Verse 5
Chapter 5 of 5
Gardengrrl13The final verse...
ReviewedThe Foggy Dew
Verse 5
I've never forgotten the moment of pure happiness I experienced in her arms. The warmth of her gaze, her questing hands and eager smile. I've reflected upon the conversations we had and her innocent kisses. I was content; and during the final battle, I met my Slicing Hex a brave and redeemed man, ready for the 'next' adventure—or whatever it was Albus called death. You can't imagine my surprise when I awoke in St. Mungo's Spell Damage Ward a full year later. I was alive and almost healed. Of course, it might take a me a while to leave, but I didn't care. I was so pleased to be alive, I was even tolerant of that blond berk and his deplorable autographs for a full five minutes.
My beautiful Gryffindor kept a vigil by my side for many weeks, I'm told, before she succumbed to her grief. Alas, the seed of love planted before the war's end wasn't to bloom. Listen to me, waxing poetic in my loss. Bah!
I see her every now and again. She always has a sweet smile and warm words for me before that redheaded Neanderthal of a husband drags her away. Arse. I get the urge to lead him to the side and tell him I had her first, and then stick my thumbs in my ears and wiggle my fingers at him... but I couldn't do that to her—or my reputation, for that matter. I do wish her happiness, though. And I don't begrudge her anything. I wasn't supposed to wake up, and so she moved on.
It's been more than a decade now, and I still teach at Hogwarts. I've finally earned that DADA position, and I'm glad to say my standards haven't slipped a whit. I am still the strictest professor in residence, but I am no longer cruel... unless the little swots deserve it. I suppose I fit the role of the Defense teacher. I'm not as ugly as Mad Eye, but I'm catching up to him in the scar department. I lost an eye when that Slicing Hex nearly took off the top of my head. Of course, rather than get one of those ridiculous enchanted eyes, I now cut a dashing figure as a pirate look-alike with a black satin patch over the socket. I had the house-elves embroider the Slytherin crest on it. Minerva's just glad I finally added color to my wardrobe.
Speaking of whom, Minerva survived and is still hale and foreboding until you get some good scotch into her. She has taken up the post of Headmistress, as Albus mysteriously disappeared after the final battle. I'm not certain if he survived or not, but I suppose the man deserves whatever retirement he's set up for himself. The school's affairs were neatly in order and waiting for our Chief Lioness when she approached the gargoyle guarding the winding staircase.
Albus always did think of everything.
Me? I think of her every day... but I have no regrets of that night with my sweet, pure Hermione. No, none at all. My beautiful, tricksy Gryffindor.
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The Foggy Dew vs. 5
I loved that girl with all my heart
She's as dear as my lovely life
But in the latter part of the year
She became another man's wife
But I never told him of her faults
And I'm damned if ever I'll do
But many's the time as she winks and smiles
I think on the foggy dew, dew, dew
I think on the foggy dew.
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A/N-- Thank you for reading to the end. Sorry it took so long to get this chapter up, I agonized over it, and I hope you like it. I am sure some of you are disappointed that they didn't end up together... believe me so am I! All we can hope for is that she becomes a young widow and returns to her first love. Thank you to JackieJLH who beta'd the last chapter for me. Gardengrrl13
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Foggy Dew
20 Reviews | 9.45/10 Average
not quite sure what to say to this one other than Poor Severus... never gets the girl, does he? Well, he does usually on this site, but alas, not in this tale. But with the pirate patch.... drool...
Damn that's sad. Epsecially if he has to teach any kids she moght have ith Weasley. Dude. Total bummer. Great story though!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad you like the story, even though it's sad. I tried to match the mood of the story to the song, and I think I succeeded. Believe me I tried to work out a way for them to stay together, it just never seemed to fit. I'm still holding out hope that her red-head dies young... *wicked grin* Thanks for taking the time to review! GG
awwww, man. ( i wish i hadn't read the end first b/c I have such hope for the lovely couple--great convo and all that) teehee... good writing
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... such hope, bravely rising through the cold soil of winter only to be wrenched viciously from its life cycle by a late frost... I mean... um... glad you liked it? *naughty grin* Although the last chapter was the hardest to write. Thank you, Southern for all your comments, I squee as we speak! GG
oh great! I enjoyed this chapter.... cotton waisties.. teehee!!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This one was my favorite, too. Our Hermione's such a sensible little thing, no? *grin* GG
lurvely kisses... I do love the style of this story!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Why thank you! *blushes* What a lovely thing to say! *wiggles happily in chair*
GG
lol tricksy little gryffindor.. i love it
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*grin* glad you like it!
Well, this goes to show how much I pay attention to things (snicker!!). I haven't read the first few chapters. I was thinking this was just a quick little one-shot, and then I saw the note. lol... Duh on my part. Yes, bummer. I hate when they don't end up together, but right now, I'm seriously imagining that Ron divorce or he accidentally falls off his broom and... eek... Divorcee! or Widow!Hermione enters... A year or so later, Snape and Hermione wed... lol.. (silly me.... ) Thanks so much for posting, dear!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
You hit, Southern. I prefer to think he pops off in some bizzare Quidditch accident myself, and years later they meet by chance... *sigh*
Thank you for the review! GG
I am completely enjoying this story. It is lite and sweet and just what I have needed in the past two days. I look forward to what comes next. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad I could be your temporary Rx!! Thank you for taking the time to review, it makes my day! GG
Tricksy, eh? Is that a wand he's got in his pocketssesssss? Hmmm...
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
While he may not be the prettiest color in the crayon box, the Snape I envision isn't quite as ugly as all that. *grin*
However... about that wand...you'll see. Thanks for reviewing, you make my little heart squee with joy! GG
I love how you've written this story. It is truly amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Please post again soon.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Thank you Jane!! I'm so glad you like it. *blushes* I hope you like the next chapter as well. GG
The chapter was lovely, and I love how she does not take any grief from Severus. But the verse was scary, that if five children in that verse, I only have one and she is enough to make me go prematurely gray. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I can't imagine Hermione ever taking grief from anyone... unless she deserved it and was feeling guilty. *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter... And as for going prematurely grey, don't feel bad... I know exactly what you're talking about!
I was laughing at "wench" (sort of a personal thing) and then you had to go and write, ?White cotton... waisties?!? ... I nearly died. I said this was the best verse yet, and I meant it. The humor is just my style. (Oh, and those steamy parts too. *wink*)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... I know what you mean about wench... *grin* I wanted to show that Hermione and Snape were a little more human... hence the tickling and the 'waisties.' I hope you like the next verse, as well. *beaming*
Very nice parallel, GG, very nice.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*blushes* Thank you! I've held on to this for a while, rereading and reworking it. I'm still working on the last chapter, though... it's the toughest one.
I've just stumbled upon this, GG. I've only tried one 'song fic' and I thought it wasn't terribly easy to capture the essence of the lyrics into prose, but I've enjoyed this so far.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This idea tormented me everytime I listened to it, and I finally wrote it down. As far as songfics go, I think it depends on the song. *smile* thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! GG
Oh man why did not get the girl. He deserved the girl more than Weasel did. Great song and Great story.
Ohh I love this chapter. How sweet.
Oh very hot. Tastefully done.
This keeps getting better and better.
This so went with the song. Great work.
I like the way you stay true to the song without making the story seem contrived or forced.