Chapter 17: Obliviate
Chapter 17 of 20
debjunkNarcissa decides the fate of her husband.
ReviewedDisclaimer: These characters are not mine. It's really too bad about that, but I would never deny J.K. Rowling her fame.
A/N: Salvamea brought up a critical point, that the Obliviate doesn't change one's character. That is true, but my opinion on what might occur with Lucius stems from this: His experiences and upbringing made him the way he is. Take that out of the picture, and you're starting with a clean slate, which can hopefully be shaped differently. Hopefully, that will happen for Lucius. Thanks to my beta, Lilith Kayden, for her advice and help with this chapter.
Chapter 17: Obliviate
In the time it took Draco to bring his mother back to the villa, Lucius had regained consciousness. He sneered at Severus and Sybill.
"Just do it. Kill me and get it over with. It's the only way I won't come after you!"
"Lucius, please stop being so melodramatic," Severus said with a bored tone. "I believe we have come up with a suitable remedy to our mutual problem."
"I will not go to Azkaban!" Lucius screamed in rage.
"We are hoping that you won't have to," Sybill told him.
Lucius looked at her with loathing. "Do not dare to speak to me, you filthy excuse for a witch!"
"Langlock," Severus chanted as he waved his wand at Lucius. Lucius' tongue was securely locked to the roof of his mouth. The man's eyes bulged with rage as he struggled to get free from his bonds.
Finally, two loud pops sounded, and Draco and Narcissa stood before the other three. Narcissa rushed to Lucius' side and fell over him, sobbing hysterically.
"She's not taking this well," Draco mumbled.
Severus had always had a soft spot in his heart for Narcissa. She had become a Death Eater more for Lucius than anything. He had almost forced her to join Voldemort's ranks. She had gone through great grief with Lucius' time in Azkaban and Draco's charge from Voldemort to kill Dumbledore. Severus had no desire to see her suffer anymore.
Stooping down beside her, he placed a hand gently on her back. "Narcissa," he called softly.
Narcissa threw her head back and pulled herself up and away from Lucius. She turned toward Severus and grasped his arms desperately. Her eyes were wild.
"Please, Severus, there must be another way. Any of these options makes me lose my husband forever!"
"There is no other way, Narcissa," Severus answered calmly. "He either is Obliviated or he must be sent to Azkaban."
With Severus' decree, Lucius began to struggle and moan again. His eyes grew wide with fright while he shook his head.
Narcissa sat down on the ground next to him and put her face in her hands. She sobbed even louder than before. Severus placed a comforting hand on her shoulder.
"Narcissa, you can help him recover if he is Obliviated. He can be the husband and father he was never able to be because of his pride and greed. This might be the best thing for all of you."
"You say that because you are not the one about to lose twenty years of marriage," Narcissa wailed.
Draco knelt down on his mother's other side. "Mum," he said. "Think of this as an opportunity to have what you have always wanted. Father has never been overly kind to you. He has pushed you away because he thought you were weak because you always tried to protect me. He's hardly spoken to you much since you made that vow with Severus. All of that can change! He won't remember being angry. He won't remember pushing you away. He'll just know that you two are married and that you love each other. It may take him some time to love you again, but he will."
Narcissa's sobs continued. "What if he never loves me again?"
Draco's look hardened. "Then you will be no worse off than you are now. That man who claims to be my father loves neither one of us. He just stays with us because that's what a good pureblood does. He hates me and just tolerates you. He isn't even happy. He's filled with desires for revenge. How can anyone who is consumed by such feelings ever be happy?" Draco put his hand on his mother's shoulder. "We can help him to be happy. Trelawney saw it. He was with us, and he was happy."
Narcissa pulled her tear stained face up and looked over at Sybill.
"Did you really see that?" she asked.
Sybill nodded.
"How can I trust you? You are rumored to be a charlatan."
"I used to be," Sybill admitted. "But it was because of men like your husband, who would want to harm me. With Voldemort's death, I was able to be myself. I assure you, Mrs. Malfoy, I have never had a vision be wrong."
