Chapter 16: Thwarted Plans
Chapter 16 of 20
debjunkLucius is aware of Severus and Sybill's upcoming attack.
ReviewedChapter 16: Thwarted Plans
Severus and Sybill appeared in a field near Barcelona. They both looked at one another as Severus raised his wand. Sybill raised hers too. She nodded, confirming she was ready. They Disapparated immediately to the Villa.
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A loud pop alerted a hidden Lucius to their arrival. Before Severus or Sybill even had a chance to assess their surroundings, he had screamed, "Incarcerous!" Long ropes extended from his wand and surrounded Sybill and Severus. They were bound together, back to back. They both struggled to escape the bonds, but that just made them tighter. Severus grasped Sybill's hand and tried to get her to stop moving. She caught on when he squeezed her hand so she too became still. The two of them glared at Lucius Malfoy, who was still pointing his wand at them.
"Well, you seem to have forgotten how to ring the doorbell, Severus," Lucius sneered.
"Lucius, we need to talk. You must give up on this obsession of yours."
"My obsession just waltzed into my home and gave herself to me as a gift. I will destroy her and then my obsession will be satisfied."
He raised his wand, but Severus shouted out to him.
"Wait! Lucius, surely there must be something else that will satisfy you. Why don't you kill me instead? Don't think that I don't know how much you hate me for being a spy all of these years, right under your nose!"
Lucius looked to Severus in fury. "And who do you think was going to be next on my list, hmm? Certainly not Rubeus Hagrid!"
"Then kill me. Let the witch go."
"The witch was the one who gave Potter the strength to destroy our Lord! She must pay!"
Severus saw the insanity in his old friend's eyes. He would never give up this fetid obsession. He would search out all of those who caused Voldemort's death and kill them, one by one. And there was nothing Severus could do about it. Not one thing.
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Draco sat across from his mother, mulling over the talk he'd had with his father.
Something's not right. Father gave in too easily. Of all the rotten luck, to plan the raid on the one day Father had made plans with Mother. He lets her rot in our home, and here in the villa, for weeks on end but picks this day of all days to do something differently!
Draco sat up straight suddenly. His father had suspected him, he realized. Severus and Trelawney were walking into a trap! He turned to his mother.
"Mother, I have to return to the villa. Come with me, I'll take you somewhere safe."
"But, Draco, we've only just arrived!" Narcissa said in exasperation.
"I know, I'll explain as we go. Please, trust me, Mother."
Narcissa smiled at him. "Of course I trust you, my son."
She rose and extended her hand. They walked out of the restaurant and Apparated to a room he had gotten just for this circumstance. It was a small room over the restaurant where they just were. It would serve to hide his mother away in case he had to return to the villa before the fighting was over. Quickly entering the room, Draco turned to his mother.
"Mother, Father has been plotting to kill Professor Trelawney. Severus and she are planning an attack on him today. That's why I wanted to take you to lunch, so you would be out of the house when they attack."
"Draco, what have you done?" Narcissa cried.
"Mother, it is the only way! Father has gone crazy, he must be stopped. Severus has promised me that he will not kill him. He will only be sent to Azkaban."
His mother wailed and fell to the floor, her head covered by her hands. "You have sentenced him to death!"
Draco knelt next to her and put his hand on her arm.
"Mother, Severus will not kill him."
Narcissa pulled her head up and looked miserably at Draco. "Azkaban will kill him, though. He was a shattered man when he returned from there after the Ministry attack. It took him months to become himself again. He will die if sent back there again, Draco! Please, stop this before it's too late."
"I intend to, Mother. I need to go back and help out." He didn't dare say who exactly he was going to help out for fear that his mother would lose it entirely.
Narcissa grasped Draco's arms and pulled him to her. "Thank you, son. Save your father! Please, go!"
Draco kissed her cheek and stood up. "Stay here until I come for you. I want you safe."
She nodded, and Draco Disapparated away.
He appeared in his bedroom at the villa. Pulling out his wand, he listened at the closed door. He heard nothing. Slowly opening the door, he found the hallway to be empty. He cautiously went down the hall toward the guest bedroom. As he neared the doorway, he could hear his father's smug voice. Lucius had left the door open. Obviously, he had been sure that he would prevail. Draco crept up to the door and peeked inside. He almost gave himself away with the groan that nearly escaped from his throat.
