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Potions Under Duress The Varlet
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The Varlet

1: Opportunity Knocks

2: Changing Times

3: Settling In

4: Secrets from the Past

5: Clues in the Present

6: Cherchez la Femme

7: The Auror Cometh

The Varlet

Doomspark

154 Reviews   |   154 Ratings, 0 Likes, 136 Favorites )

General Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 23,586 Words 7 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Hermione feels trapped in her life until she gets a letter from an old acquaintance.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: Opportunity Knocks

Chapter 2: Changing Times

Chapter 3: Settling In

Chapter 4: Secrets from the Past

Chapter 5: Clues in the Present

Chapter 6: Cherchez la Femme

Chapter 7: The Auror Cometh


About Doomspark

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Doomspark

Member Since 2005  |  27 Stories  |  Favorited by 152  |  35 Reviews Written  |  531 Review Responses

Male. Married. Live in Florida. Owned by two Egyptian Maus, a red tabby, and a hairball-emitting pile of fluff.

Author Website
http://www.doomspark.net
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Sycophant Hex and my own site. Some works archived on AO3 as well.

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gurlimargrethe

had to read all 5 chapters, enjoyed it. So many things going on. Can't wait to know what Hermione was thinking, and I am sure there will be a revenge against Ron and his sallow wife

10/10

Sampdoria

First of all let me thank you for  the update, I was so happy to see it. Seccond, I think I promised you some cartwheels for this update, I think I need some time to practice before I can provide something passable, it has been quite a few years since my last attempt:))That awful woman must be Hermione, I wonder how the press will enjoy that she has two very magical sons, sons that were abonded by their father? Will money, connections and lack of a certain ms Skeeter save Ron and his new misses from the doom comming their way? I most certainly hope not, I want revenge for Hermione and her children, I want Ron, and his new wife, to pay for their cheating, steal of money, not to mention the total lack of care over how the two little boys were faring, magical or not. It is about time carma bites someones arses.

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

I remember the promise of cartwheels also... *grin*.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Can't say anything else without giving everything away.  Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

orlando switch

I'm so glad you updated this wonderful story since the last update really a long time ago. The good thing about that was that I reread the whole story again and when doing so I noticed I still knew the most important events - which only happens with stories that are worth remembering.And now the plot thickens.. I hope they'll soon find out more about Remus' murderer. And another thing is this slightly creepy lawyer. All those convenients arrangements for the Weasly's but my main thought was: what's in it for him?Hope you'll update soon.

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

I'm very flattered that you remembered Varlet after so long since my last update. Thanks! As for Max, he's *supposed* to be a bit creepy.

10/10

MsTree

*sqeeeee!* A new chapter! It's about time. The 'dreadful woman' would no doubt be Hermione, am I right? And as many mysteries as I read, I can only think of one thing: "After eliminating the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, is the truth."

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

Glad you liked it! Yes, you're right about Hermione.  As for the quote, you'll find out eventually.

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hidden

I'm glad to see this one is being continued. I'd really like to read the rest of it.

10/10

chyara

I can't wait to read more.  I hope Ron gets what's coming to him.
It would be strange if it was Ron who slowly killed Remus, to get him back for bringing the news that his kids were squibs.

0/10

Edelweis

Please update?
After such a good start I'd really like to read the rest.

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crazydz

i really like this story so far i can't wait for the next chapter!!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Sorry it took so long to get to this, my friend, but I'm glad I did. As always, I adore your writing and your characterizations.

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

And after a year, a new chapter for your reading pleasure.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

I'm so glad. :) Welcome back, Doom!!

0/10

Ceralyn

This was certainly interesting.  Very good characterization of Ron, I think - good company until something difficult comes up.  I really look forward to seeing him get his just desserts.

I'm so pleased that things are looking up for Hermione now.  Giving her twin boys was a nice touch too; sometimes I get bored reading of Rose and Hugo.

Severus was sweet and a big help.  Can't wait for more!

10/10

mikimoto

Your story title has me intrigued and I am so hoping the varlet turns out to be Ron and not Snape. 

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cmwinters

Hm.  Could the boys even SEE Hogwarts, if they were squibs?  I know Filch can, but he's only ever seen *on the grounds*.  If he were off the grounds, could he see it?

9/10

scarlett78

I am really enjoying your story. I like the tone of voice you have for Hermoine. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

0/10

sunny33

Hermione's life appears to be falling into place, but there is that bit of mystery about Lupin's death. :)

9/10

PDamian

I'm so very glad you've updated this! Trelawney's prophecy is most intriguing, and I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.  I hope you update again soon!

0/10

gersknightlady

Really am enjoying this story I hope you update soon.

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gersknightlady

Kewl, another rgeta chapter, like the verse

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gersknightlady

Wonderful start, very good story, looking forward to more.

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mock_turtle

really interesting setup--I'm excited to see what comes next!  the whole wizarding law thing is fascinating, and hermione's conversation with filch was great.  I don't think I've ever liked filch that much before.  I'm also dead curious about trelawney's prediction :)  the idea that snape's the deputy head is kind of hilarious, but he seems to have accepted the role well.  whatever happened to flitwick?

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

I'm glad you're enjoying my little tale. Flich is one of my favorite characters to write. 

10/10

aura

Great story!Remembered this right away when I saw it, but read it from the beginning again anyway.  Really liking it.And hate Ron just as much as I did the first time around.Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

This is my "Ron is a prat" story. He's convenient.

0/10

chowcats

Yay!  You're back!  It looks like you're trying to get your site back up too.

I loved the first bits of this story when I read them some time ago.  This latest chapter is just as marvelous.  Please keep updating.

10/10

pookah

I am thrilled to see a new chapter!  Thanks for continuing this, one of my faves. 

Poor Remus!  My first suspicion was, did Ron, by chance, find out about the mistake, and kill Remus because he told Ron that his kids were squibs?  (and NOw Ron is upset because he cast off his wizard-sons? Or because Hermione will be able to get her money back, and lots of his as well?)

Only I do not think there's been enough time for word to get to Ron, so that's out the window.  Looking forward to more chapters and more clues!

10/10

siage

Very intriguing and unique story. So glad to see you are back. Looking forward to future updates. Thanks!

10/10

MuseAmusant

It sounds like Hermione's been through quite a rough patch, but things seem to be looking up. And I'm sure both she and the boys are better off without their arse of a father. I can't wait to see the reactions when the truth about Ron's duplicity spreads beyond the school. But I have a feeling when he finds that Art and Tom are young wizards after all--and will be powerful ones at that--he's going to fall over himself to try and claim them.

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

Ron's life is going to get much more interesting once the truth about the twins gets out.HermioneDiggory's response: Hm... isn't that a Chinese curse? 'May you live in interesting times'?

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lillis1785

Your story has intrigued me and I'm waiting hopefully for the next chapter.  :)

Response from Doomspark (Author of The Varlet)

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  I'll try to update a little faster.

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