Narcissa stared at Sybill for a long while. Sybill began to feel a bit uncomfortable, but she remained still, letting Narcissa come to whatever conclusion she was going to come to. Finally, Narcissa put her hands down and heaved a huge sigh.
"All right, we'll do it."
Lucius started moaning and struggling again, which caused Narcissa to glance over at him. She quickly turned back to Sybill. "I am holding you responsible for his future. If he does not eventually become the happy individual you claim to have seen, I will hunt you down and your life will be forfeit. Do we have an understanding?" Narcissa's look was very hard and determined as she gazed at Sybill.
Sybill nodded her head. "We do," she agreed.
With her decision, all frailty seemed to fall away from Narcissa. She sat straight and regally as she now looked at Severus.
"Release the Silencing Spell. I would speak with my husband before we do this horrible deed."
Severus waved his wand over Lucius' head and removed the spell silently. Lucius began to rage immediately.
"You cannot do this! I will not allow it! I am a Malfoy. I have a rich heritage. You cannot take that away from me! Narcissa, surely you see that these three have gone mad?"
Narcissa leaned over her husband and placed her hands lovingly on his chest. "My love, I know you no longer care for me."
"Narcissa, that's not true!"
Narcissa placed a finger over Lucius' lips. "Shh, there's no sense in denying it, love. You have mostly ignored me for the last ten years. This is the best choice. The other options are death or life in Azkaban. Neither of those will return you to me and will destroy you eventually."
"Narcissa!" Lucius screamed. "You cannot do this!"
"I want you to know that I have always loved you. I know you won't remember that in a few minutes, but I want you to know now. I have hoped that someday you could love me again too. I'm doing this for us, Lucius... for a chance at a brighter future. I hope that someday you will understand that." She bent low and kissed him.
As she pulled back, he spat in her face. Draco looked at him in fury and lunged forward to attack him. Severus caught him just in time before he was able to lay a finger on his loathsome father. Lucius looked to Draco in hatred and then looked back at Narcissa with loathing.
"You will be sorry if you do this to me! I will never forgive you. I will remember somehow and hate you forever! You are nothing but a whore. You sully the Malfoy name with even your existence!"
With a swish of his wand, Severus had recast the Langlock. "I believe we have heard enough of your hate, Lucius," he told his once friend.
Lucius stared at Severus venomously. His struggling became furious, but he only succeeded in constricting himself so much that he now could barely move.
Narcissa stood up and wiped the spittle from her face. She looked down at her husband once again. "I will always love you, no matter what," she told him.
Lucius narrowed his eyes at her. Severus looked over at her. "Are you ready, Narcissa?"
She nodded.
Severus lifted his wand, about to cast the Memory Charm.
"Wait!" Draco cried.
Severus halted his arm movements and looked over to Draco.
"I will cast the Obliviate," Draco demanded.
Severus raised an eyebrow as Narcissa turned to her son, pulling him into her embrace.
"No, Draco. You mustn't."
Draco pulled back slightly. "I have to, Mother. I want to be the one to do it. Either way it goes, I want to be the one responsible."
Narcissa caressed his cheek. "Are you sure, son? Can you live with the guilt of what you are to do? What if he never comes back to us?"
Draco nodded his head. "I can. Either I will help him, or I will be able to take out my anger on him for his treatment of us. I must do this."
Severus lowered his wand and nodded at Draco. Narcissa kissed his cheek and told him how brave she thought he was. Draco turned and looked at his father. The man was moaning still, his eyes wide. He looked more frightened than Draco had ever seen him. Draco lifted his wand.
"Goodbye, Father. I hope you can become a better person with what I am to give to you."
Lucius screamed. The sound was ugly and guttural. Even the fact that his tongue was stuck to the roof of his mouth could not hide his fear and horror at what was to come.
Draco cast the spell. Golden light flew from the tip of his wand and struck his father squarely in the chest. The man was forced back against the floor, unconscious. Draco flicked his wand again, and the ropes that were binding his father fell away. He looked at Severus.
