Chapter 12: Abduction
Chapter 12 of 20
debjunkA vision comes true.
ReviewedChapter 12: Abduction
Severus hadn't spoken to Sybill for the rest of the week. He didn't accompany her back to her home, so she just chose to Apparate from the castle to her cottage. She wasn't stupid, after all. She fully understood the danger she was in on a daily basis.
The weekend loomed ahead of her. She knew she would be lonely this weekend. Severus usually popped in at some point every weekend, but she doubted he would show his face. She found she was more worried about his anger than the obvious danger that threatened her.
She hated having Severus mad at her. She had grown quite accustomed to his company. She had come to treasure their time together. Unfortunately, with his ire, she had only received dark looks from him when she had passed him in the hallway or had seen him at dinner. He had taken to sitting on the other end of the table, far from her. He would glare at her occasionally, but that was the only eye contact they had made these past few days. Sybill had been beside herself, not knowing what to do to make him forgive her.
Tears formed in her eyes as she thought about him. He had been so cold. She missed him. It had only been a couple of days, but she missed his sarcasm and his company. She had fallen for him, as her vision had attested. However, she didn't know how that vision would ever come to fruition with his being furious with her. She would have to wait and see.
Today, however, she would not sit and pine for a man who obviously didn't want to be around her. She needed to go to the grocer and get some supplies. She found that her stores had been depleted, despite the fact that she ate mostly at Hogwarts. Gathering her wand and some money, she set out to do her shopping.
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Sybill had gone directly to the market, which was only a few blocks from her home. She was not going to chance being caught by Malfoy just because she had been wandering around Hogsmeade, window shopping. She emerged from the market with a bag in her hand and quickly headed back toward her home. As she walked, she saw a vision of a girl crying in an alleyway. The image left her with a strange feeling. It was a feeling of dread. The child must be lost and scared, she thought to herself, chalking up the feeling to the child's fright.
Coming upon the alley, she saw the girl with her head in her hands, sobbing loudly. Sybill debated whether to calm the child. She had always had a soft spot for young children, so she hurried to the girl's side.
As she approached the child, she noted that she seemed to be around seven years old. The girl must be lost. She had her head in her hands as she cried pitifully. Sybill was uncertain why no one else had discovered the child. She came up to her and placed her hand on the girl's shoulder. The girl looked up to her with tears running down her cheeks.
"Are you lost, sweetie?" Sybill asked gently.
The girl started to fidget. She nodded her head while she fished in her pocket for something.
"I'll help you find your mum, dear. What's your name?"
The girl only looked at Sybill as she took her hand out of her pocket. The girl raised her fist until her small hand was level with Sybill's face. She opened her palm to reveal a powdery substance in it. Before Sybill had a chance to react a male voice emanated from the child, and the powder was blown in her face.
"Sweet dreams," the voice told Sybill as she was knocked unconscious by the powder.
oooOOOooo
Sybill slowly regained consciousness to find herself roped to a chair, her wrists bound behind her. She kept her eyes closed and listened for some clue as to where she was and who her captors were. Of course, she figured Malfoy and Lestrange had finally gotten to her as her vision had shown her bound to a chair, but she had to be sure. She heard low voices murmuring in the distance.
"The plan went off without a hitch. She thought I was a kid, and before she knew it, she was out cold!"
Sybill didn't recognize that voice, but the next one sent shivers down her spine. It was Lucius Malfoy's.
"Well done, Rodolphus. We were lucky Severus wasn't around today. He usually hangs around like a puppy dog."
There was silence for a minute.
"When will she awaken?" Lucius asked.
"She should be up any minute now. It's a fast-acting sleep agent."
Sybill heard footsteps approaching her. Suddenly a hand struck her face. Sybill's eyes involuntarily flew open and filled with tears from the pain.
"It seems she's awake already," Lucius said smugly.
Sybill straightened her head and glared at Malfoy.
"You, Sybill Trelawney, have much to answer for," Lucius shot at her.
"I have done nothing to earn your ire, sir. It was the greed of your Dark Lord that brought about his demise!"
"You will pay for your prophecy, Trelawney. Voldemort shall have his revenge."
Sybill worked her hands back and forth slowly, trying to get a grasp of the ring that Severus had given her without bringing attention to herself.
"You will die a slow death," Lucius told her.
Lestrange came up next to him, now in his restored body. "Before that, however, you will be tortured with the Cruciatus curse until you can stand it no more. It's only what someone like you deserves."
Sybill only stared as she found the ring and twisted it. She hoped that Severus would come quickly. He would come, wouldn't he? Or would he think this a fitting end for her foolishness.
"Say something, witch?" Lestrange demanded. "Don't you want to grovel for your life?"
"I would not give either of you the satisfaction of groveling," Sybill replied caustically.
Lucius raised his wand and cried, "Crucio!"