Inside the bedroom, Severus and Sybill were tied together with ropes. He watched as his father paced back and forth and sneered at his two captives.
"You both must be taken care of. Now, I have the opportunity to get rid of the two of you," Lucius cried. "I will reap vengeance on both of you at once. Voldemort will laugh in his grave as the two of you sink to the floor in death!"
He lifted his wand to cast the Avada Kedavra at his two captives. Severus squeezed Sybill's hand in farewell, hoping that his love for her would be conveyed through that simple symbol. Her squeezing back told him of her love for him. He braced himself for the end, but instead of a green shot of light speeding toward him, the ropes that were binding Severus and Sybill disappeared. The couple grabbed their wands and sent Stupefying Hexes simultaneously at Lucius. Another Stupefy Hex flew from the doorway. The three hexes shot Lucius into the wall with a crash. He slumped to the ground, leaving a huge indentation in the wall where he had crashed into it.
Draco entered the room, blowing imaginary smoke from the tip of his wand.
"Draco saves the day," he drawled.
Both Sybill and Severus turned to look at him, relief in their faces.
"Draco," Sybill uttered in awe. "Thank you. One second later and we both would have been dead."
"Yes, Draco," Severus said as he looked into Draco's eyes intensely. "Thank you."
Without waiting for more praise, Draco quickly went over to his father to assess his level of consciousness. It would do no good if the man were to wake any time soon. Severus looked over to Sybill. She was staring at him in relief. Before Severus had a chance to move, Sybill had flown to him and was clutching onto him for dear life.
"Oh, Severus, I thought it was the end!" she cried.
Severus hugged her tightly to himself. "You mean you didn't see our rescue in a vision?"
Sybill pulled away from him and scowled. "You are terrible, Severus Snape. I don't even know why I fret about you at all!"
Severus came close to her ear and whispered into it so Draco couldn't hear him. "You fret because you are crazy about me."
"I believe the same can be said about you," Sybill retorted with a giggle.
A loud throat clearing caused the two to pull apart and spin towards Draco, who was looking at them curiously.
"Don't tell me you two are together?" he drawled. "Trelawney, surely you can find someone who doesn't eat children for breakfast?"
Sybill smiled at him. "Well, I probably could, but I long to be near Severus."
Draco grimaced. "Now that's just wrong," he muttered. He eyed Sybill warily. "I thought you weren't doing anymore of that crazy stuff, Trelawney."
"Draco, my dear boy, whatever gave you that impression? Could it be that your Inner Eye is blurry?" Her voice was deep and dark, as it had been before her transformation.
"Sybill," Severus said quietly.
Sybill grinned as she watched Draco's eyes widen. "Can't a girl have some fun, Severus?" she asked him in her normal voice.
"Yes, but you have entirely too much fun turning yourself into a quack," he chastised her. His retort was lessened by his kissing her neck lightly.
"Ugh! Would you two stop it?" Draco cried. "I have no desire to watch the two of you snog each other senseless while my father lies bound and unconscious on the floor."
Sybill reluctantly pulled away from Severus and went over to where Draco was standing. She examined the man who was passed out on the floor. Lucius was now in ropes, as Draco had cast the binding spell on him.
"So, what are we going to do with him?" Sybill asked as she peered down on Lucius' form.
"I will call the Aurors, and he will go to Azkaban," Severus said as he came up to Sybill and put his arm around her.
"My mother will never forgive me," Draco muttered.
Suddenly an image flashed through Sybill's head. It was of Lucius, back in his home, with his wife and son. They were all sitting together laughing. Sybill stiffened.
"No, this is wrong. He shouldn't go to Azkaban," she said with a faraway look.
"It's what he deserves, Sybill. He tried to kill us both." Severus looked to her as she concentrated on what she had seen.
"But... I just saw him with his family. They were happy. Severus, something's wrong. We're missing something."
"Sybill, he deserves to go to jail," Severus replied as he scowled at her.
"I know that. But what I saw... he was happy. What can we do that will make him be like that? He had lost the evilness in him. Severus, he almost looked like a child."
"There's nothing we can do to make him happy," Severus murmured. "His life has been so full of hate for so long, that nothing we can do can erase that from him."
Draco looked up suddenly at Severus, hope in his eyes. "Obliviate him," he uttered.
"Pardon me?" Severus questioned.