"We should move him to his bed while he is unconscious. It will be easier for him to wake there."
Severus nodded and levitated Lucius. The four of them moved him to the bedroom in silence. Narcissa lovingly settled him into the bed and placed the covers over him.
"What do we tell him?" Sybill asked.
Draco looked at his father, who seemed to be sleeping peacefully. "He fell down the stairs. We were able to repair a broken leg and fix his wounds. His memory loss will come as a shock to us."
The four conspirators looked to each other and nodded their agreement. Narcissa sat on the bed and stroked Lucius' forehead. He began to stir and moan. Severus quickly removed the Langlock spell, having forgotten about it previously. Lucius' eyes opened slowly, and he looked around.
"Where am I?" he murmured.
"You are in your bed, Lucius," Narcissa answered gently.
Lucius' eyes narrowed while he looked around. He seemed out of sorts. He looked back at the woman who was sitting on the bed by him. "Who are you?"
Narcissa played her part well, shock showing on her face. "I'm Narcissa, love."
"How do I know you?" Lucius' eyes were vacant.
A tear fell down Narcissa's cheek. "I am your wife," she told him as she stroked his cheek.
Lucius shied away from her. "I don't know who you are. I don't know who any of you are!" He sat up hurriedly. "I can't even remember who I am. What happened to me?"
"You fell down the stairs," Severus offered. "You were hurt badly. We mended your wounds and fixed your leg, which was broken. You have been unconscious for half an hour."
Lucius scrunched up his face, trying to remember something, but he couldn't remember anything about himself, or the fall he had just taken. He looked back at Severus.
"Who are you?"
"I am Severus Snape, your friend. This is Sybill Trelawney," he said as he motioned to Sybill, "also a friend, and this..." He pointed towards Draco, "is your son, Draco."
Lucius' eyebrows rose as he regarded his son. "I have a son?"
"Obviously," Severus drawled.
Lucius looked at all four people surrounding his bed. He struggled to remember something about them. He couldn't remember anything about them. He couldn't remember anything at all.
"Why can't I remember anything?" he asked finally.
"You had a deep gash on your head," Severus told him. "Perhaps your memory loss is due to head trauma."
"But will it come back?" Lucius asked, now becoming nervous.
"I cannot say," Severus continued.
Narcissa put her hand on Lucius' arm. He did not shy away this time but looked at her hand curiously.
"Lucius, we will work through this. We'll overcome it. Even if your memory never returns, we will make new memories... together."
Lucius looked into her eyes. They were warm and friendly. She was not a threat to him. He could tell she cared for him. He did not know her, and he certainly did not love her, but she loved him. He could see it. Maybe his memory would come back and he would remember the beautiful witch by his side. Even if it didn't, he could see himself growing close to her, maybe even loving her. He gave her a small smile, and she smiled back warmly at him.
"Tell me about myself," he requested.
Severus, Sybill, and Draco all pulled up chairs and settled themselves around Lucius' bed. They began to fill in the vast empty space that was now Lucius Malfoy's mind.
Next up: The Malfoys deal with an Obliviated Lucius.
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a real chicken party. *lol*yes, this is what happens when women cometogether to chat about such an event as marriage.!And when a certain Snape is involved, the reactions must me even more chaotic.So cute of him to take her away before the "surprise party" to make such a sweet proposal - scene.very nicely written! he hasn't got any spare ring for another Sybille? No? It is so much fun to open box after box. nasty boy.“Sybill, you are everything I want. You have helped me to become more of the man I wanted to be. You love me and make me feel worthwhile. I can’t imagine being without you. I want you with me always.”THIS is what a girl wants to hear! yes, well chosen! if that would not turn her, what would.thank you for ther chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I'm pretty sure she was turned already, but his words were the icing on the cake to help her know how much he feels for her.