Sybill felt a searing pain encompass her body. How did anyone survive even a few seconds of this? She screamed aloud.
"That will teach you to be insolent," Lucius told her.
oooOOOooo
Severus was sitting in his chair in front of his fireplace, mulling over not being with Sybill. He usually had Apparated to her home by now, and they would enjoy lunch together. However, today he was angry. He would not be gracing her doorstep any time soon. She could go ahead and get herself killed as far as he was concerned. The woman was insufferable. However meritorious her bravery might be, she was risking her life for nothing. He could not accept that. He had taken too much time trying to protect her for her to just throw it all in his face and basically invite Lucius Malfoy to abduct her. He would have nothing more to do with the infuriating woman.
Suddenly he felt a jolt on his finger. He looked down at his ring. It was growing colder by the second. It was her sign...Sybill was in trouble. Fear filled him, and he forgot his anger. He bolted from his chair. The man had never moved so fast in his life. He raced out of the castle and to the Apparition point, hoping he would not be too late. Reaching the point where he could Disapparate, he extended his wand and spun around, ready for a fight.
oooOOOooo
The two men had been throwing curses at her for a few minutes now, and Sybill's face was stained with tears. She had screamed so loudly that her throat hurt. She knew they were hardly finished. They would continue with this torture until she died from the intense pain or went insane. Then when she was a babbling idiot, they would kill her. She should have listened to Severus.
A loud pop resounded in her ear. Severus appeared out of nowhere and shot a killing curse directly at Rodolphus Lestrange. Taken by surprise, the man crumpled to the floor in a lifeless heap. Lucius screamed in fury and pointed his wand at Severus.
"Drop... your... wand!" Severus demanded.
"You are in no position to make demands, Severus. I will kill her before you even have a chance to strike me!"
"Your wand is pointed at me, not her!"
Lucius debated what to do. If he turned his wand onto Trelawney, Severus would attack. He was better off dueling with his old friend, then taking care of Trelawney. He shot a hex at Severus, who deftly blocked it.
The battle began in earnest. Both men were very adept at dueling and neither was able to get the upper hand.
"Severus, just let me finish her. What is she to you anyway? I remember you complaining about what a pain she was."
"She was a pain because of people like you who sought her life!"
The curses continued to fly. Severus ducked one that was aimed at his head and shot one straight at Lucius' heart. Unfortunately, Lucius shielded himself just in time. The battle continued.
"She deserves death. I know you weren't really on our side, but surely you can understand justice and revenge?"
"She has done nothing to merit such treatment! Give up, Lucius, and I will spare your life"
Lucius smiled evilly. "Sorry, my friend, I cannot let this go."
They kept fighting. Severus singed Lucius' hair at one point, but that was as close as either of them got to hurting one another. Finally Lucius frowned.
"I see we are at a stalemate," he said as he flicked another curse at Severus.
"Give up, Lucius!" Severus cried.
"I will get my revenge! She may not die today, but soon she will be at my mercy, and there's nothing you'll be able to do about it." Lucius cried.
He shot a curse at Severus and quickly shielded himself. Spinning around, Lucius Apparated away, choosing to fight this battle another day. Severus lowered his wand and stared at the empty space that had been Lucius Malfoy. Severus had hoped to end this today, but they would need to battle again, it would seem. He turned to Sybill and flicked his wand at her, releasing her bonds. She fell to the floor.
Severus went over to her and helped her sit up. Sybill weakly leaned against Severus. She felt him tense up at her nearness. He must still be furious with her.
Severus waited a few minutes while Sybill gained her strength back before even speaking to her.
"Can you stand?" he demanded roughly.
Sybill nodded, and he helped her up. Putting his arm around her, he Apparated both of them back to her cottage.
A/N: Next up: Will love win out over anger?
Whew! That was a close one! You all knew she'd be alright, right? After all, it was in the cards, or the visions, or the crystal ball. Unfortunately, Lucius has escaped, so she's not safe yet.
A big bow to Lilith Kayden for her beta work, and a big hug to all of you readers who are following this.
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a real chicken party. *lol*yes, this is what happens when women cometogether to chat about such an event as marriage.!And when a certain Snape is involved, the reactions must me even more chaotic.So cute of him to take her away before the "surprise party" to make such a sweet proposal - scene.very nicely written! he hasn't got any spare ring for another Sybille? No? It is so much fun to open box after box. nasty boy.“Sybill, you are everything I want. You have helped me to become more of the man I wanted to be. You love me and make me feel worthwhile. I can’t imagine being without you. I want you with me always.”THIS is what a girl wants to hear! yes, well chosen! if that would not turn her, what would.thank you for ther chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I'm pretty sure she was turned already, but his words were the icing on the cake to help her know how much he feels for her.
