I like the set-up and looking eagerly forward to the next chapter.  Good read so far.   Cheers!

Ooooo.  I like how you've started!  Looking foward to reading more!!I like Ron on principle, but I can definately see him as an unmitigated ass - which is what he certainly is here. So, more?  Soon?  :D

oh i hope she gets ron by the short and curlies!  great begining and i look forward to more.  thanks

Sybil has gone and done it again!

Very good.  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Muahaha!  And Ron is closer to getting what he truly deserves.  But what's this about rigged marriage contracts for the Parkinsons and Malfoys?  I would hope that post-Voldemort Lucius would be smart enough to pick up on fine print, but perhaps if he trusted the solicitor, he'd be taken in.  And why didn't old Ryan have the solicitor marry his granddaughter from the start?  Sigh...Very glad Hermione now has sole custody of her boys, since the twins will be seen in Hogsmeade with their Child Wands.  But what is this terrible assumption that Hermione remembered in the last chapter?  More, please!  Thank you for updating!!

Why do I get the feeling that Ron's wife is connected to Remus's death? I would write more about my theory, but I don't want to possibly spoil the story.

Okay, so at first I was thinking "what a bitch!" about Ron's second wife's actions, but then with Hermione's reaction I see that it is the best thing for Hermione and Ron is probably going to be super pissed when he finds out his kids arent squibs and what his wife did, so that made me happy! The boys having wands is probably going to be great also.  Oh and poor Remus getting killed by some wiley woman!

Terrific tale. I love a good yarn with plenty of plot twists! Thanks for writing!

So just who's the varlet here? Ron or Max? aybe both? I'm glad that the new Mrs Weasley accidently helped Hermione. It would serve her right if everything came back to bite her one day. ^_^

The new Mrs Weasley is unwittingly in Hermione's corner in this. Well, she's firmly in her own corner, I suppose!  I almost feel sorry for Ron.I said ALMOST! :)

This is a great story--I'm so glad you're updating it so regularly.  You've got two mysteries going here, now--Remus's murder and whatever's going on with Maxwell Sebastian and Pat Ryan.  Why do I think it's likely that the two will turn out to be related?  And I like your very in-character Hermione--not interested in any of Ron's money, but merely glad that he's renounced her sons, so he can't take them from her.  But she's still entitled to her share of their Gringott's account, isn't she?  I should think that the moment her sons begin using their new wands successfully, Snape and McGonnagal would strongly advise her to press charges.  And, come to think of it, she should get a few Galleons from the QuickQuotes, people, shouldn't she?  What a very engaging and original story you've set up here!

I think Hermione may really be onto something. And I have my suspicions as to who might be responsible, perhaps even a glimmer of a motive. But it would involve her having access to certain privileged information. At any rate, I'm totally fascinated with this story. :)

This is a very interesting story.  I was immediately drawn in.  Ron's wife gets on my nerves, but I love the divorce plan that will make Ron look stupid.  It's about time he caught a dose of his own medicine.I don't really like Harry contacting Ron about Hermione at all.  Why can't he ever just choose her side?Can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you so much for another great update. It seems to me that when Ron don't dig his own grave, his new wife is doing it so greatly for him, that would be poetic justice in my mind. First he discharge his own children like they were worthless, stealing Hermiones money in the process, now his wife, who had is precious magical children seems to be his soon-to-be ex-wife and in the process made sure that he can no make any claims to Hermiones children when he finds they can have any worth to him after all. As cold, manipulative and scheeming his wife, her advocate and Grandfather seems to be, Ron gets what he deserves, and plenty of it. Does Hermione have a special Woman in mind, or is it just speculation made to not limit their search for Remus killer?

Just completed a re-read of the story to date. It's really fascinating. I love mysteries. Will you be updating anytime soon?

Still love this story, promise me that you haven't stopped writing???

oh dear!  Wow, this is a great story so far.  Keep going.  I can't wait for more!

Perhaps I'm terribly rude, but when will you update your story? It's wonderful and I can't wait for next chapters. :)))My English is still very invalid, so I'm sorry for every mistake I've done. It's my first review here. I hope, I don't offend you. Please, I want read more. Update quickly!

Wow, what a mystery we have going here.  A very clever way to kill a werewolf.  Luckily Severus, Hermione, and Poppy are more clever.

I love this tale and hope to see updates! Action, mystery, and hopefully romance- I am hooked!

I'm so glad you've taken this up again. :) I missed it very much. :) :) :)

I started reading this today, and am really pleased I did.  Interesting idea for killing off Remus, and I look forward to seeing where this leads.  I can see a fair amount of Ron-bashing in the offing too, even if he doesn't turn into a major villain.(I'll just add a little nit-Brit-pickery to the fact that not only do we not add silver nitrate to the drinking water over here, but even minor spillages into the foul water drains have to be reported to the local water authorities to determine if the supply needs quarantining and flushing - otherwise, a great plot idea)

THIS IS GREAT I WENT ALL OVER THE NET TRYING TO FIND MORE OF THIS STORY ONE PLACE HAD 1 CHAP I WAS OUTRAGED AND I CAME HERE FEELING MUCH BETTER NOW,LOL With Art and Tom exposed to magic every day at the school, I hope their magic manifests soon.  But I don't want Ron to have any ability to gain custody of them, even if it means Ron never pays for child support; Hermione and the boys are fine without him.I CANT STAND RON! WHEN HE LEFT THEM IN THE WOODS  IN THE LAST BOOK I KNOW HE WAS WEAK. WRITE SOOM LOL.

Ooooh, good story,  murder mystery, maybe a budding romance, and I can't wait until Hermione rakes Ron over the coals!