"Obliviate him!" Draco said with more enthusiasm. "We can wipe his memory and start over from scratch."
"Don't you think that's a bit extreme, Draco?" Severus asked.
"As if Azkaban isn't?!" Draco cried. "This will solve everything. He won't need to spend his life in jail. My mother and I can help him to know what his life was like before without all of the nasty stuff thrown in. We can tell him what's important for him to know to be a good husband and father."
"Draco, what you're suggesting is too invasive," Severus chastised. "We have no right to take a man's memories and then create ones that we see fit for him."
"Well..." Draco wracked his brain to try and think of a way to do this well. "We can tell him everything, I suppose. If we help him from the beginning to see how wrong his actions were, then he won't want to repeat them. Severus, please! He's my father, but I have hated him for most of my life, but my mother loves him. She pleaded with me to help him. If we do this, I can help him. Maybe I can even have a father who cares about me."
Severus glanced over at Sybill, who had not said a word for quite some time.
"What do you think?" Severus asked her. "Does it seem like he's lost his memory of those horrid things he's done in your vision?"
Sybill concentrated on the vision once more. It had only been a quick image, so it was difficult to interpret exactly what she had seen. After a minute with her eyes closed, she opened them and nodded her head.
"I think it does. But, Draco, if we do this, the road will not be easy. The type of Obliviate you're suggesting is similar to what happened to Gilderoy Lockhart. He still has not recovered from the spell."
"But that was a backfired spell. Surely that has something to do with it!" Draco's eyes were pleading with them. "Lockhart has no one! With my mother and me, we can help Father know about himself."
"Draco, this might not work out the way you hope," Sybill continued.
"Trelawney, it's better than having him in jail for the rest of his life. It will have to be! We can do this!" He looked from Sybill to Severus, pleading for this one chance. "Severus, he was your friend for years. Surely you owe him something? My mother thinks he'll die if he's sent away. This will give him a chance to live. This may even give him a chance to be happy."
Severus and Sybill exchanged looks. She gave Severus a quick nod, and he turned back to Draco.
"Very well," he acquiesced.
"We will help too, Draco," Sybill assured. "Maybe with the four of us, we can help Lucius to recover quicker."
Draco's eyes lit up. "Could you? That would mean so much."
Severus put his hand on the young man's arm. "Go get your mother. We'll make sure she's alright with this plan before we go ahead with it."
"All right," Draco said with a sigh. "I'll be right back."
He Disapparated as Sybill moved a little closer to Severus and laid her head on his shoulder. Severus moved his arm up and caressed her back.
"Are you sure about this?" he asked her.
"He was happy, Severus. Maybe his mind wasn't all there, but he was happy."
Severus kissed the top of her head. "Then I'm sure it will all work out."
Just at her word, he believed her. Sybill looked up into his dark eyes. Not only did she see love there, but respect also. He trusted her. She had never felt so loved in her life.
A/N: Next up: To Obliviate or not to Obliviate... that is the question.
Did anyone see that coming? Thank you once again for reading. I appreciate your comments. A big hand for Lilith Kayden for her beta work.
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a real chicken party. *lol*yes, this is what happens when women cometogether to chat about such an event as marriage.!And when a certain Snape is involved, the reactions must me even more chaotic.So cute of him to take her away before the "surprise party" to make such a sweet proposal - scene.very nicely written! he hasn't got any spare ring for another Sybille? No? It is so much fun to open box after box. nasty boy.“Sybill, you are everything I want. You have helped me to become more of the man I wanted to be. You love me and make me feel worthwhile. I can’t imagine being without you. I want you with me always.”THIS is what a girl wants to hear! yes, well chosen! if that would not turn her, what would.thank you for ther chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I'm pretty sure she was turned already, but his words were the icing on the cake to help her know how much he feels for her.
LOL Yea! He proposed! Whoot! It was mean of him ot have told her of the surprise birthday party - but at least she was a good sport about it. I was stunned that Minerva or Pomona didn't see the ring on her hand when Sybill put on the hair clips - especially Rolanda! Hello, shinny thing on her finger?Very cute chapter, but alas I feel the end drawing near.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I think they were all too absorbed in the gifts and how she'd react. Alas, the end is drawing near. But it will be a happy end!
Love the note about your father! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks. It was quite comical.
