Verse 2
Chapter 2 of 5
Gardengrrl13Maudlin musings by our dear Potion's Master...
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Verse 2
Fridays were Hogwart's version of the eighth ring of hell. Being Crucio'd was the seventh, if that gives you any indication of the pain involved. I believe the Chinese would have called it the Hell of the Inattentive Dunderheads and Exploding Potions. No student ever pays attention on Friday葉here are too many other important things on which to think besides a potentially life-threatening activity like brewing volatile potions... Please note my masterful use of sarcasm, I really am quite good at it.
Having survived my classes, barely, I was relaxing in my quarters with a glass of aged brandy much later that evening. Of late, I had indulged myself more and more in the privacy of my quarters. Silk sheets, rich food, the expensive bottles of liquor and wine I had hoarded. The war was escalating, it was going to happen soon--whatever it was. Potter would no doubt defeat that imbecile Tom Riddle, but what happened between this moment and that was conjecture, and I didn't want to meet my Avada with any regrets. As much as I would've liked to live to see the sun dawn on a day without that serpentine piece of shite wasting oxygen, I had my doubts.
I was interrupted from my maudlin musings by a tentative knock at the door leading from my office. Immediately enraged that someone not only broke through the considerable wards placed on my office, but decided to bother me as well, I answered the door ready to slice the offending party to ribbons with my tongue and send house points into the red. I choked back the harsh words as the singular most unexpected sight greeted me. My dear Miss Granger, pale and drawn, clutching her dressing gown at her chest as if it was some sort of woolen lifeline.
"Hermione! What on earth... come here this instant!" As her eyes widened in surprise, I realized I just called her by her given name for the first time, ever.
I watched her as she inhaled, and gathered herself. She stepped into my chambers with a steely resolve. Too bad her voice didn't match her face. Her trembling, "G-good evening, Professor," belied her calm facade.
Maybe I was too far in my cups, but I reached for her shoulder and gently clasped it. "Is everything alright? You look affright." Maybe it was my gentle tone, or the sincere concern that rearranged my severe features into something that wasn't out of a Gothic novel, but the dam broke. The sobbing young woman let herself be led to my sofa and drawn to my shoulder to cry it out. Considering the previous intimacies we've had, I had no guilt. Although, I did have a passing worry that maybe I was being too nice and she would suddenly ask me what I'd done with her potions professor...
Once she could speak, she told me brokenly that she was tired of being the strong one, being the one that Potter and Weasley counted on. She was scared to death of the impending battle, but she daren't show an inkling of weakness to those two dunderheads she calls friends. "I can't sleep anymore, Professor. My nights are riddled with horrible nightmares, and that monster always finds me." She shuddered in my arms.
"And, pray tell, what monster would that be?" My attempt at wry humor fell flat.
Her fear-bright eyes said it all before she even finished her answer, "Y-you-Know-W-who."
I tightened my arms about her, "Never fear, sweeting, he can't get you here. I won't let him." That did the trick. She stopped her hiccoughing, and gazed steadily into my eyes.
She initiated the kiss this time, and it was some moments later that I realized she was straddling me on the sofa, with her fingers entwined in my hair. How she could bear to touch it, I'll never know, but she kept running her deft fingers through my dank locks.
She broke the kiss for a breathless moment and looked entreatingly into my eyes. "T-tonight, Professor, can we finish this? I don't want to wait any longer and then regret it later," she finished in a whisper.
I noticed that passion makes her amaretto eyes shine even more than tears, and I closed my eyes and kissed her, again, before I lost myself in her pure, sweet soul.
"Severus..." I rasped out, "Please... Hermione. Call me Severus." She took it as the acquiescence it was meant to be and resumed kissing me with redoubled fervor.
Tricksy Gryffindor vixen!
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The Foggy Dew vs. 2
One night as I lay in my bed
A taking my pleasant sleep
This pretty young maid she came to me
And bitterly she did weep
She tore her hair and she wrung her hands
Saying: "Oh, what shall I do?
For tonight I resolved to sleep with you
For fear of the foggy dew, dew, dew
For fear of the foggy dew."
