LOL Yea! He proposed! Whoot! It was mean of him ot have told her of the surprise birthday party - but at least she was a good sport about it. I was stunned that Minerva or Pomona didn't see the ring on her hand when Sybill put on the hair clips - especially Rolanda! Hello, shinny thing on her finger?Very cute chapter, but alas I feel the end drawing near.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I think they were all too absorbed in the gifts and how she'd react. Alas, the end is drawing near. But it will be a happy end!
Love the note about your father! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks. It was quite comical.
Love the nice Lucius. Can I have one too? :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Mmm, hmm! He's lovely, isn't he? I usually don't like men with long hair, but between Severus and Lucius... Wow!
adored the loving man lucius turned into. beautifully don, my deb. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really think that given the opportunity we can all become the best we can be. Lucius just had his opportunity later in life.
yummy, you really took my comment seriously. Thank you.And your explanation was beating it.Missing memorie might change actions and reactions and feelings of and in a person.Yes, he has a new chance.I found it critical to let Draco do the curse, it being such a dangerous and complex one. He could easily have damaged his dad more than intended.But my concerns were unneccessary. Lucius is in the safe hands of his very close and loving wife and his maybe now forgiving son. wow.maybe a reunion. and peace for at least three or five people. Sybil doesn't have to fear for her life anymore. yippee.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, things are coming along nicely, aren't they? (We can hope, right?) I too thought it was the right thing for Draco to do the curse. He took on that responsibility, giving Severus a break for a change. Being that it was his dad, it was a family responsibility. I should have a new chapter up within a few days.
saved by the ... ring!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, isn't it wonderful that he gave that to her? The man just might be a Seer himself!
i'm really enjoying the pace of their relationship. and good on hermione for appoligizing. by the by, if she can't be with severus i deperately hope she's not with ron! thanks so much deb. you rock!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
I like Hermione appologising! yay! and I like Sybil making freinds with Firenze and wanting to work with him to make the divination department better. I enjoyed the 7th year class as they discussed tea leaves. i like seeing a writer's ideas of magic and it's uses. I think her line to the kids that they are in grave danger was so cute! this is a sweet story. thanks for continuing it.congrats on the honourable mention! good on you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Aww, that's sweet of him to check the students were not hassling her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
an interesting excourse on divination, tea leaves and chrystal balls you were giving here.nice, how she handles classes now.Finally allowed to be a real teacher at last.and always Severus on her heels, in a most charming and positive way of course.Hermione apologises. hey, that girl is grown, I dare say.no, severus says that.interesting to see him not on the receiving end of her charms. rather being after some other woman, and more mature. really interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Oh, it sounds like she had a lot of fun first day of class. I liked the new improved teaching plan.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
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I had just been thinking about this story yesterday, and look! Here it is! Excellent update, I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yup, it's up again. The updates should be pretty regular from here out.
I am so glad that this story got a mention and that you're updating it again. This was another awesome chapter. Her first day teaching as her new self was topped off nicely by her friendships with everyone and that special something developing between her and Severus. *squee*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
I liked her changing the walls from pink to blue. I could just see the fairies from Sleeping Beauty. And how funny that she was hitting on Severus for fun, but was it really for fun or did her subconscious know that they belonged with each other - were her ramblings about them being together the truth for once?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
I think that Hermione's reaction was spot on. And I love how Sybill was talking about her fear of being alone. I really can see her concerned about that. As to Severus, I know that it must be hard for him to see someone he cares about putting herself in harm's way, but she does have a point. Hopefully her decision will not come back to haunt her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Nice to see Sybill and Harry have some closure. He probably could have really benefitted from her real insight. And while I can understand Sybill hating being cooped up, she really should listen to Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
LOL I like the idea of Severus in a pillow fight. It's nice to see the two of them bonding in their common misery of having been a puppet. It really is nice to see social Severus instead of recluse Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Poor Sybill. Years of heavy drink are hard to give up, especially when faced with such stress. She and Severus really do have a lot to offer each other. I look forward to their sober discussion.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Poor Sybill. It just looks like she can't be free, doesn't it? It is nice to see that Severus is on her side. It is a shame that all that stuff in the Room of the Requirement was lost. Hopefully she is wrong about the Grim.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Oh, k, wow. She moves and he gives her a protection ring and she sees herself kissing Severus. If those knds of visions come true - like dreams do, so will I!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Nicely done. I do love that Sybill is having a hard time letting go of who she was and I'm sure she will lament the inability to no longer say whatever comes to mind and be accepted. I like that she was honest with Severus and he accepted her apology and made ones of his own. I think the two of them need each other as friends in the worst way.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Yay!! Sybill sheds the past. I like that the staff accepted her. I wonder how the students will feel about their 'new' teacher. And I wonder how Severus will feel about being saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Very nicely done. I so love that poor Sybill was more than the batty old loon everyone thought she was. And of course I don't mind that she saved Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
OH, i love the explanation for why she was hitting on him! Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.