LOL Yea! He proposed! Whoot! It was mean of him ot have told her of the surprise birthday party - but at least she was a good sport about it. I was stunned that Minerva or Pomona didn't see the ring on her hand when Sybill put on the hair clips - especially Rolanda! Hello, shinny thing on her finger?Very cute chapter, but alas I feel the end drawing near.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I think they were all too absorbed in the gifts and how she'd react. Alas, the end is drawing near. But it will be a happy end!
Love the note about your father! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks. It was quite comical.
Love the nice Lucius. Can I have one too? :)
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Mmm, hmm! He's lovely, isn't he? I usually don't like men with long hair, but between Severus and Lucius... Wow!
adored the loving man lucius turned into. beautifully don, my deb. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really think that given the opportunity we can all become the best we can be. Lucius just had his opportunity later in life.
yummy, you really took my comment seriously. Thank you.And your explanation was beating it.Missing memorie might change actions and reactions and feelings of and in a person.Yes, he has a new chance.I found it critical to let Draco do the curse, it being such a dangerous and complex one. He could easily have damaged his dad more than intended.But my concerns were unneccessary. Lucius is in the safe hands of his very close and loving wife and his maybe now forgiving son. wow.maybe a reunion. and peace for at least three or five people. Sybil doesn't have to fear for her life anymore. yippee.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, things are coming along nicely, aren't they? (We can hope, right?) I too thought it was the right thing for Draco to do the curse. He took on that responsibility, giving Severus a break for a change. Being that it was his dad, it was a family responsibility. I should have a new chapter up within a few days.
saved by the ... ring!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yes, isn't it wonderful that he gave that to her? The man just might be a Seer himself!
i'm really enjoying the pace of their relationship. and good on hermione for appoligizing. by the by, if she can't be with severus i deperately hope she's not with ron! thanks so much deb. you rock!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I don't think Sybill has seen a vision of who Hermione is going to be with, so we may never know. Lol. Personally, I think she'd be better off with anyone but Ron.Things are moving along with the relationship end. Their friendship is definitely cementing, and that's really the basis for any good relationship.
I like Hermione appologising! yay! and I like Sybil making freinds with Firenze and wanting to work with him to make the divination department better. I enjoyed the 7th year class as they discussed tea leaves. i like seeing a writer's ideas of magic and it's uses. I think her line to the kids that they are in grave danger was so cute! this is a sweet story. thanks for continuing it.congrats on the honourable mention! good on you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks so much, Pookah. I was really pleased to be included with such great stories. I too enjoy other people's takes on magic and how it works. In this, it helps us to see her full transformation, I think.Things seem to be going nicely for Sybill. You know what that means... chaos will ensue.
Aww, that's sweet of him to check the students were not hassling her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Deep down, he's just a protective, tenderhearted fool.
an interesting excourse on divination, tea leaves and chrystal balls you were giving here.nice, how she handles classes now.Finally allowed to be a real teacher at last.and always Severus on her heels, in a most charming and positive way of course.Hermione apologises. hey, that girl is grown, I dare say.no, severus says that.interesting to see him not on the receiving end of her charms. rather being after some other woman, and more mature. really interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sybill can finally not only teach as she wants, she can remember all of the things she learned as a young lady. I think she forgot some of it in her quest to be batty.Hermione can be stubborn, but she will admit when she's made a mistake. A sure sign of maturity. It is a bit odd not having Severus attracted to her, but he does that all the time. It's time for something different. ;)
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
oh, it's more than welcome for me that you chose someone different for Severus.And for one simple reason I am indefinitely indebted to you for chosing Ms Trelawney: we share the first name. with only the "e" missing at the end of her version. oh I definitely do like that pairing. *gg*
Oh, it sounds like she had a lot of fun first day of class. I liked the new improved teaching plan.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thanks! It's quite a bit different, isn't it? Sybill can really be what she's always wanted to be, a good teacher who instills knowledge in her students. What a difference!
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I had just been thinking about this story yesterday, and look! Here it is! Excellent update, I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yup, it's up again. The updates should be pretty regular from here out.