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20 Reviews | 9.45/10 Average
not quite sure what to say to this one other than Poor Severus... never gets the girl, does he? Well, he does usually on this site, but alas, not in this tale. But with the pirate patch.... drool...
Damn that's sad. Epsecially if he has to teach any kids she moght have ith Weasley. Dude. Total bummer. Great story though!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad you like the story, even though it's sad. I tried to match the mood of the story to the song, and I think I succeeded. Believe me I tried to work out a way for them to stay together, it just never seemed to fit. I'm still holding out hope that her red-head dies young... *wicked grin* Thanks for taking the time to review! GG
awwww, man. ( i wish i hadn't read the end first b/c I have such hope for the lovely couple--great convo and all that) teehee... good writing
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... such hope, bravely rising through the cold soil of winter only to be wrenched viciously from its life cycle by a late frost... I mean... um... glad you liked it? *naughty grin* Although the last chapter was the hardest to write. Thank you, Southern for all your comments, I squee as we speak! GG
oh great! I enjoyed this chapter.... cotton waisties.. teehee!!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This one was my favorite, too. Our Hermione's such a sensible little thing, no? *grin* GG
lurvely kisses... I do love the style of this story!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Why thank you! *blushes* What a lovely thing to say! *wiggles happily in chair*
GG
lol tricksy little gryffindor.. i love it
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*grin* glad you like it!
Well, this goes to show how much I pay attention to things (snicker!!). I haven't read the first few chapters. I was thinking this was just a quick little one-shot, and then I saw the note. lol... Duh on my part. Yes, bummer. I hate when they don't end up together, but right now, I'm seriously imagining that Ron divorce or he accidentally falls off his broom and... eek... Divorcee! or Widow!Hermione enters... A year or so later, Snape and Hermione wed... lol.. (silly me.... ) Thanks so much for posting, dear!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
You hit, Southern. I prefer to think he pops off in some bizzare Quidditch accident myself, and years later they meet by chance... *sigh*
Thank you for the review! GG
I am completely enjoying this story. It is lite and sweet and just what I have needed in the past two days. I look forward to what comes next. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad I could be your temporary Rx!! Thank you for taking the time to review, it makes my day! GG
Tricksy, eh? Is that a wand he's got in his pocketssesssss? Hmmm...
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
While he may not be the prettiest color in the crayon box, the Snape I envision isn't quite as ugly as all that. *grin*
However... about that wand...you'll see. Thanks for reviewing, you make my little heart squee with joy! GG
I love how you've written this story. It is truly amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Please post again soon.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Thank you Jane!! I'm so glad you like it. *blushes* I hope you like the next chapter as well. GG
The chapter was lovely, and I love how she does not take any grief from Severus. But the verse was scary, that if five children in that verse, I only have one and she is enough to make me go prematurely gray. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I can't imagine Hermione ever taking grief from anyone... unless she deserved it and was feeling guilty. *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter... And as for going prematurely grey, don't feel bad... I know exactly what you're talking about!
I was laughing at "wench" (sort of a personal thing) and then you had to go and write, ?White cotton... waisties?!? ... I nearly died. I said this was the best verse yet, and I meant it. The humor is just my style. (Oh, and those steamy parts too. *wink*)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... I know what you mean about wench... *grin* I wanted to show that Hermione and Snape were a little more human... hence the tickling and the 'waisties.' I hope you like the next verse, as well. *beaming*
Very nice parallel, GG, very nice.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*blushes* Thank you! I've held on to this for a while, rereading and reworking it. I'm still working on the last chapter, though... it's the toughest one.
I've just stumbled upon this, GG. I've only tried one 'song fic' and I thought it wasn't terribly easy to capture the essence of the lyrics into prose, but I've enjoyed this so far.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This idea tormented me everytime I listened to it, and I finally wrote it down. As far as songfics go, I think it depends on the song. *smile* thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! GG
Oh man why did not get the girl. He deserved the girl more than Weasel did. Great song and Great story.
Ohh I love this chapter. How sweet.
Oh very hot. Tastefully done.
This keeps getting better and better.
This so went with the song. Great work.
I like the way you stay true to the song without making the story seem contrived or forced.