LOL Yea! He proposed! Whoot! It was mean of him ot have told her of the surprise birthday party - but at least she was a good sport about it. I was stunned that Minerva or Pomona didn't see the ring on her hand when Sybill put on the hair clips - especially Rolanda! Hello, shinny thing on her finger?Very cute chapter, but alas I feel the end drawing near.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I think they were all too absorbed in the gifts and how she'd react. Alas, the end is drawing near. But it will be a happy end!
Love the note about your father! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks. It was quite comical.
Love the nice Lucius. Can I have one too? :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Mmm, hmm! He's lovely, isn't he? I usually don't like men with long hair, but between Severus and Lucius... Wow!
adored the loving man lucius turned into. beautifully don, my deb. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really think that given the opportunity we can all become the best we can be. Lucius just had his opportunity later in life.
yummy, you really took my comment seriously. Thank you.And your explanation was beating it.Missing memorie might change actions and reactions and feelings of and in a person.Yes, he has a new chance.I found it critical to let Draco do the curse, it being such a dangerous and complex one. He could easily have damaged his dad more than intended.But my concerns were unneccessary. Lucius is in the safe hands of his very close and loving wife and his maybe now forgiving son. wow.maybe a reunion. and peace for at least three or five people. Sybil doesn't have to fear for her life anymore. yippee.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, things are coming along nicely, aren't they? (We can hope, right?) I too thought it was the right thing for Draco to do the curse. He took on that responsibility, giving Severus a break for a change. Being that it was his dad, it was a family responsibility. I should have a new chapter up within a few days.
saved by the ... ring!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, isn't it wonderful that he gave that to her? The man just might be a Seer himself!
i'm really enjoying the pace of their relationship. and good on hermione for appoligizing. by the by, if she can't be with severus i deperately hope she's not with ron! thanks so much deb. you rock!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
I like Hermione appologising! yay! and I like Sybil making freinds with Firenze and wanting to work with him to make the divination department better. I enjoyed the 7th year class as they discussed tea leaves. i like seeing a writer's ideas of magic and it's uses. I think her line to the kids that they are in grave danger was so cute! this is a sweet story. thanks for continuing it.congrats on the honourable mention! good on you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Aww, that's sweet of him to check the students were not hassling her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
an interesting excourse on divination, tea leaves and chrystal balls you were giving here.nice, how she handles classes now.Finally allowed to be a real teacher at last.and always Severus on her heels, in a most charming and positive way of course.Hermione apologises. hey, that girl is grown, I dare say.no, severus says that.interesting to see him not on the receiving end of her charms. rather being after some other woman, and more mature. really interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Oh, it sounds like she had a lot of fun first day of class. I liked the new improved teaching plan.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
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I had just been thinking about this story yesterday, and look! Here it is! Excellent update, I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yup, it's up again. The updates should be pretty regular from here out.
I am so glad that this story got a mention and that you're updating it again. This was another awesome chapter. Her first day teaching as her new self was topped off nicely by her friendships with everyone and that special something developing between her and Severus. *squee*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
I liked her changing the walls from pink to blue. I could just see the fairies from Sleeping Beauty. And how funny that she was hitting on Severus for fun, but was it really for fun or did her subconscious know that they belonged with each other - were her ramblings about them being together the truth for once?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
I think that Hermione's reaction was spot on. And I love how Sybill was talking about her fear of being alone. I really can see her concerned about that. As to Severus, I know that it must be hard for him to see someone he cares about putting herself in harm's way, but she does have a point. Hopefully her decision will not come back to haunt her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Nice to see Sybill and Harry have some closure. He probably could have really benefitted from her real insight. And while I can understand Sybill hating being cooped up, she really should listen to Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
LOL I like the idea of Severus in a pillow fight. It's nice to see the two of them bonding in their common misery of having been a puppet. It really is nice to see social Severus instead of recluse Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Poor Sybill. Years of heavy drink are hard to give up, especially when faced with such stress. She and Severus really do have a lot to offer each other. I look forward to their sober discussion.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Poor Sybill. It just looks like she can't be free, doesn't it? It is nice to see that Severus is on her side. It is a shame that all that stuff in the Room of the Requirement was lost. Hopefully she is wrong about the Grim.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Oh, k, wow. She moves and he gives her a protection ring and she sees herself kissing Severus. If those knds of visions come true - like dreams do, so will I!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Nicely done. I do love that Sybill is having a hard time letting go of who she was and I'm sure she will lament the inability to no longer say whatever comes to mind and be accepted. I like that she was honest with Severus and he accepted her apology and made ones of his own. I think the two of them need each other as friends in the worst way.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Yay!! Sybill sheds the past. I like that the staff accepted her. I wonder how the students will feel about their 'new' teacher. And I wonder how Severus will feel about being saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Very nicely done. I so love that poor Sybill was more than the batty old loon everyone thought she was. And of course I don't mind that she saved Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
OH, i love the explanation for why she was hitting on him! Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.