I am so glad that this story got a mention and that you're updating it again. This was another awesome chapter. Her first day teaching as her new self was topped off nicely by her friendships with everyone and that special something developing between her and Severus. *squee*
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Aw, you gave me a squee, you're so sweet! Thanks, Merrin, I appreciate your input and I'm glad you're enjoying this. And yes, special somethings are always good. Lol.
I liked her changing the walls from pink to blue. I could just see the fairies from Sleeping Beauty. And how funny that she was hitting on Severus for fun, but was it really for fun or did her subconscious know that they belonged with each other - were her ramblings about them being together the truth for once?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Oh! You got my Sleeping Beauty reference! You're the only one who mentioned it! You made my day. I'm not sure about her subconscious. It probably was working very hard. But I think it was totally subconscious at that point. The woman had to have a bloody vision to wake up to her feelings for Severus, so, she's a bit blind in that department, I think. Too much scotch! Woah! Who's that handsome man? Oh, look, a bottle of scotch. What was I saying?
I think that Hermione's reaction was spot on. And I love how Sybill was talking about her fear of being alone. I really can see her concerned about that. As to Severus, I know that it must be hard for him to see someone he cares about putting herself in harm's way, but she does have a point. Hopefully her decision will not come back to haunt her.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Thank you! It was really fun writing Hermione in this. I'm glad she came off as believable. Sybill will stick to her guns, no matter the cost. You can see why, but then you have to shake your head and say, "Foolish!"
Nice to see Sybill and Harry have some closure. He probably could have really benefitted from her real insight. And while I can understand Sybill hating being cooped up, she really should listen to Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
She really should, but you'll see her motives more clearly coming up.
LOL I like the idea of Severus in a pillow fight. It's nice to see the two of them bonding in their common misery of having been a puppet. It really is nice to see social Severus instead of recluse Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Sometimes it's just nice to see Severus not beating himself up, you know? At least not to the point where he thinks he's a worthless person and has to hide from everyone. Thanks!
Poor Sybill. Years of heavy drink are hard to give up, especially when faced with such stress. She and Severus really do have a lot to offer each other. I look forward to their sober discussion.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
It's really hard to give up on something that was used to cover so much up. Luckily, she won't fall prey to her drinking again. She has learned her lesson.
Poor Sybill. It just looks like she can't be free, doesn't it? It is nice to see that Severus is on her side. It is a shame that all that stuff in the Room of the Requirement was lost. Hopefully she is wrong about the Grim.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You'll see what Severus, and she, really think about the Grim. She really is having a bad day, though. Just when you thought you could relax, boom! Everything comes to a head.
Oh, k, wow. She moves and he gives her a protection ring and she sees herself kissing Severus. If those knds of visions come true - like dreams do, so will I!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Yeah, wouldn't that be great? Oh, well, this IS a fantasy. But, hey, fairy tales can come true.
Nicely done. I do love that Sybill is having a hard time letting go of who she was and I'm sure she will lament the inability to no longer say whatever comes to mind and be accepted. I like that she was honest with Severus and he accepted her apology and made ones of his own. I think the two of them need each other as friends in the worst way.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
They really do. They've both been outcasts for a long time, so they can understand one another better than most other people can. They can really help one another out.
Yay!! Sybill sheds the past. I like that the staff accepted her. I wonder how the students will feel about their 'new' teacher. And I wonder how Severus will feel about being saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
You will eventually see their responses. I think Severus will be more surprised by who saved him, than the fact that he was saved.
Very nicely done. I so love that poor Sybill was more than the batty old loon everyone thought she was. And of course I don't mind that she saved Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
Isn't it nice to know that there was a reason for her being the way she was? Thank you!
OH, i love the explanation for why she was hitting on him! Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.
Response from debjunk (Author of The Real Me)
I really wanted to visit the old Trelawney, as she is so much fun. And seeing the scary Death Eater cowering in fear was pretty fun to imagine and write. I think this helps to explain a little bit of her eccentricity.