Love the nice Lucius. Can I have one too? :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Mmm, hmm! He's lovely, isn't he? I usually don't like men with long hair, but between Severus and Lucius... Wow!
adored the loving man lucius turned into. beautifully don, my deb. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really think that given the opportunity we can all become the best we can be. Lucius just had his opportunity later in life.
yummy, you really took my comment seriously. Thank you.And your explanation was beating it.Missing memorie might change actions and reactions and feelings of and in a person.Yes, he has a new chance.I found it critical to let Draco do the curse, it being such a dangerous and complex one. He could easily have damaged his dad more than intended.But my concerns were unneccessary. Lucius is in the safe hands of his very close and loving wife and his maybe now forgiving son. wow.maybe a reunion. and peace for at least three or five people. Sybil doesn't have to fear for her life anymore. yippee.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, things are coming along nicely, aren't they? (We can hope, right?) I too thought it was the right thing for Draco to do the curse. He took on that responsibility, giving Severus a break for a change. Being that it was his dad, it was a family responsibility. I should have a new chapter up within a few days.
saved by the ... ring!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, isn't it wonderful that he gave that to her? The man just might be a Seer himself!
i'm really enjoying the pace of their relationship. and good on hermione for appoligizing. by the by, if she can't be with severus i deperately hope she's not with ron! thanks so much deb. you rock!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
I like Hermione appologising! yay! and I like Sybil making freinds with Firenze and wanting to work with him to make the divination department better. I enjoyed the 7th year class as they discussed tea leaves. i like seeing a writer's ideas of magic and it's uses. I think her line to the kids that they are in grave danger was so cute! this is a sweet story. thanks for continuing it.congrats on the honourable mention! good on you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Aww, that's sweet of him to check the students were not hassling her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
an interesting excourse on divination, tea leaves and chrystal balls you were giving here.nice, how she handles classes now.Finally allowed to be a real teacher at last.and always Severus on her heels, in a most charming and positive way of course.Hermione apologises. hey, that girl is grown, I dare say.no, severus says that.interesting to see him not on the receiving end of her charms. rather being after some other woman, and more mature. really interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Oh, it sounds like she had a lot of fun first day of class. I liked the new improved teaching plan.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
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I had just been thinking about this story yesterday, and look! Here it is! Excellent update, I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yup, it's up again. The updates should be pretty regular from here out.
I am so glad that this story got a mention and that you're updating it again. This was another awesome chapter. Her first day teaching as her new self was topped off nicely by her friendships with everyone and that special something developing between her and Severus. *squee*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
I liked her changing the walls from pink to blue. I could just see the fairies from Sleeping Beauty. And how funny that she was hitting on Severus for fun, but was it really for fun or did her subconscious know that they belonged with each other - were her ramblings about them being together the truth for once?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
I think that Hermione's reaction was spot on. And I love how Sybill was talking about her fear of being alone. I really can see her concerned about that. As to Severus, I know that it must be hard for him to see someone he cares about putting herself in harm's way, but she does have a point. Hopefully her decision will not come back to haunt her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Nice to see Sybill and Harry have some closure. He probably could have really benefitted from her real insight. And while I can understand Sybill hating being cooped up, she really should listen to Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
LOL I like the idea of Severus in a pillow fight. It's nice to see the two of them bonding in their common misery of having been a puppet. It really is nice to see social Severus instead of recluse Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Poor Sybill. Years of heavy drink are hard to give up, especially when faced with such stress. She and Severus really do have a lot to offer each other. I look forward to their sober discussion.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Poor Sybill. It just looks like she can't be free, doesn't it? It is nice to see that Severus is on her side. It is a shame that all that stuff in the Room of the Requirement was lost. Hopefully she is wrong about the Grim.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Oh, k, wow. She moves and he gives her a protection ring and she sees herself kissing Severus. If those knds of visions come true - like dreams do, so will I!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Nicely done. I do love that Sybill is having a hard time letting go of who she was and I'm sure she will lament the inability to no longer say whatever comes to mind and be accepted. I like that she was honest with Severus and he accepted her apology and made ones of his own. I think the two of them need each other as friends in the worst way.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Yay!! Sybill sheds the past. I like that the staff accepted her. I wonder how the students will feel about their 'new' teacher. And I wonder how Severus will feel about being saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Very nicely done. I so love that poor Sybill was more than the batty old loon everyone thought she was. And of course I don't mind that she saved Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
OH, i love the explanation for why she was hitting on him! Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.